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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 34.



The story goes thus...

The much awaited update brought us a sort of respite,
After the grand wedding ceremony that had so much to excite
Away from the routine and unique for the pair it may sound
The cupids find a place in the horse-training ground
He trains his horses to make them ready for the race
She watches him with admiration evident on her face
She returns his "adaab" with a "Thank you" nod
Her first acknowledgement to her husband without any prod

The author's description of the scene is a visual treat
Should be read multiple times to savour her feat
The very minor characters, the couple of stable maids
How innocently they play the role of the cupids,
Contribute to the main element of the story implanting in her mind
Jealousy , the tie that binds and binds and binds!
We need not worry about the story hereafter
It'll take care of itself as it proceeds chapter after chapter

The Manswar prince has cropped up with a new scheme
To ally with the Shezade's henchman and form a vicious team
To pose a threat to our leading pair so as to say
How far they would succeed they can't say any day
Part three of the story has started to gain momentum
The readers crack their knuckles, cursing them to fail 'ad infinitum'
The author said that the chapter will be only an interlude
But we see that the coming events are foretold here as a prelude!

Karkuzhali.


This is absolutely fantastic! Amazing! And the picture is so so beautiful too, I want to borrow it right away! 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: lghosh

Yayyy!! HBAS Express finally arrived! 😃 Thank you author Sahiba! 🤗

Finally, the entry of a new persona, a green-eyed monster! I was thinking if Heera's jealousy can take shape and form this way then I can imagine what AMK's jealousy would make him do! I can hear the steely thunder in his voice and the tempest in his eyes, the tightening of his rough jawline, dark red tint underlining his skin and the fists along his side trying to control his rage! Watch out Mahendra! Khalil has already got a taste of his wrath, you will too!

Some highlights for me! Again the intelligence and smartness of Heera blew me away! Such maturity at such a tender age! How I wonder! The couple is so made for each other! Both of them knows about horses, their psyche, built, attitude, temperament so well! They are on the same page regarding this. Loved, loved, loved Bahadur! He is now my favorite other than certain someone! Reminded me of something! 😃 Loved how Heera figured out to bet on every race, such calculated risks she took! 👏

A couple takes a whole lifetime to read and understand each other but these two comprehends each other so perfectly and so correctly! They are in unison with their thoughts and their reading of each other. AMAZING!! They know exactly why the other thought what and why they did what they did! 7 lifetimes are not enough and these 2 achieved this in 7 days!

Our hero showed as he has done before as well, when time comes he can be bold even with people around! I loved the fact how he comes and speaks to her without caring that people are around or they might be watching. And it was more of a statement rather than a query! He knew exactly whom she bet on and wanted to know more from her and also in heart of his heart he wanted to know how did he fare in her eyes! Whether she noticed him or not, what was her reaction when she saw him! And his decision to race in the first place was also because of her! The subtle romance blossoming in the hearts! The urge to look his best to her, coming from AMK is huge!

I am happy Heera is on her high horse now! She is letting him know that she is not going to be a docile target and her spunk and spirit is returning in full force slowly and steadily and I know he loves that, he wanted to see this in her for a long time now. Ideal couple!

Love the symbolic attribute of their shadow merging together. They are so in UNISON! So he came after her on his own! Was he following her back home? He is a perfect balance! He is giving her the freedom to monitor her heritage as far as finance is concerned and yet is doing the duty and taking the responsibility of a Mansabdar! A perfect way to show that he meant every word of his proposal, he will do whatever is required to keep her and her people safe and happy and yet he himself doesn't have unwanted and unlimited needs and lives a simple basic life. He doesn't care about money or else he wouldn't have bothered to ask her to do the accounts. And he addressed her as "HARKA SAHIBA" again!! 😃

I will not say anything more now! Let me go read again. So far just devoured it, now will go and relish it! 😃


Really.. you know the characters inside out... Beautiful, di😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 34.



The story goes thus...

The much awaited update brought us a sort of respite,
After the grand wedding ceremony that had so much to excite
Away from the routine and unique for the pair it may sound
The cupids find a place in the horse-training ground
He trains his horses to make them ready for the race
She watches him with admiration evident on her face
She returns his "adaab" with a "Thank you" nod
Her first acknowledgement to her husband without any prod

The author's description of the scene is a visual treat
Should be read multiple times to savour her feat
The very minor characters, the couple of stable maids
How innocently they play the role of the cupids,
Contribute to the main element of the story implanting in her mind
Jealousy , the tie that binds and binds and binds!
We need not worry about the story hereafter
It'll take care of itself as it proceeds chapter after chapter

The Manswar prince has cropped up with a new scheme
To ally with the Shezade's henchman and form a vicious team
To pose a threat to our leading pair so as to say
How far they would succeed they can't say any day
Part three of the story has started to gain momentum
The readers crack their knuckles, cursing them to fail 'ad infinitum'
The author said that the chapter will be only an interlude
But we see that the coming events are foretold here as a prelude!


Karkuzhali.

WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! 👏 👏 👏 Excellent Periamma... Just LOVED it. And the picture too.. so beautiful. ❤️


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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 34.



The story goes thus...

