ff DK’s New Life part 20 pg39 5th Jan - Page 18

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey anu that was so sweet u did a great job again and thanks for giving us new dev and kajjal to adore wonderfull naration even i was tense in those scary hours of kajjals labour ..................amazing thanks for such treat for ur birthday..........hope u had a blast.. 👏

Hey Sameera, thanks for your lovely comment...so glad you enjoyed reading it. 😳 😃 Oh good, did you get tensed? I was worried that bit was rushed 😕 I wanted everyone to share in my happiness of my b'day and DK have to be a part of that too, right? 😳 Thanks again and yes I've had a lovely birthday and enjoyed it thoroughly. 😃

Anu

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Posted: 17 years ago
[QUOTE=ploye]Great part Anu!
Poor DPS sooooo stressed and pannicked! Awwwwwwwwwwwww!

Twins??!!
Thats a great idea! Now Kaajjal has to take care of three babies! 😆 😆 😆

Loved it! Great narration!
finally the babies are here! 😳

Smart Anu!
DPS' twins are born on your birthday!
Thats very clever Anu! 😆


Continue soon! 😳


😳 Komal[/QUOTE/]

Glad to hear you liked it Komal...I know I've succeeded if you like it! 😳 Yes, poor Dev was all stressed out worrying about his dear Kaajjal...I like to show how much he loves her. 😳 So pleased you liked the twins idea...it was Zareen who first gave me the idea and I'm so glad she did. 😃 And yep I decided they would be born on my b'day...I wanted to give everyone a gift after their sweet messages to me and I thought what better gift than DK's beta aur beti?? 😳 Really pleased you liked my choice of date. 😃

Anu

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Posted: 17 years ago
oh. my great anu ji. fantastic work. i love your fanfic very much. continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8 part 👏 tht was seriously a treat 😃 DK have twins soo cute 😳 waiting 4 ur next part
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Posted: 17 years ago

OMG Anu .... so the little angels are finally here. good God, i am sooo very happy to feel the feeling of DK being parents. just loved how kaajjal was asking dev not to leave her and how dev was shouting "get my wife admitted damit" ahhhh thats our DPS - angry yound man. lovely. waisay the hospital dont know this is DPS, the Md of radio city and one of the rishest man in mumbai, had they known i am sure they wouldnt have thought about holding Mrs. KDPS😊

so the twins - boy and a girl ... how sweet is that. aik hi bari main family puri. lovely.

thankyou sooo much anu for this lovely part. i am enojoying this sweet and lovely DK so much. ab i am wondering what will happen now. hahahhah it would be fun to see dev changing diapers ... 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh my God Anu,the twins hv already arrived in DK's life 😛 😛 ...and that too one boy and one girl 😳 ..So now this will really get intereting to see Dev as the dotting husband as well as the father 😉 😛 ...

But before that just loved the entire Kitchen Drama 😳 ...Haii Men will always remain men 😆 😆 😳 ...Dev has almost turned Kaajjal's kitchen into a dust bin 😛 but still loved the caring and possessive nature of Dev 😳 ,He himself wants to clean the entire mess without even letting Kaajjal enter the kitchen or take the broom in her hand 😳 😳 ..this is what u call a perfect Husband 😃 😳 😳

Also his restlessness for Kaajjal in the hospital during her delivary proves his emmense love for her 😳

Anu so beautifully written yaar 👏 It really touched my heart 😳 ..So now what names r u planning for DK's twins? 😉 😛 ...Do continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: thesaint148

OMG Anu .... so the little angels are finally here. good God, i am sooo very happy to feel the feeling of DK being parents. just loved how kaajjal was asking dev not to leave her and how dev was shouting "get my wife admitted damit" ahhhh thats our DPS - angry yound man. lovely. waisay the hospital dont know this is DPS, the Md of radio city and one of the rishest man in mumbai, had they known i am sure they wouldnt have thought about holding Mrs. KDPS😊

so the twins - boy and a girl ... how sweet is that. aik hi bari main family puri. lovely.

thankyou sooo much anu for this lovely part. i am enojoying this sweet and lovely DK so much. ab i am wondering what will happen now. hahahhah it would be fun to see dev changing diapers ... 😆

