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CHAPTER 24



Jodha running to jalal side and hug Jalal tightly.Jalal also reciprocate her hug and how he deney his love voluntary come to his arms.

Jodha: Sry Jalal plz forgive me ,I took decision like stupid with crying face.

Jalal remembered she had serious condition in icu- .his body became stiffened and stay away from her hug.

Jodha: Jalal with moist eyes

Dadi, Mir ,Zoya come to hall.

Jalal: Dadi we need go to our mansion.so pack ur everything said with straight face.

Jodha mind: Jalal plz talk directly instead of using Dadi name with cute face look to Jalal.

Jalal: Dadi I am saying why still standing infornt of me with angry glare look at jo.

Dadi: Jalal beta u want say anything to Jodha say directly her not using my name with attitude voice

Jodha: Dadi iam not come with ur mansion.

Jalal glare to Jodha and but Jodha not stopped her bak bak

Jodha: My husband not talk with me.why I come to ur house.my Jalal call me Jo...with his loving voice.otherwise iam not come with u Dadi with dramatic ways

Dadi rolled her eyes mindthought: dramabazz

Zoya and Mir enjoyed both Jalal and jo silly fight.

Jalal tried say something and rajaram voice intrepet.

Rajaram: Obviously princess u not stay in mohammed mansion with serious face.

Jodha face fell down and everyone shocked mainly Jalal.

Dadi : Rajaram beta I thought u accepted their marriage but why not allow Jodha .

Rajaram: Maaji I accept their marriage.but Jalal and jodha marriage not happened in proper tradition. So I thought we will arrange our children marriage soon.until their marriage Jodha will stay with us.

Jalal: But uncle we already married..

Rajaram: Jalal beta , Jodha my first child.i want to see my child marriage.plz beta accept my wish

Jalal half heartely accepted his decision and went out with angry face even though not forgot angry glare to Jodha.she reply puppy look to jalal.

Jodha mind voice: Jodha ur stupid, Jalal said that time u packed ur things this cannot happened.papa not dined go to Mohammed Mansion.Jalal already angry with me.now iam stay away from him until our marriage.hey babaji plz help ur favourite child.

Jalal mind thought: Jodha what I will do with u, I don't know. yeah I angry with u even I angry with my self.insake of me, u attempt suicide. My ego not accept ur stupid decision.my heart said run to ur Jo but my mind said stay away from u.even u also think I give u punishment but ur punishment hurt me more than u.in these 2 days iam not spoke with u.it became hell for me.now ur stupid argues ,uncle decided stay away from u until our marriage.i am not forgive u , Jodha .

*****

Asad car:

Choti head placed to janumaa.one side her tears flowing like river floating. Janu caring her lovingly even her eyes also moist.janumaa thinking if Dilshad ji separated choti from me.

Choti closed her eyes remember horrible past.

Ahmed khan family very traditional,good name in society but they thought only boys heir of family not girls.Rasid and Dilshad Ahmed khan one only son is Asad Ahmed khan .he age of 5.Dilshad give birth to Samira Ahmed khan ( choti). Rasid not like Dilshad gave birth to girl child.he not care about Samira baby.Samira scared infront of her dad.even she not call him to father infront of him.she not get any father love .but Asad love her princess so much. Samira is Asad life.

Samira age 5 ,Asad 10

Samira placed her head in his lap: bhai why papa not speak with me even he not play with me.

Asad : ragumaa,sweety ur bhai with u.u don't need anyone love with caring her hair softly.

Samira:papa said iam bad omen for him.if I will go out from our house ,he will become happy with moist eyes.

Asad cupped her cheeks: don't say once again ,u will go away from me.ur my life sweety.ur bhai nothing without u.

Samira: I love u bhai.u not leave my hand right

Asad: I am not leave ur hand until my last breathe.

Years also moving like clouds moving.Samira now 9 yrs old and Asad 14 yrs old.

Rasid joined Asad to boarding school.poor Samira baby alone in mansion.Dilshad love her daughter obviously she is her mother.she love her own blood but she never against her husband word.

Asad admitted in boarding school hospital because he have high fever . He is serious condition like bed death condition .everyone went to seeing Asad.

Rasid trust his Ahmed khan guruji word blindly.so he is going to meet guruji in ashramam.

Guruji: I know Rasid u come to see me.ur son life is danger with polite voice.

