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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

But Sandy Begum, the extent the Shehzaade went to vent his anger on our Khan Sahib-the boy that he himself handpicked and groomed to become the Ustaad-punishing him in that merciless manner, without an iota of compassion, turning a deaf ear to Khan Sahib's pleadings and cries, using the more deadly barbed whip and carrying out the flogging like a man possessed.

He being the Shehzaade may entitle him to some his weaknesses, but the torture that he inflicted upon AMK was simply cruel, cruel, cruel. 😭 😭 😭 I will not and cannot see any redeeming quality in this monster.



Awww... 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 52.


The story develops thus...


The author has presented us the latest chapter
With details of the 17th century Moghul torture
😭
The punishment unfortunately our protagonist had to bear
For the crime of marrying a Hindu girl he loved so dear.
Yes... 😭

The readers expected a silver lining the chapter would reveal
After our lead pairs suffered humiliation of a great deal
The story was so powerful that the readers got involved
In the lives of them ,and wished their problem quickly be solved..
Yes... 😭
And underlined part you've written so beautifully, Periyamma!👏
The scene opens with Shehzaade in dilemma
Ustaad his friend once, now has become an anathema
👏
He had basked under the shade he gave like a tree
'Whether to punish him or let him go free?'
Wow... loved the analogy here!
"Is he lenient towards the Hindus ?"The Advisor is alert
He knows well how to make the Shehzaade get hurt,
The points raised by the Advisor, the Prince goes through
He finally takes a decision as to what he should do..
A decision on impulse!😔
She, on her part, suffers further humiliation
Her belongings were checked , damaged and thrown
How the author described her reaction in her style!
'She dressed up the anguish on her features with a smile..'
Ohhh thank you for noticing it and for pointing it out, Periyamma😳 glad you liked it...
Though both of them physically separated,
He's in her thoughts and she is in his embedded
While he is looking for ways to be free from the prison
Comes a messenger from Manswar whom he asks for help in person
👍🏼
Now comes the time for flogging of the Ustaad
The Shehzaade took in his hands the job of the prison guard
Getting ready to nurse his crackled ego with haughtiness
Alas, by inflicting pain on the body so defenceless..
🥺
If it is heart wrenching even to read the passage
How it would be for the author who penned down the message..?
The cruel and barbaric act of the Shehzaade
Has dragged down his name in the Moghul history..
😭
The author has promised that the lead pair will get some relief
And we are hopeful and her words we do believe
The pair have been thrown in the glowing fire blindfold
They will sure come out purified like the gold..
Beautiful
As the story progresses we find and admire
The author's style of writing soaring like a fire..
We thank her whole heartedly for her service
Which can never be repaid nor valued with a price..!
Oh my God... what a beautiful shower of blessings in the form of your words, periyamma... thank you so much and please keep showering me with your blessings this way!🤗
Karkuzhali.

Who can think of writing a simile like this?
' She let her gazes drop softly like a ribbon of silk
Landing on the ground beneath the Shehzaade's boot!..'

Another one..

'But like guilt on a dirty conscience, the blood stayed. Stuck in the nooks of his nails. Stuck between the webbing of his fingers. It just wouldn't go!'

God bless you Lashy!

KK.
❤️
Awww thank you so much Periyamma... I am so so so touched... 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Good night darling Sahibas. See you tomorrow. 🤗

Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam, Bindup, Shruthi, Manu, Selvi, Lana, Vathsy, Lavanya, Mitu, Sandy Begum, Bindu, Muskaan, Anindita, Aparna, Pallavi, Amita, Jiya,Harshu, Shagun, Jyothi, Adwi, Shivangi, Vrinda, Avika, Divi , Divya, Kanishka, Payal , Rekha, Rashmi , Namsika, Aishu, Kruthik and 6Bs. 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
Good night Rosejaan!🤗

Originally posted by: binduprasad41


Wow
Brilliant piece of writing! 👏
Is someone justify lashy di writing style...is you Patti!
Every important elements from the chapter you penned down here with your beautiful way ! 😳
Ofcourse we all are always thankful to lashy di for this novel...same goes to you , Patti!
Thank you for teaching us so much ! 🤗
Perfect picture for the chapter...quite expressive also .😳


beautiful as the person who wrote it!
Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915


👏 👏 If the magic of Lashy Sahiba's pen gifted us incredible C52, here the magic of Periyamma's pen has allowed us to relive C52 in The story develops thus...-Bravo, Periyamma. 👏 👏

The painting showing Akheera being put through the test of fire-fabulous depiction.👍🏼

The similes are a testament to Lashy Sahiba being a wordsmith par excellence. 👏 ⭐️



☺️ Awww Rose!

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Posted: 6 years ago
Goodnight Rose and Periyamma...

Lashy - LIKE still not working for me...so count me in the LIKE list...

Bindu - Amazingly written review...dissecting all emotions of Shehzaade in particular...

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Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter 52.

WHAM!

'At... at... at least... it isn't one of my men...' His head lolled on lifeless shoulders as his consciousness barely held onto brief flashes of her calming smile 'at least, SHE doesn't know... she's seen none of it'
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The smile!❤️

WHAM!

'At least, it isn't... my men... at least, SHE's seen none of it...'

SHRI RADHA by VISHNU108

WHAM!

'At least... at least, SHE's seen none of it... stay safe, my love...'

Look at the way he's protecting her feet from touching the ground!😭


WHAM!

'At least, she... stay safe, my love'


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WHAM!

'Sta saf, m... my lov...'

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Beautiful Periyamma... ethereal and poignant!❤️
Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Goodnight Rose and Periyamma...


Lashy - LIKE still not working for me...so count me in the LIKE list...


Oh no da... that's strange!

👍🏼 sure!
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Posted: 6 years ago
I read dear Bindup's review (so so so indepth... from hereon, I have a new name for you - you are the mistress of human emotions!)
Something struck me...

Had Shehzaade not stopped by at Heera's room, I do not think his ego would have been so offended
Had Shehzaade not spotted those guards laughing at him his anger would have reached such epic proportions.


What do you think about the Shehzaade-Heera angle left Shehzaade licking his wounds thereafter? What happened during that moment when he stared at her but couldn't get his guards to say the words 'Go ahead crush it'?

I would love to hear your thoughts on it!
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

I read dear Bindup's review (so so so indepth... from hereon, I have a new name for you - you are the mistress of human emotions!)

Something struck me...

Had Shehzaade not stopped by at Heera's room, I do not think his ego would have been so offended
Had Shehzaade not spotted those guards laughing at him his anger would have reached such epic proportions.


What do you think about the Shehzaade-Heera angle left Shehzaade licking his wounds thereafter? What happened during that moment when he stared at her but couldn't get his guards to say the words 'Go ahead crush it'?

I would love to hear your thoughts on it!


😲

Ummm ok I will try to write something but please don't expect so much from me.🤔 😒

Thank you, Selvi di! 🤗
I am glad you like it! 😳

Good night, Rose! 🤗

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