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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Edited...

That fateful day you found me again,
I heard your name in those mighty winds that blow.
Afar were our minds, but souls had come close,
the winds had told me so.

Caressing my angry features with your breath
You whispered my name, 'Heera', like never before
the winds of delight enticed me.
I was never again the same anymore.

I followed the singing wind.
Unaware of where they'd lead me so.
For I was wrapped by the gale that was you
letting myself be taken where you must go.

Upward into the hills,
calmly across unknown terrains,
I held on to your steadfast arms
As we crossed into love, from sorrow and pain.

>>> This reminds me of camel accident of Heera...when Khan sahib reached her and bring her back from the forest... both were so close... riding on Bahadur... that time things were change inbetween both of them.
Heera so wanted him stay back .😳


Today, I hear those winds carry your laugh
And I follow those winds with all my might,
Trying to reach out and to touch you,
to bring you back on this dark windy night.

You must be getting closer
For the murmurs of your chest cannot be in vain
please allow me to find you, to heal you, my Sahib.
So we shall be together, forever and ever again.


Beautiful and touching!

Khan sahib's Heera only can heal him... including everyone Khan sahib also knows that! 😳
Ofcourse one day everything will be fine... you both are together ... forever and ever ... I so wish !
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Edited...

That fateful day you found me again,
I heard your name in those mighty winds that blow.
Afar were our minds, but souls had come close,
the winds had told me so.

Caressing my angry features with your breath
You whispered my name, 'Heera', like never before
the winds of delight enticed me.
I was never again the same anymore.

I followed the singing wind.
Unaware of where they'd lead me so.
For I was wrapped by the gale that was you
letting myself be taken where you must go.

Upward into the hills,
calmly across unknown terrains,
I held on to your steadfast arms
As we crossed into love, from sorrow and pain.


Today, I hear those winds carry your laugh
And I follow those winds with all my might,
Trying to reach out and to touch you,
to bring you back on this dark windy night.

You must be getting closer
For the murmurs of your chest cannot be in vain
please allow me to find you, to heal you, my Sahib.
So we shall be together, forever and ever again.

😭

After the rescue when AMK tried to calm a visibly angry Heera:

'Sahiba...' he whispered 'believe me when I say I've never destroyed the lives of innocent people... believe me when I say, I've never preyed upon any woman... in fact... in all my life, there is no other woman I've interacted closely with...' his voice cracked into a husky murmur 'I have touched, no woman...' his eyelids gently shut 'no woman, except one... this is the truth... I swear on Allah's name...'

He paused for a bit. The edge of his jaw had brushed past her ear. It was not intentional. But now that it had happened, he didn't regret it. Rather, it made him want to go on. 'Heera...'

A shudder rose from the low of her back making its way right up to her neck, causing her heart to skip more beats than she could care to count. She didn't realise when her fingers had lost their will and strength - but, the weapon eventually fell from her grip onto the soft Earth below.

And the blissful journey ( while it lasted ) they embarked on together.

Now wishing more than ever to be reunited with him.😭

Soulful lines and a yearning so heart wrenching!

Wonderfully edited and the scene so stirring!👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Yes please allow author Sahiba... 😭
Beautiful! ❤️


Originally posted by: binduprasad41


Beautiful and touching!

Khan sahib's Heera only can heal him... including everyone Khan sahib also knows that! 😳
Ofcourse one day everything will be fine... you both are together ... forever and ever ... I so wish !


Originally posted by: roseraja1915

😭

After the rescue when AMK tried to calm a visibly angry Heera:

'Sahiba...' he whispered 'believe me when I say I've never destroyed the lives of innocent people... believe me when I say, I've never preyed upon any woman... in fact... in all my life, there is no other woman I've interacted closely with...' his voice cracked into a husky murmur 'I have touched, no woman...' his eyelids gently shut 'no woman, except one... this is the truth... I swear on Allah's name...'

He paused for a bit. The edge of his jaw had brushed past her ear. It was not intentional. But now that it had happened, he didn't regret it. Rather, it made him want to go on. 'Heera...'

A shudder rose from the low of her back making its way right up to her neck, causing her heart to skip more beats than she could care to count. She didn't realise when her fingers had lost their will and strength - but, the weapon eventually fell from her grip onto the soft Earth below.

And the blissful journey ( while it lasted ) they embarked on together.

Now wishing more than ever to be reunited with him.😭

Soulful lines and a yearning so heart wrenching!

Wonderfully edited and the scene so stirring!👏 👏 👏

Thanks girls!🤗
Yes, yes and yes, Rose❤️!
It was when Rekha had asked me about the 'calling Heera' part in the other thread, that I realised we hadn't revisited this scene - the first time he'd called her by name... it was special then...

and she yearns to hear him wake up and whisper that name again!