Rasid : ha guruji plz save my child.he only heir of my family.

Guruji: I already told send ur daughter to any orphan.she is not good for ur house especially Asad.if she stay with Asad definetly Asad go away from us permanently in this world.if u want then keep ur daughter with u with warning tone

Rasid :nahi guruji, I need my son.

Guruji: hmm go join ur daughter to any orphan.

Rasid : ok guruji I will do

****

Hospital

Rasid told guruji words and his decision to Dilshad

Dilshad:she also our daughter.how will u do with her.she is not orphan to join any orphanage with slow and crying voice.

Rasid : I want my son safety other than iam not think anyone with angry pitch voice.

Samira heared her parents conversation.her little souls shattered her parents don't want her in their life.

Choti enter Asad room and Asad laid to bed in unconuious state.Samira hold Asad hand.

Choti/Samira: bhai,wake up in ur sleep.everyone want me separated from u with crying face

Asad heart beat raised and his body jumped in bed and choti panicked seeing his condition.doctor treat Asad and after minute Asad come to normal condition.

Rasid : Dilshad u seeing ur own eyes right .she enter Asad room .he become more critical.if she stay with him.my son not alive.he will die soon

Samira run to Asad room : bhai I will go away from u after that nothing happened to u.i love u bhai ...kissed his forehead ...eventhough he is in unconscious state but tears flow in his Asad s eyes .

Rasid joined Samira in orphanage but first dilshad not accept his husband decision.she never raise her voice infront of her husband right . she cried thinking for her fate.

****

( guys I am not trust this type stupid thought one person birth is bad omen to other person life how it is possible and girl not weak compare to boys.why some people not understand.boys only heir of family.. now girls changed their thought but some villages this issues going on even cities life also woman dominated by parent ,husband and law house ...some ladies not raise her voice infront of husband even he is wrong...hmm our society need to change or women need to change...)

Samira scared more.everytime Asad protected her but now her bhai not with her.

Samira crying face: Bhai iam scared plz come to me..where r u bhai...

Warden: When day u came this place that day itself u did only crying.. .shut ur mouth otherwise I will lock u in dark room with shout angry voice

Samira stop her cry but sobbing silently.

Ahmed mansion

Asad parents bring Asad to mansion.

Asad eyes searching his jaan.he missing his jaan so much.

Asad: Maa where is my sam

Dilshad: Wow Asad ..tears flowing in her eyes.

Asad: Why u crying maa.where is my Samira maa with worried voice

Dilshad : Ur papa joined our Samira to orphanage.she narrated everything to Asad

Asad disgusting look to his maa.

Dilshad : Asad beta

Asad : Don't call my name in ur mouth.todayitself I have noone in my life except my sam...my Samira and went to his room.

Asad hold Samira photo in his hand: Where r u sam...ur bhai leave ur hand..iam not good brother.I will find u soon dear and hug Samira photo tightly slept.

Orphanage

Warden really bad character.he misbehaved with many girls chidren.his lusty eyes fallen to choti.

One day morning time

Warden: Samira come to store room

Samira enter store room .it is dark place.warden hugged Samira in lusty ways.poor soul tried relief from monster grip but her weak body not allow to help.

Samira shout: Bhai...save me...continuously.

Warden close her mouth and samira bite his hand.he remove his hand that second choti opened store room door but that monster caught her..once again she shout..

One girl hearing choti voice ,enter the store room and seeing monster tried misbehave with little girl.

Girl anger raised and her eyes caught one iron rod and pick up the rod quickly beat that monster.

Thud..heavy sound

Girl beat warden head through rod.warden tried caught girl timegod he faint to ground.

Girl hugged Samira but Samira tried remove her hug because she thinking monster once again her molest.girl understand Samira fear.she consoled and cupped her cheeks.

Samira looking girl face and girl give little smiled to Samira.

Girl: Choti...lets go outside.

Samira heart said she stay in safe hand and Samira hugged girl tightly.

Girl: Noone touch u dear.

Samira remember Asad face to girl face.she sobbed in her shoulder.

Outside

Lady: Jodha beta where u went..i searching everywhere and whose is this child. With caring voice

Yeah girl none other our Jodha.and Jodha narrated everything to janumaa.

Janumaa eyes moist hearing, in this age she faced big problem

Janumaa hugged Samira tightly and kissed her forehead and Samira fear reduced .

