NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 33~Chapter 38-UPD JULY 17th - Page 62

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.5k

Views

50.1k

Users

34

Likes

8.9k

Frequent Posters

lghosh thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago

And who else but Lana turns out to be the villain of this story 🤣

Oh my God... Sandy... only problem with providing us with such entertainment is that we end up wanting more and more!
🤗

No author Sahiba, moi is not the villain!! I gave my roses to Rose Sahiba to use it on my Certain Someone and I don't like apples (really and truly) and will never give them to CS!!
If I have to give him any fruit, I will give hm mangoes, my favorite of course with a jhappi!! 😃 Yeh Kuki's Shah Sahab (SS) kya ghotala kar raha hai mujhe maaloom nahi!! Kis kis se rose and apples lekar mere naam mein dala raha hai! 😒

Kuki he is a spy, now you have to spy on a spy, chor ke ghar mein chori jaisa!! 😆 Apne sahab par nazar rakh zara, varna phir se meri upar ilzaam daalegi 'bujinesswali' karke! 😆
old_charm thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh


Tum ne pukara aur main chali aayi,
jaan hatheli pe lekar aaye hai...😃🤗


🤗🤗🤗🤗
old_charm thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh


And who else but Lana turns out to be the villain of this story 🤣

Oh my God... Sandy... only problem with providing us with such entertainment is that we end up wanting more and more!
🤗


No author Sahiba, moi is not the villain!! I gave my roses to Rose Sahiba to use it on my Certain Someone and I don't like apples (really and truly) and will never give them to CS!!
If I have to give him any fruit, I will give hm mangoes, my favorite of course with a jhappi!! 😃 Yeh Kuki's Shah Sahab (SS) kya ghotala kar raha hai mujhe maaloom nahi!! Kis kis se rose and apples lekar mere naam mein dala raha hai! 😒

Kuki he is a spy, now you have to spy on a spy, chor ke ghar mein chori jaisa!! 😆 Apne sahab par nazar rakh zara, varna phir se meri upar ilzaam daalegi 'bujinesswali' karke! 😆

😆😆

old_charm thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Azki and the Ribbons fiasco.


Azeez couldn't believe his eyes. He rubbed them once more to ascertain that they were not decieving him. He couldn't lift them off the red covered book which was Kuki's diary.

He had bought her a bunch of pretty ribbons for her beautiful hair and had wanted to slip it into her things as a surprise. The diary slid down pulling along with it the pouch of ribbons as well and scattered them.
No matter how much he wanted to be a gentleman like his Ustaad and not look into it, his curiosity had zoomed up and got the better of his principles. It was HIS cookie after all and Ustaad wouldn't know.

Her heartfelt words moved him, but more than that made his spirits soar high. He couldn't believe that from then on, he wouldn't have to run around squishing those awful lemons to please Kuki. She will not go on those dizzy circles and would keep Vrats for him. 'Would his luck be strong enough that one of them be a maun Vrat' he wondred. And he hoped that the 'how long' would be really very long, very very long...


She would also take classes from Sahiba. Hope her angelic nature rubbs off on her and tames her wild streaks. After a quick prayer to that effect Azeez returned the diary to its place.

Tap.Tap. He thought he heard footsteps. May be Kuki was back before her usual time after her morning walk. He had wanted his ribbons to be a surprise and stuffed them quickly in the pouch. He placed them under her pretty pink gown. Looking around, he rushed to the chair nearby and dropped in it, just in time.

Kuki came breezily into the room and stopped when he saw Azeez casually look up at her. How handsome he looked...and how much he had suffered! She remembered her vow to be a good girl.

"Azeez! What a surprise. You are here quite early! Can i make you nimbu paani or some orange juice..."

Azeez looked stunned. Not only would his Kuki NOT ask HIM to make nimbu paani but would make some for him as well.!!! In his heart he thanked the double crosser who slashed his hand that made his girl all so kind to him.

"Kuki", he attempted to imitate his Ustaad's baritone but wasn't pleased with the performance and so in his usual tones said "would you join me this evening by the Riverside. Seems ages since we spent time together, alone. I'd be happy if you wear your pretty pink gown."

Kuki blushed pinker than her pink gown. "Yes" she whispered.

...

At the Riverside in the evening

Azeez arrived early. He wanted to bask in his joy and rehersed the lines he wanted to tell her when she arrived. They would go on the boat holding hands and




But what was that...Kuki was already there sitting under an apple tree, and unusually quiet.


She was in her pink gown, so must have seen the ribbons.

"Hello my sweet..." Azeez sat down beside her and gently turned her face to meet his. "How did you like my surprise!" he smiled. "I was very much surprised indeed" said Kuki with an expression very difficult to decipher. There was something about her tone that rang a warning bell. He wanted to please her. "Do you realize that your face looks like the full moon?"


