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Sharona

@-Sharona-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Humko Tumse Pyaar Hai

Hey Guys This Is Sharona & This is my Fan Fiction Pankaj & Jyoti

It's my FF after a long time.
It's a Love Story; So Hopefully You all Will Like it.

It's a mixture of Hindi && English.
It will be based on Pankit & Jyoti but will also have some different love stories.
This FF will kinda follow the story line but i will add my own parts

Please Support me through out the Journey of this FF.
Please Give me Your Point of Views; Whether it's Bad or Good Tell me.
I need Bad Comments for Improvement and Good for Encouragement.
If I don't get enough Feedback's, I will be Forced Wrap the FF Up.
So Please Do Support me. & Sorry for any mistakes and errors.
I Will Update monthly or whenever i am free Because I have School. Enjoy!

Table Of Contents:

Pg 1 : Introduction
Pg 2 : Part 1

If you would like to be PMed when I update please press the Thank You Button.
That way I don't have to type up a long list or search pages trying to find you. Thanks [:

Style gotten from Dhruvi

Edited by Candylover - 16 years ago

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Sharona

@-Sharona-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Meet The Couple:

He is a sweet guy who loves life, He used to be blind but can see now. He comes to the ashram pretending to be another guy and there he falls in love with a girl named Jyoti. His name is not Pankit it is Pankaj

She is very independent, she is afraid to get close to anyone since she has been hurt in the past by her first love, but when she meets Pankit...her life changes

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Concept Of The FF:

'Humko tumse pyaar hai' builds the concept of love within friendship. A friendship slowly turning into love

In this story, Pankit & Jyoti work together, Pankit who comes there with a new name hoping to impress joyti..succeeds but jyoti does like him but is afraid, after all he could be just another guy who wants to hurt her. Slowly you will see how her fear turns into love and how they fall in love
Throughout the story you will see Comedy, Love, and Romance

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sayantika

@sayanti_ashiuv

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey dear, awesome concept....plz post 1st part soon..

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Ayesha

@AshTara

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Posted: 16 years ago

it sounds really good sharona!!😃 👏 i hope you wont stop it. i will keep giving you my comments. 😊

good luck! 😛

love

Ashu 😳

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@rbb1

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Posted: 16 years ago

wow it sounds really interesting, i love reading FF's and everyone writes such amazing stories, i think they are better than the actual stories, i was wondering when someone was going to write a FF about Jyoti, im really happy you started it

I love the concept and i love the introduction, they both seems to be great characters, i cant wait to read your updates please update it soon and dont stop writing thank you.

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Imran

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Posted: 16 years ago

Aaah, Can't wait to read it , Amazing concept But Most of the Lines and everything which you got from Dhruvi are mine lol 😆

But any whoo, Hehe Amazing concept

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Simra

@sakuraa

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Posted: 16 years ago

cant wait!!! I love the concept!

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Sharona

@-Sharona-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv
hey dear, awesome concept....plz post 1st part soon..

thanks..will put part 1 in a few minutes 😊

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashu_
it sounds really good sharona!!😃 👏 i hope you wont stop it. i will keep giving you my comments. 😊

good luck! 😛

love

Ashu 😳

thanks 😊

Originally posted by: rbb1
wow it sounds really interesting, i love reading FF's and everyone writes such amazing stories, i think they are better than the actual stories, i was wondering when someone was going to write a FF about Jyoti, im really happy you started it

I love the concept and i love the introduction, they both seems to be great characters, i cant wait to read your updates please update it soon and dont stop writing thank you.

thanks 😊....i have a whole story planned for them 😊

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Sharona

@-Sharona-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Imran94
Aaah, Can't wait to read it , Amazing concept But Most of the Lines and everything which you got from Dhruvi are mine lol 😆

But any whoo, Hehe Amazing concept

thanks 😊 i didn't know it was urs 😆 got it from dhruvi from her Salekh FF 😆

Originally posted by: sakuraa
cant wait!!! I love the concept!

thanks 😊 will post part 1 in a few minutes

Originally posted by: coolnandu
lovely concept......update soon

thanks 😊

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Sharona

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Note : He can't see although in the character sketch it says he can...spoiler: that will be later..right now he can't see..also the story will have some parts of the serial

Part 1
Just a small part - to get this FF started 😊

Pankaj came out of the office and was standing in front of the door, he could hear the sounds of laughing and playing kids but he also heard another laugh, a laugh of a young girl, she sounded happy and he couldn't help with smile. On the playground was Jyoti, who was having fun running around & playing with pooja & the childeren, she was so involved in the game that she didn't see where she was running and bumped into Pankaj. His glasses fell and it looked as if he was staring right at Jyoti. She saw him and was lost in his eyes, her reflection can be seen in his eyes. She kept looking at him when suddenly a strong wind came and flew part of her duppata away, part of her duppata was now covering Pankaj's face but neither one of them minded. All of a sudden a girl tapped on her shoulder and she looked away, taking her duppata from his face...she picked up his glasses, cleaned them and gave it to him, he was still standing on the same spot while she turned to see who tapped her. When she looked she saw Kalpana, her best friend

Jyoti : arre tum? tum yahan kaise?
Kalpana : tumhe lene ayi hoon?
Jyoti : kyun?
Kalpana : arre tum to bhool hi gaye ho...yaad hai tumhara scooter shop main hai
Jyoti : haan, main bhi na...aaj kal kuch yaad nahi rehta hai

Both of them were busy laughing, when Kalpana noticed Pankaj standing behind Jyoti

Kalpana : Jyoti? Yeh kaun hai?
She motioned her head towards Pankaj and Jyoti turned to see him
Jyoti : Yeh Sachin hai, Pooja ki teacher...aur Sachin ji yeh Kalpana hai, meri best friend.
Jyoti introduced them and they shook hands.

Kalpana : Ap hum chale, mujhe ghar jaana hai aur mom ki madat karni hai
Jyoti : acha tum ruko mein api zamaan lati hoon

Jyoti left to get her stuff and after a few minutes she came back

Jyoti : Sachin mein jaa ra ha hoon, hum phir kal milte hai
Sachin/Pankaj : Hmm bye Jyoti ji aur Kalpana Ji

Jyoti and Kalpana walked away while sachin went back inside, just before leaving Jyoti turned around and looked at Pankaj leaving, he felt her looking and stopped, she turned back and he continued walking.

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