Akdha Dark ff Game of Destiny chapter 43 on page 136 - Page 95

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

Aish thank you 🤗 thanks lot i am glad you truly enjoyed reading it and had your share of time to Penn down your view

(Possessive Jealous Ja is always fun but the best is Teasing seductive Jo and about JA dealing with other royal's you remember his meet with MP"? How tough nut they both were . When two strong people meet its always a sight to behold and enjoy so I am glad there mild meeting was worth enjoying for you).

Yes, that sight will be always so much exciting... bring in curiosity like what they will do, say, react...😳

(Absolutely true they're kid from heart sometimes um what we say yeah unpredictable souls and the best is they understand each other have faith in each other to but like Divya di said they lack transperancy I am going to work on that ).

True, that they lack, but as he told they are just fallen in love and yet to rise😉... so soon or later they will overcome it. As you will be the one to work on it😆

(This is very very today's time thing isn't it aish"? We sometime get's hurt by someone else, but don't try to share with dear ones"! Thinking seeing us hurt they will be hurt to"! So to protect dear ones from getting hurt we hide our pain"!

Yes, Perhaps that's where we make mistake in understanding them & leading it to create misunderstandings...

Similarly here Ja fail to tell her, but she got figure out perhaps that's why they say more than words see the gesture . It will be interesting to see how she help him in this).

Yes, it will be interesting to see, as oneside will be her Love and other her Motherland...

( They're kind of alarmed by Ja , and ofcourse they don't like him I am glad you like their discussion time it was to mystify the update ).

(Cannot reveal now aish you have to wait and watch cause only time (silly me the Author ). will tell what future held for GOD next update

Thats what i m doing nowadays dea...

(Yup finally the mystery of landless nameless faceless girl side will be clear to who is none either than our Jo ).

How much eager he is know for whom she had feelings, As he knows he only annoyed her but I think it's him only... How can she felt for someone else than him...

(This is Ja we are talking about he's always interested to know what's goes on in her mind and heart when it's comes to him"! Eager nervous all at once she practically get him on toe

@Underline Why not"? Nasir was kind to her she could like him to cannot she"?

Yea, she can like him, but In my view most of the times we attracts not to the simple things which comes to our terms easily... even i get more close to the friends who irritates me, like to fight and annoy over silly things. So for me it will be Jalal😉

but it will be interesting to see what she have to say by the way how you want her sides to come out any suggestions or kindly a wish"? ).

I wish somehow she will also gets to recognize him somehow before he reveals it to her and she gets to play the game with him...

(I will work on it ).

Better...😉

(Your welcome😍 Aish ).

"That's completely alright infact thank you🤗 for such heart ♥️warming😍 beautiful lovely review

🤗

Originally posted by: Babuchuck

Amazing update. This is my favorite fanfic on the jodha akbar forum. I hope the next update comes soon.

Thank you 🤗 so much😃 I am glad you enjoy ☺️and it's turn out to be your favourite story here 😳 thanks lot 🤗

Will try my best to make it soon 😳

Take care 🤗

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

Yes, that sight will be always so much exciting... bring in curiosity like what they will do, say, react...

Well this left me speechless cause you unknowingly thought like me 😆 yes that's what I often have in mind to 😎

True, that they lack, but as he told they are just fallen in love and yet to rise... so soon or later they will overcome it. As you will be the one to work on it

Your faith over me is truly commendable 👏 thank you I am absolutely honoured ☺️ by your words 😳 @Bold underline yes absolutely correct you got it right 👏

Yes, Perhaps that's where we make mistake in understanding them & leading it to create misunderstandings...

Again absolutely right👍🏼 that's why there's saying Secrets are enemy of relation😳 secrets always led to misunderstanding and mistrust 😊 which we often end up keeping😒

Yes, it will be interesting to see, as oneside will be her Love and other her Motherland...

That's one hell powerful line 👏 wow just truly I thought people may miss this absolutely correct aish 👍🏼 the sides which she cannot choose but she has to it will truly intresting to see which one she will pick 😉

Thats what i m doing nowadays dea...

