NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 52 - CHAPTER 57 - UPD 28th Jan - Page 21

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

HOLA ALL

WHAT AN AMAZINGLY MIND BLOWING CHAPTER THIS WAS LASHY 😲😲

BUT BEFORE WRITING ANYTHING ELSE, I HAVE SOME SERIOUS ADVICE FOR YOU

WRITING ACTION (AND/OR THRILL) IS ONE OF THE TOUGHEST GENRES OF WRITING AND YOU HAVE ACED THE SCENE AND LEFT ALL YOU READERS IN AWE 😲 YOU SHOULD SERIOUSLY THINK ABOUT WRITING PROFESSIONALLY. YOUR STORY WRITING IS PHENOMENAL, NO DOUBT, BUT YOU CAN SERIOUSLY THINK ABOUT SCREENPLAY AND MOVIE SCRIPT WRITING...DO GIVE SOME THOUGHT

SO GETTING BACK TO THE CHAPTER...

I LOVED READING THROUGH ALL THE REVIEWS - VATHSY, JAMES, KRUTHIK AUNTY, SELVI...SUPERB 👏

SANDHYA YOUR DESCRIPTION OF THE DUEL AND YOUR ANALYSIS OF THE SWINE WERE FANTASTIC ⭐️ YOU HAVE DELVED DEEP AND PUT FORTH SUPERB POINTS 👏

AND I TOO AGREE WITH YOU IN TOTO - KUNWAR'S MISPLACED SENSE OF PRIDE WAS HIS ULTIMATE UNDOING, AND, AS LASHY CORRECTLY SAYS, WHAT A SAD WASTE OF A LIFE THERE ARE INNUMERABLE EXAMPLES IN HISTORY OF ROYALS WHO FACE A SIMILAR STATE...AND YET SOME OF THEM NEVER LEARN

THE LADY IN THE BLUE VEIL 😉 WE HAVE ALREADY RECEIVED A W&W FROM LASHY SAHIBA 😉 😕 BESIDES WHICH, I HAVE LITTLE FAITH IN THESE WOMEN FROM THE EARLIER TEASER I COULD NOT MAKE OUT WHETHER SHEHZAADI WAS A FRIEND OR A FOE...AND LOOK AT THE HAVOC SHE WREAKED ON HEERA AND US ON APPEARING 😡 SANDHYA HAS GIVEN THIS SOME THOUGHT AND HER SCENARIOS ARE HILARIOUS 😆 SHE COULD INDEED BE SAHIB'S MOTHER, AND AS SANDHYA RIGHTLY SAYS, IF WHATEVER SHE HAS BEEN PLANNING BEARS FRUITION THEN SHE WOULD GET A CHANCE TO ATONE FOR HURTING HER SON, AND THE PERSON WHO LOVED HER IMMENSELY 😭 THERE COULD VERY WELL BE A SITUATION THAT THE NEXT DUEL GETS CANCELLED 😕 I AM EXCITED AT THIS DEVELOPMENT...

THE BEST THING ABOUT YOUR WRITING, LASHY, IS THAT IT IS ALWAYS UNEXPECTED..I HAVE OF COURSE SAID IT A MILLION TIMES...😉 EVEN THOUGH I KNEW WELL ENOUGH THAT THERE WOULD BE DUEL IN THIS CHAPTER...I COULD HAVE NEVER IMAGINED IT TO PLAY OUT THUS...YOUR MODUS OPERANDI IS JUST MIND BLOWING ⭐️ GRADUALLY UNFOLDING THE SCENES...THE LONG DESCRIPTION OF THE ARENA, WITH EACH COLOR EXPLAINED IN DETAIL...CHACHAJAAN'S GUT WRENCHING LAMENT...HIS DILEMMA ABOUT WITNESSING THE DUEL...HIS DECISION OF STAY AND WATCH 😭 SAHIB'S MEN...WORRIED ABOUT HIM AND DISGUSTED AT THE HUZOOR...

THE SHEHZAADE...GOSH...SO MANY THOUGHTS...👏 BUT OVERPOWERING ALL OF THEM, HIS STUBBORN REFUSAL TO LISTEN TO HIS HEART 😡

SHEHZAADI BANO...WORRIED ABOUT HER HUSBAND AND YET PROUD TO EVEN GIVE A SECOND THOUGHT TO HEERA'S SUGGESTION...BUT I GUESS THE POOR WOMEN DARE NOT...IF SHE VALUES HER POSITION

WHERE IS FS??? I SWEAR IF HE IS AIDING KHALIL IN SOME WAY OR JEOPARDISING SAHIB IS ANY WAY 😡 I AM GOING BACK IN HISTORY TO STRANGLE HIM WITH MY BARE HANDS...BUT BEING MORE ASTUTE THAN HUZOOR...COULD IT BE THAT HE MIGHT HAVE MADE A HASTY RUN...

HEERA...SUCH A SAD AND DEPLORABLE STATE...😭

THEN SUDDENLY THE LADY IN THE BLUE VEIL...DARE WE OR DAREN'T WE HOPE..

MAHENDER...WORRIED AND TRYING TO JUSTIFY THE MESS HE HAS GOTTEN HIMSELF INTO...

SUDDENLY WE MOVE TO THE ACTUAL DUEL...AN ABSOLUTE EDGE OF THE SEAT THRILL RIDE...EVEN THOUGH ITS PACE WAS SLOW AND ITS SETTING PLACID...

SWINE LIVED UPTO HIS NAME BY GETTING A POISON LACED KATAAR 😡 WONDER WHAT KHALIL WILL GET...