Kashish I am so happy that you really liked meeting DK's twins and that you could share in their love now they are parents. 😳 Your words have totally touched my heart. 😳 I wanted to show DPS's commanding side, after all he was so worried for Kaajjal and no one was willing to help him...I just thought it would be how he would react and I'm glad you liked that part. 😃 Yes, now the family is complete and Kaajjal will have triple the trouble than she did before. 😆 Waise, I like the idea of Dev changing diapers...I think I am going to add a scene like that! 😃

Anu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Oh my God Anu,the twins hv already arrived in DK's life 😛 😛 ...and that too one boy and one girl 😳 ..So now this will really get intereting to see Dev as the dotting husband as well as the father 😉 😛 ...

But before that just loved the entire Kitchen Drama 😳 ...Haii Men will always remain men 😆 😆 😳 ...Dev has almost turned Kaajjal's kitchen into a dust bin 😛 but still loved the caring and possessive nature of Dev 😳 ,He himself wants to clean the entire mess without even letting Kaajjal enter the kitchen or take the broom in her hand 😳 😳 ..this is what u call a perfect Husband 😃 😳 😳

Also his restlessness for Kaajjal in the hospital during her delivary proves his emmense love for her 😳

Anu so beautifully written yaar 👏 It really touched my heart 😳 ..So now what names r u planning for DK's twins? 😉 😛 ...Do continue soon 😳

Aww Jyoti, thank you for such a beautiful comment. 😳 I am so pleased that you loved this section and that you were touched to see the arrival of DK's twins. I also am excited about writing about DPS as a Papa. 😳 I am chuffed that you enjoyed the kitchen scene...it was so much fun to write and I could just imagine Kaajjal's horror at the mess Dev created so I wanted to share that with you all. 😳

I will reveal the names in my next installment and I hope you like them.

Anu 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
Anu Jaan!!!!! Sorry for commenting on it soo late!!! Had a real busy weekend yaar 😳 !!!

Awwwww 😳 ....So finally the two angels are here 😃 😳 !!! Dev and Kaajjal has parents...How it was my dream and of course all of us DK Die-Hard Fans to see them as parents.... 😳 😳 😳
Those two sweet angels...Naina and Arjun right??? 😉

The starting was funny...really funny...Dev turning Kaajjal's kitchen into a dustbin....And then the broom.... 😆

And when it came to the part of Dev in the tension and pleading...I dont know why...It really made my eyes moist...You made it so perfect enough to make me sob 😆 😳 ...But yet, I LOVED it....

Afetr all that tension...he was so happy!!! So was Kaajjal...Awww lovely part Anu... 👏 👏 👏

This was a great treat for us Anu...It really was... 😊
Thanks once again girl... 😳
And a Happy Belated Birthday!!! 🤗

~Mona 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mona18

Anu Jaan!!!!! Sorry for commenting on it soo late!!! Had a real busy weekend yaar 😳 !!!

Awwwww 😳 ....So finally the two angels are here 😃 😳 !!! Dev and Kaajjal has parents...How it was my dream and of course all of us DK Die-Hard Fans to see them as parents.... 😳 😳 😳
Those two sweet angels...Naina and Arjun right??? 😉

The starting was funny...really funny...Dev turning Kaajjal's kitchen into a dustbin....And then the broom.... 😆

And when it came to the part of Dev in the tension and pleading...I dont know why...It really made my eyes moist...You made it so perfect enough to make me sob 😆 😳 ...But yet, I LOVED it....

Afetr all that tension...he was so happy!!! So was Kaajjal...Awww lovely part Anu... 👏 👏 👏

This was a great treat for us Anu...It really was... 😊
Thanks once again girl... 😳
And a Happy Belated Birthday!!! 🤗

~Mona 😛

Mona jaan, such a pleasure to read your comments and don't worry about not replying sooner...it's ok, you can't help being busy! I'm just pleased that you enjoyed it and that you are happy to meet Dev jr and Kaajjal jr. 😳 Yep it's Arjun and Naina, the latters as chosen by you. So glad you liked the kitchen scene and I am overwhelmed that I brought tears to your eyes. Thank too for your sweet b'day wish...it doesn't matter if it's belated...it still made my day! 😃

Anu

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