The much awaited update brought us a sort of respite,
After the grand wedding ceremony that had so much to excite
Away from the routine and unique for the pair it may sound
The cupids find a place in the horse-training ground
He trains his horses to make them ready for the race
She watches him with admiration evident on her face
She returns his "adaab" with a "Thank you" nod
Her first acknowledgement to her husband without any prod

The author's description of the scene is a visual treat
Should be read multiple times to savour her feat
The very minor characters, the couple of stable maids
How innocently they play the role of the cupids,
Contribute to the main element of the story implanting in her mind
Jealousy , the tie that binds and binds and binds!
We need not worry about the story hereafter
It'll take care of itself as it proceeds chapter after chapter

The Manswar prince has cropped up with a new scheme
To ally with the Shezade's henchman and form a vicious team
To pose a threat to our leading pair so as to say
How far they would succeed they can't say any day
Part three of the story has started to gain momentum
The readers crack their knuckles, cursing them to fail 'ad infinitum'
The author said that the chapter will be only an interlude
But we see that the coming events are foretold here as a prelude!


Karkuzhali.


Fantastic sachu patti 👏👏👏
So beautifully you penned down entire chapter 😳
Beautiful picture and so apt also😳
Thank you for the treat
Love it

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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Chellam... 😡


Why you are so partial to give all the goods for Villains.. 😡 You're such a devil. . To my horror you gave Durga alike wife to that swine... as if that's not enough... to my horror-est horror she's not arrogant who torture her husband every minute but she is kind of lady who worship husband as god. Huh?? 😡 😡 And there that swine enjoying his new married life here my hero and heroine barely even met once. 😡 😡 Why Chellam Why? 😡 And now that swine is going to renew his friendship with Khalil where here Akbar the chief of intelligence doesn't even know that one kind of swine is still sneakily behind him. 😡 😡


Okay enough that swine... 😈 Let's move to Parnagarh... The race.. The race of minds... The race of hearts... The race of game!! ❤️ My darling Bahadur.. ❤️ You're anything but Pet... ❤️ My heart goes to you.. Hope you're okay.. 😭 Take care my darling.. ❤️ You're the star of the show. ⭐️


Come to Sufi.. OMG! how beautiful you 're.. And the way you're moving... yes SO POETIC. No wonder Baisa and Khan Sahib got attracted towards you. ❤️ Thanks for the sneak peek of Khan Sahib's handsome feature as mounter.. 😳 So loving you.. but still I'm partial towards Bahadur... He's my darling.. 😳


And most important thing is who are those MAIDS?? 😡 Newly appointed.. how come they got appointed in Khan Sahib's stable.. that too females?? 😡😡 I doubt their intention from the start.. They Mahendar or Khalil spies? 😡😡 How dare.. eyeing Khan Sahib that too in front of Heera?? 😡 😡 Wait.. Wait... Hey are they Lana and Anindita?? OMG!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 Well I spare them because they successful in bringing green monster in Heera.. 😳


And I'm happy I'm in successful in bringing Sahiba out of her champers to the race.. I know you're wondering what? 😲 If you forgot I kindly reminding that I'm in Bindiya disguise spying Heera and Khan Sahib. Well though I do all sort of dramas but the truth is I would like to loose any number of bet just for them..



Uffo... Heera and Khan Sahib.. ❤️ If their eye games only making me fly up and up.. so high I wonder what will happen to me when they mutually in love so close.. their passion.. their romance... OMG.. I'll be dead. 🤢 😆


Well I spare you for that swine partiality just because of this heart beat racing game.. 😡 😆



Your suda suda review is a treat ⭐️
Those two were Lana di and Anandita di🤣... Even I was thinking of you when Bindiya lost the bet... 😆
So I got this for you 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Chapter 34.

'That snowy white... and that chestnut brown...' she murmured, leaning over the boundary for a better glimpse 'those two are Arabian racehorses... aren't they?'

'I... I... am not sure, baisa...'

'I... I think so...'


'Yes baisa...'

Two ladies approached her from a crowd standing close by

'They both are purebred Arabian racehorses...'


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Beautiful ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: binduprasad41


Seriously lana di
Hey bhagwan 😆😆😆

🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What a chapter, Lashy Sahiba! 👏👏 Uff..I felt I was also there among the audience watching and cheering! 😆
Was worried for Bahadur.. Thank God, he's fine!

Will add more, later!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Congratulations for the new thread! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 34.



The story goes thus...

The much awaited update brought us a sort of respite,
After the grand wedding ceremony that had so much to excite
Away from the routine and unique for the pair it may sound
The cupids find a place in the horse-training ground
He trains his horses to make them ready for the race
She watches him with admiration evident on her face
She returns his "adaab" with a "Thank you" nod
Her first acknowledgement to her husband without any prod

The author's description of the scene is a visual treat
Should be read multiple times to savour her feat
The very minor characters, the couple of stable maids
How innocently they play the role of the cupids,
Contribute to the main element of the story implanting in her mind
Jealousy , the tie that binds and binds and binds!
We need not worry about the story hereafter
It'll take care of itself as it proceeds chapter after chapter

The Manswar prince has cropped up with a new scheme
To ally with the Shezade's henchman and form a vicious team
To pose a threat to our leading pair so as to say
How far they would succeed they can't say any day
Part three of the story has started to gain momentum
The readers crack their knuckles, cursing them to fail 'ad infinitum'
The author said that the chapter will be only an interlude
But we see that the coming events are foretold here as a prelude!


Karkuzhali.


This is beyond beautiful, beyond creative and beyond fantastic, this is unique!

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