FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 02/16/2025 Chapter43 - Part2 Updated - Page 8

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Posted: 11 months ago
#71

Originally posted by: swetiii

Jo gotta watch her habit of not disconnecting calls lol smiley36

My my smiley9

>> Not entirely her fault this time. Blame the towel-clad man for blowing away her fuse. smiley37

What a passionate chemistry smiley39

You present scenes so life like..

Moment interrupted, fear that follows, a fight and reconciliation smiley40

>> I write what I imagine and I want you to imagine what I write smiley2

Jalal is so.... dreamy

"You're mine. And that makes Jo one of their own"

Omg

Whistles and kisses

I got a towel romance scene lol smiley39

Jalal in towel smiley27

Uffffffffff..... Raising temperature and standardssmiley43

Hayyeeeeeeeeee

>> Towel romance?! The actual towel romance though didn't even begin smiley37


A turn of events yet again

Jo gotta leave earlier than expected

And change of planes in trips too

Interesting

>> What is life if everything goes as planned? smiley2

The artifact was really thoughtful and sentimental

I love how calmly J talks out his feelings, questions, doubts and stuff

A rare quality for a guy lol


Oolala.. J confessed his instant spark of affection smiley41

Sooooooooo Romantic smiley42


Seven months for JJ

More than 9 years for us lolsmiley37

Please update the next chapter soon di

Will update in seven months smiley36

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Posted: 11 months ago
#72

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

I don't know what to say ...... happy it started or sad it ended....

>> Both are equally beautiful smiley2

Too many emotions I just can't handle you know.....i don't wanna cry still my eyes are wet..... I don't know why....

>> Aww... come here for a bear hug smiley31

Too much attachment for PBD.... waiting since years.... visiting forum in the hope of PBD update.

Thank you for the update and for not giving up on your own amazing creation.

>> Thank 'you' for not giving up on me and this storysmiley31

Jodha and Jalal relationship is too difficult to explain .... They cross many things in their short relationship still something or another thing come up.

It takes time for Jalal to understand Jodha State of mind .... Coming from middle class family ....her upbringing, her insecurities, her fear .....still they are fighting together. Jalal is always there to understand his Jo.... Never take her wrong in any matter ...

>> Not entirely true. He takes offense, its natural but he makes an attempt to understand her at the same time.

Isn't she the most luckiest girl.

>> Of course. A big shout out to all understanding partners, men/women out there.

And I must say I just so proud of Jalal....the way he handle the whole situation.... he is so proud of his parents....his trust on them or their on him.

>> He has to be... after all, he has amazing pair of individuals as parents. I might not have touched upon them much but for a father to be willing to lose the empire he built from scratch, to buy freedom for his son and for the lady of the house to support that decision, the son ought to be proud of them.

Nope i never imagine they will argue on Jalal birthday..... sudden turn of event.....since long I am waiting for Jalal birthday.....for office puja but but but... everything is just change....I am just so disappointed.

>> Don't be too disappointed as the day hasn't ended yet. All is well that 'ENDs' well. smiley2

Last part of the chapter filled with so many emotions..... their small separation will change so many things....must store something big for readers.... I just hope and pray just like Jalal.... Jodha will come back to her Jalal safe and secure.

>> Ameen. Tathastu!

I don't know why you stop updating regularly..... don't know anything still I am requesting please don't leave this story like this....it loses it value which i regards so high .....I might not chanting update please but I will always waiting and visit forum.....i notice your likes which gives me hope you will be updating.

So please don't be disheartened if likes are less , comments are less.....

Trust me when it complete .... many previous readers will come back....no body likes half things..... please consider my request.


And once again thank you and i hope and pray you are doing well

in life ! 🙏

Thanks Bindu and I pray all good for your life too... will try not to abandon this story or you guys for long. Stay in touch!smiley31

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Posted: 11 months ago
#73

@Nushkiee.. IF doesn't allow to quote 'Member only post'. I get your 'Don't abandon' morcha girl. And hopefully will see to its completion (Krishna willing). I might sound a broken record but I truly cherish your love for PBD and your relentless effort to rouse my spirits. Will be forever grateful for the inspiration Ms. Sci-fi smiley31

By the way what are you pursuing in science?

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Posted: 11 months ago
#74

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Jodha is a Telugu girl and Akkineni is a popular surname in Telugu. You'll also see soon why I chose it, perhaps next update.

And the fact that you all have read, reread and memorized this story terrorizes me while writing updates. Sometimes I forget the sequence of events and write something. Then I'll remember that you guys will catch any illogical flow within a second, coz you have it better memorized than me, so I go back and read the past chapters and correct myself. See... the trouble you put me through... smiley44

We do have it all memorised smiley37

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Posted: 11 months ago
#75

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Thanks girlie...

I hope you won't make us wait this long again

>> how long is 'this' long? 4 months is okay?smiley36

4 months is awesome smiley43smiley41smiley40smiley31

I have started counting days again smiley37

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Posted: 11 months ago
#76

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Will update in seven months smiley36

You said 4 months smiley19smiley36

We will start badgering you again after giving a little rest smiley37

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Posted: 11 months ago
#77

He has to be... after all, he has amazing pair of individuals as parents. I might not have touched upon them much but for a father to be willing to lose the empire he built from scratch, to buy freedom for his son and for the lady of the house to support that decision, the son ought to be proud of them.

But aren't all parents like that ? And even while i ask that question I know deep down me and Jalal are really lucky hain na? My mum has stood by me even when the world is against me.. always giving me the opportunity to pave my path without once questioning if I'm really right. And just when I thought these characters are fictional and finding them in real is rare, YOU make me realise its not rare and I already have them around. Jalal nahi to kya hua I've been blessed with the bestest mum out there.

You see why we have this connection Di ? This was such a small thing for me untill I read those lines above. Sometimes we just happen to neglect the efforts our parents take for us and the consequences they face just to stand by us. And now that i actually read it, I understand how lucky I am for not many have the strength to endure everything just to stand by their kids...most of us do have to compromise not coz their parents don't love them but coz circumstances are such that they don't find the strength to stand by us and bare the consequences and feel helpless.

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Posted: 11 months ago
#78

Originally posted by: swetiii

You said 4 months smiley19smiley36

We will start badgering you again after giving a little rest smiley37

I'm not taking any rest in badgering I'm straight out demanding for an update. Abhi se start karenge to Di would give it to us by Dec Jan or we're stuck with demanding till next Oct 😅

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Posted: 11 months ago
#79

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

@Nushkiee.. IF doesn't allow to quote 'Member only post'.

I clicked it by mistake i guess.

I get your 'Don't abandon' morcha girl. And hopefully will see to its completion (Krishna willing). I might sound a broken record but I truly cherish your love for PBD and your relentless effort to rouse my spirits. Will be forever grateful for the inspiration Ms. Sci-fi smiley31

I should thank YOU! thank u for giving us this wonderful FF..which has now become a part of our livesssmiley31

By the way what are you pursuing in science?

medical smiley1

Edited by nushhkiee - 9 months ago
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Posted: 11 months ago
#80

Originally posted by: manu_ak

I'm not taking any rest in badgering I'm straight out demanding for an update. Abhi se start karenge to Di would give it to us by Dec Jan or we're stuck with demanding till next Oct 😅

Next update--- as our new year gift. smiley36

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