Rajaram paa arrested warden.ragupaa come to inspection for orphanage in north India side.he specifically appointed for inspection from government.time god he bring Jodha and janumaa to orphange.Jodha saved choti from monster.

That night janumaa, Rajaram and Jodha stayed in orphanage.Samira not leave Jodha hand even single minutes.Jodha also have some unknown feeling to her choti.

Rajaram paa kissed Jodha forehead : Good night princess.

Samira remember: She never get father love in her life and she moist eyes look at their bonding

Papa kissed Samira forehead: Good night little princess.

Samira: U call me princess with cute voice

Papa placed Samira to his lap: Yes princess, why u asking dear.

Samira: My father never called me to princess.I thought every father like him father not love girl child.but uncle u love di so much with moist eyes.

Janu, Rajaram understand how much she faced problem in her life

Jodha: Choti, call him to papa not uncle

Rajaram caring her hairs lovingly: Yes princess call me papa.

Samira hugged papa tightly and crying vigrously

Janumaa: Why u both make my child to cry.this is not fairs my child not hug me but hug her papa.

Samira hugged janumaaa: Maa...

Janumaa: Princess ur maa with u, don't cry beta.

Janu telling fariy tale stories to Samira.

Samira: Maa angel meaning kya hai

Janumaa: Angel mean whenever u have problem she come to save u.she give u every happiness.

Samira: Like di.she only save me and give me papa and maa.di my angel.

****

Next day news published in paper.

Asad saw Samira photos in newspapers and Amir kaka helped Asad come to orphanage.

Rajaram, janumaa and Jodha packed their things.

Samira: U leave me alone in this place with crying voice

Jodha: My choti come with her di.iam right papa.

Janumaa and Rajaram nods their heads..

Asad come to orphanage and seeing choti with Jodha .

Asad: Sam with moist eyes

Samira saw her bhai and run to hug him tightly and she cried so much.

Asad: jaan, don't cry beta ur bhai with u.

Samira remembered her parents word.she is not good for Asad.she step back away from Asad

Asad: sam, what happened why u going back..

Samira go hug to janumaa and janu seeing Asad crying and worried face.

Rajaram: who r u beta

Asad narrates everything about her,parent joined her to orphanage.janu,Jodha eyes moist

Asad: Sam, lets go our home.

Samira nods her head negatively: iam not come with u bhai.i stay with di.

Asad hurts his jaan words and cursing his parents.

Rajaram understand both situation: Asad beta,u trust me

Asad: yes uncle I trust u.u save my sister life.

Rajaram: then allow ur sister with us. I adopt Samira legally

Asad: but uncle..she is my sister

Rajaram: ur little boy.now u not face this cruel world.if once again ur parents join Samira to any orphanage.what u will do.yesterday itself she is my younger daughter.

Asad : ok uncle but...

Rajaram give phone number and address to Asad:whenever u want to speak choti call this number.

Choti: bhai promise me u not go away from ur parents.

Asad: ur parents with sad voice.

Choti: yes there are not my parents with painful voice..i got my family bhai..with small smile appeared in her face

Jodha: bhai, I will take care my choti and iam also ur sister right.

Asad nods his head ,Jodha family come back to Chennai.

Samira Ahmed khan name changed to Shivanya Rajaram. Choti more depressed so she got panicked attack in night time.Jodha parent taken to doctor.she take medication ..after some years doctor stopped medication.choti avoid Asad call but Jodha close with Asad. Asad come Chennai and spent time with Jodha and her parents.but choti away from him.Asad got his new family...

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Janumaa: choti stop ur crying session.

Asad wiped his own tears: she is crying baby maa.she only know crying with teasing tone

Choti glare to Asad: I tell angel ,u call me crying baby.she will beat u

Salima: bhai,iam hungry...plz drive fast.

everyone giggled looking Salima face

Janumaa: choti don't say anything to Jodha.she became upset.

next day morning

Jodha enter Mohammed Mansion and Dadi sit in sofa reading newspaper.

Jodha: Dadi...

Dadi: Jodha beta,early morning what r doing here with surprised face

Jodha pout: Dadi,why iam not come to mansion

Dadi:nahi beta ur papa allow to Mohammed Mansion with doubting face.