I can understand 😊 I will try my best to make next soon 😳

Yea, she can like him, but In my view most of the times we attracts not to the simple things which comes to our terms easily... even i get more close to the friends who irritates me, like to fight and annoy over silly things. So for me it will be Jalal

Well that's sound so like me 😆 but again you got it right Opposite attract after all but it going to be same case with jo or not that's somthing we needs to wait for to know 😳

I wish somehow she will also gets to recognize him somehow before he reveals it to her and she gets to play the game with him...

By the way there's one more revealation which Jo needs to know before he reveal but let's see she can know or not 😉 and beside who know she already know just pretending not to 😆

Better...

Aye aya Boss😆

Thanks lot my smart friend you figure out most of point on own through the updates unknowingly helping me out in writting next 😳 thank you Aish🤗

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

Well this left me speechless cause you unknowingly thought like me yes that's what I often have in mind to

People with thoughts alike might be the cause i like your stories so much... you bring inn the unexpected and cant help admiring your skill more n more...

Your faith over me is truly commendable thank you I am absolutely honoured by your words @Bold underline yes absolutely correct you got it right

Undoubtedly, i believe in you

Again absolutely right that's why there's saying Secrets are enemy of relation secrets always led to misunderstanding and mistrust which we often end up keeping

Along with Secrets i will add Silence as well, which most of the time make people took in wrong way

That's one hell powerful line wow just truly I thought people may miss this absolutely correct aish the sides which she cannot choose but she has to it will truly intresting to see which one she will pick

Rashmi!! How can she chose any of them and let other suffer she wont be happy nor he... why it has to be so difficult? Neither she forget her existance nor her love.. Poor souls

"I wish you weren't Rajput Princess cum Empress and I wasn't Mughal Prince cum Emperor", I wish there was no wall of difference between us on the basis of religious beliefs and Sworn enmity started by our Ancestors"! I wish we met in diffrent circumstances"! I wish Instead of hate and disrespect love and respect would been the base of our relation"! I wish Instead of mistrusting each other move with our every breath, we trusted each other with our life"!

»»» you remember this, i loved this so much... it express so much about them, they overcame it long back but still those matters so much to them...

Your hold on expressing emotions is commandable Rashmi👏 And there many more like this...

I can understand I will try my best to make next soon

Well that's sound so like me but again you got it right Opposite attract after all but it going to be same case with jo or not that's somthing we needs to wait for to know

As always you and your Jo are unpredictables can just Wait and watch till mistery unfolds...

By the way there's one more revealation which Jo needs to know before he reveal but let's see she can know or not and beside who know she already know just pretending not to

What reveleation now??? Have you given hint somewhere which i missed...

And this is also a possibility of she already know and pretending not to, then she is really up with something...

Aye aya Boss

Thanks lot my smart friend you figure out most of point on own through the updates unknowingly helping me out in writting next thank you Aish

Glad that i'm unknowingly helping you dear...

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

People with thoughts alike might be the cause i like your stories so much... you bring inn the unexpected and cant help admiring your skill more n more...

Awe thank you 🤗 I am touched by this 😳 truly that mean quite lot cause this speak of understanding towards the work I do ☺️ so speak of my own success in work 😊which make it more beautiful for me by your words 😳

Undoubtedly, i believe in you

Which I will try to protect😳cahse faith mean lot to me 😳

Along with Secrets i will add Silence as well, which most of the time make people took in wrong way

Oh that's same case with me to 😊 mine to often prom push to know the matter they cannot take my silence 😆

Rashmi!! How can she chose any of them and let other suffer she wont be happy nor he... why it has to be so difficult? Neither she forget her existance nor her love.. Poor souls

That's what I mean what she will pick 😳cause admit or not she will have to choose just like she had to marry him 😳 and it has to be difficult cause of their position their identity their roots 😒

"I wish you weren't Rajput Princess cum Empress and I wasn't Mughal Prince cum Emperor", I wish there was no wall of difference between us on the basis of religious beliefs and Sworn enmity started by our Ancestors"! I wish we met in diffrent circumstances"! I wish Instead of hate and disrespect love and respect would been the base of our relation"! I wish Instead of mistrusting each other move with our every breath, we trusted each other with our life"!

