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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hiding Behind a Stranger.
( a novel by Lashy.)

How the novel unfolded in Part II...

Chapter 20. The Preparations..

Khalil kept his lips sealed - 'Instantly?' he asked in due time, having carefully weighed his words so as to make up for lost ground 'But Huzoor, it has been 3 weeks since Ustaad took over this mission ...you wanted this assignment wrapped up as quickly as possible... which is why the task was handed over to your chief Intelligence Officer... of course...' he began gradually rubbing his jaw 'Ustaad is generally never late... but, in this case...that man has not found the Farmaan yet...' His tone was not sarcastic, but he had brought up a fact that could not be denied.

He noticed his Huzoor drifting into deep thought..

* * *

Parnagarh

A week! A week now, since he'd left Aidabad. The duo had reached Parnagarh two days ago, him donning the guise of a Rajput messenger 'Samarth Singh', Azeez accompanying him as 'Charanjith'

...

Thus Akbar had infiltrated Parnagarh to pursue his mission of finding the missing Farmaan - having left behind a whole lot of himself, including his identity, to do so.


Bansi.


'By the way...' kakisa hummed, a short while later 'I have been meaning to tell you something... but I wanted the time to be right...'

'Go on Kakisa...'

'Your kakasa has found a solution for a lot of our issues... an excellent solution...'

'Yes?'

'Take a guess...'


'A groom for you...'


'A groom?' the young lady swallowed softly. And she swallowed again, but that didn't seem to stop her throat from becoming dry 'Marriage?'

Kaki beamed 'You've already met him, bitiya...'

'What?'


'It's the illustrious Kunwarsa Mahendar... of Manswar...'



Chapter 21..In Pursuit of the Farmaan


Parnagarh

The sick house.

Pappu might not have too long, after all.

...

It was a phenomenon that Akbar knew all too well - he had suffered the same disease as a child. And just like this spirited fatherless boy, he used to smile through his anguish too.


Pappu had a mother, who loved him. A mother, who sat beside him and cared for him through thick and thin - unlike that poor little child who woke up on his sick bed, many years ago, to find that his ammi had left.

She had packed her bags and left - forever abandoning a son, who she presumed was destined to die anyway!


'Foolish boy... your ammi has run away with her lover... get that in your thick head! You have two choices - stop fighting the disease and give up your life, so it'll save me the medical expenses... or get well soon, get off that bed and make yourself useful in the house! I am NOT going to sit here and care for you... understood?'...

...


'Samarth banna... he is referring to the celebrations that were going on here...' the mother spoke up for her son 'we just heard that our Harka baisa's wedding has been fixed...'

'Kunwarsa Mahendar...a messenger from Manswar had arrived, delivering this news to Vaid kakasa only a short while ago...'


Bansi.


'But I cannot do this kakasa... he was the man jiji loved... this feels wrong.... it is a betrayal to jiji's memories...'

'I am not in the right frame of mind for this... please try and understand kakisa...'


'At least give me time... I beg you...'

She had tried everything she could, made every point she could make. But all her requests had fallen on deaf ears, all her efforts thwarted.

Next day...

Parnagarh

...

Suddenly, and almost out of nowhere, Akbar spoke up - interrupting the very rule-of-silence that he had imposed a few moments ago 'What do we know about the kingdom of Manswar? About the Kunwar of Manswar?'


'I'm just a bit sceptical about this Kunwar.. and his.. intentions.."

'I learnt last evening that...' he exhaled sharply 'that he is going to be wedded to Harka Sahiba...'

'Of what I've heard, the Kunwar was positively smitten by Durga Sahiba... barely 4 weeks since she's passed and preparations are underway for him to get married to the younger sister? Doesn't that seem odd?'

...

The royal gardens


'Jijasa... I am not ready for this marriage...' she pleaded with her eyes 'these developments must have caused you a lot of trouble and I apologise for all of it... I shall apologise to your parents for the difficulties this has caused them too...' she glimpsed down at the fingers that she was toying with 'unfortunately, all these decisions were taken in my absence... had I the slightest idea that kakasa would put forth such a proposal, I would have been able to advise him against it...'


'I don't want this wedding either... but I am going through with it, because I'd given your sister my word... I'd promised her that I would take care of Parnagarh, and take care of you!'

