NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 51 - Teaser for Chapter 56 - Page 131

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.3k

Views

35.8k

Users

19

Likes

7.5k

Frequent Posters

lashy thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
Moving on to round 3 editing... but I think I'd need a noon-break...

Need I announce the results of the first one... all of you got everything correct except one.. 😊

The answer to the 'monkey' was one Bajrang!

Sandy, Lavanya, Rashmi, Rekha and Rose - I think y'all got 9/10👏

1) The universe started from a small d--DOT (BINDIYA)

2) A b---- man dies but once, a coward many times. (Native American Proverb) BRAVE (BAHADUR/DURGA- actually Durga I read means Invincible... but, I shall give you this one, Rose!😳)

3) An only child, is always a d--- child (Swedish proverb) DEAR (AZEEZ)

4) A d------ with a flaw is better than a common stone that is perfect. (Chinese proverb) DIAMOND (HEERA)

5) A g-- ----- cannot be polished without friction, nor a man perfected without trials. (Chinese proverb) GEM STONE (RATAN)

6) The smallest act of k------- is worth more than the grandest intention. (Oscar Wilde) KINDNESS (DAYA/KAREEM - Didn't strike me that Kareem is kindness too👏)

7) The first w----- is health. (Ralph Waldo Emerson) WEALTH (DHANI)

8) There is something divine, m-------, magical and unexplainable in the universe that is listening and responding to each of us. (Bryant McGill) MYSTICAL (SUFI)
9) The higher the m----- goes the more he shows his tail. (German proverb) MONKEY (BAJRANG)

10) Some are born g----, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them. (William Shakespeare) GREAT (AKBAR)

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
Sandhya.A thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Two issues here, Lashy Sahiba

1. Ibrahim MIGHT be handsome?😕

Lashy tell her how Ibrahim looks, else the second heartbreak of the day seems to be in order.😆

2.The one time I remembered to include the Sahib in a quiz and it is the wrong answer.😭


🤣

Kalgi22 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Two issues here, Lashy Sahiba

1. Ibrahim MIGHT be handsome?😕

2.The one time I remembered to include the Sahib in a quiz and it is the wrong answer.😭

🤣
roseraja1915 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago

Good night, darling Sahibas, James. See you tomorrow. 🤗

melovesja thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
Good night ROSE 🤗
Hello dearies😊

Congratulation pinky princess🤗

You turn into addicz but you make us addict.

Awesome thread and superb poem chellam😛


Waiting for update shahiba😉
Edited by melovesja - 6 years ago
James12 thumbnail
6th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter 44


'Akbar...' Ibrahim's voice echoed from the other side of the screen
'Bahadur is ready... the bags and water-flasks have been loaded...
when will you be leaving?'


Oh men take a breath and leave our lead for Jesus Sake 😳
they are having very very important conversation and
you aren't helping by interrupting them again and again 😳

'Heera...' He could see she was not intending to be a tease. But
the fact that she would rather lavish her gazes upon the gathers
of his neck-scarf, did have his dark pupils vying for her attention.
So, he decided to do himself a favor and tenderly lifted her chin
up, till she had nowhere to look but him. 'I...'


yaa yaa go on are you going to kiss Harka Sahiba wait let me
close my eyes than 😆no If I will close my eyes than how i will know
you are done with PDA or not so let me read further but you don't
stop okay go on on 😉

'Akbar?' came Ibrahim's second reminder 'Are you there?'

'Yes Ibrahim... please wait... for a bit...