DURGA FINALLY GETTING AVENGED...I GUESS SHE CAN REST IN PEACE NOW...I WAS MORE ASTONISHED THAT MOHAN BANNA ECHOED THESE SENTIMENTS...SINCE THIS WAS NEVER OPENLY MENTIONED, I HAD KIND OF FORGOTTEN THAT SAHIBS MEN AND PARNAGARHIS MUST HAVE EXCHANGED SEVERAL DETAILS AND FILLED EACH OTHER IN...

CHACHAJAAN'S LOUD WHOOP OF JOY...

BUT ACCORDING TO ME THE MASTERSTROKE OF THIS CHAPTER WAS CHOTA ZAYAAN 😉 KUKU'S AZEEZ HAS A NEW REASON TO LIVE😉

>>>

WOW WOW WOW ⭐️ THANKS FOR THIS MAGICAL TREAT

P.S. I TOO FELT THAT THE RED LINES APPEARED TOO SOON...SO TELL US...IS C58 +EPILOGUE GOING TO BE THE FINAL COUNT OR WILL IT BE 59+EPILOGUE??

P.P.S I DID NOT THINK THE EDIT WAS FIGURATIVE AT ALL...A TAD MISLEADING, MAY BE...

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

An interesting convo between grandma, Baby and Bablookutty.

(Grandma is busy in the Kitchen.. Baby'kka and Bablookutty are playing.. )

Babloo: 'kka, what is grandma doing in the kichen?

Baby: She said that she is making sweet..

Babloo: Sweet? Is it her birthday?

Baby: No..

Babloo: Then whose birthday it is? Is it Jalal uncle's birthday?

Baby: Hey Babloo..Don't you remember we made a huge cake for Jalal uncle's birthday some months back.. ? It is not any uncle's or akka's birthday..

Babloo: Then why is grandma making sweets..?

Baby: She said that she is happy and that's why she is making sweet..

Babloo: Why suddenly happy? She was sad even yesterday.?😲

>>>Babloo. . . The Koschen King😎

( Grandma finishes her chores in the kitchen and comes..)

G'ma: Here kutties.. Taste some of these..

( gives them sweets)

Baby: Grandma, Babloo wants to know why you are making sweets..

Babloo: But Baby'kka also doesn't know why you are making sweets now..

>>>😆

G'ma: Do you want to know why?..I am really happy..that's why..

Baby: Why suddenly happy?

G'ma: Ah.. I got good news..

Babloo: Oh.. you got the 'pdate!!😃

Baby: What good news in that..?

Babloo: 'kka.. that must be the good news.. the 'pdate!

>>>😆😆

G'ma: Yes.. you know what? Akbar uncle fought with the Swine!

Babloo: WHAT? You saw them fighting?

Baby: Babloo...grandma says she read the update of the story..how can she see it..?

G'ma: ( starry-eyed) No kutties..I actually saw them fighting.. I watched every stroke of their swords..?

>>>👍🏼

Babloo: 😕 Grandma.. You saw them fighting in the TV?

Baby: Did they fight with swords?

Babloo: Real swords? Or fake swords?

G'ma: Real swords.. But it was not in the TV.. Lashy akka wrote the story so nicely that it was like watching it in person..

>>>Exactly👏👏

Babloo: So it was dishum, dishum fight..👏

Baby: Who won grandma?

G'ma: Of course Khansahib won !

Babloo: What happened to the handnothing prince?

G'ma: Oh.. he ..he lost to Khansahib and was killed..

>>>🥳

Babloo: Did Akbar uncle kill him? Was it a war?

G'ma: Sort of kutties..But it is supposed to be game..Akbar uncle wanted to have sword fight with Mahendar and Khali..So the Shehzaade arranged for it..

Baby: Has the Shezaade become friends with uncle?

Babloo: You said he put uncle in jail and gave him leventeen lashes..

>>>More than that😭

Baby: He had wounds and bleeding..

>>>😭

G'ma: Yes.. But Heera cleverly and cunningly prepared medicine for his wounds and gave it to him..

>>>Yes! 😎

Baby: Is he fully cured?

Babloo: Baby'kka, I told you that Lashy'kka put a picher of uncle with sword.. He must be cured..

G'ma: No kutties.. He is not fully alright.. But he has that determination and anger to ..to..destroy the evil persons..Like a wounded lion..

Babloo: 😲 G'ma.. I don't understand what you say.. You speak big words like Shyamala aunty..

>>>🤣

G'ma: Okay..okay..It is enough if you know that Akbar fought with sword and in the process he won killing Mahendar..

Baby: Did he also fight with Khalil.?

G'ma: He will..But after 15-20 days..

Baby: Why so late?

G'ma: Because.. only then Akbar will get fully cured..and will be fit to fight..

Babloo: Grandma..I want to watch Akbar uncle and the ugly bad guy fighting dishum..dishum..

Baby: Me too grandma.. will you take us..?

G'ma: Oh sure.. kutties.. 😆

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Awww.. 😳 welcome to hbas world, Wishu! 🤗

Originally posted by: Testmytest

Dearies,

Worked on this recently!

Hope you all like it!! 🤗

Saw this on google images the other day and I had to try it. There are different versions of this on the web 😕

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Goodmorning Periyamma, Bindu, Kal, Lavanya, Wishu, and all Baisas... 🤗

Goodevening Aparna, Rekha, and Vathsy...🤗

Frozen dew drops...

Originally posted by: Vmanoh

Kuki - Love your dancing emoji's & I'll need to borrow them too ! 😆 and yes Ustaad did it !! 😃