Jodha:papa said not stay in Mohammed Mansion but don't enter in Mohammed Mansion he never said , Dadi now What r doing my angry husband.

Dadi: obviously what he will do in this time.exercise..go see ur angry hubby with teasing tone

Jodha went to Jalal taichai ( martial arts ) room and Jalal practice tia chai with bare chest

Jodha drooling Jalal hided behind in curtain & Jodha heart beat raised seeing in his handsome body: hey babaji why u give him manly body.every girls drooling and running behind him

Jalal sensed someone looking to him and Jalal pulled Jodha hand and Jodha fallen Jalal bare chest.Jalal and jo starring each other.

Ram singh disturbed love birds:Jodha baby when u return back

Jalal leave her hand: Ram singh what r doing here

Ram singh: Jalal sir ur juice

Jalal:Ram singh, u said iam not come to ur house right then why u came today with harsh voice

Jodha pout look to Jalal and Jalal glare to Jodha

Ram singh: when I said Jalal sir

Jalal: Ram singh...and went to his room with angry face.

******

Jodha placed Jalal dress ,wallet,watch arranged neatly in bed.Jalal come out after shower .

Jodha smiled Jalal but Jalal get another dress went out his washroom back.

Jodha : hey babaji see ,how much he showing his attitude with me

*****

Dinning table

Dadi ,Mir,Zoya and Jalal sit in dinning table.Jodha served breakfast to Mir and Zoya.Jodha tried serve Jalal and Jalal snatched bowl from Jodha hand and served himself.

Jodha face fell down.everyone feel bad for Jodha.

Dadi: Jalal beta,don't do with Jodha..see her face she become sad.

Jalal get up to dinning table and went out immediately.

Jodha go inside and Dadi stopped Jodha beta

Dadi: Jodha beta where r u going

Jodha: kitchen Dadi maa ,my hubby not have any breakfast so I will go to pack his breakfast and then go to my office.

Zoya: u not angry with bhai.

Jodha: no ...but he will face my sherni avatar in future soon with warning tone

Mir: I drop u bhabhi

Dadi: Jodha don't do any drama in office .Jalal not tolerate anyone do anything to his office.

Jodha: I will handle him Dadi .i know how to pacify my jalal with smiling face

Zoya: but bhabhi now bhai is not Jalal .he is JMK .noone pacify JMK anger

Jodha: he is Just JMK but iam Jodha Jalal mohammed Khan with proud voice



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Mir:Dadi, where is Bhabhi..

Dadi: I don't know she said that she change her dress ..come soon

Jodha: Iam here Mir.

Dadi,Zoya and Mir stunned seeing Jodha..

Mir: She is so h..

Dadi: Hot..

Zoya: Sexy..

Dadi,Mir and Zoya stunned in their place and their mouth open in o shape.

Jodha waving her hand in front of them.

Jodha: Dadi,Zoya,Mir what happened..

Dadi: Ur dress..

Jodha : Yeah I wore black transparent sareee..with naughty face.

Yeah. She wore black saree..her milky body more exposing through transparent cloth .she so hot, sexy in that dress..she wore only mangulsutra and vermilion in her forehead.

Zoya: U want kill bhai in ur new avatar right..with teasing tone

Jodha smiled: Mir, chello..we need go office soon.

Zoya : Jalal bhai..noone save u today..

Dadi nods her head: ha Zoya now Mohammed tag bow bend in front of his wife with smirked face

Mir nods his head like scapegoat..

Jodha ( mind): Iam coming office..Mr. Mohammed...now am i seeing how u avoid me...with naughty face.

Mir car enter kc and Jodha step down .she pickup lunch bag but Mir denied.

Mir: Don't touch JB..i will bring ..ur great Jalal Mohammed khan ka wife.

Jodha: But ..

Mir: Ok guards will bring it..

Jodha smiled enter office entrance..everyone eyes shift to Jodha..

Gents drooling her openly..and ladies jealously seeing her beauty

Abdul enter Jalal cabin with shocking face.

Jalal: Abdul what happened why u shocked..

Abdul ka favourite laugh:: Outside..Jodha...

Jalal: Jodha...Jalal went outside.. every staff look one side...Jalal seeing Jodha...and Jodha noticed Jalal saw her.

Jalal openly drooling her ..Jodha smirked seeing Jalal state..

Staff: She is so hot..,

Staff: Sexy...noone stand in front of her beauty.