'Then you must remember that you'd given her TWO promises, jijasa! And if you remember the first, you surely wouldn't haven't forgotten the second promise... would you?'

'I'm bound forever by two precious aspects of my life that a marriage cannot change...one, Parnagarh... two and more importantly, my sister...'

'I wish that my lands and my people continue to remain under our joint charge'

'And when my sister weds, it would be to a man of her choice, much like I am following my own preferences.'


Parnagarh


... the young man went back to silently reciting the only clue he knew - Durga's final message.

He recalled the rhyme for the umpteenth time, racking his brains for an alternate interpretation of its contents. And it was sometime during this exercise that a few 'telling' words in each line gradually started standing out.

Jiji ran around the Haveli, with her eyes opened wide

Every trick uncanny, she may have tried

Every nook and cranny, she may have spied

But never did she find me, because I know how to hide!


Focussing on these new words as fresh cues, he tried to work a new angle to the entire mystifying puzzle

'A place where BOTH sisters RAN AROUND... a place which is probably NOT a nook or cranny... a place you can look around, with your eyes opened wide...'


It WAS a place where both sisters could run around.

It WAS a place that had no nook or cranny.

And it WAS a place from where you could look all around, with eyes opened wide.

It was also the only place they hadn't searched yet - the Hallways!


( Continued in P9. )

Karkuzhali.

Edited by karkuzhali - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Good Morning sachu patti, kal di and all my sweet friends
Have a beautiful day ahead
Happy Sunday 🤗

Good evening lana di
Enjoy your beautiful evening 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


How the novel HBAS unfolded in Part II...

Chapter 20. The Preparations..

Khalil kept his lips sealed - 'Instantly?' he asked in due time, having carefully weighed his words so as to make up for lost ground 'But Huzoor, it has been 3 weeks since Ustaad took over this mission ...you wanted this assignment wrapped up as quickly as possible... which is why the task was handed over to your chief Intelligence Officer... of course...' he began gradually rubbing his jaw 'Ustaad is generally never late... but, in this case...that man has not found the Farmaan yet...' His tone was not sarcastic, but he had brought up a fact that could not be denied.

He noticed his Huzoor drifting into deep thought..

* * *

Parnagarh

A week! A week now, since he'd left Aidabad. The duo had reached Parnagarh two days ago, him donning the guise of a Rajput messenger 'Samarth Singh', Azeez accompanying him as 'Charanjith'

...

Thus Akbar had infiltrated Parnagarh to pursue his mission of finding the missing Farmaan - having left behind a whole lot of himself, including his identity, to do so.


Bansi.


'By the way...' kakisa hummed, a short while later 'I have been meaning to tell you something... but I wanted the time to be right...'

'Go on Kakisa...'

'Your kakasa has found a solution for a lot of our issues... an excellent solution...'

'Yes?'

'Take a guess...'


'A groom for you...'


'A groom?' the young lady swallowed softly. And she swallowed again, but that didn't seem to stop her throat from becoming dry 'Marriage?'

Kaki beamed 'You've already met him, bitiya...'

'What?'


'It's the illustrious Kunwarsa Mahendar... of Manswar...'



Chapter 21..In Pursuit of the Farmaan


Parnagarh

The sick house.

Pappu might not have too long, after all.

...

It was a phenomenon that Akbar knew all too well - he had suffered the same disease as a child. And just like this spirited fatherless boy, he used to smile through his anguish too.


Pappu had a mother, who loved him. A mother, who sat beside him and cared for him through thick and thin - unlike that poor little child who woke up on his sick bed, many years ago, to find that his ammi had left.

She had packed her bags and left - forever abandoning a son, who she presumed was destined to die anyway!


'Foolish boy... your ammi has run away with her lover... get that in your thick head! You have two choices - stop fighting the disease and give up your life, so it'll save me the medical expenses... or get well soon, get off that bed and make yourself useful in the house! I am NOT going to sit here and care for you... understood?'...

...


'Samarth banna... he is referring to the celebrations that were going on here...' the mother spoke up for her son 'we just heard that our Harka baisa's wedding has been fixed...'