Damn you men what's wrong with you didn't i say go for time

being and let our lead have some plenty of time huh it's not like

Khan is going to get kidnap so why to disturb Him huh 😳


She had gotten everything she wanted, hadn't she? How could
she selfishly ask for more of his time? 'No... I can't... I shouldn't...
I have to let him go'

So, she filled her lungs with all the calming air that she could, to

dissolve some of those unrest. Then, she let her eyes speak. 'I

understand Khan Sahib... you have to leave...'

alright I don't understand how come wishing for them time

of person you love just for yourself can be refer as selfishness🤔

but seriously here Harka Sahiba view are quite sensible well when

it's come to Harka Sahiba I find her always sensible and wise 😆

okay don't come after me with Sword Khan you gotta kiss her I am

just got to have crush on her nothing else so just take a chill pill 😉

anyway this par make me recall the day I left Aussie to get in India and

at my last meeting with mom was so like this 😳she don't wish to let me

go but at the end she said the same line and it get hard for me to leave than

alas I had no option but leave 😔


Because her expressions did not even reflect a flicker of disappointment? Because she showed nothing beyond a

quiet resignation?

Yet and still, he would leave to attend to the call of duty.

Like he always did.


'Take care...'

huh you are leaving damn you can't just leave right now😡 did you

forget the time when you just push her away thinking she will be safe

with that shithead or maybe her so called Guardian you end up having

life and death time for yourself later and remember the time you for job

left the kid and delay it and let him hang on with hope to meet with you

later the poor little one left the world with the same wish but it couldn't

get fulfilled and here the type of Job you do well their seem no tomorrow

all credit goes to your enemies with learn something from me men I log

of from here with the hope to get one hour time next to get done with

novel day again alas that wish break badly because I get to log in here

well after week huh and here you are leaving Harka Sahiba with no

proper answer to her most beautiful heartily confession not fair not at all 😒


Ironically however, by doing so, she'd only made it harder - her

gesture softly rattling at his rigid Armour once again. For, it told

him that she had truly adopted his fate as her own. That in all

ways, she'd truly become the Ustaad's wife.

yaa she did become a companion for a life an Agent officer like

men want to have 😉 but you didn't because you are in full mood

to leave for job as always 😳 anyway to be honest this novel is making

me miss my family more and more anyway will have long chat with mom

dad tonight again so nothing to be off 😆

A fresh day would come, when they would be able to fulfill

all of that, with nothing to stop them. A fresh tomorrow would

come when they'd be able to nurture those fantasies, into an

enchanting reality. 'Another tomorrow...'

I am gonna sue you😡 if you left I swear I will really do😡
come on for Jesus sake didn't you heard the song like
their is no tomorrow 🤔I can't believe it after having all the
inner battle he still is mood to leave huh 😒


But with both of us leading lives where we don't know what

tomorrow holds...'

So, as she'd said, what if they didn't have many tomorrows?

think men think what if you couldn't get to make your way back

if you got attacked by many enemy at once what you will do🤔

be positive but if by being Negative you are going to change your

plan to leave than I am going to make you think in negative way 😉

so it will be better you stay for a while as don't know about shithead

and Satan but if you leave you will get attacked by me for sure 😡


'Ibrahim...'

'Akbar? Are you there?'

'Yes... there has been a small change of plan...'

'Change of plan? How do you mean?'

'Pack your bags... and get started to leave on this mission...'

'Oh...' Ibrahim was confused. And he made little effort to hide

it in his voice 'alright'

awesome 👏well no love for you alright that's Harka Sahiba to get

you got to change your mind because Harka Sahiba words hit you

hard not mine no even not Harka Sahiba the credit goes to Lashy sis

who crack hard nut stubborn head like you 😆 anyway credit or no credit

but you change your decision to go at least for now that's matter 😉

so now we will be having more Lead time here 🥳

'If and when you meet our friend first, you keep him safe...'

'Of course...' nodded Ibrahim recognizing that the Ustaad had

avoided mentioning the term 'informer'. Possibly since bhabhijaan

was with him.

'And... YOU stay safe too!'

'I will...'

okay so the person who can know how you are feeling just by one

slight look at you do you think the person will get no idea about your

Code words conversation 😆 anyway it was cool to see how khan is

always in his form of being officer even Hakra Sahiba know about

his job he can't take risk of any other person get clue as people say

wall to have ears 😉

A surprise, which gradually turned to disbelief.

And disbelief into elation.