Jalal hearing his staff every word, his angry raised...

Jalal shout: Enough ,What hell is going on...why everyone standing like statue..go to ur work otherwise I will throw out everyone from my office..

Jalal roaring and employees .running to their seat...Jalal angry glared to Jodha...went inside to cabin.

Mir murmuring Jodha ear: Bhabhi now u face valcano..

Jodha: Lets see who's volcano Mir with smirked face.

Jalal cabin

Jalal : Why she wore transparent dress..everyone looking her only...

( Jalalji u also...drooling her openly)

Mir, Jodha and Abdul enter Jalal cabin..and guard bring Jalal breakfast placed his private cabin..went out

Jodha gestured Mir and Abdul..go out

Both nods their heads and went out with naughty face.

Jodha:Jalal...with sweet seducing voice.

Jalal turned once again mesmerized her beauty..Jodha's leg moves forward to Jalal side..

Jodha touched Jalal cheek and Jalal feel her soft touch with closed eyes..

Jodha close to his ear...with slow voice: Jalal with seduce voice.

Jalal: Hmmm

Jodha giggled looking Jalal state..and msk back in sake of hearing her giggle..

Jalal stay away from her..and Jodha puppy look to Jalal.

Jalal want eat her raw seeing her cute puppy face...but his ego stopped his wish.

Jodha: Jalal talk with me plz...

Jalal ( mind): she want kill me in her dress ,why she wored this type of dress..i have only right to see her.u do everything but I don't talk with u..u need manoify JMK not ur Jalal..i will enjoy ur every antics..i love too play with u Jo..but this not mean I will forgive u , u deserve punishment .i will give in JMK style.

Jodha: Jalal u not talk with me..ok no problem..but have ur breakfast with sad face

Jalal silent

Jodha: ok then I dont have my breakfast..i become hungry..then I will faint ..u only bring whole doctor in MOHAMMED industries..with dramatic ways

Jalal angry glare to Jodha & shout: poen

Poen enter Jalal cabin with shivering leg: ji sir

Jalal: arrange my breakfast in my private room

Poen: ok sir..he arranged his breakfast and went out..

Private room

Jalaleet sitting opposite each other..Jalal placed plate infront of Jodha.

Jodha : iam ur wife..u first eat and then I will eat my breakfast

Jalal rolled his eyes and feed her with his own hand

Jodha pout face but enjoy her Jalal feeding like mom feeding child.

Jodha also reciprocate feed him but he denied after he accept otherwise his sherni not have her breakfast.important thing Jalal not talk with her.

***

Jodha cabin

Jodha thinking how to maniofy his sweet hubby and Mir enter Jodha cabin with some parcel

Mir: GB what u thinking

Jodha: How to snatch Mohammed tag from ur bhai

Mir: Dont forgot Bhabhi u also Mohammed.

Jodha pointed to parcel: What is this

Mir: Oh i forgot, parcel send by ur sweet hubby.

Jodha open parcel and seeing ankarli suit.dress is fullhanded and closed neck collar.nobody see any part of her body except her face and foot.

Mir laughed: Bhabhi see how much he possessive about u..plz change this dress soon.otherwise

Jodha : Otherwise he will shift whole gents staff to any island

Mir: Ha Bhabhi even he will shift me too any island..i dont want go away anywhere with dramatic tone.

***

Jodha changed her dress and come outside her cabin.every girl staff surrounded her

Staff: Time god u change ur dress..but this dress also ur hot...ur hubby is lucky got u

Jodha: Oh di why u teasing me

Staff: our hotty boss also drooling u with teasing tone

Jodha: Chup karo.iam already married with remember jalal drooling her automatically cheeks change to little pink.

Staff: Before u didn't wore any marriage sign but suddenly u said u already married.hmm when u introduce ur husband to us.

Jodha: U will get marriage reception invitation soon di...

Staff:tell me about ur hubby.

Jodha: He is good heart person, he love me so much.he can't live without with me with little blushing face

Staff: God bless u dear...ok chello everyone go to ur work

****

Mohammed Mansion

Zoya: bhabhi ,u planned failed then what next u will do

Jodha pout face: let me think

Mir: don't worry bhabhi ,we always support u.

Salima:Jodha think soon,we will go back to farmhouse otherwise Papa angry with us.

Choti: ha angel,I don't want see angry papa once again.