'Kunwarsa Mahendar...a messenger from Manswar had arrived, delivering this news to Vaid kakasa only a short while ago...'


Bansi.


'But I cannot do this kakasa... he was the man jiji loved... this feels wrong.... it is a betrayal to jiji's memories...'

'I am not in the right frame of mind for this... please try and understand kakisa...'


'At least give me time... I beg you...'

She had tried everything she could, made every point she could make. But all her requests had fallen on deaf ears, all her efforts thwarted.

Next day...

Parnagarh

...

Suddenly, and almost out of nowhere, Akbar spoke up - interrupting the very rule-of-silence that he had imposed a few moments ago 'What do we know about the kingdom of Manswar? About the Kunwar of Manswar?'


'I'm just a bit sceptical about this Kunwar.. and his.. intentions.."

'I learnt last evening that...' he exhaled sharply 'that he is going to be wedded to Harka Sahiba...'

'Of what I've heard, the Kunwar was positively smitten by Durga Sahiba... barely 4 weeks since she's passed and preparations are underway for him to get married to the younger sister? Doesn't that seem odd?'

...

The royal gardens


'Jijasa... I am not ready for this marriage...' she pleaded with her eyes 'these developments must have caused you a lot of trouble and I apologise for all of it... I shall apologise to your parents for the difficulties this has caused them too...' she glimpsed down at the fingers that she was toying with 'unfortunately, all these decisions were taken in my absence... had I the slightest idea that kakasa would put forth such a proposal, I would have been able to advise him against it...'


'I don't want this wedding either... but I am going through with it, because I'd given your sister my word... I'd promised her that I would take care of Parnagarh, and take care of you!'

'Then you must remember that you'd given her TWO promises, jijasa! And if you remember the first, you surely wouldn't haven't forgotten the second promise... would you?'

'I'm bound forever by two precious aspects of my life that a marriage cannot change...one, Parnagarh... two and more importantly, my sister...'

'I wish that my lands and my people continue to remain under our joint charge'

'And when my sister weds, it would be to a man of her choice, much like I am following my own preferences.'


Parnagarh


... the young man went back to silently reciting the only clue he knew - Durga's final message.

He recalled the rhyme for the umpteenth time, racking his brains for an alternate interpretation of its contents. And it was sometime during this exercise that a few 'telling' words in each line gradually started standing out.

Jiji ran around the Haveli, with her eyes opened wide

Every trick uncanny, she may have tried

Every nook and cranny, she may have spied

But never did she find me, because I know how to hide!


Focussing on these new words as fresh cues, he tried to work a new angle to the entire mystifying puzzle

'A place where BOTH sisters RAN AROUND... a place which is probably NOT a nook or cranny... a place you can look around, with your eyes opened wide...'


It WAS a place where both sisters could run around.

It WAS a place that had no nook or cranny.

And it WAS a place from where you could look all around, with eyes opened wide.

It was also the only place they hadn't searched yet - the Hallways!


Karkuzhali.


Awesome sachu patti 👏👏👏

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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: lashy

Jyothi... I told you na... if I didn't forget someone's name... you should be worried that 'Eeeks this is NOT the lashy we know' 😆

My darling... here a special hug to you for that🤗

But no, I didn't forget to pm the threads dear... I only send pms for updates da, not for new threads or teasers ... and in the last update, I sent the pms a day late - I saw that by that time you'd already liked the chapter, so avoided sending to all those who'd already liked it... since IF doesn't allow me to send pms to more than 50 members at once... 🤗

Update from here - Arrived at the resort girls.. the weather's been good... but I had a splitting migraine today... ugh... nevertheless the kids did enjoy at the fairground 😳and I did soak in the hot-tub

Just got the wifi connection - it's very slow so wasn't able to 'like' all the replies but read it all

🤗



Migraine
Take care of yourself lashy di 😳 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: binduprasad41


Good Morning sachu patti, kal di and all my sweet friends
Have a beautiful day ahead
Happy Sunday 🤗

Good evening lana di
Enjoy your beautiful evening 🤗

Good morning Periamma, Bindu and all my Baisas!😳


Chellam, how are you feeling now? After hot hot bath?😉


Good evening, Lana!😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: selvi1275


Nice feel to read again...this has got me high...THANK YOU KAL...




