NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 46-CHAPTER 51 Upd 19th July - Page 10

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

What a chapter...thrilling one...lashy di.

Nodoubt you are the only who can make us cry and smile in the same chapter.

God...first part is terrible.

At one point I stop reading...I just couldn't bear Khan sahib like this...frankly my whole body is shaking while reading that part and had tears in eyes.

Since the beginning I swear and believe that I will never cry because our lead pair will win in the end no matter what but I failed i literally cried ...that's was too much.

But yes second part was superb...like I said now Khan sahib shows them how to play game.

Finally Khalil and mahendra time came...both deserved that punishment...much much more than that but still atleast that much I am happy...and for Farooq sahib...waiting patiently for his time. I know he is religious man and his religious party support him that's why shehzaade needed solid prove against him.

And our chap...Azeez...I am so proud of him...that's why our kuki loves him so much.

Indeed she is very lucky to have him.

In end what can I say about you lashy di...words are failed to describe your talented...seriously this is not a joke the way you unfolding this novel.

Lot's of thinking , hard work and effort needed.

Our mere appreciation is not enough...you deserve something else.

Lot's of love to you.

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Ofcourse 😳

Lashy di needs this 👍🏼

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

today while reading farooq sahab's antics...

'Ya Allah!' The old advisor suddenly threw his hands in the air and then clutched his chest hard, casting a pained glimpse at his peers 'Such LIES! How could you, Akbar, my son?'

this actor came in my mind...

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

di what was on ur mind when u were penning down these lines...😛

Originally posted by: lghosh

Do you dare to intimidate 'The Ustaad' in me?

The burning infernos within me, don't you see?

My eyes are the two burning embers of fury,

Now I will be the executioner, judge and jury!

I am determined, I have a promise to keep,

I will save my Begum from all danger deep!

She has suffered too much and I have too,

Hyenas that you all are, laughing at my rue?

I now pledge to myself to see you all in hell,

Even if I have to combat all of you in a duel!

All Your ends are in my hands, I promise so -

This way my word to Heera will remain aglow!

I will fight for Her, my loyal Men, and myself,

Huzoor, now meet the real 'Ustaad' yourself!

You gave me rebirth, you showed me the way,

I take another birth, free from bondage, today!

I looked up to you as my 'Huzoor' with loyalty,

But in return what did I get from such royalty?

Imprisonment in dungeon and death sentence?

You coldly ordered so without any repentance?

My loyal men of valor were of no value to you?

Valued worthy soldiers they are, even you knew!

But for revenge, your blind ego refused to see this,

You forgot everything I did for you in your malice!

Does not my loyalty of ten years mean anything?

You're satisfied to see me grovel in my downswing!

I knelt before you giving up my honor and pride,

I, who, never bow to anyone, but to You, I abide!

But you solemnly rejected both my Begum and I,

I can die but disgrace to her, I can't let that go by!

I will see to it all the vultures are shown their end,

The scheming liars will not get a chance to defend!

Huzoor, this is my confession and promise to you,

I will be victorious in my efforts to be freed anew!

I will overcome and outshine you all for 'Her' sake,

No matter what, my determination will not break!

With a fire burning in my soul and her love in my heart,

My loyal men and I will deftly break these shackles apart!

Lashy, I have to say, so far out of all the edits this is your personal BEST! 👏 Brilliant! That fire burning in his eyes, that fury reflecting, the determination showing, the revolt showcasing...simply splendid! 👍🏼 I looovvveee eeet! I LOVE HIM! Sigh!

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

'Don't worry, my love... I am trying... and I will keep you safe!'

Haikus:

1.

The court hall is full

Charges on them were read out

The trial started..

2.

Shaky eye witness

Kunwar and the Courier

Will their words sustain?

3.

His satchel is brought

Akbar uses his option

Shehzaade's farmaan!

4.

Snakey Farooq says

"Sharat not applicable

She's not his Begum!"

5.

His men are tortured

Shehzaade's ego had won

His attitude changed..

6.

He asks for a wish

To avenge those who shamed his wife

In direct combat.

7.

His wish was granted

"You'll fight each other till death!"

Ordered the Prince..

8.

What will happen then?

Given extended life term

He plans strategy

9.

Given the answer

It's an algebraic equation

To prove the result..

Karkuzhali.

One and a half hours!😳

What a chapter! What a chapter!👏 👏 👏

How does one live through an incredibly painful update such as this and yet at the end of it, rise to one's feet to applaud enthusiastically the genius of the writer?⭐️

Tearful all the way from the moment Heera was declared his mistress with my thoughts centring on how much worse it was going to get when I saw the fiery stance of the Ustaad and the immense relief that washed over me was indescribable.

For I knew, things were going to turn around, the Ustaad would make them turn around with the powerful arsenal that he has- his own valour and mind power as well as the power of love of those close to him.😃

The presence of mind of Akbar and Heera during the entire proceedings, how ably each stepped in at the right junctures to keep the momentum going until the cracks showed up in the Shehzaade's resolve.👍🏼

Lashy Sahiba, you are the sweetest Baisa around but you are one mean writer, I tell you!👏 🤗

Posting this right after reading the update and taking my dinner break!😊

OMG! 13 pages of HW but it was only at Page 6 when I came online two hours ago. And another 5 in the previous thread!😲

Have to have some food to get through all of this backlog!😆

Originally posted by: lashy

Me too! 😆

But after this, he totally deserves her attention, doesn't he?

Selvi's already done hotel booking... Cookie go pamper him in 'can't tell won't tell' ways! 😉

Okay!!! Then don't ask for details 😆

Originally posted by: Kuki715

After the chase chapter this one had my heart in mouth. Patti's seatbelt analogy fits to the T here👏.. Take a bow di⭐️, Bindup is right you deserve something else , you ARE something else 🤗 🤗

Would you believe first I chanted Hanumaan chalisa then went for update, you can laugh but Heera - AMK, they are like family! I was shaking throughout!

>>> same...me too shaking throughout.

Yup Khan sahib and heera are like family 😳

It was quite known the promise farmaan would help their people but not them 😭 I closed my eyes when Khan Sahib begged, I can't even express how I felt 😭 and then Heera's humiliation... Farooq 🤢

>>> 😭

'Former Master/Huzoor - music to my ears😳 .. He deserves this... Now this new Ustaad will payback for every humiliation 👏 That started with Khalil thrown in the dungeons🥳 (more happy that he won't come near Heera than his sufferings) and Mahendra he wouldn't stand for a second in front of our Kham Sahib😎

Their understanding of each other's feelings, thoughts ufff that's ❤️

>>> Yes

From one night to two weeks... When chained he did this, I am just waiting to see what he would do when free from both chains and former Huzoor's gratitude

And now.. When shehzade called I knew it was my Sahib (I remembered you had once asked where he was) 😭 his condition😭... Never I have read anything that fast when chopping his hand was announced... Read in one breath till Heera confesses and he is brought back...I know we fool around here but that time I don't know what happened .

Us Shehzaade ki toh.. Mere Prannath ke haath katega Mere Prannath ke... uski toh😈

>>> Aww 😆

Thank you Heera thank you so so much🤗 Khan Sahib aap bhi🤗

Exchanging clues at last.. I am so so proud that feisty young chap is my Sahib

>>> Ahem 😆

God ...you both are one adorable couple 😆

But yes Azeez deserve your hugs and kisses 😆

Lovely review dear 👏

Take care! 😳