NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ THREAD 45 Chapter50 - Page 4

Originally posted by: lashy

Yen chella kutty😭

Originally posted by: lghosh

My Khan Sahib in manacles and shackles thrown in a dungeon devoid of the title 'USTAAD', looked upon as a common criminal, insulted, degraded, demeaned, accused, blamed and cornered! He on purpose is pushed to the corner to show he has lost his marbles! 😭😭😭

And Heera's disgrace in the court in front of everyone losing her respect and pride begging for her husband's life on her knees! 😭

And Shehzade, I sincerely hope and pray, you are doomed in the hands of your so-called loyalists! I have lost all respects for you! You disrobed a woman of her pride and self-respect without even saying a word or even a gesture to stop her! Yes, you have become a Man without principles, values, respect and honor! 😒

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

OMG what a chapter, Chellam.. I couldn't be able to stop anywhere..

Really? You know... I honestly thought readers would sleep off mid-way somewhere... because it was never-ending... and there's no lighter moments per se...

OMG!! 😲 😲 😲 What a set of turn of events... So Akbar got all the behind the scenes and the men responsible for. After all he's the one and only Ustaad we know..

Yes!😎

And our lovebirds finally met and there's no going back. 🤪 I know still I can't see any hope but I'm sure and hope something is there.. As like how Heera hinted about the Shehzaade's promise unknowingly.

Hmmm... I know what you mean, Chellam

It's so heart-wrenching to read the part where Heera pleading for AMK and AMK watching her doing so.. It's so 😭 😭 😭 why Chellam why? 😡 😭

From the beginning of the story... you know when I thought of all scenes etc.. that was one scene that would always 'haunt' me... he wouldn't even let her back get poked by the side of a table - today he has to stand in chains and watch her humiliating herself in front of those men... and he can't do anything... it must be the biggest blow to his pride!

But still there is two thing I'm so so happy about one is Khalil crawling and gurgling on the floor, for air

Periya plan pottan... to make AMK lose his cool... when Khan Sahib decided the word 'DIE' Khalil couldn't even defend himself 😎 and left a mess!(granted he has only one working hand... but still) 'Like this is preview'

and other one is Heera's response to Mahender. 🤪 😆

And Heera blackened Mahendar's nose - like he has always been blackening her nose...

You're right - that is the silver lining!

But Chellam you said it's more than 13000 words? Are you sure? 🤔 You didn't cheat us right? 😒

It's 12,300 words... after editing.. couldn't edit out more than this or story wouldn't make sense... starting from AMK being a man of authority - the 'former Ustaad' ... to his downfall at the end where he's reduced to a grubby prisoner in a black hole being dragged about in chains... it needs that bulk to explain what happened in between!

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

My dear B&Bs 🤗

We did it!! Many Congratulations for our new home!! 🥳

Originally posted by: melovesja

congratulation lashy shahiba and banjaras😊

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

naalathor veenai seiththe athai nalankeda puzhuthiyil erivathundo Having crafted a wonderful Veena Wilt thou spoil and consign it to dust? solladi sivasakthi ennai sudar migu arivudan padaiththaai Tell me O' Goddess I have been created with wisdom by thee vallamai thaaraayo indha maanilam payanura vaazhvadharkae Won't you give me the strength to live a life fruitful to this land? solladi sivasakthi nila chumaiyena vaazhndhida puriguvaiyoa Tell me O' Goddess will thou make me live as a burden of this land? visaiyuru pandhinai poal ullam vaendiyapadi seyyum udal kaettaen Like a swiftly thrown ball a body ready to spring on brain's command I ask. thasaiyinai theechchudinum siva sakthiyaipaadum nallagam kaettaen Even when the skin is on fire a heart that sings thy praise I ask. nasaiyaru manam kaettaen niththam navamena chudar tharum uyir kaetten Spotless mind I ask a life born anew daily I ask. asaivuru madhi kaettaen ivai arulvadhil unakkedhum thadaiyuladhoa Unshakeable wisdom I ask Is there anything that stops thee from bestowing these?

Originally posted by: melovesja

Lashy how muchcluching tight on heart to stay calm..

Awww 😭

you Have to as more to come ... as true writer you shcrued so hard the situation , all the ups down and with tight hand ks try every way👏⭐️

Yes da... we have to be united and strong! Stay brave!

Shahzade was not ready leave any string loose but give him a night hope to fined his way while chained.

Finally... after so much pleading - yes!

only one moment while lips curve to smile when my heart was crusing for Heera's pain that was Gauri's prsy for ks too.

Chellam you missed this point - Gauri didn't say it aloud (maybe a little bit of anger left) but she prayed for the Mansadbar too! And of course, she loves Heera..😭

most painful was their become face to face not barabel for both but how she reminds his words, understand him without getting his clear view and go on instict👏 she too go to an extent to save him and ready to face anything. loved her stubbon counted silence.

Yes... she cannot see his expressions properly... but she went by instinct and knowing him so well... his body language .. how he moves etc... it must have been unbearable for them both!

enemies were well learnt from him to fix him.

prince has all love, hurt, emotion towerds ks and we see brife view of his knowing , understanding and interpreting people👏

Yes... he is unpredictable.. but at this moment, he is hurt... his ego is hurting and he is letting ego govern him. At the same time, he misses the unbreakable bond of trust they had... he has see-sawing emotions... FS and Khalil are doing everything to make it worse though

no where you make any one less.

In some ways, I could understand the Shehzaade. There would've been many kings/princes who wouldn't have even given him this much of a chance... then of course, there were kings who were kinder too

feel proud for khan shahibs ability that prince would not be ready to free him for night.

Oooh I love the way you said it... the fact that Shehzaade is worried to free him for even one night - shows what AMK is made of! Yes... 😎

🤗 love you lash😃