'No Begum... I haven't left yet... I'm still here... with you'

I think Harka Sahiba is unable to digest you stay for her how about

you let her know by your action instead of words 😉 men that will

be real fun for us 😆

'Yes Heera...' he pulled her in tighter 'for a little while longer'

no need to let her know for how much time it's hurt you fool 😡

but again Harka Sahiba is to overwhelmed by watching him stay

to caught last line or feel hurt so you are safe from my attack 😆


'As you've heard Heera, I ride away at the crack of dawn... the few

lone hours I have till then, I'd like to continue making this new

journey with my companion for life - my bride... a beautiful journey

that we'd only just started undertaking... a journey where we create

and collect new memories along the way... as we travel together...

towards oneness...' I take it, my bride has no issues to continue

journeying down these blissful paths with me'

my my my what a lines how in so cool way Khan got to voice

out his heart wish in the form of words front of Harka Sahiba asking

her to be at his side as his soul in every breath he take every path

he travel my Jesus this was so cool line what can be the better

way to express to the person how much they mean to you and

how you want them to be in your life it's so clear and very much

effective as everyone know we boys always let our action speak

for us instead of words but again when we let word speak for us

instead of action then to no one can defeat us 😎 not even girls who

are known be the empress of words 😆 but don't know how Harka Sahiba

going to take this I just have idea she may get to reply in a way

which will make Khan and me speechless for sure 😉

'I am your companion for life, Khan Sahib... true, I might not see

very well... or ride a horse... true, the roads so far have been tumultuous...still my hand is willingly fastened to yours... and

I travel where you take me... because I have faith, my Sahib -

that without you... any journey I take... along any path... on

any day... cannot be beautiful'


oh I knew it she will get to reply in such a way which will make

us speechless 😆but her reply will be splendid like this I didn't knew😲

Jesus Christ it's awesome 👏determination at even how lacking on few

things of her life she so firmly got to say she is companion of his life 😳

and she will be always their for him because she trust him what Khan

can wish for more then this her trust her love and her being on his side

always 😉

'It's a cold winter's night... would you join me in having a warm

drink?'

well and here I think Khan would be more please to join her

under the warm blanket and comfy bed besides her 😉instead

of drink but no worries it's pretty cool offer 😆 but seriously Lashy

sis it was very entertaining part to be honest 😊

'An adventurer's companion for life?'

'Doesn't he get cold?'

well he may get cold but it's must me your thought which

is making him warm 😉just like back at childhood i heard the story🤔

how one old men standing under the dark cold lake got warmness by

the sight Burning wood at far away from him reach it's the only thought

which keep him standing still 😊and here you are just besides him so

it's not to hard for him to stay warm 😆

'But I wonder how and when the heart of an adventurer recognized

its companion in a partially blind lady... who couldn't ride at day...

or even walk by herself at night, in the open? When did you realize

you'd met your match?'

woo 😲so in a way Harka Sahiba is asking when was the time

his heart bell ring and he got he is in love not bad way to ask

but it's damn tricky question for sure 😆 let's see what he will or he

will try to make Harka Sahiba take the lead 😉 because if I would be

on his place i may have done it 😆


'Maybe I must let YOU answer first, my Begum?' his eyes

played around with hers.

Awe this is so me I so do the same when i get to ask tricky question

like this 😉I prefer to challenge the one who ask and make them

take the lead then answer my own 😆 it's make me not only get the

Idea how to answer but make me win it at the end as well 😉

'When I met a man who punished my guards' unkindness by

charging them 4 dams for water, and yet returned the money

to me with no explanation whatsoever - confident that I'd figure

out what and why he'd done so... I knew I had met my match...'

wow so first meeting make her intrigued and second

meeting made her realize the men is perfect for

her 😆 not bad in few sentence she got away with

her answer 😉 let's see what khan may have in mind

to answer her question 😎

'I knew I had met my match, the night I pulled you out of the

canal... which is why I had to stop wearing this ring for a while...

because, it reminded me so much of you... and at that time, of

what could not be!'