Jodha: I already informed papa..we will come late to farmhouse,please yaar give me any idea

Mir:accident drama

Girls angry glare to Mir

Jodha: ur brain is working or not.he already angry because of saw my health condition in icu and now once again accident drama..he never talk with me in his life time.even I also doubt really u r JMK brother

Mir pout: bhabhi ,u also

Choti: di I already told him.i doubt about he is Jalal jiju brother with laughing voice

Mir: hey moti, shut up

Choti: u call me moti,u duffer, I don't leave u

Jodha: both stop ur fighting with little angry voice

Mir and choti: sorry

Choti: angel what about potassium,iodine,double sulphur

Salima and Zoya: what potassium,iodine,double sulphur with confused face

Mir: hey choti, u know about meaning of this with shocked face and eyes popped out.

Choti: why boys only talked with code word ,girls also know very well code word with pride voice

Salima and Zoya: first tell us ,what is meaning of potassium,iodine double sulphur with innocent face.

Choti said meaning of code word to girls.and girls smiled sheepishly

Choti: u both already in love.but both don't know anything..my poor bhai and jiju.

Jodha: iam poor one .ur Jalal jiju also don't know anything about romance.he romance only with his laptop with irriating face.i handle him my ways..everyone go out..leave me alone some time..

Choti: di we help u

Jodha: oh sweety ,I know u all helped me so much,now everyone go out my room with angry face

Everyone went out Jodha room and poor soul slept in chair.Jalal enter Jodha room.Jalal looking his angel sleeping in chair and her hair disturbed in her sleep.Jalal slowly removed her hairs in her face.Jalal carrying her hairs lovingly.

Jalal pickup Jodha in his arms and placed Jodha in her bed without disturbing her sleep.

Jalal: Jo,I love u so much.ur every antics fallen love with u every second.

Jodha hold Jalal hand tightly in her sleep and placed her head in his hand.Jalal smiled

Jalal: u growing girl but behave like baby.today how much iam happy and jealous.everyone prasing ur beauty iam happy I got angel from my life but jealous .everyone drooling u.why u did it ,u know very well .iam very possessive about u.u r mine .noone seeing u like dreamy ways.once again u wear this type dress infront of others.i will kidnap u.after that no one seeing u.i will lock u in room.

Jodha: I already locked in ur heart Jalal with murmuring voice

Jalal looking her face but she sleeping peacefully.Jalal kissed her forehead and cover blanket properly and went out.

Jodha open her eyes: I love u meri jaan..

******

Night time

Jalal enter his room and already his dress placed in his bed neatly .Jalal seeing white shirt and jeans place rather than his vest and track and above dress placed one letter with rose.

Jalal reading letter

Jalal , iam waiting for u jaan like lotus waiting for sunlight.ur my sun.moon depending sunlight like i depending ur love . ur my strength, everything. Please come to our favourite place.

With love lot of kisses

Yours Jo

Lipsticks mark

Jalal smiled: Jo.now what she will do with me

Jalal come to garden and totally dark place..

Voice: Jalal clap ur hands

Jalal seeing there and here but Jodha not in front of him

Voice: Jalal do what iam saying.

Jalal clapped his hand and light on one by one. ( clapping lights) garden become more beautiful insake of lighting arrangement and candle.one side table arranged.Jalal smiled

Jodha: come to open ur gifts.

Jalal (mind): gifts with confused face

Jodha : ha gifts ,open first .i already placed dinning table.unwrapped ur gift.

Jalal unwrapped first gift: goggles.

Jodha: u love collect goggles but plz don't wore infront of me.u hided ur pain and tears behind ur goggle.whenever I next with u ,don't need wore to goggle.everytime I want see ur browny eyes.ur eyes showing me how much u love with me.

Jalal become emotional (mind): u understand me very well then why u attempt suicide Jo

Jodha caught his mindthought: sry Jalal I took wrong decision.but plz forgive me.i cannot imagine without u.sry jaan .ok open next gift (wipes her tears )

Jalal heavy heartely opened next gift: rolex watch and ur Jo waiting for u , sound come from watch.

Jodha: this watch remember u ,u wife waiting for u.every one hour u hear my voice from this watch.

Jalal tied watch in his wrist and opened next gift: candle

Jodha: candle is best example of sacrifice..u like candle .how u sacrifice ur life to our family...I proudly said iam ur wife.

