NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 42 CHAPTER 47- Updated APR 7th - Page 5

Originally posted by: lashy

My Comments

First of all Lana, I apologise for being almost 3 weeks late on my response to this one. But of course, you know it's because I've been distracted with one thing or the other over the past month. Besides, I do not like to do quick half-hearted reads of detailed prose. I like to take my time, going over every line - before I sit to respond. In fact, I found it quite difficult to reply separately to this one because I'm used to commenting in between paragraphs... but this time, I refrained from my usual style of commentary. That way, in case anyone missed reading it in the previous thread, they would get the experience of reading this work of art uninterrupted and untouched.

Awww!! Lashy I completely understand, as long as you have read the OS I am happy! And you are crazy!! You have put it up here? It doesn't belong here after the fabulous update you will put up here! And in spite of your own update, you took out the time to reply, thank you so much for that! 🤗

Let me start off by saying a whole-hearted thank you. I am so touched that you planned and penned something like this for my birthday. 🤗And of course, the fact that it coincided with what happened in 46 was icing on the cake. Similarly, there are elements in this OS that remind me of 47, you know? 😉 Let's forget about the nervous man and I am not the type to throw beautiful things out of the window... and how could you think I'd deny this to the Knight who's gifted me respect, and love? 😉

You know Lashy I still can't believe at the coincidence! I almost half penned and planned about this, how KS will cook for her and treat her one night like he cooked when he invited her after saving her from Khalil and his revelation and here in C46 you mentioned about it and referred to that night!! I was 😲😲😲 astounded by the coincidence of it!! I mean how could your brainwave thought the same as I did?? It was supposed to be your birthday gift from me and I felt the surprise factor was gone! 😳😆 No wonder you are my Heera, who knows the innermost thoughts of her knight! 😉😆

The constellations had their own story to tell

the softness in his eyes tells of another tale

Loved the way you've worded this!

Thank you! But the credit goes to you because you have created this character who is anything but ordinary!! 😃 He is at par excellence right from his head to toe!

When the wind blew and his hair blew along with it, it was a sight to die for! And when his groomed hands took it upon them to discipline the hair it presented another handsome sight! The shapely fingers pulling the hair back from his face

Now I've read many descriptions of the man. Wrote plenty myself too. But few of them can dare to match with what you've written up here!☺️

>>>>😳

Specially when he kind of wiped his beard with his fingers on one side and the thumb on the other cheek and finally meeting them at his chin! And to me, he has a dimple on his chin which though is partially covered by his goatee! Okay, I too have a dimple on my chin! 😳 Meri gadda hai toh mera CS ka bhi gadda hai chin mein! 😆

And he had a strong leisurely gait which makes the whole universe halt to look at him with pride and envy both!

Whole universe ka pataa nahin... par Lana ka zaroor pataa hai!

And who knows Lana better than you? 😉🤣

She had doe shaped beautiful hazel eyes which had an intelligent look in them.

Heera was sitting on a flat rock thinking of the sight they viewed for the canal project.

And herein starts the story...

the other horse was for carrying these necessities! Was it the gift she asked for winning the chaupar game?

Did you change it up, after 46? 😊

>>>>Yes!! I knew you will guess it, no one else did! When I wrote halfway and then saw it mentioned in C46, then I changed it a bit to incorporate that into the OS! 😃

Heera looked up with teary eyes and protested! But not a word was heard! He kept doing what he did and got the job done in less than no time.

Chopping onions with his fancy dagger, eh? He'd have made light work of it!😆

>>>>😳😆 He went prepared with a knife and all!! He is KS after all! 😉 Nothing is done half-heartedly, specially when it concerns his Heera!

The embers of this fire is playing in the hazel of your eyes reflecting the flames of your spirit burning within. It is a treat for the beholder!

You are not so immune as well! The flames are playing with its colour on your hair too making it look more redder than ever!

Loved loved loved these descriptions!👏

>>>>And the feel of his hair in her hands!! The soft texture and the reddish hue in the flames of the bonfire! THUD!!

For the first time my Begum Sahiba wanted something from me. I had to make sure she gets her gift all wrapped in fragrance, taste and visual delight. She has a special flare in procreating aromatic wonders herself! He added the saffron in the end and the aroma spread for miles! It was not only the aroma of the food but it was the fragrance of his care, love, attention that he showered on her.

Such a fragrant description - nothing less than a dish amalgamated with actual aroma of the food being prepared along with the flavour of their love!

>>>>Yes! In the aromatic flavour of their love, compassion and passion!

the glow and warmth of the bonfire in front, playing in the undertone of its fiery flames on them making them look ethereal, a cozy tent behind them flapping its opening in the wind inviting them to be within its core and the sound of the crackling logs burning to give them company! Both of them quietly relished the food and each other's company in silence in the lap of nature.

This created an amazing visual. Like the couple are sitting right in front of our eyes with the warm bonfire, the flapping tent and the crackling logs. My favourite visual amongst it all!!!👏

>>>>Thank you! 😳

If you are asking whether it meets with my expectations or not, well I can't say because I have no previous experience to compare it with. Someone apparently did not offer me his cooking last time when he invited me to his tent. Whether I would have accepted it or not...well, that is for you to guess and for me to know.

Characteristic Lana.. errr... I mean Heera here, eh? I expected she would reply with such a comeback!🤣

>>>>Again you are Heera, who will know better than you? 😆

I want to see the Love you have for me in your eyes in your dulhan' attire. Can you gift me that apparition Heera?

Now, THIS I did not expect... came as such a pleasant surprise!

>>>>Really? 😲😃 Then I am thrilled!

Aur mera bandagi kab mera Khuda ban gaya yeh mujhe maaloom hi nahi pada

It was idyllic to realize how two souls under a strenuous situation belonging to two different backgrounds, culture, religion and personality fell for each other and became one formidable team against all odds! The flower of Love blossomed in the harshest of environment in the roughest ground possible and yet held on to its strength

The prologue...

>>>>Yes! 😃

With a look of admiration in his eyes, he simply walked towards the tent with her in his arms bidding the cosmos a good night to relish in the glory of a heady pleasurable journey of oneness enwrapped in delight, pleasure and euphoric love.

oh no... 😭 now how am I supposed to know what happens next...

Whaaattt??? 🤔 You are my Heera, if you don't know what followed then who will? 😉😆 Thank you Author Sahiba, this made my day! 🤗 Just the fact that you liked it is enough for me! It was then worthwhile writing something for your birthday!

And now after you are done updating and a little free, I want to hear from you about the picture of KS I posted on your birthday post!! Thoda drooling toh banta hai boss, and coming from Heera, it will be the icing on the cake! 😉🤣 And also I want the answer to the koschun I asked you in WA!! About his features!! Well, one feature! Remember? 🤣