"Does it have craters and pits Shah Sahib??" she retorted with unabated anger. He looked up, 'Ai Khuda! Help me!' and spotted those lovely apples up the tree. "Shall i get you an apple? They are such lovely fruits."

Kuki narrowed her eyes and was visibly fuming. Azeez was horrified. " Oh Kuki! Why such anger. You are redder than those apples and the red roses and the cherries and the ..." He hadn't finished the sentence, when Kuki sprang at him like a wild cat. "Apples and roses are all you can think off now, isn't it?"


Azeez would have preferred to face Khalil than Kuki like this. "But what happened dear..." swallowed the soldier who didn't fear to face even an army by himself.


Kuki pressed a little scroll into his hands and said "Don't...talk...to me...EVER...again" and stormed away from the place. Statled Azeez unfolded the scroll."Oh no! "He gasped.



"These apples and roses are specially for my Certain Someone. I grew them in my personal farm with personal care. Hope he remembers my affection for him when he smells the roses and savours the apples...❤️"

"The apples and roses were a gift for Ustaad from Kuki's friend he had met on the way home. She was an ardent admirer of Ustaad, and naturally so, and wanted him to deliver those gifts to Ustaad on her behalf.

'But why couldn't she simply mention Ustaad or Akbar Khan! Why Certain Someone! ' Azeez cursed, 'The scroll must have fell from my pocket when i bent to pick up the diary and i must have shoved them into the pouch with the ribbons! Now how will i convince Kuki that i am not CS. ' Sighed the horrified Azeez Shah as he collected himself and ran in the direction where Kuki went. " Kuki dear...it wasn't for me...I promise..."


wow sandy di , u marvelled us yet again...😃

its ur first OS na...congrats...🤗

kuki damn lucky u're...😃 so how long this roothna mode'll be on & when u'll finally yield...

& then...

Image result for sweetly telling nooo disney cartoon gif
lghosh thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Some more...if you don't mind my copying your idea aunty...

14.She hazed

Shehzade

15. Black an an

Canal Bank

16. A grub aid

Durgabai

17. Haze hazes

Azeez Shah

18. No ire or

Iron ore

19. For as mud

Forum Sad ???🤔

20. Jammed gamble tape

Jagadamba Temple


Didn't check other's, many may be wrong!!
lghosh thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
Manu you are still awake?? Tere wohan 3 am hone ko hai, nahi?? Pagal ladki!! Jaa so ja!!
lghosh thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
And thanl



@bold:I didn't know all these come under the category of hunars!🤣

Lana,my darling..🤗(me praying Jahnu di doesn't see this_/\__/\_😆 ) this was the first thing I read in the morning and needless to say,my day started with a huge smile!😃 Didn't get the chance to reply earlier!

@blue: To be honest, it's ppl like you who are difficult to find.The profession you've chosen and the love you have for the kids is something I admire the most! As I already said,you always make me feel special with ur concern and love. And you very well know we all are fans of ur hunars!⭐️

Thank you so much for these blue lines 🤗,I can't help ☺️😳

Kisi ka koi darr nahi, bindaas bol Lana Darling!! After all you are my pyari and bholi Bindu!! 😆 Whether you call it hunar, talent, characteristics, nature...it doesn't matter, it all falls under the big umbrella! But jokes aside you are truly and genuinely pyari and bholi and that is the reason we all love you so much!! You have much much more talents but we the unlucky few have come across these many only virtually, if it was a 3D medium I would have listed talents in an epic length!! 😆 And for all the beautiful words that you said for me, come here, here is a big squishy hug for you! 😃🤗
lashy thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

Lashy di 🤗

Vrindu 🤗

After Reading about Bansi I was like But in the end I was

But... Heera has someone with her far greater than Kakasa Kakisa... 😳

What type of Godparents they are who Abandoned Heera completely where every time Heera listen about them she just have a hope to meet them soon and is waiting for their love. As AMK thought, Maharaj is grieving about Durga only, what about Heera 😲😲 this orthodox society .🤢

Yes dear... that's how it is even today!

At least AMK is there to support Heera at every moment of her life keeping her away from every type of harsh truth of her life 👏

Yes

Ahem!! Sooo good that now at least Heera has started to miss KS and even their Kiss ☺️AMK is gona on seventh heaven after knowing Heera likes the kiss and Gauri is gona Tease poor Heera a lot 🤣. Like a good and loving wife she is even unable to have a good sleep thinking of him.

😆 Loool

Finally it rained half of water problem solved 🥳

>>

Reading rain and Horse sound I was getting feeling of nursery poems 🤣

Oooh... 😆

But why only Amk and Aziz came back from the war 😲 where are others, Didn't they go to war 😲🤔

It's not a war... 😕 It was only a mission to round-up three schemers na! He needs to have some of his men stay back to take care of the business too...