Jalal smiled and opened next gift: beautiful flowers

Jalal ( mind): I don't like flowers

Jodha: I know u don't like flowers.pls smell flowers fragrance.u forgot ur work tension.

Jalal smirked face (mind ) : this flowers fraganace nothing infront ur natural smell jo and opened next gift: photo frame

photo frame one side Jalal attached and other side Jodha photo attached and middle of photo blank frame...

Jalal: blank frame

Jodha: hmm in future our baby photo will attach with blushing voice

Jalal naughty face: our baby

Jodha blushed : plz open next gifts

Jalal opened next gift : family album...Jalal photo with Dadi,dadaji, Zoya ,Mir .childhood memories,college photos,Jalal ka childhood photos.

Jalal: how she got it everything. Till now I don't see my childhood photos with surprised face.

Jodha touched Jalal shoulder and Jalal looking Jodha .

Sharp 12 clock

Jodha: Happy birthday Jalal

Jalal eyes his moist and remember today is birthday..he never celebrate his birthday

Jodha with worried voice: plz Jalal talk with me.its killing me..i will die..Jalal placed his finger in her lips

Jalal kneel down :Plz Jo don't say once again that word.u only bring back colour in my life.ur my angel Jo.i cannot live without u.

Jodha tears flowing in her eyes and Jalal continues

Jalal hug her waist: after I saw my soul danger in ICU..i shattered fully.u r my life, Jo.first my mother went away from me..she died in accident even though I did not remember her face .i have only her chain with me.but she talk with me in my dreams.i never see her face.next my father ,in my teen age he run away from mansion.i never got my father love.i don't know he is alive or not.and Ayesha, she is my stepmom.everytime taunting my father.i never call her mom.she never give me mother love to me even with her own children.after my grand father died I handle our business..first its difficult task for me..i managed my studies,business and siblings..my pari and Mir .they r not my sibling..they are my children.i gave every love to them.my Dadi is my backbone.if she is not ..i am not stand infront of u

Jodha kneel down and cupped his cheeks and removes his tears and hugs Jalal tightly.Jalal hugged her like crying baby hug his mom.

Jodha: today ur birthday chandra. With teasing tone

Jalal comeout from hug : don't call me chandra with cute angry face.

Jodha : chandra with smirked face

Jalal: Jo with grinned teeth..

Jodha:chandra means moon.in ur college every girls called u Chandra right..every girls admiring and drooling ur attractive face like everyone attractive moon beauty.

Jalal chuckled: plz Jo don't call me chandra

Jodha:what about Romeo

Jalal: Jo don't tease me.

Jodha: arrrhey..rabba when I teasing u ..i telling ur nicknames JJ with naughty tone

Jalal: now JJ...with angry face

Jodha pinched his both cheeks: JJ means jodha ki jaan not Jalal jiju with blushing face.

Jalal kissed her forehead and dragged her to Jalal private room.

Room fully aroma candles and Jodha surprised ,seeing room

Jodha: Jalal

Jalal opened wall screen.and Jodha shocked even surprised seeing her photo in wall.



Jodha: Jalal ,u draw my picture..it beautiful, Jalal

Jalal: u remember our marriage day, u looking me emotionally with moist eyes..i never forgot ur look ,misht

Jodha: other photos how u draw without me

Jalal: ur images in my heart Jodha,i closed my eyes, I saw ur face only..u liked my gift Jo

Jodha: I love it Jalal but gift

Jalal smiled: Happy anniversary Jo,this is our 5th month wedding anniversary.

Jodha: yes, today our 5th month anniversary..


Jalal : this drawing

(all sketches i got from google..it really wonderful sketches..i dont know whose draw this amazing sketches thanks ranita ji..pic names mentioned dear 😳)

Jodha : it is more beautiful other than my pictures..u also in this pictures..Jodha without Jalal or Jalal without Jodha both r incomplete.without each other eventhough its drawing .

Jalal and jo hug

Jalal: I love u Jo

Jodha: I love u too Jalal

Jalal pick up Jodha in his arms and comeback to garden .Jalal sit dinning chairs and Jodha go to sit next chairs.but Jalal pulled her and sit her to his lap.sudden pulled and Jo landed to his lap.she cheeks become red

Jalal: Jo,nowdays u blushing so much.i miss my sherni

Jodha glare look to Jalal and Jalal smirked face.

