Akdha os -My Mystery Girl -PART 1& 2/ pg 6, 7 / 16 Oct 17 - Page 4

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Originally posted by: Fantasy-ka-Love



Finally...Mystery girl is here 😆


Today my marriage ,ofcourse my family selected girl for me but i am not interest any girl except her..

My surrounding only my business and my family.oneday everything changed ..she come to my life..she stole my heart..i don't know anything about her..she come to my life like lightning.today my marriage but i have no excited for marriage even not single smile crept in my lips , my head bow down insake of guility .i am cheating my future wife mainly my heart bleeding as I cheating ,my Mystery girl.

why do I think Mydtery girl will be his wife only 🤔 but seeing your super twisting brain I think Mystery Girl will be someone from girls side 😉😆


enjoy prolouge😉


Tomorrow , i will update part 1..😉

when will your tomorrow arrive

Os only..only two or three parts..😳



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thanks dear😳
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Originally posted by: Geetanjali1993

Intriguing teaser

Continue soon
Thanks for pm


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thnx dear😳
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Originally posted by: aru_27

Interesting prologue

Continue soon

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Hi dearies, please bear it and plz ignore grammatical and spelling mistakes in this part.

PART 1

Today , everyone eagerly waiting for that day..whole media surrounded near of Mohammed mansion..great Business Tycoon, Jalal Uddin Mohammed ka marriage not lesser than any festival right , grant event or say treat for media.he has legend in business world.noone guts to defeat him in business world.he has attitude , arrogant and ruthless for his enemy ..he is not lesser than devil for his enemy. in infont of family totally 360 degree turn over change in his attitude .his lovable child in front of his elders and his responsible & protective brother of siblings.he never share his feeling with anyone even with his family. He never asked anything from them.he only gave everything to them.his family looking him as he has pride of Mohammed ..

Mohammed mansion decorated beautiful colourful lights, blossoming flowers, whole mansion glittering in sake of diya , light decoration .every guest welcome in royal red carpet.every one dancing ,giggling , gossip about marriage..some evil eyes cursing as they could not be get chance to badi bahu of Mohammed.guest eagerly waiting for marriage ,mainly know whom that lucky girl, whose bride of prince. Yeah till now media and guest don't know who bride of business tycoon.every room filled with joy, laughing , dancing except one room.whole room captured full of dark , they have no light switch on and one shadow only visible in balcony insake of moon playing through clouds. He starring moon without blinking his eyes. his face showing how much he would been guilty and sadness.in moon shine also clearly visible his strong biceps, perfect body structure, his little curly hairs, his chocolate brown eyes, his m-shaped lips ..every organs perfectly fit for him..

Jalal sir...slow whispering voice.

Jalal turns look at person: yes, Abdul with stiffened voice

Abdul switch on light and seeing ,his Jalal sir already wore green sherwani but his face not glowing .

Abdul understand his pain: Jalal sir , everyone waiting for u ..with slow voice.

Jalal: hmmm

Abdul: sir, i know u not happy in ur marriage , plz cancel ur marriage sir with worried voice.

Jalal smiled sadly : Abdul, u worried about me but thing about my family .they r happy for my marriage atleast think about bride family.she( bride) did it any wrong ( Abdul nods his head negatively ) then if i stopped my marriage , without her mistake i give punishment her right.i dont want anyone suffer because of my mistakes

Abdul proudly look at Jalal: sir, madam really lucky got u

Jalal : no Abdul, she is unlucky girl..she become my wife. I dont know that i give her every right as every men give right to their wife with sadly said.

Abdul ( mind): Jalal sir, if u married ur mystery girl..u r happiest person in the world.. babaji plz give every happiness to my boss.

Jalal: tell them, i come down after few minutes.

Abdul nods his head and went out inside..

Jalal heavy heartly held one ring : where r u..today is my last day, i have right keep ur ring with me with painful voice.first time i meet u in small village , i never forgot our first meeting with little smile crept in his lip.

Jalal closed his eyes thinking his first meeting with his mystery girl.