Originally posted by: lghosh

Kawsi how do you do this??? You are an enigma of wonder! How do you manage to bring the exact post in a flash?? 😲 The amount of toiling I will have to do to achieve this is beyond any explanation! You are a little bundle of marvel!!! 👏👏

No. No wonder. I just remember that line which triggered the debate. 'I'm hopeless but romantic' from one of poem I shared... Then all credit goes to google.😳


Thank you Lana, Selvi and Chellam..😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


How the novel HBAS unfolded in Part II...

Chapter 20. The Preparations..

Khalil kept his lips sealed - 'Instantly?' he asked in due time, having carefully weighed his words so as to make up for lost ground 'But Huzoor, it has been 3 weeks since Ustaad took over this mission ...you wanted this assignment wrapped up as quickly as possible... which is why the task was handed over to your chief Intelligence Officer... of course...' he began gradually rubbing his jaw 'Ustaad is generally never late... but, in this case...that man has not found the Farmaan yet...' His tone was not sarcastic, but he had brought up a fact that could not be denied.

He noticed his Huzoor drifting into deep thought..

* * *

Parnagarh

A week! A week now, since he'd left Aidabad. The duo had reached Parnagarh two days ago, him donning the guise of a Rajput messenger 'Samarth Singh', Azeez accompanying him as 'Charanjith'

...

Thus Akbar had infiltrated Parnagarh to pursue his mission of finding the missing Farmaan - having left behind a whole lot of himself, including his identity, to do so.


Bansi.


'By the way...' kakisa hummed, a short while later 'I have been meaning to tell you something... but I wanted the time to be right...'

'Go on Kakisa...'

'Your kakasa has found a solution for a lot of our issues... an excellent solution...'

'Yes?'

'Take a guess...'


'A groom for you...'


'A groom?' the young lady swallowed softly. And she swallowed again, but that didn't seem to stop her throat from becoming dry 'Marriage?'

Kaki beamed 'You've already met him, bitiya...'

'What?'


'It's the illustrious Kunwarsa Mahendar... of Manswar...'



Chapter 21..In Pursuit of the Farmaan


Parnagarh

The sick house.

Pappu might not have too long, after all.

...

It was a phenomenon that Akbar knew all too well - he had suffered the same disease as a child. And just like this spirited fatherless boy, he used to smile through his anguish too.


Pappu had a mother, who loved him. A mother, who sat beside him and cared for him through thick and thin - unlike that poor little child who woke up on his sick bed, many years ago, to find that his ammi had left.

She had packed her bags and left - forever abandoning a son, who she presumed was destined to die anyway!


'Foolish boy... your ammi has run away with her lover... get that in your thick head! You have two choices - stop fighting the disease and give up your life, so it'll save me the medical expenses... or get well soon, get off that bed and make yourself useful in the house! I am NOT going to sit here and care for you... understood?'...

...


'Samarth banna... he is referring to the celebrations that were going on here...' the mother spoke up for her son 'we just heard that our Harka baisa's wedding has been fixed...'

'Kunwarsa Mahendar...a messenger from Manswar had arrived, delivering this news to Vaid kakasa only a short while ago...'


Bansi.


'But I cannot do this kakasa... he was the man jiji loved... this feels wrong.... it is a betrayal to jiji's memories...'

'I am not in the right frame of mind for this... please try and understand kakisa...'


'At least give me time... I beg you...'

She had tried everything she could, made every point she could make. But all her requests had fallen on deaf ears, all her efforts thwarted.

Next day...

Parnagarh

...

Suddenly, and almost out of nowhere, Akbar spoke up - interrupting the very rule-of-silence that he had imposed a few moments ago 'What do we know about the kingdom of Manswar? About the Kunwar of Manswar?'


'I'm just a bit sceptical about this Kunwar.. and his.. intentions.."

'I learnt last evening that...' he exhaled sharply 'that he is going to be wedded to Harka Sahiba...'

'Of what I've heard, the Kunwar was positively smitten by Durga Sahiba... barely 4 weeks since she's passed and preparations are underway for him to get married to the younger sister? Doesn't that seem odd?'

...

