AKDHA OS...The YEARNING of the moment UPDATED!!

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avishimishra

@avishimishra

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Very emotional & sad is.thanx Di for pm

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Duha Saad

@duhasaad

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

I read this story idea before
But never read it this way
It's just awesome and so emotional
Really loved your way on telling it
It's really amazing
Loved it

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avishimishra

@avishimishra

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Chandrima Di it is heart wrenching is.all will cry like me when they read it.please give lovey dovey story.

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: avishi467
Chandrima Di it is heart wrenching is.all will cry like me when they read it.please give lovey dovey story.

to write lovy dovy story i need ideas...which i coudnt find...waise v ajkal pyaar kam love hota hai...chamanni jaisa ya to fir one night stand aise pyar kaha se nikalu avishi...
dekhti hu kuch mil jaye to likhungi

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Emotional one... But could not like Jalal's character from first to last. Feel like slapping him 😡

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Vrinda

@--Vrinda--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

This os is so painfull 😭
first Divorse thing then Jodha leaving jalal n Salim all alone 😭
Y u write this all painful, I was expecting a very Happy wali ending 😭

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

It was a heartbreaking story!😭

Jodha was the ideal wife but Jalal realized it too late.

Thank you Chandrima for giving us this OS! 👏

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
This os is so painfull 😭
first Divorse thing then Jodha leaving jalal n Salim all alone 😭
Y u write this all painful, I was expecting a very Happy wali ending 😭

KYA KARU O LADIES MAIN HU ADAT SE MAJBUR... 😆

yeh to emotional tha ok bt or kab emotional likhha maine

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti
Emotional one... But could not like Jalal's character from first to last. Feel like slapping him😡

evn i want to slap bt kambakh character h so bach gaya 😆

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

It was a heartbreaking
story!😭

Jodha was the ideal
wife but Jalal realized it too late.

Thank you Chandrima
for giving us this OS!👏

its my pleasure that u like it...emotions are our thread of life if one cut all are came one by another