DK FAN FICS BY BHOOTNIS - last part pg47 - Page 11

Originally posted by: kaju.patel

awww, you're realy sweet... its good you took over, lol, otherwise people wuld have gotten fed up of waiting, and they would have been put off our FF 😕😭 you did a great job anyway 😉 lekin jyoti ke twist mein to TUM hi phas gayi na 😛😆😆

true that..

lekin u know.. this time jyothi's twist wasnt that hard.. it was very easy and fun.. hahaha.. so now be prepared.. she will definately come with harder twists.. knowing that u continue after her!! 😆

Awwww Kaju welcome back jaan 🤗 so nice to see our tapori bhootni back in action 😳 😃 oh yes this time i didn't gave a real twist to kaj 😛 but for u kaju my twist will b a reall one 😈 😈 😉 ...

So i m continuing with my part 😃 😛

DK asks RC(raju and chameli)that how came they r in Switzerland and that too in a tabela,on which RC looks surprised and scared but finally raju answers that"woh kya hai na apun ki jo chameli rasmalai hai,usko switzerland roaming karna tha,so i did chori in bank and now came to sizzorland 😕 😆 "(raju special accent 😉,he mmeant switzerland 😉 ),on hearing this kajal gets a bit scared to know that raju is a robber but dev whispers to kajal that "he robbed the bank in india and so here they r safe and even we don't hv any danger from them"on listening to this kajal calms down a bit and puts her head on his shoulders 😳 ,raju then asks dev"oye Mr what your wife is telling in your kaan"so dev says"nothing,just some personal talks" 😳 then chameli tells raju that they should leave from there sinse the snowfall has stopped,kajal also tells the same thing to dev,so raju tells dev that "my humshakal bhai 😆 tum logoan ko rehne ki toh koi jagah hai nahin,so come to humaar special L.N tabela" 😕 😕 on hearing this dev is confused and asks raju sarcastically that "ek tabela se nikalkar doosra tabela,kya switzerland mein tabela ke alaawa aur kuch nahin hai" 😕 😆 so raju says"abey dhakkan(tapori language),humaar ek chotu ghar hai jurik mein(raju meant Zurich 😉 ),bank mein bahut money rob kiya ,usse apun low nest(raju meant love nest..L.N 😉 )banaya apun ki phulwa chameli ke liye" 😛 so dev says "ok so u both permanently live in Zurich"to which raju answers in the affirmative 😃 dev then again whispers to kajal that whether they should goto RC's house as they hv no hotels which r vacant,so kajal thinks for a while and then agrees to it 😃 so DK and RC get out of that horse tabela and proceed to raju's love nest tabela 😃 ,On their way they take a taxi;In the taxi raju jokingly says"ladies(referring to both chameli and kajal 😉 b carefool(raju meant careful 😉 )apun and Dew(he meant dev)r humshakals,so confoose(he meant confuse)mat hona 😉 "so dev also laughs on the joke but kajal gets a bit irritated and whispers to dev that"kaisa besharam insaan hai,kuch bhi bol deta hai"so chameli overhears this and gets angry on kajal and tells her that"oyee bhootni ke,jabaan sambhal ke baat kar,tu apun ke pati ke baare mein bol rahin hai",so dev tries to explain chameli that kajal never meant that ,its just that she is a bit tired,dev holds kaju's hand tightly and whispers her to apologize to chameli as they r helping them by giving shelter,finally kajal apologizes for what she said,raju also tells chameli to forgive kajal and chameli does it and finally both the ladies shake hands 😃 and finally the taxi reaches raju's love nest tabela 😃 ,the four of them get down from the taxi and enter the tabela 😳 but as soon as the four of them enters the tabela gate,they see dhruv standing over there 😕 😕 DK r completely stunned to see dhruv over there and RC r completely clueless and raju asks dhruv"abey bandar,kaun hai tu,aur apun ke tabele mein kya kar raha hai",Dhruv sees Dev and runs towards him and says"oh man i missed u soo much,but yaar u never told me that u hv a twin brother(referring to raju)"so dev gets irritated and tells dhruv that raju is just a lookalike and not his brother and that raju and his wife r giving them shelter sinse no hotel is vacant ,then dev asks dhruv that what the hell is he doing there 😡 😡 ,kajal holds dev's arms and tries to control his anger and in the meantime raju shouts from behind"yeh sab kya chal raha hai dew(he meant dev),koi apun ko batao ,ki yeh bandar idhaar apun ke ghar ke saamne gulati kyun maar raha hai" 😆 so dev tells raju that his name is dhruv and he is his friend but he has no idea whats dhruv is doing here 😕 so raju tells chameli to take kajal inside the house while the men willl hv some discussion 😉 ,chameli and kaju goes inside the tabela but before going dev blinks to kajal 😉 and whispers her that"sweetheart i m coming in soon,wait for me and don't goto sleep" 😉 😳 ..raju and dev then asks dhruv that what is he doing there and suddenly dhruv starts crying loudly and tells that..... 😉