just like I said we are best in this either by action or words when we

do something with dedication and passion we always come up as best😉

and that's what happen Khan my my he ruled it 👏I just so like his way

here how coolly he answered her as splendid😎

''And yet... I wasn't wrong...' when I was about to drown in

the water, SHE was the one who jumped in to save my life'

but more then this i love the way he get to make it so clear that

she may think her Partial blindness as something to bit bad

but for him it's not 😉 and he not for once think back to his heart

decision to make her the owner of his heart and life😳

'I might not have told you this before... but, I've always considered

you to be the most attractive woman I've ever met... tonight...

I realize how far I might have undermined the extent of your

beauty...'

writing something so intense and romantic part with such a ease

is marvelous Job Lashy sis and you did it fantastically amazing way 👏

that even me being not much fond of these at reading couldn't

scroll down either as we like to watch action thriller and romance

is something which we like to do practically instead of reading

and watching 😆 anyway even not being poet he did get to say allot

for her in his own way more ever even if he don't then to his action

speak allot for him I bet he is the men many girls may dream of 😆

Her hands moved across, over to the site of a scar on his hip,

idly tending to the bruised skin there 'How did you get this?'

'How did you get this?'

'In battleground... 7... no, 8 years ago... from an arrow'

'God... that must have hurt!'

Her wrists haltingly slid towards the site of another one, around

his midriff 'And this?'

'From being struck by a short sword... during a hand-to-hand combat

with a rival...'

okay never the injuries may have hurt after watching the scars

of Soldiers as it's something they always feel proud of 😉yaa it must hurt

them but either they take it as the sign of Victory😎 or their fault in War🤔

but in both way the hurt those injuries cause them come up to be

fruitful when they got to wore the crown of Victory and see it's the

reason he get to answer it so coolly 😉 but again Harka Sahiba reaction to

each scar of injuries on his body is quite sensible no matter how strong you

are no matter how much you may have seen or watch but watching or

getting to know your Loved ones pain and hurt is something which always

weaken you Harka Sahiba is healer she may have seen more then this

when she treat others but now watching the scars of injuries on her heart

owner body must be painful for her and more then how he got listening it

from him make it bit more painful for him it may don't matter but a kind

heart Girl Like Harka Sahiba it's matter allot😊

Her fingertips then stalled at a burn mark below his chest,

her brows contorting into a scowl. 'And this?'

'When my stepmother chanced upon a corner I hadn't cleaned

properly... and got hold of a sharp hot ladle'

whattt 😲 Sharp Hot Ladle Jesus Christ how the hell people so evil

like them exit in the World 😡 oh khan did you kick her asses back then

oh what i am even saying you aren't in condition to repay them back

but i wish you may have broke her very hand by which she use to hurt

you😡 taking his own time he get to answer this so it mean this past life

still had great impact on him more then the injuries he got in battle

maybe because his past life is the reason for who he is now 😉

'And yet, I remember that the pain from the burn was not as bad

as the pain I felt when my step-sisters mocked at me after the

incident... ridiculing my inability to dress myself... and cover

the marks'

bloody sick people😡 like mother like daughter huh 😡everyone do

what others do specially kids who love to do what elders do😉 so when

the so called Witch didn't knew where to use her hand and so called

brain😡 I don't know the brain exist in her body but again that's none of

my concern 😡 as for me she was owner of black evil heart 😡 so how can

we expect good from her Daughters either watching none of single soul respect the little guys in fact love to make him suffer they to thought it's

cool to do but again their action was totally disgusting 😡

'Begum...'after having spent such blissful moments together,

why do you want me to rehash those miserable incidents now?'

yaa same question they got a time they should utilize it by

cherishing it in best way possible 😉what's the need to discuss

about this now when he have to leave in next moment even I wanted

Harka Sahiba to let go this topic now but no worries she have her own

reason for this😆 the most important is the life they share what if

they never get the time again to spend together to talk about this 😔

his favorite Begum... and hated by his quarrelsome first wife - my stepmother - with a vengeance. She was charming... educated... intelligent... an ambitious young lady. And she bore him a son too!'