Jalal feeding food to Jodha and Jodha also feeding Jalal...

Jodha : ouch..

Jalal: what happened with worried tone

Jodha: I bite my tongue with puppy face.

Jalal cupped her cheeks with his palm: let see..

Jalal placed his lip to her cheeks.jalal caputured her mouth..he searching sweet nector from her through his tongue.. jo mouning his name

Jalal :shhh I treat ur bite without leave her mouth said..

Jodha stop Jalal with blushing face..

Jalal: oh iam sry Jo, I crossed my limits..with guilty face

Jodha cupped his face: Jalal this is ur right..but we r in garden and more light it make me shying..with blushing face

Jalal smirked face: light is ur problem..Jalal clapped his hand..every light off...now ok Jo..jalal cupped her blushing face

How is our potassium,iodine ,double sulphur with naughty tone

( potassium,iodine,double sulphur nothing KISS. Potassium -K ,Iodine - I ,double sulphur - SS totally KISS)

Jodha opened her mouth o shape and u heared our conversation.

Jalal nods his head : u think iam unromantic person..then u face romeo Mohammed .she already opened her mouth wide this is enough for him..once again he caught her lips...his hand touched remove her saree palloo

Clap sound - Light on...Jalal and jo starring each other with confused face

Akdha: tum with angry face

Ms Fantasy: yes, its me..what happening yaar...with teasing face

Akdha: what r u doing yaar with angry face

Ms Fantasy: only kissy missy u both not have proper marriage..i will write proper SR..after ur traditional marriage, now kiss only permit...with strict face

Akdha face feel down unsion: devil 😡

Ms Fantasy: thank u...now enjoy ur kiss...

bye guys..dont disturb our love birds kiss...remember only kiss..😆😆😆



Part end😉


Precap

Evil gang plan😡

Jodha and family visit in south india😎

Jo kidnap😲

Jalal shattered and crying so much.😭

Asad angry with someone.😡


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Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome chapters Kalpana
first Jalal was still angry with Jodha, he even use dadi in order to communicate with her , but she is not less than him she made him more angry by not accepting to come to his house, but here the surprise was, she was really not going to his house as her parents wants a marriage an big marriage for them, I think this is there right, she there daughter at the same time they need to celebrate her wedding, he left angrily without talking to her but inside him he was suffering, Choti past is so sad, this stupid thoughts of her parents like seriously, but thank god Jodha's family saved her, asad loves her so much.
Jodha came to Jalal's house, but he ignored her and left, and her was her revenge she went to the company with a hot dress, that everyone was drooling her even him, he controlled himself just to tease her, at least she made him feed her, smart girl!!! the gang couldn't help her, but choti could Jodha didn't accept at first but then seems that she accepted
she is a good actor, she acted that she is sleeping, then finally her surprise, Jalal suffered alot in his childhood, that's why he is always scared of losing Jodha just like his parents, he love her too much, he shows her his drawings, and finally the choti code is broke in a kiss
continue soon kalpana, watinnnggg!!!!!
love you!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful part
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
excellent update
omg angry jodha and jalal
so cute
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awsme,fabulous chapter. Firstly jodha jalal cute fight.poor jodha jalal was angry on her.he is right on his place. Jodha wore transparent saree to kill jalal wow.every staff drilled over her.halal possession nice.samira aka choti childhood is very sad & imotional.how can her father did that to her.poor soul suffered a lot but our angel finally save her. Again Asad & choti become close very nice.jodha drilled over his well build body.the last part his birthday celebration was superb. Potassium iodine double sulphur very good.jalal drew jodha sketch.fantasy means u disturbed our Akdha no problem.waiting for their grand marriage & SR.can't wait for next part.so excited. Continue soon.Thank you so much for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing chappy dear frnd
Possessive jalal was amazing
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
Thank u for pm & update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow suprb updt...
mindblowing chptrs..
finally ja man gya...
ohh its jalal birthday...the surprise is tooo gud...
really suorb...
jo is hot..ahhaaa...grt
prevap...oopppss jo kidnap
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Posted: 8 years ago

Unres akka
Amazing chappy Akka
FB is nice
N sad near their thinking
Poor choti
Jo n jalal again marriage
Jo to pacify her hubby
I'm going to read the next one now akka

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