It just so turned out that the informer betrayed him and sold him out... and they ended up having to face a regiment...

Aziz is felling bad for disturbing heera's sleep without any use since How can Heera sleep without knowing of KS 😉 and He did right thing by asking to Heera to mend AMK, Her presence has only half the pain of AMK😆😆

>>>😆

Today Heera come face to face to his physical scars and feel so much pain what she will do after knowing his childhood pain 😭 and our AMK has even know how to control harsh pain and his Moral every girl want such a husband 🤣 Heera is so lucky 😳

Awww darling❤️

That letter 🥺

>>>>🤗

While reading the update many time my expectations raised but I fall on ground with thud...😔

Achaaa? Too many thuds everywhere!

1st I thought King of Bansi has forgiven heera but no its all opposite 😭

2nd I thought Heera will at least go to see AMK after he return from his long journey like an Idiol wife. 😭

Why? He has asked her to keep out of this other life of his... na?

He left without telling her when/where he's gone for how long... then why should she be waiting for him?

3rd I thought Mahendra is atleast loyal to his wife now, but he is just 🤢🤢🤢 only want his wife purity and what about his purity😡😡

Shuddh desi ghee!😆

4th I thought AMK will hug Heera for mental support and will cry his pain in her hug, but again nothing like this happen even he missed his Adab

Hayooo... AMK will hug Heera and cry? Are you sure this is AMK you're talking about?😆Men don't generally do that unless they totally trust someone and are comfortable doing it -letting out very deep emotional scars...

Men in power do it even lesser (don't go by the Jalal in the serial whom they had crying every other week for TRPs)

and hardened men like AMK would rarely every do that.

As for adab and social niceties, he decided to take a back-seat and be formal like how he was first week of marriage na... because being cordial was getting difficult and raising his expectations when she didn't trust him yet.

5th And when the eyes of Heera fall on the pouch I thought wow, atleast now Heera will think that he respected her gift that he place his tabeez in his pouch only and will hug him out of happiness but again nothing like this happen. 😭

She did... da... she did realise it... but their relationship is not at the juncture where they'll hug each other Vrinda... this is not some modern college love story 😆in 17th c man and woman weren't hugging each other like today na! They haven't even admitted they love each other... or accepted a husband/wife status.


You mentioned about your expectations going THUD... but what about all the other positive steps developments though😆 taking the story forward...

Like her referring to him as family, and he realising that he was her only family? That's a big step in a marriage that was forced/not natural.

Where AMK allowed her to tend to him, accepted he couldn't have had a better healer... Big step for a man like AMK to reveal his 'low' side in front of her.
And even though he was so aggrieved by the loss of his men, only she could calm him... and he sort-of accepted it.

Where Heera met Ustaad for the first time and wanted to know more about him... started feeling sorry for him... it's first step of accepting Ustaad, even though she'd always disliked 'Ustaad' in her mind...

All of the above were big steps dear...the hugs and everything can come later... but, essential is building of trust... story must progress naturally na... 🤗

Overall an awesome update 🤗

And welcome to India, enjoy ur breaks,

Padhuro mahre desh

Thanks dear 🤗

lghosh thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
Wow, these are so bright and beautiful Lana!❤️ Rose Sahiba is very lucky!😆


Bindu I gave them to Rose Sahiba to use it for you know whom and what, yes Mr. RoseRaja!! 😉😆 To use them for the rose water she provides, for the rose sherbat, for the rose petals she scrambles in his towels and on his bed!!!! 🤣 But Madam didn't reply whether she is still performing all these tasks or not!! 🤔
lashy thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh



19. For as mud

Forum Sad ???🤔


Mitu decoded it
Four Dams

and the earlier one is Samarth Singh... but I think Periyamma spelt it with one H less... 😳

Good Night my darlings... Lana and Manu
Thank you darlings for your wishes.. 🤗
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

Related Topics

Jodha Akbar thumbnail

Posted by: hemakeerti · 4 months ago

Hemakeerti OSes - Compiled PBD INDEX Prologue Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar thumbnail

Posted by: Swissgerman · 6 years ago

Jodha Akbar FF : --- Who loves Him Most (M) --- Link to my other threads Thread 1 Thread 2 - Thread 3 :::::Thread 4::::...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar thumbnail

Posted by: Swissgerman · 9 years ago

... Shahzada Of Her Dreams ... ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Index::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Chapter-1.....The beginning Chapter-2:...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar thumbnail

Posted by: Shinning_Stuti · 5 years ago

Prologue: How it happens when both the hearts fall for each other madly without knowing each other? He is the emperor of the great Mughal...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar thumbnail

Posted by: ParijatDeewani · 2 months ago

Hey y'all! I've created this thread so that you'll can easily access all the Akdha Vms in one place. Please feel free to add to the list. 1....

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".