Kaju madam now its your turn 😃 😈 😈 ,U will hv to tell why dhruv is crying and what dhruv is doing near raju's love nest tabela 😉 and its upto u whether dhruv will stay with DK and RC in that tabela 😛 ...so now two Apu's in one tabela will b sure fun 😳 😉

All the best Kaju 👍🏼 continue soon 😳

Hey Jyoti excellent. I am still holding my stomach. Paining from too much laughter!!!! 😆

Originally posted by: kaj05

true that..

lekin u know.. this time jyothi's twist wasnt that hard.. it was very easy and fun.. hahaha.. so now be prepared.. she will definately come with harder twists.. knowing that u continue after her!! 😆

arey, yeh to hona hi tha, lol, lets see what her contribution is this time... kaisi ljan mein daal diya mujhe 😆

DHRUV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tum WAPAS dhruv ko le aayi???? didnt he get enough from what he got in my FF?!😛😆 aur ek to yeh sirf roona dhoona jaan ta hai... EKK khich ke marungi nah usse... lol.... and gagori, only i know what your "real" twist is like... lol, meri haalat aisi kuch hojati hai.... 🤢......... 😛😆😆 lol, jyoti, only you wouldhave so many tabelas in your part 😆... ok, lets go for it.... its been so long 😳😆😆 anyways, back to work...

dhruv starts crying and tells RR/D "arey, mein kya baataon yaar, mujhe ek phone call aaya tha"

**flash back**

Dhruv: Hello?
Caller: kya mein Mr Dhruv se baat kar raha hoon?
Dhruv: haan mein dhruv hoon, aap kaun?
Caller: Mein WISeKey ke taraf se baat kar raha hoon.
Dhruv: From the World Internet Security Company? SWITZERLAND SE?! Caller: Jee haan. we read about you and we thought that you would be perfect for us. We were wondering whether you'd like to be partners in our upcoming project?
Dhruv: Of course sir, mujhe sirf itna baata do ke kab aur kahan milna hai aur mein ponch jaata hoon
Caller: Dont worry, sab ka arrangement hogaya hai, kaal subhe aap ka ticket ghar pe ponche ga, aur kaal shyam ko aapki flight hai, yahan ponch te humara aadmi aap ko recieve karne ke liye hoga

**end of flash back**

"haan, to? tum YAHAN kyon hon? do you know, this is mine and kaajjal's honeymoon, aur tum apna yeh bandar sa cherah laakar saari mood off kar daala" says a very angry dev...

raju slaps dhruv's head and carries on saying "EH, ghan chakkar, yahan apun ka aur meri champa chameli ka bhi honey ka chaand hai, agar tune apun ka holi-de kharab kar daala na, to apun tereko nahin chodunga, samjha KYA?"

"AREY, meri BAAT to suno" inturrupts dhruv "jab mein yahan poncha to ek aadmi ne mujhe recieve kiya, aur phir mujhe ek VAN mein bitha ke kahin legaya... mujhe tab pata chala ke mera kidnap kiya gaya hai"

"tumhe itni dher ke baad pata chala, aur phir tumne us aadmi ke baare mein kuch pooncha? bas, phone par baat ki aur chalen aaye, you know, tum HAMESHA aisa hi karte ho, jab bhi mera achcha din ho na, to tum usse bhigar ke hi rehte ho, kher, tumhe to kidnap hona chahiye, to tum ab yahan kya kar raheho?"