Flashback

3 months back..

Jalal : Abdul, u arrange my flight ticket.

Abdul: yes sir but after u reach airport, but u will go in bus to destination place. Place not good to travel in car. Mainly that village people with popped eyes.

Jalal: what Abdul.

Abdul: village people strictly follow their old tradition..with horror face.

Jalal: tradition follow not bad things , Abdul with smile face.

Abdul: no sir, women never see other man face except her husband even other men also not look at woman face except their family members..village person not accept outside village groom for their girls.

Jalal: strange

Abdul: yes sir. Iam worried about u, u going alone that place.if Salima deliver date not near as i company with u with sad face.

Jalal smiled: dont worry Abdul, they also people.i will manage myself..u take care Salima..she need u more than me with warning tone

Abdul: i take care of her..i know u r over protective with her with pout face.

Jalal : because she like my sister.

Abdul: thanks sir with emotional voice.

Jalal: Abdul, dont do any emotional drama in my office , i dont like it with bossy tone

Abdul: yes boss

**************

Mohammed house

Naazira (jalal mom): Jalal beta, i packed ur every things , u check once again, if i miss any thing.

Jalal: thanks maa, why u strain ur self , i pack my things or any servant do it.

Baazir (Jalal Dad): Jalal , u r maa never allow servant for ur work. She love do ur work herself with teasing tone. Naazira pout look at Jalal

Jalal: dad, dont tease my maa..she is my best mother in the world.

Mrs Mohammed (Naazira ) kissed Jalal forehead

Bakshi: dad, i have doubt..

Baazir: what Bakshi ..Naazira and Jalal look at Bakshi with confuse face

Bakshi: dad, really i am younger or Jalal bhai with fake angry face

Jalal chuckled face and Naazira angry glaze to Bakshi.

Dadi (hamida) smiled: Bakshi beta, ofcourse ur our little princess.

Bakshi: then why mom pampering Jalal bhai more than me with pout face.

Naazira: oyie, nautanki , why u saying that i never pampering to u.

Bakshi:dont lie, maa..u love Jalal bhai more than u love me and Mirza.

Naazira twisted Bakshi ear: what u said, dramaqueen..

Bakshi: mom, its paining..i just teasing mom..maa remove her hand

Naazira: i love my every children equally, Bakshi..Jalal never share his feeling with anyone..i concerned more about him nothing else..my drama queen.

Jalal: ok Bakshi, take care After 2 weeks i return back to delhi..so

Mirza come to downstairs: wait bhai, i tell what u want say with us.

Jalal rolled his eyes and Mirza continue

Mirza: dont roaming in night time..dont bunk ur college..no party in night time. Near to Jalal ear , no drink also ..Jalal rasied his eyebrow said right.

Jalal : now Bakshi

Bakshi : bhai..dont go shopping if want go shopping, go only with bodyguards or go with Mirza. Concentrate to ur studies..dont chat in late night with ur friends, don't do any prank with others, u too Mirza . I am right bhai with teasing tone.

Bakshi and Mirza side hug to Jalal : we miss u bhai, we miss ur strictness , we miss ur pampering

Jalal: i miss u too guys.

****************

Jalal flight landed in Airport..Jalal caught bus . Jalal enjoying natural scenary .more green mountains crossing in travel.its so natural and got peace in mind and relax to his body.sudden break as Jalal distract from relaxation.

Jalal step down to bus .crowd surrounding infront of bus.bus driver strucked centre of crowd.Jalal not understand anything .Jalal poke in crowd area.

Jalal shocking one girl blaming driver and shouting him.girl have good shape, her hand waving infront driver face as her voice sweeter than honey.Jalal not hear her words as Jalal numb because of her attitude, anger with driver.

Jalal touch next man shoulder as asking what happening yaar.

Man: oh bhaisa, driver hit her dog ,so she scold him. its just dog but she reacting like he hit child

Girl faced turn to Jalal side and pointing her index fingers infront of Jalal, unfortunately she mistaken man is Jalal..

Girl : oyie what u said just dog..she not dog..she is my suji with angry voice.