»»» you remember this, i loved this so much... it express so much about them, they overcame it long back but still those matters so much to them...

You won't believe I was going to write this very para for you to make you know the side of Jo ofcourse I remember very well 😆 but didn't knew you will pick this 😳

To understand her side why she will have to pick remeber Ja had said never let go of your root but at the same time he didn't said but expect us to accept him which she know as well but that time no love now there's love 😎 so it's hard and this very para speak why it's difficult for them 😳 like let's see he talk about mistrust hate disrespect misunderstanding"! Which is change into trust understanding love and respect 😊 the thing left is to opt for transperancy 😉 and how they gonna cope up with their roots and love ☺️

This para was wrote when they barely had the emotion of understanding and remeber in this story even in hating mood they had a certain limit of trust 😎

As always you and your Jo are unpredictables can just Wait and watch till mistery unfolds...

"Not only Jo but Ja to 🤣honestly that make story more interesting😳

What reveleation now??? Have you given hint somewhere which i missed...

Remeber the outing in disguise😉

And this is also a possibility of she already know and pretending not to, then she is really up with something...

Yes exactly that's what I said

Aye aya Boss

Glad that i'm unknowingly helping you dear...

You have no idea how you're doing a great favour on me 😳
Which I am very thankful 🤗

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

Awe thank you 🤗 I am touched by this truly that mean quite lot cause this speak of understanding towards the work I do so speak of my own success in work which make it more beautiful for me by your words

Sometimes i wish the JA producer should have taken some plots from these FFs, the show could have been much successful, than those boring and unrealistic tracks like that Khaiber, Laboni and God track...🥱 They really made me forget how beautiful the show was at start...⭐️

Which I will try to protectcahse faith mean lot to me

You know you dont have do much for that...

Oh that's same case with me to mine to often prom push to know the matter they cannot take my silence

One should have someone to understand our silence really😃, nowdays whenever i think of it SSR is the person who comes to my mind...

That's what I mean what she will pick cause admit or not she will have to choose just like she had to marry him and it has to be difficult cause of their position their identity their roots

Pray there might be someother way too...

"I wish you weren't Rajput Princess cum Empress and I wasn't Mughal Prince cum Emperor", I wish there was no wall of difference between us on the basis of religious beliefs and Sworn enmity started by our Ancestors"! I wish we met in diffrent circumstances"! I wish Instead of hate and disrespect love and respect would been the base of our relation"! I wish Instead of mistrusting each other move with our every breath, we trusted each other with our life"!

You won't believe I was going to write this very para for you to make you know the side of Jo ofcourse I remember very well but didn't knew you will pick this

What a Coinsidence!!! This is the first thing that crossed my mind when it comes to choose between two... i truely loved this one and the one followed after this, where he asked her if this is hate what will be the limit of her claiming love...

To understand her side why she will have to pick remeber Ja had said never let go of your root but at the same time he didn't said but expect us to accept him which she know as well but that time no love now there's love so it's hard and this very para speak why it's difficult for them like let's see he talk about mistrust hate disrespect misunderstanding"! Which is change into trust understanding love and respect the thing left is to opt for transperancy and how they gonna cope up with their roots and love

Right, if this has to be at that time it would have been easy for both them, they would not have thought of other for second, but everything changed after that... He is the one who told her to stick to her roots but expect her to be by his side in his decisions...

And now its very much challenging and interesting to know how they are going to cope up with these hurdles and their is one more that is of heir of the empire...

This para was wrote when they barely had the emotion of understanding and remeber in this story even in hating mood they had a certain limit of trust

Yes, they trust even in their hating mode and about emotion he was so much possessive of her that he would have gone against his own brother for her...

"Not only Jo but Ja to honestly that make story more interesting

True! I forget to mention about him😛..