"mein apni jaan bachcha ke yahan ponch gaya, aur naseeb se tum milgaye" says dhruv with a huge smile

"naseeb se? arey, meri naseeb to phoot gayi, tum jo yahan ho..wait a minute, iska matlab woh log tumare peeche kar ke yahan bhi ponch sakte hai?" asks dev

"eh, gonchu, chal, hata sawaan ki ghata (just for you my nikku sweetu, lol) mereko abhi ke ABHI-ICH chahta hai ke tu yahan se chalenja, apun ne bola nah, mereko apun ke chameli ke saath jaana hai"

"haan, aur mujhe kaajjal ke saath, agar tumhari wajeh se kaajjal ya humein se kisi ko bhi kuch hua na, to mein tumhe nahin chodunga"

"lekin meri baat to suno, mein kahan jau?" pleads dhruv

"dekho, apun ka fokat mein tiyam (time) barbaad nahin karneka, kya?, chal ab, chal"

dhruv frowns and rushs off whilst trying to stay hidden... RR/D take a HUGE sigh of relief and raju say "chalo, yeh item to gaya, ab mereko apun ki item ke paas jaane mangta hai, aur tu teri waali ke saath jao." dev smiles and says "yes" raju miles too and repeats what dev says by saying "YESH."

they both walk in and find everything a mess (a sign of struggle) and see no sign of chameli OR kaajjal.....

ohhhhh... trying to trap ME with a twist eh? becharis have been kidnapped, and no where to be seen... now, find kaajjal and chameli... 😛😆 good luck twinni 😉😆 love you lots huni... lol😃

areeeyy jyotiii yaaar!!! loved your part!! too too too good!! the dialogues were amazing 😆 !! lekin dhruv is back!! 🤢
ok no problem.. i know my twiniii will get rid of him as usual!! 😆 😆 😆

areyyy twiniii..LOVED YOUR PART YAAR!!! kya baat hai!! being very punctual ah?? hahaha.. hw bi kar dala.. areyyy yaar.. aur mujhe phaasa bhi diyaaa!! 😕 😆 😆

lekin tension not.. i will come out of this as well.. tomorrow though.. i am falling asleep now... and my mind has stopped working after thursdays episode.. I AM BLANKED OUT!! 😆
soo.. thoda sa intezaar karna padenga my dear bhootnis...

lekin sirf kaal tak.. i promise kaal main apna part kar loongi... 😉

wonderful job both of u!! hats off to u both!! 👏

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Hey Jyoti excellent. I am still holding my stomach. Paining from too much laughter!!!! 😆

good that our FF can make everybody have a smile on their face😃but its nothing compared to your masterpiece FFs😳and i really mean it,u r just amazing in your FFs Autumn👏

Haila kaju both the ladies r kidnapped 😲 😲 .... but i really loved your part,it was just amazing with those hilarious tapori dialogues 👏 ,i m sure the goons who kidnapped dhruv,they only must hv kidnapped kaju and chameli 🤔 and now only dhruv can help Dev and raju to find kaju-chameli...hai na 😉 ...see i m giving ideas to your twinnie 😉 😛
By the way ooks like DK'S honeymonn has turned into a nightmare 😕 😆 😆

but kaju i m really fida over your tapori dialogues 😳 😳 they r just superb 👏

🤣 🤣 What a language yaar....uffff i cant control laughing 😆 😆 😆
great part kaju....good job 👏
and yea....continue some more dialouge with tripoori language.....its funny...the most thing i found funny was "ghan chakkar" i tell this to my brother when he bothers me a lot 😆

Originally posted by: kaj05

areeeyy jyotiii yaaar!!! loved your part!! too too too good!! the dialogues were amazing 😆 !! lekin dhruv is back!! 🤢
ok no problem.. i know my twiniii will get rid of him as usual!! 😆 😆 😆

areyyy twiniii..LOVED YOUR PART YAAR!!! kya baat hai!! being very punctual ah?? hahaha.. hw bi kar dala.. areyyy yaar.. aur mujhe phaasa bhi diyaaa!! 😕 😆 😆

lekin tension not.. i will come out of this as well.. tomorrow though.. i am falling asleep now... and my mind has stopped working after thursdays episode.. I AM BLANKED OUT!! 😆
soo.. thoda sa intezaar karna padenga my dear bhootnis...

lekin sirf kaal tak.. i promise kaal main apna part kar loongi... 😉

wonderful job both of u!! hats off to u both!! 👏

aww, thank you twinni, and koi baat nahin, jyoti has given you some ideas, lol... aur jyoti ne MUJHE phasa diya tha, so i had to do something 😆 and we'll be waiting for your part... impatiently 😃😆