Jalal nods his head and impressed for her guts.

Girl : are u new in this place. Jalal nods his head.

Girl: are u dumb with worried tone..

Jalal: no, i am not said that ur dog to just dog

Girl : ufff..look at driver..if once again u drive fastly na. Next time ,u will get beat from my hand..

Other girl dragged that girl outside to crowd

Girl: Meera , stop ur fight, nothing happen to our suji(dog )..why u doing hungama

Meera: no rachi, if any child in suji place..child not run out like our suji right.

Rachi: i know ,my Meera never shout to anyone but if she shout any person, that person did any wrong things.

Meera: ok lets go, everyone waiting for us.

Rachi and Meera went out with dog sorry suji.

Jalal hearing both friends conversation as he face fell down , both r went out the place even he did not see her face..yeah she covered her face through choli dupatta.he hearing only their voice.

Jalal crept little smile in his lip: Meera , nice name.

**************

Next day, Jalal started their work in village ofcourse remember his Meera.

Meera come to Jalal place with angry mode.

Jalal smiled seeing her pose ..Meera placed her hands in both side waist..her body stiffened.

Jalal raised his eyebrow : what

Meera: what r doing here, this place not good for u..go away from this place with worried but angry tone

Jalal confused and happy hearing worried voice about him..she turn back , go away from the place. Jalal held her wrist . she turns look at Jalal.

Jalal: why u want , i go away from place. Why u worried about me .

Meera: because u r my ..with stammering voice.

Jalal: yes , i am ur with eager tone.

Meera remove her hand from his grip : dont start ur work in this place..this is not good things and this place not safe for u with worried voice.she run out

Jalal: strange girl.

Jalal ( mind) : why she dont want, i stay in this place, why she did not like i start my work.why i felt that something hide behind my work.

Jalal called Abdul and single ring as Abdul pickup Jalal call.

Abdul: hello sir, are u fine with worried tone.

Jalal: iam fine Abdul..i need every detail about village project..i felt something fishy in this place with doubting face.

Abdul: i send every information to ur email-id .

Jalal: i am waiting for ur mail.

Someone heared Jalal and Abdul converstion..that person got angry..

Person ( mind): if he know about our plan, everything become collapsed .what i will do now.

****************

Festival time

A village person enjoy with their partners in bhangara dance.Jalal searching Meera in village crowd Other Meera talk with someone in serious mode. Jalal found out her in corner place .Jalal legs move to her side..

Meera: do what i am saying, i will deal with Jalal with serious voice.

Person nods his head and went out..Jalal touch her shoulder.

Meera shocked and turn look at Jalal : oh ji..with stammering and nervous tone.

Jalal: why u standing in lonely place..everyone enjoying there..what r u doing here.

Meera: ji, i am coming with wiping her neck sweating inside of dupatta..

***************

Jalal loved her nature , she helped every person in village even love with animals also mainly her suji.sometimes Jalal jealous seeing Meera kiss to suji but sometime she become mystery for him.he searching whole village but he cannot find her .sometimes he got surprised , she come to his place , how she found him ..he never said her that he is here only then how she found out easily.

************

Jalal read project details and angry with their irresponsible staffs.he cannot blame Abdul..if Abdul doing this work ,its never happen ..

Jalal : she said right, if i start this project , oh no i cannot imagine..

Jalal enter village head house and already some person talking about hot topics related to Jalal

Village head: if Jalal found out truth , what will happen..

Man: we finished, he is big shot in delhi.his single complain enough we never come out from jail.

Village head: before that, we kill him with angry face.

Jalal clapped his hand: wow what plan, u think u will kill me easily with angry face

Jalal roared like lion: u people, trapped my staffs as using my company do ur illegal matters..how dare u

Other man hit Jalal head heavely and Jalal held his head with his left hand and tried caught village head through right hand.

Village head: finish him soon otherwise we become trouble.

Man once again hit Jalal and sudden gun shot sound.everyone stunned their place..man died and his body fallen down to ground..everyone look at entrance..

