Predestined - A Meera-Prithvi fanfic, 1st pt

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Ok guys , I'm starting my first test fanfic in this forum , don't forget to throw generous amount of tomatoes , I'll make puree from them , do you know what the price of vegetables this days ? šŸ˜‰ , ok , without farther wasting your precious with my bak-bak , here it is : Time : late night
Place : Haveli Ramdhari having dinner , Prabha sitting by close , making hot rotis for him . Both of them silent , clearly wwhat happened one week ago is still hanging heavy on everybody's heart , every one is upset after the fraud done by Laakhan . After many moments of silence hanging heavy in the air , Ramdhari asked , " Bitiane khana khaya ? " ...Prabha answered in a low voice , eyes on the chulla , " Yes , and I think she's fallen asleep by now . "
DT said absentmindedly , " After what laakhan did , it seems the only guy I can fully n completely trust now is Prithvi . He has always made me proud by his unwavering loyality , respect for elders , his sense of responsibility . He is truely a gem of a person Prabha . To me he's like the son I never had . " Prabha looked at him and said , " Then make him our son . " Ramdhari stopped eating and stared at her , " What do you say ? Make him what ? " Prabha : " You just said he's a gem of a person . Then why not make him your son-in-law ? Our daughter has reached her marraigable ageand this is high time for Prithvi to get married too . Don't you think they will make a perfect pair ? "

Ramdhari kept staring at Prabha , his eyes momentarily unfocussed , visuals of distant past rising before his eyes , some words left his mouth unknowingly , " But , Prithvi already..." Prabha , surprised at his reaction , asked , " What ? " Ramu came back to present in a jolt n controlled himself quickly , " Nothing , I mean to say , he's already so much responsibilty on him , and now marriage n taking Sunher's Zimmedari..." Prabha smiled n said , " It'll be easy for him to concentrate on his work , if he'd have a wife waiting for him at home at the end of a tiring day ..."

Ramdhari , thought silently for quite some time , Prabha looking at his face expectantly . Then he smiled at last and said , " I think it'll be brilliant , you are right Prabha , Sunheri n Prithvi will make a great husband-wife and I'll get Prithvi as my Damad . What can bring more happiness to me than that ? I think we should get them married really quickly , Prithvi needs a soulmate . I should have thought about it earlier ." A brilliant n sweet smile came on the lips of his wife n happy tears brimmed from her eyes , " I'll call Pujariji earliest at tomorrow morning to fixed the date of their sagai ( Engagement ) . "


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Rest of the dinner went on doing excited discussion of the upcoming wedding n engagement procedure . Both very happy . Finishing dinner they left the place to their bedroom . Unknown to them , a slender beautiful girl was standing close to them , hiding well from their eyes n listening to their every word . After they left , Meera was still standing there , her knuckles soo tight , her nails digging in to her palm , drawing blood , eyes blazing , she whispered to herself , " I won't let it happen ..

" He takes so much pleasure, seeing me in pain , always teasing , insulting me . Never leaves a chance to create problems for me , and I'll let him be a part of the family which should be mine actually . Just like that ? No way , now is the time to take revenge .He must go through the same pain n sense of non-belongingness that I went through n still suffering . I'm feeling bad thinking about breaking my sister's Rishta , but she's such a cute nice girl , she'll soon get another guy , who hopefully will be as sweet as her . For now , I must plan something to present Prithvi in bad light in front of the family . What should I do ?


Edited by LadyMacbeth - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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her bra what????

Don't keep me hanging...

Btw. I'm loving what you have down so far Gargi. Hope I'm not interrupting your posts...

I was just heading off to sleep, thought I'd check forum again and saw this now you got me to me to the point that I want to stay up to see what's going to happen next...

Otherwise I'll end up with a different ending in my sleepšŸ˜†

Great job, I love it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parm.

her bra what????

Don't keep me hanging...

Btw. I'm loving what you have down so far Gargi. Hope I'm not interrupting your posts...

I was just heading off to sleep, thought I'd check forum again and saw this now you got me to me to the point that I want to stay up to see what's going to happen next...

Otherwise I'll end up with a different ending in my sleepšŸ˜†

Great job, I love it!!

Thank you Parm , you are soo sweet , and that ' bra ' was a typo , worst of it's kind , nut then again I'm good at stuff like typo . I'm very very bad at typing .
It's just something I's thinking the other day n thought to write down , I'm not at all goo at English , so that's a big problem . Anyways , I never shied away from tamatars thrown at me . I'll write the next part so, please read n tell me how's it , I know I'm not good at it but I can improve . 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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grt nice work yaar...i like that revenge of meera... i m waiting for more to read ur work... thanks for making ff i hope it goes long.nd more chapter...update soon dear...šŸ¤—šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyyy this is too good, you should continue soon,
im crazy about thinking what meera will do...

i like it šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hangok n Sana , thank you guys , I'll update as soon As I figure out which couple I want here . šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great work Gargi ...! šŸ‘šŸ¼

Cant wait to see how Meera plans to stop the wedding !

PS: Let it be Mithvi ... Plzzz ! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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you jst rocked ...šŸ‘šŸ¼...eagerly w8ing 4 the next update...come on dear...u can do it...
Edited by BondlockeRJoE - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: LadyMacbeth

Thank you Parm , you are soo sweet , and that ' bra ' was a typo , worst of it's kind , nut then again I'm good at stuff like typo . I'm very very bad at typing .

It's just something I's thinking the other day n thought to write down , I'm not at all goo at English , so that's a big problem . Anyways , I never shied away from tamatars thrown at me . I'll write the next part so, please read n tell me how's it , I know I'm not good at it but I can improve . 😳



You could have fooled me Gargi! I think your english is great! And forget the tamatars; I'll be throwing bouquets of flowers instead for such wonderful writing!

Still would have liked to see where that typo would have taken you though...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

Looking foward to reading the rest when you get it down.šŸ‘šŸ¼


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