The royal gardens


'Jijasa... I am not ready for this marriage...' she pleaded with her eyes 'these developments must have caused you a lot of trouble and I apologise for all of it... I shall apologise to your parents for the difficulties this has caused them too...' she glimpsed down at the fingers that she was toying with 'unfortunately, all these decisions were taken in my absence... had I the slightest idea that kakasa would put forth such a proposal, I would have been able to advise him against it...'


'I don't want this wedding either... but I am going through with it, because I'd given your sister my word... I'd promised her that I would take care of Parnagarh, and take care of you!'

'Then you must remember that you'd given her TWO promises, jijasa! And if you remember the first, you surely wouldn't haven't forgotten the second promise... would you?'

'I'm bound forever by two precious aspects of my life that a marriage cannot change...one, Parnagarh... two and more importantly, my sister...'

'I wish that my lands and my people continue to remain under our joint charge'

'And when my sister weds, it would be to a man of her choice, much like I am following my own preferences.'


Parnagarh


... the young man went back to silently reciting the only clue he knew - Durga's final message.

He recalled the rhyme for the umpteenth time, racking his brains for an alternate interpretation of its contents. And it was sometime during this exercise that a few 'telling' words in each line gradually started standing out.

Jiji ran around the Haveli, with her eyes opened wide

Every trick uncanny, she may have tried

Every nook and cranny, she may have spied

But never did she find me, because I know how to hide!


Focussing on these new words as fresh cues, he tried to work a new angle to the entire mystifying puzzle

'A place where BOTH sisters RAN AROUND... a place which is probably NOT a nook or cranny... a place you can look around, with your eyes opened wide...'


It WAS a place where both sisters could run around.

It WAS a place that had no nook or cranny.

And it WAS a place from where you could look all around, with eyes opened wide.

It was also the only place they hadn't searched yet - the Hallways!


Karkuzhali.


Nice work As usual periyamma...l've started saving this as pilot for each chapter...so thank you...itz real hard work...

@bold...AMK did want to know more of Mahender...but left it hanging after Marriage broke, i think...
Edited by selvi1275 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Thank you Selvi. I am happy that it serves some useful purpose to the reader.. Some time ago I had asked Lashy to briefly write , the story so far progressed to enable the readers to recollect the past happenings..
I had seen such briefings then and there in Kalki's Tamil Historicals. BTW, I presume you are a Tamilian , as your name suggests, and you have read and relished Kalki's works..
Yours
Periyamma.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: lashy

Jyothi... I told you na... if I didn't forget someone's name... you should be worried that 'Eeeks this is NOT the lashy we know' 😆

>>>>>>>>I know that. But... Still 😭

My darling... here a special hug to you for that🤗

>>>>>>>>> from my side a big hug to you... 🤗



But no, I didn't forget to pm the threads dear... I only send pms for updates da, not for new threads or teasers ... and in the last update, I sent the pms a day late - I saw that by that time you'd already liked the chapter, so avoided sending to all those who'd already liked it... since IF doesn't allow me to send pms to more than 50 members at once... 🤗

>>>>>>>>>>It's O.K. Dear.. Do it as per your comfort level. 😉

Update from here - Arrived at the resort girls.. the weather's been good... but I had a splitting migraine today...

>>>>>>>>>> Migraine... Take care...

ugh... nevertheless the kids did enjoy at the fairground 😳and I did soak in the hot-tub

>>>>>>>>>Already taken care😉

Just got the wifi connection - it's very slow so wasn't able to 'like' all the replies but read it all

🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Lavanya.. this is for you!!





THANKS FOR THE LINK DEAR!!!


AND LASHY, I DO UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU MEAN WHEN YOU SAY PASSIONATE


EVERY LITTLE HAPPINESS IN HIS LIFE HAS BEEN SO HARD EARNED, DIFFICULT TO COME BY AND RECEIVED AFTER SO MUCH EFFORT, THAT HE TENDS TO CHERISH IT THAT MUCH MORE, AND VERY RIGHTLY SO

HENCE HE GUARDS EVERY SOURCE OF THIS SEEMINGLY TOUGHT GOTTEN HAPPINESS WITH HIS LIFE - BE IT CHACHAJAAN'S COOKING, THE LOYALTY OF HIS MEN, OR HIS LADY LOVE

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