The way he talk about it make it clear what both selfish lady was to him

in his life one had no gut to fight or take out her anger of betrayal

of getting another own in his Life on husband and other couldn't

survive the poverty and dept abusive life for her son who got Ill 😡

and run away leaving him to die with not an ounce of guilt 😡

He did have a second condition too' sneered Akbar with a fierce

contempt 'that he would only accept her, if she abandoned her

past life... be it, her home, her name or even her dying child!'

It was not even love I will say he was just Awe by her beauty and

wanted her attention solely entirely for him 😡or else if he may

have loved her or even respected her then he may knew Women

having kid and asking her to come for him leaving his past life is

committing sin in own way Kids are part of people life you can't

abandoned them thinking them as past life in fact for women it's

more then that obliviously if she is really women not just evil

witch on the name of Women 😡

'The thing is, Heera... if she would have never loved me, it

wouldn't have hurt so much... she DID love me, in her own

way, which is why it wrecked my life... I waited for her to

return... for many days... despite the letter she left... but,

no... she abandoned me... to suffer abuse alone... to die...

and ran off with her lover... forever!'


'She... does... not... exist... for... me... anymore!' he spell it out

twice, to make sure the message wasn't underplayed 'and you

cannot make amends with someone who does not exist for you,

can you? In fact...' he held his palm out 'I want you to promise

me one thing'

Oh admit it or not that lady held bit place in life of Khan still

he may say she don't exist for him and he had no desire to make

amends with her that's the reason neither he try to look for her

nor he take a look at her tries to get in contact with him still she held

a place Because she was his mother because she owned him explanation

either they are justified or absurd 😡 he don't wish to know her side

because no matter what she may say to explain herself at the end she

will not be able to justified for what she did back leaving a kid of her

own for her own comfort is totally disgusting he didn't flinch for once

when he told her how he got injured and hurt by his step mother how

his sisters mocked st him but he cry when he talk about his mother how

she left him it;s make it very clear no matter what he say he miss her

but he don't want her to be the part of his life she left him and never

look back at him now he don't want to do it either maybe he is bit

afraid to he is angry but what if listening her he may forgive her

which he don't want to do 🤔 so his decision of never turn to look for her

is quite valid in my eyes why to dig old grave which was and will be

the cause of your pain 😉 so let it go and look forward life is so

unpredictable to turn and look back at past 😊

'You are right...'

'I do seem to find myself feeling a new sense of peace... and

something tells me you're the one to thank for it!'

Oh so he walked out without waking her up so soon but no worries

he get to spend most valulable time with her and both of them get

to have

it was really

entertaining update with so much to add but



James12 thumbnail
6th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter 45 part 1

'Ai Khuda' He scratched at the rim of the bowl.
What if he didn't survive this assignment?
How would his wife and kids fend for themselves?
'Please help me out of this mess that I've gotten myself into'

well family is last thing which come in the mind of Spy when
they think they may don't get over with task successfully but
here this guy seems so family one to work as an Spy 😆

'Drink it, before it gets cold... I CAN get you another

serving if you want, you know? This bowl doesn't have

to be your last!'

But, what if it WAS his last?

he can't be the men assign by Khan he look so fearful and

weak type huh who on the right mind think negative when

nothing sort of happening i can bet khan is going to removed

him working for a men like Khan you need strong persona to

over come the fear of death but here he is scared as dead meat

because three men are chasing him 🤣 I mean reading his part

make me recall the para of Messenger send by Harka Sahiba how even

so very end knowing he is prisoner and very much be killed any minute

he didn't think about his family but about Harka Sahiba and the purpose

for which he is send for how passionate and Fearless they were and

he well no words for him he can't be messenger forget about being Spy😆


'Question? What, Sahib?' he scratched his hair '

I don't understand...'

