NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 33~Chapter 38-UPD JULY 17th

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: harshu27
congo lashy sahiba for a new thread🤗

Thank you darling🤗

Thank you Rose, Manu & Shruthi 🤗

Thank you Mitu...🤗

I still have to read your beautiful poem... is it on page 112?

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diksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

wonderful chapter, Lashy...

is there some hint for AMK in that letter from Maharaja of Bansi, abt some trap by Khalil, Mahender and his other enemies, when he says that AMK is only family , Heera is left with?? or is it coz no Rajputs , including himself will ever have any relations with Heera even in future??

anyway, enjoy ur holiday...

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Bindu.
You still sound unsure..ayyoo

Yeah... not feeling very 'bouncy chirpy confident' today!🤔

Really? You think so?🤔

Yes!

Really? Like?😈

Will tell you later..

Waiting waiting...

Thanks a ton darling... your presence always lights up the place 🤗

Thank you,di☺️☺️

Awww chalo... Bond's blushing face made me go ---> Colgate!😃
Love you Bond Assassin! 🤗❤️

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: lashy

😲 Mixed feelings?
Could it be because you gave too long between 36 and 37 when one was a continuation of the other?
🤔

Anyway dear... so glad to see you here

and thanks for your lovely words on the picture too! 🤗

No not because of a gap but in some scenes,I was smiling,laughing.. some things were upsetting.. in the end,I had mixed feelings when he left. Last paragraph touched my heart

But I couldn't fathom what I was actually feeling.

It was something.. so pure and which can't be described in words.

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha
wonderful chapter, Lashy...

is there some hint for AMK in that letter from Maharaja of Bansi, abt some trap by Khalil, Mahender and his other enemies, when he says that AMK is only family , Heera is left with?? or is it coz no Rajputs , including himself will ever have any relations with Heera even in future??

anyway, enjoy ur holiday...

It is the latter to let them know that they have been 'outcast'

Thank you so so so much Dikshu for this

And thanks for the wishes dear 🤗

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

No not because of a gap but in some scenes,I was smiling,laughing.. some things were upsetting.. in the end,I had mixed feelings when he left. Last paragraph touched my heart
But I couldn't fathom what I was actually feeling.

It was something.. so pure and which can't be described in words.

Phew ... clocked in smile number 2... I thought by mixed feelings you meant didn't like it 😆

What you described above is EXACTLY what Heera and AMK are both feeling, Payaliya...

They laugh and smile in each other's presence... they are attracted to each other... love the company... but till there is 'trust' neither will he take the next step nor will she be happy taking the next step... and that void is the one that you call 'don't know how to describe'

Thanks a ton...

and your last line left me dreamy

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diksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: lashy

It is the latter to let them know that they have been 'outcast'
Thank you so so so much Dikshu for this

And thanks for the wishes dear 🤗

outcast??😕 what is there to inform abt, when they have already cut all ties with her , when she refused to marry Mahender??

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: lashy

Phew ... clocked in smile number 2... I thought by mixed feelings you meant didn't like it 😆

What you described above is EXACTLY what Heera and AMK are both feeling, Payaliya...

They laugh and smile in each other's presence... they are attracted to each other... love the company... but till there is 'trust' neither will he take the next step nor will she be happy taking the next step... and that void is the one that you call 'don't know how to describe'

Thanks a ton...

and your last line left me dreamy

How beautifully you have written this!

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Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: lashy

Why di?🤗

Sandy di..Lana..Jahnu di..pls give ur reviews fast so that our Author Sahiba feels confident and chirpy..she trusts your reviews.. doesn't trust mine..

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

outcast??😕 what is there to inform abt, when they have already cut all ties with her , when she refused to marry Mahender??

1) To make sure the 41st day ceremony of Durga is completed. They cut ties with Harka... not with Durga or his relationship with his friend. It's an old fashioned way of thinking... right?

And those ceremonies can only be performed by a family member.

Actually, that must be done in the temple, before you can mingle with others etc...

So, they wrote out of duty they feel towards Durga...

That's how very traditional/orthodox people behave... they may not like it, but they will do the duty they deem necessary... they are the ghar ke bade and they will do what needs to be done for their own paap punya...

This is what AMK also noticed (greater sense of duty towards once who'd passed away rather than one who's alive)

2) The last line was a sign off from a Godfather who would never forgive his God daughter... but he wanted to send his blessings - probably because Kakisa wanted to respond to the letter Heera sent?

Besides, he never actually wrote to her husband till date. So, he's written a formal one. It's like the unofficial kanyadaan?

You are right... if the incomplete Durga Bai issue wasn't there, they would never have written to send blessings etc...

😊

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