Jalal seeing one girl, she wore tight jeans and top ,her face fully cover with scarf , wore goggle in her eyes and her hand held gun in shot posture.

Village head: who r u.

Girl lightly remove her scarf as her cherry lips only visible

Girl order to her collague:arrest them

Jalal: Meera with shocked voice.

Meera held stammering Jalal : Jalal are u alright.

Jalal tried remove her scarf before removing her scarf ,he faint in her arms.

Meera: raj, give first aid box now with worried tone.

Raj handover first aid box and she do bandage his wound properly.

Raj touch Meera shoulder: Mehek, he become alright..dont say u fallen love with handsome man.

Opps Meera /Mehek guys..

Meera: raj with rude voice.

*****************

Jalal woke up and held his head while he got more pain in his head.Jalal tried to stand but his head spinning ..Meera come to held him before he touch to ground.

Jalal look at her and opps once again she covered her face with scarf and wore goggles.

Jalal: Are u terriost ?

Raj laughed loudly : what a joke ..Mehek u hearing right.

Jalal: Mehek with confused face

Raj: sorry Meera u hearing, i am also same doubt about her ( look at Meera) are u terriost ? with teasing tone.

Meera hit raj shoulder with playfully : raj..with grinned teeth.

Jalal: if anyone explain me, what happening yaar. She never harm single insect but sudden she killed one man ..i shocked ,my legs become jelly and my tongue tied

Raj patted Meera shoulder: great job, Mehek. U act very well with proud voice.

Jalal heart burst hearing raj statement after hearing Meera words he got relief.

Meera: shutup raj, that not acting really i love this village , i got more peace .every people love me like i am their family members except that criminals.

Jalal confused hearing their conversation.raj sensed Jalal dilemma

Raj;Mehek, i am waiting outside, we need go now..i think , u understand right..Meera nods her head.raj went out.

Meera: Jalal, i know u confused , who i am..i am not share everything with u but i clear ur doubt.

First village is not my native place, i come this village for secret operation.

Jalal : secret operation

Meera: yes, secret operation and don't interpet , i don't like anyone interpet when i am talking after i finish u ask me what ever u want i tell u with attitude voice.

Jalal fake angry glaze to Meera and nods his head and Meera /Mehek continues

Yes, secret operation for capture that culprits..they do many illegal business in village but village people don't know their real identity.our head appoint me for operation head and raj my friend as well as partners of operation...ur project site corrected located in hidden treasure .our government know very well , if we try take treasure from ground , it become danger to surrounding villages as high rector earthquake will be happen , our geologist already informed about treasure and earthquake will be happen , so our government declared to probhited place, i don't know how criminal gots this news.i thinking my department person only help them. they planned very well, people trust blindly to village head.criminal need big company because government not touched them easily.if u involved in this project means they will be escaped and also they got treasure from earth. They thought u would be accept their deal, unfortunately they found out ur straight forwards character so they using ur staffs and said people welfare , they construct dam , u also accept because ur trust ur staff work ( unbelievable look at Jalal and Jalal face felt down because of his staff cheated him) .they heared u and Abdul conservation and so they decided that they kill u..

Meera: now u ask me anything , i tell u.

Jalal: why government not stopped them before itself .

Meera: politics Jalal, some higher politics person also involved , we did everything secretly.

Jalal: how u found out that i am in danger.

Meera smiled: because i know u more than anyone .i already fixed ur phone to tracking devices where u going , i will find u easily.

Jalal mouth open widely : what ..

Meera: i know ,u very strict person in professional field but first time i saw u in village , i shocked that why u coming to village after i found out , we visit reason for project and then only i warned u..go away from this place. But great MOHAMMED not take other person advice right with taunting tone

Jalal eyes brow raised and Meera smiled

Meera: ok Jalal, i need go now

Jalal: wait, u arrested everyone then where r u going with sad voice

Meera: not everyone, now politics person also involved.we want arrest them also..i need gather strong evidence against them otherwise they will escape easily.