Remeber the outing in disguise

Ohh yes... she is still in guilt of comiting a sin.. and the devil didnt yet revealed it her

Yes exactly that's what I said

And now you are giving me vibes like she knows it already😉

You have no idea how you're doing a great favour on me
Which I am very thankful

😳

Originally posted by: Aishu.R.

Sometimes i wish the JA producer should have taken some plots from these FFs, the show could have been much successful, than those boring and unrealistic tracks like that Khaiber, Laboni and God track... They really made me forget how beautiful the show was at start...

Oh trust me whenever I think this way only Lashy di and stuti di story comes in my mind that why the CV's or JA maker didn't opt for such a brilliant ideas 😒 they're just so stupid and make the most epic show a downhill logicless show whej they are paid they should be more creative when they have brilliant people to work with they should be more responsible but they're just 🤢

You know you dont have do much for that...

Really I hope so but I know I have to through my work 😳

One should have someone to understand our silence really, nowdays whenever i think of it SSR is the person who comes to my mind...

Absolutely right Aish 👏

SSR😭 uff he's truly become senstive topic for me 😒 honestly that's what we all often fail to see there's saying the brightest gaze held dark secret the beautiful smiled hide the deepest grief 😳 he was indeed brilliant actor to mask his pain behind the smile which fooled all of us 😒

Pray there might be someother way too...

"Might be other way will have to think about it 😆

What a Coinsidence!!! This is the first thing that crossed my mind when it comes to choose between two... i truely loved this one and the one followed after this, where he asked her if this is hate what will be the limit of her claiming love...

absolutely the Marvelous coincidence 👏That claiming to love one was epic line for me☺️ in my own story 😳 that chapter was on another level cause that day I was pretty much into some other topic which rubbed me in way to write it down 😊

Right, if this has to be at that time it would have been easy for both them, they would not have thought of other for second, but everything changed after that... He is the one who told her to stick to her roots but expect her to be by his side in his decisions...

The underline Absolutely correct well penned down👏 this is what the issue is even now he won't back off from his part of plan but he's hesititating 😳 and same is her way both are aware how they will end up hurting other but they aren't able to figure out what to do 😊 honestly this id the complicated topic to 😊 you had analysis is very well 👏

And now its very much challenging and interesting to know how they are going to cope up with these hurdles and their is one more that is of heir of the empire...

(Challenging for Jo Ja challenging for me to as author 😆 it's feel like exam for me ☺️Oh yes how can we miss the hire miss the upcoming wrapping of villain like Sharif Adham how can we miss the Conspiracy like in Amer 😳 there's quite lot to do and work on 😆

Yes, they trust even in their hating mode and about emotion he was so much possessive of her that he would have gone against his own brother for her...

Absolutely👏

and remeber when there was conspiracy of murder framing her he said to his pal don't go on equation we share go for the relation and her roots which won't allow her to slay me someone framing her 😉

True! I forget to mention about him..

No worries I complete that for you 😆

Ohh yes... she is still in guilt of comiting a sin.. and the devil didnt yet revealed it her

He's devil for reason 🤣

And now you are giving me vibes like she knows it already

Aah my smart reader Aish😎 gave break 😆

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

Oh trust me whenever I think this way only Lashy di and stuti di story comes in my mind that why the CV's or JA maker didn't opt for such a brilliant ideas they're just so stupid and make the most epic show a downhill logicless show whej they are paid they should be more creative when they have brilliant people to work with they should be more responsible but they're just

Yes, they are beautiful and I consider GOD also in this, this one relates more to Hate to Love story. And plots here can be put more easily...

Really I hope so but I know I have to through my work

Thats a easy task to you i guess..😉

Absolutely right Aish

SSR uff he's truly become senstive topic for me honestly that's what we all often fail to see there's saying the brightest gaze held dark secret the beautiful smiled hide the deepest grief he was indeed brilliant actor to mask his pain behind the smile which fooled all of us
His infectious smile and eyes caught most attention and how easily he maskes his emotions that no one get a hint of it I dont know why but his loss feels so personal to me..

"Might be other way will have to think about it

Yea yea!! Think of it..

absolutely the Marvelous coincidence That claiming to love one was epic line for me in my own story that chapter was on another level cause that day I was pretty much into some other topic which rubbed me in way to write it down

Yes that was a Splendid update😍... full of superb dialogs...

