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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow i m waiting to read our mithvi stories...😊 plz write more if possible make ff also i always like to read dark stories...i m very bad na...😈😆 continue dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1

Your beauty overwhelms me
As I wrap my arms around you
I press your softness tight
Great passion fills my inner being - Pritvi


Hate has burned a gaping hole;
The rancid reek of charring flesh
Is dancing on my very soul.
And as the rising fumes enmesh - Meera

Will Meera ever be able to love Pritvi after she finds out the truth about her relationship with him thought Datta Thakur. Datta Thakur knew Pritvi was the perfect man for Meera ,he knew Pritvi was the only guy that could keep Meera happy.
But how could he explain this to Meera his stubborn daughter who was heads over heels in love with Akash , her city boyfriend , who annoyed datta thakur to the core.Eventhough he was a nice guy there something about akash that Datta thakur did not feel was right , he shook it off , he knew he couldn't blame his daughter if only he was around when she was growing up , he could lead her to the right way. But no he decided to sacrfice his family life for his village where he was born and brought up , he felt pang of guilt but did not regret as he knew he wouldnt have it any other way , this village was his life all family had serve as sarpanch throughout time , how could he run away from his responsibility , after all he was a Thakur
not onlly that
he was Thakur Ramadhari Singh the head of the village who always kept his word , but he also kept a word to his friend that their friendship would change into a relationship , soon them two would come relatives , his best friend thakur Samar singh - Pritvi father he was not able to fulfil his promise. Little did he know that Pritvi and Meera were bound with eachother not even themselves can change it , it was godwill that these two were made for eachother , it would seem god had listen to ramdhari and Samar prayers.
Meera and Pritvi were made for eachother

Precap :entry pritvi and meera
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it encourges me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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even i think, that meera & prithvi are for each other 😊

cant wait for the begin of the story, i mean with the entry of our MITHVI, story looks really intersting, continue soon...
and if you can please pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
wow.story luks vry gud. Waiting 4 mithvi entry. Pls update as early as possible.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice , good ! UPDATE ! 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yaar nice concept prithvi father nd daata dost hai....ho saktha hai aise bhi show me daata prithvi ki parents ko vachan deta ho...😉 plz update soon na...i m waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
superb. really want to see them enter soon and the story to start properly. Please post soon :)

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