Jalal: ur name is Meera or Mehek

Meera: village people call me Meera & my friend circle call me to Mehek with smirked face.

Jalal: final question , will u love me with eager face.

Meera face fell down: Jalal, this is not right time, in this operation, if anything happen with me.i don't know , i will alive or not, dont do any hope with me.

Jalal: don't say like that, i need u till my last breathe.

Meera take long breathe : ok wait for me just 2 months , if i did not return back , u think..i die..promise me..u move on ur life. U will marry and forgot me..with painful voice.

Jalal: no i am not, i wait for u till my last breathe..

Meera: don't think like emotional ways , just think like pratical ways , Jalal. ur family need u, ur siblings need u, they want ur happy life..if i am not come back, u must move on ur life.

Jalal: atleast show ur face.

Meera: no , this is good for u.i wish that ur heart only u r wife face not any mystery girl face ( mind thought, i wish my face only in ur heart) i need go now..take care . Meera kissed his forehead.

Jalal held her fingers and Meera turn and left that place with heavy heartly ..ring slipped from her fingers insake of Jalal held.

Jalal pickup her ring:i will wait, i know u come back for me.

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Flash back end

Jalal come out from past insake someone licking his bare foot.Jalal look down , puppy licking his foot. Jalal pickup in his arms

Jalal: suji, what r u doing..u tinkling me with ur licking .u miss her right..suji give sad face as remembering Meera .

Dadi , Bakshi , Mirza and Naazira enter Jalal room.

Bakshi pickup suji from Jalal arms.

Dadi : Jalal beta, everyone waiting for u..what r u doing here.

Bakshi : bhabhi so preety..she look like angel

Naazira: really she look like angel

Dadi: why not her name also Paridhi right.

Mirza: really u lucky got beautiful wife next with u,but u only denied see her face.

Dadi: because he trust his family members more than himself not like u.

Mirza: if u search my bride look like bhabhi..i am also accept blindly for my marriage.

Dadi: stop ur blaberring, priest and ur bhabhi waiting for ur bhai.

***********

Jalal marriage finish ..he doing everything every ritual like robot but give fake smile with everyone.

Night time.

Jalal room

Paridhi waiting for Jalal in centre of bed and Jalal enter in room its already dark ..he seeing her shadow only..Paridhi got nervous

Jalal : i don't want hide anything from u. U r my wife..u have full right with me but i already fallen love with my mystery girl..i know what u thinking then why i married u..i marry with u because of family happiness.Jalal explained how meet to his mystery girl (after 2 months he waiting for her but she did not return back but he never lose her love with her..unfortuntaely his grandpa got heart attack , he want see Jalal marriage..his family happiness ,he accept this marriage without seeing bride face) I think u understand my feeling..i try move on with u. I need time only..i hope u give some time to move on our life ..Jalal left to his study room.

Paridhi face tears flowing in her cheeks..and step down to bed , her legs straightly went to Dadi room.

Dadi :beta, what r u doing here..Paridhi hugged Dadi with heavy sobbing voice

Dadi stay out from hug and cupped her cheeks: beta, why u crying , if Jalal say anything with u with worried tone.

Paridhi nods her head and Dadi confused

Dadi: then, why u crying...same time Bakshi enter Dadi room

Bakshi : wow great Jodha Bharmal crying with surprised face.

Jodha:Bakshi ki bachi, now iam PardhiJodha Jalal Uddin Mohammed with pride voice.

Bakshi twisted her lips: then why Mrs Mohammed crying

Jodha: he love his mystery girl so much with twisted lips

Bakshi angry glare to Jodha: bhabhi with grinned teeth..


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Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 7 years ago
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Nice dear waiting soon for the next part dear😛
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ek jodha or kite naam 😆😆
koi bhi confuse ho jaye 😆😆
Finally jalal married and like a good husband told everything to her wife without listening her voice...I know after hearing her Jalal will know that she is his mystery girl right 😆
I think everyone knows that Jodha is his mydtery girl except him...Poor Jalal
waiting to see Ja reaction when he will know Jodha is his mystery girl 😉

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