The underline Absolutely correct well penned down this is what the issue is even now he won't back off from his part of plan but he's hesititating and same is her way both are aware how they will end up hurting other but they aren't able to figure out what to do honestly this id the complicated topic to you had analysis is very well

It is really a difficult one..dont know how its going to affect their relation hope not in worst way..

(Challenging for Jo Ja challenging for me to as author it's feel like exam for me Oh yes how can we miss the hire miss the upcoming wrapping of villain like Sharif Adham how can we miss the Conspiracy like in Amer there's quite lot to do and work on

Exactly! More than them its for you...how you present them by giving equal importance to their sentiments👍🏼

About upcoming wraping of difficulties you got lot to work on and will you be able to wrap it in 4-5 updates😲

Absolutely

and remeber when there was conspiracy of murder framing her he said to his pal don't go on equation we share go for the relation and her roots which won't allow her to slay me someone framing her

Yes, i do remember how he support her and caught the culprit😎 that shows his trust on her

No worries I complete that for you

🤗

He's devil for reason

Yes..

Aah my smart reader Aish gave break

I will when you reveal it...

😳

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

Yes, they are beautiful and I consider GOD also in this, this one relates more to Hate to Love story. And plots here can be put more easily...

Oh my 😲really 😃 I am so thrilled and touch by this you consider GOD 🤗

Thats a easy task to you i guess..

Easy i doubt that 😆

His infectious smile and eyes caught most attention and how easily he maskes his emotions that no one get a hint of it I dont know why but his loss feels so personal to me..

Same here it's feel so personal loss to me as well beside the way news and Roumor's are about him going on even now break ne further 😒

Yea yea!! Think of it..

I am trying 😳

Yes that was a Splendid update😍... full of superb dialogs...

That's right I am glad you enjoyed that 😳 few of them said dilouge is best part 😆

It is really a difficult one..dont know how its going to affect their relation hope not in worst way..

Err well perhaps worse way 😵

Exactly! More than them its for you...how you present them by giving equal importance to their sentiments

That's again well said Aish it's on my head how I present them 😳 but it's again depend on readers to really accept what if they expected somthing else and I gave them somthing else

About upcoming wraping of difficulties you got lot to work on and will you be able to wrap it in 4-5 updates

"That's what I am wondering to but you know the length of this story update 😆 I think I can 😳

Yes, i do remember how he support her and caught the culprit that shows his trust on her

"He's full on his badass mode when it's comes to making decisions 😎 doesn't back off or feel annoyed 😉always ready to face worse 😳 but yeah gotten more emotional😆

Yes..

But we love this devil 😆

I will when you reveal it...

Oh well then stay tuned 😳

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

Oh my really I am so thrilled and touch by this you consider GOD

Have you never thought like some scenes and dialogues of your story would have been fit perfectly in show...

Easy i doubt that

Same here it's feel so personal loss to me as well beside the way news and Roumor's are about him going on even now break ne further

I just watched the trailer of "Dil Bechara" trailer itself made me cry. It's story is so much Emotional and he has done amazing job in this movie. I'm very much eager to watch this one.

His last work

I am trying

My best wishes are with you...

That's right I am glad you enjoyed that few of them said dilouge is best part

Indeed dialogues were best part in most of your updates..

Err well perhaps worse way

Will you end with a heart break😭

That's again well said Aish it's on my head how I present them but it's again depend on readers to really accept what if they expected somthing else and I gave them somthing else

You will make it best👍🏼 dont worry much about the readers, they will surely enjoy your work.😳

"That's what I am wondering to but you know the length of this story update I think I can

Yeah, length of the update is big but again it depends upon how much you want add into it.😉

"He's full on his badass mode when it's comes to making decisions doesn't back off or feel annoyed always ready to face worse but yeah gotten more emotional

And also specially when it comes to her😆

But we love this devil

Thats the reason we mostly love him😈

Oh well then stay tuned

Will always be🤗