well men you have very slow and pea

size brain which can understand anything clear as mirror

forget about getting khan view directly 😆 so why to try either😉

'You were busy grumbling to yourself... wondering

why you get yourself involved in such missions'

'The reason of course... is the kind of money I pay you'

And here come Khan clear and direct cool way 😉

oh wow what a way Khan😎 some how I knew what he is going

to say but he is so bold in his own way i Like his way to

work and clear with his men 😉

'Ya Allah!' Ibrahim slowly ruffled his hair. 'Khalil... teaming

with a powerful Hindu prince?'

oh come on Khan why to give tension to Jesus be cool you left

that Satan with no way poor Satan lost the only support

of Mughal Prince already so he will like to feed himself by

teaming up with others 😆 but yaa it's defiantly call trouble

for you but I can bet the informer is talking about shithead

only😡

'I was waiting to hear WHO sent you... and WHY... now

I know for sure...' the mentor hissed at his new prisoner,

having reversed the roles so very smoothly.

His message was not loud. But it WAS clear. 'THIS is for

my boy, Chota Faizan'

oh men he is the game changer just like the knight of chess 😉

it's remind me the Movie scene of Troy where Achilles come to

fight with Hecotor and they had conversation where Brad Pitt

(Achilles) say you won't not have eyes you won't have ears

or a tongue you will wonder the underworld as a blind deaf

dumb and all dead will know this is Hector the fool who

thought he killed Achilles 😉 so here this Attacker is fool to

think he can kill khan by mere dagger 😆 by the way I want

the very same end of Shithead and Satan in last in novel but

a king person you are I don't think you can write such a worse

death for them Lashy sis but as a reader i can hope for this

isn't it 😉 because what Satan had done in the start I can never

see his end as quick death with no pain I want him to suffer worse

way 😡 anyway but Here the way Khan got to avenge the death

of Chota faizan was marvelous very intriguing way you had written

the fighting part Lashy sis👏

'Does he seek revenge against those who've stolen Parnagarh

from him?'

'Was he also after the Farmaan?'

Then, wouldn't that imply that he had a hand in Durga

Sahiba's death?

'Ya Allah! No... cannot be true... '

well after Farmaan no but after Parngharh yes he was😡

and as you got it for yourself he seek revenge from you

but he didn't make friendship with Satan now he is friend

with him from long back and no not only hand but he is

the sole reason Durga Sahiba died bloody son of Evil witch

he is don't take to much time to get in conclusion he is the one

or else you will end up regretting very much Khan but I know

he is so coward ot strike you by front he is weak but wicked

oh I am sure he is brainless as well that's why he need to ask

that Satan how shall they take revenge in fact even in future

he try to strike on you he will use another arms to beat you because

a coward dead meat fellow like them have no gut to fought bravely

in arena or war field they have a wicked mind to manipulate others

to get what they want that's how he work using his shit less

face he charmed Durga Sahiba and using his shitty brain he

friend with that Satan and see the dumb shithead get nothing at

the end still what a failure this shown he is no match for you 😉

'What!' his small eyes widened quizzically 'Why a 'break',

you ask Khan Sahib? Well... having travelled all day, I'

m exhausted... I want to 'take it slow' for a few hours...'


And he definitely had to thank fate that none of the other

men were here - especially Azeez! 'Ibrahim... you...'

oh my my Jesus this is hilarious how Khan had to thank his

fate that no men is with them specially my favorite Lad Azeez😆

well he is such a prankster and he may get perfect chance to

tease khan as well but I like that chap way more then any other

he is one entertaining chap 😉 but seems like Ibrahim got posses

by Azeez soul so he is being bit teasing guy for Khan now 😆

'Well well...' grinned Ibrahim at the silhouette that dashed

off in front 'welcome to this side of a man's life, my friend...'

but now you better let him carry on with his romance later if

you become perfect mood spoiler then you be ready for my

Martial Arts Move Ibrahim 😉 come on it will benefit you only

them more you let Khan enjoy the more chance you may get to

tease him 😆 but seriously he is good friend for sure here so even

If I wish I can't stay angry on him 😆 men life so which life he was

living till now Obliviously not women so was he 🤣 alright this

line is meant for another purpose here but it's got me cracked up

a bit for sure 😆

The louder the protest, the more one has to hide.