Rose you penned a poem... 👏

And the blissful journey they embarked on, together.

Now wishing to be reunited with him, more than ever. 😭

Soulful lines and a yearning so heart wrenching!

Wonderfully edited and the scene so stirring!👏 👏 👏

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Edited...

That fateful day you found me again,
I heard your name in those mighty winds that blow.
Afar were our minds, but souls had come close,
the winds had told me so.

Caressing my angry features with your breath
You whispered my name, 'Heera', like never before
the winds of delight enticed me.
I was never again the same anymore.

I followed the singing wind.
Unaware of where they'd lead me so.
For I was wrapped by the gale that was you
letting myself be taken where you must go.

Upward into the hills,
calmly across unknown terrains,
I held on to your steadfast arms
As we crossed into love, from sorrow and pain.


Today, I hear those winds carry your laugh
And I follow those winds with all my might,
Trying to reach out and to touch you,
to bring you back on this dark windy night.

You must be getting closer
For the murmurs of your chest cannot be in vain
please allow me to find you, to heal you, my Sahib.
So we shall be together, forever and ever again.

👏👍🏼...The above two paras in particular...Superb...👏⭐️

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Posted: 6 years ago
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM LASHY 😳


SAHIB AND THE WORLD KNOWS THAT IT IS ONLY HIS OWN HEERA WHO CAN HEAL AND SOOTHE HIM. HIS PAIN IS UNIMAGINABLE 😭 BUT SHE IS A MIRACLE WORKER 😃

AND THAT SCENE 😳 WHEN HE ADDRESSES HER AS HEERA FOR THE FIRST TIME ❤️


I AM SURE HEERA FELT THE SHUDDERS 😉 AND I AM ALSO SURE EACH OF US FELT THEM TOO 😉 😉


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy



Thanks girls!🤗
Yes, yes and yes, Rose❤️!
It was when Rekha had asked me about the 'calling Heera' part in the other thread, that I realised we hadn't revisited this scene - the first time he'd called her by name... it was special then...

and she yearns to hear him wake up and whisper that name again!

Rose you penned a poem... 👏

And the blissful journey they embarked on, together.

Now wishing to be reunited with him, more than ever. 😭

Soulful lines and a yearning so heart wrenching!

Wonderfully edited and the scene so stirring!👏 👏 👏

Splendid responses...Kal, Bindu, and Rose...
Rose - I too thought about that scene you mentioned...coz that was the time she was angry...and it perfectly fits here...
And Amazing verses in response...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy



Thanks girls!🤗
Yes, yes and yes, Rose❤️!
It was when Rekha had asked me about the 'calling Heera' part in the other thread, that I realised we hadn't revisited this scene - the first time he'd called her by name... it was special then...

and she yearns to hear him wake up and whisper that name again!

Rose you penned a poem... 👏

And the blissful journey they embarked on, together.

Now wishing to be reunited with him, more than ever. 😭

Soulful lines and a yearning so heart wrenching!

Wonderfully edited and the scene so stirring!👏 👏 👏


Thank you Lashy for making us revisit the scene. Yes it was special then at least for AMK, Heera always yearned to hear him call her by that name but when he did, the circumstances were not pleasant 😔 so it was not as magical as she wanted it to be, nonetheless her heart did skip a beat or two
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Edited...

That fateful day you found me again,
I heard your name in those mighty winds that blow.
Afar were our minds, but souls had come close,
the winds had told me so.

Caressing my angry features with your breath
You whispered my name, 'Heera', like never before
the winds of delight enticed me.
I was never again the same anymore.

I followed the singing wind.
Unaware of where they'd lead me so.
For I was wrapped by the gale that was you
letting myself be taken where you must go.

Upward into the hills,
calmly across unknown terrains,
I held on to your steadfast arms
As we crossed into love, from sorrow and pain.


Today, I hear those winds carry your laugh
And I follow those winds with all my might,
Trying to reach out and to touch you,
to bring you back on this dark windy night.

You must be getting closer
For the murmurs of your chest cannot be in vain
please allow me to find you, to heal you, my Sahib.
So we shall be together, forever and ever again.


This is so
Yes we all are waiting for our love birds to be united as soon as possible.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Vmanoh



Awww - His chest for a bed, could any demons now have courage to bother her even in her dreams.


@bold: Absolutely not!! 😊


Edited by Testmytest - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Splendid responses...Kal, Bindu, and Rose...
Rose - I too thought about that scene you mentioned...coz that was the time she was angry...and it perfectly fits here...
And Amazing verses in response...😳


Originally posted by: lashy

Rose you penned a poem... 👏


😲 Amma -vah? Wasn't aware about it at all.😳
Was rushing to post the reply before dinner on top of having to contend with the erratic net connection.😊
🤗
Edited by roseraja1915 - 6 years ago

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