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Bond_7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1431

Originally posted by: lashy

Makes sense! 😆

😆

I believe soulmates do exist... true, not all of us find our soulmates... and some believe in making our partners our soulmates... 😊
But I do believe that there are some - two completely individualistic personalities from different walks of life, who one day, by fate's intervention end up meeting the 'one'!

And then, whatever society says or does, no one can separate them... for they are destined to be...

Which is why, it's a common theme in both my stories - NJAPA and HBAS

I have seen this mostly in novels and movies only.But yes,I can't completely deny the concept of soulmates.Though rare,they do exist!

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Bond_7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1432

Good night,girls!😃

Bye,Lashy di and Rekha di!🤗

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Unbeknown

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1433

Hola baisas!

Had some concerns/issues with the body changes and was going through tests...thankfully all look good so far...so wasn't responding to the messages...thank you for asking girls; Lashy, Rekha, Lavanya! 🤗

Lashy - from my perspective, I would say, still go with 20 day update rather than weekly. That way you wouldn't be stressed out much about editing & formatting; also we get to read a long update rather than in bits & pieces. I understand its kinda in the moment when you read these thrillers but too much on your plate...go easy 😊

And I do remember you mentioning about summer mela before you went to the wedding. Good luck with the practice 🤗

will get back after HW...saw Lavanya's Ajnabee...I'm sure its great, as usual!

Good Night Bond!

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jiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1434

Hello Hey Bye Bye Baisas & Sahibas...

Not feeling well delhi ki garmi me sardi lag gayi hai..

coz of cold drinks & ice water...

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Sandhya.A

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1435

49 was an emotional turning point of sorts for everyone. It must have been more difficult to pan it out as it had to etch out the reactions of so many on an unexpected turn in life. It was very well penned with the characters remaining in sync with their portrayal so far. 👏

The Parnagarhis reacted wrt Heera how she reacted when she learnt the truth out of the blue, shock, disbelief , anger morphing into hatred, but this time there was an added mob mentality.

Mohan Banna's entry to placate the crowd though expected excelled in its emotional content. His appeal was touching sincere yet strong enough to make the people stop and think.

And the Khan Sahib Shehzade scene was the best. Both men hav e immense respect for the other's intelligence. Yet Shehzade exhibits caution and a slight sadism probably seething within at the loss of such a valuable aide due to a woman, and AMK exhibits sincerity to establish the usual normalcy between them. Shehzade by now looks convinced of AMK's betrayal. Probably due to evidence fabricated by Farooq Sahib in cahoots with Khalil. And Khalil would dare to openly send his men to Parnagarh to demand Heera at the Capital and expose Ustaad's identity only when he is convinced that the Shehzade is convinced that AMK is no longer indispensible as his loyalty is questionable.

Looking forward to the final part when the leads use their wits to expose the plotters and come clean.

Edited by Sandhya.A - 7 years ago

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Sandhya.A

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1436

Originally posted by: jiya.k
Hello Hey Bye Bye Baisas & Sahibas...
Not feeling well delhi ki garmi me sardi lag gayi hai..
coz of cold drinks & ice water...

Take care Jiya.🤗

And till you get better i'll take Urdu lessons from Jalal or AMK.

What was the last word?🤔 Aaghosh na?😃

If AMK is the teacher, we'll have theory classes and if Jalal teaches me, we'll have practical classes to understand the word.☺️

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Shraddha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1437

Originally posted by: jiya.k
Hello Hey Bye Bye Baisas & Sahibas...
Not feeling well delhi ki garmi me sardi lag gayi hai..
coz of cold drinks & ice water...

Ohoo Jiya... take care of yourself! 🤗

We can't have our Urdu teacher falling unwell.. can we now?😉

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

And till you get better i'll take Urdu lessons from Jalal or AMK.
What was the last word?🤔 Aaghosh na?😃

If AMK is the teacher, we'll have theory classes and if Jalal teaches me, we'll have practical classes to understand the word.☺️

Hayooo 😆

Edited by lashy - 7 years ago

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Shraddha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1438

Originally posted by: Unbeknown
Hola baisas!
Had some concerns/issues with the body changes and was going through tests...thankfully all look good so far...so wasn't responding to the messages...thank you for asking girls; Lashy, Rekha, Lavanya! 🤗

When you said doc visits, I wanted to ask... but, didn't want to make you uncomfortable.. glad it's all gone ok! 👍🏼
Take care dear!

Lashy - from my perspective, I would say, still go with 20 day update rather than weekly. That way you wouldn't be stressed out much about editing & formatting; also we get to read a long update rather than in bits & pieces. I understand its kinda in the moment when you read these thrillers but too much on your plate...go easy 😊
And I do remember you mentioning about summer mela before you went to the wedding. Good luck with the practice 🤗

Thanks Aparna... 🤗

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Testmytest

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1439

Originally posted by: lashy

Btw girls - I have a query for you all...

Since part 4 is by large a drama thriller - and thrillers depend on momentum -

A) Would you like me to continue with this sort of updating style? A chapter every 3 weeks?

Or

b) Would you rather I put up a scene every week - that way it'd still be a chapter every 3 weeks... but it'd keep us more in tune with the ongoings at the capital? 🤔

I ask this because as I was charting out part 4 yesterday, I realised that unlike romance (whose flavour lingers on for long), a thriller is 'in the moment'... at least for me, it is!
And I would not find myself very at the 'edge-of-a-seat' by a thriller that I have to wait for 20-25 days to catch up on, to find out what's going on next! No?🤔

Author Sahiba,

I agree with Bindu and Aparna on this one, updating one every 20 days or so.

One, you will be completely stressed out which we don't want

Two, we all need time to read, review, comment, re-read, discuss, predict about the story!

We all read at different times, if you update once a week we don't get enough time to read and digest each and every scene/plot!

But for me, my main concern is you getting stressed out every week, that's a no no!!

Let's see what others have to say

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Testmytest

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1440

Originally posted by: lashy

I see you still haven't forgotten her offer of 'dinner'😆
She teaches you to whistle and gives you dinner... what is your Guru Dakshina, then?

Well let's see what the guru wants!! It is upto the guru to decide what guru dakshina she wants!!