The stronger the denial, the more the secrets buried inside!'


well that's something hard to deny it's very true most of times

but not always that's another fact as well 😆 but on serious

Note Harka Sahiba have quite Entertaining attended for

herself specially Bindiya here I just really hope it's goes like

this always 😉 these people support is something which is

letting her go on with the life it's the very base of her life now

and after them Khan but I can see he is already everything to her

he know her happiness lies with her people well fare and he can

do anything for her happiness her peace and she trust him it's

like chain of circle 😆 but very intriguing one 😉 but must say

you had Portray the character of Khan very well lashy sis

a true hero in all way in every way entirely 😉 but yaa one thing I

Missed talk or no talk Harka Sahiba didn't let them get any

clue of the content letters held 😆



'A messenger has arrived with a message from Khan Sahib

... currently, he's two towns away... and on his way back

to Parnagarh'

woo they ask lot of question but their curiosity had no end

either 😆 but no worries Harka Sahiba got saved by the

interruption of Daya not bad 😉 right time he arrived or else

Harka Sahiba may now giving competition to Strawberries

because of the way her Attended were teasing her ans asking

question even they nearly blackmail her to answer them a bit 😆

so now Khan is back let's see what's going to happen next 😉


well totally entirely awesome 👏update from start to end 👏

no doubt the fight caught my attention the mot as I am fond

of action more then dialogues but you write everything with

such a Excellency that I have many thing to say about but

how to start how to end I have no idea 😆 and I think I speak allot

for entire chappy that at the end praising your way of work is

very difficult job to do but i can say each update make me look

for ward with more excitement that's the strength you held

on your each update 😉

James12 thumbnail
6th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
argh😡 it's not happening again damn my post are
getting edited on their own accord

what's wrong with IF 😡

anyway I was here to check if we got update or
not so but we still have to wait for update it's seems
so thought to give a try to post my view
but only two got posted and rest are still hanging
so anyway 😊

Have a wonderful night 🤗

Lashy sis Rekha sis Lav sis
Slevi Rose Kwasi Vathsy Sandy
Bindup 🤗 🤗 🤗
🤗 🤗 🤗🤗
🤗and everyone take care 😳
see you guys later soon 😉
good night 😊




Edited by James12 - 6 years ago
lashy thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: melovesja

Good night ROSE 🤗

Hello dearies😊

Hey Mitu! 🤗

Congratulation pinky princess🤗

You turn into addicz but you make us addict.

>>>☺️

Awesome thread and superb poem chellam😛
Waiting for update shahiba😉

yes round 3 editing! 😳

lashy thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
James... try the copy and paste option! 🤔

Related Topics

Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: hemakeerti

4 months ago

FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 6/19/2025 Chapter 44 Part2

Hemakeerti OSes - Compiled PBD INDEX Prologue Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: Swissgerman

6 years ago

Jodha Akbar FF Who loves Him Most Chapter 78B updated on 08/07/2024

Jodha Akbar FF : --- Who loves Him Most (M) --- Link to my other threads Thread 1 Thread 2 - Thread 3 :::::Thread 4::::...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: Swissgerman

9 years ago

Jodha Akbar FF: Shahzada of Her Dreams Chapter 48 Updated 20/7/2025

... Shahzada Of Her Dreams ... ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Index::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Chapter-1.....The beginning Chapter-2:...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: Shinning_Stuti

5 years ago

Thread 3: Destined Love... (Chapter 61 updated)

Prologue: How it happens when both the hearts fall for each other madly without knowing each other? He is the emperor of the great Mughal...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: ParijatDeewani

2 months ago

Jodha Akbar Vm Thread

Hey y'all! I've created this thread so that you'll can easily access all the Akdha Vms in one place. Please feel free to add to the list. 1....

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".