FF:Betrayal***Chapter 9 Updated***

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: kattylovestammy
Hifi dude...pagal ladkiyon ko pagal hi kahega na... Waise main hoon na company dene keliye... So dont worry I will giv u company... Rofl

Thik hai shukriya company ke liye 🤣

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#432

Shelly 🤗

Awesome update dear...

Superb... Loved it. 😊

The frst scen was seriously very funny n *blush * frst I read wrong n I thought Hw come both gt lock I'm same bathroom(bcn I was reading so jaldi jaldi) 🤣 thn I read again thn I gt it okk so thy locked in their own room🤣 But question is really the door jaam or his naughty sisters lock Frm outside 😉 😆 God Ja's sis thy nvr leave any chance to tease thm especially baks... Naughty sis of naughty bro 😉 🤣 thankfully some one was ther to save our dear jo... My cutiepie rahim... Just love him ❤️

JA chest swelled with pride hearing wonderful compliment n seeing her bond with his family good but sadly he HD nothing done due to which jo feel happy n gt proud on her husband...

Well sis r less tht mother too... My poor jo atlast she HD to feed him n gt feed by him... He was soo happy but she can't...

Gud tht hamida saw the difference n I seriously hope she gt to know her son did *angry *

Listening honeymoon ja gt excited n strt planing to Hw to manofy jo... But soon gt jhatka whn jo smartly deny n with disheart hi sahi he too HD to support her... I lik jo here 😉 offcours he shouldn't b forgive soon..

Party part was nice n song is really beautyful n apt to ther situation perfectly... Lovely

But the last scen really angerd me... I dnt know wht he did but I certainly know tht he did wht he shouldn't hd too... Dnt he gt the point that all Tim teasing, smirking, threatening will nt work he shouldn't b rush in fact he should learn to b patience... Tk baby step... Dnt he realise he didn't done mistake he done a grave grave mistake... He just nt broke her heart he broke her heart her trust her pride n most importantly he tried to force her... Did he think all this easily earesed Frm her mind 😡 she is leaving with him in same roof n still quite is a very big thing n he should understand it n b patience 😡 idiot...

Anyway really eagerly waiting for nxt update...

Thank u so much to update dear 😊

Whn last Tim u wrote u dnt know whn u r going to update nxt..or u will even update or nt . I was sad but thank God u updated 😃

Thank u... 😊

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#433

Thank u fr pm 😊

Update nxt soon 😉

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swetiii

@swetiii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#434

Amazing chapter buddy

Loved it

JJ having noke jhoes

Haha

What the hell was he doing in the car

I know it will turn out to be something different all together

Hehe

Jo having second thoughts about her relationship with jalal

Hehe

Update asap please

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: lovespari

Thank u fr pm 😊
Update nxt soon 😉

Really glad u read it di ...thanks a ton 🤗

Will update next week itself

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#436

interesting...why Jalal is playing with fire???

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Duha Saad

@duhasaad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#437

Yuppieee you updated!!!
Finally 😃
The update was fabulous, awesome and lovely 👏 don't know what to say more 😆
I feel bad for Jodha 😕 she do love Jalal but what to do he betrayed her why she don't give him a second chance, ok tbh I'm against second chances but like it's Jalal so 😆 okay back to the update, you know what I like Jalal's family they are just so cute, they keep on teasing and laughing so nice and Jalal's mother this is the best Hamida is so understanding I love her 🤗 Jodha is so rude with Jalal like give him at least a space to speak but no 😡 but she has the right so I'm with her 😆 last scene is awesome but I think Jalal won't hurt her feelings if she isn't ok with what he will do so I don't think he will do anything 😉 now I have to tell you update sooonnn please!!! Don't take so long and update 😆 ok now because I learned how to say my word on Hindi then I will say it on Hindi main tumase pyaar karata hoon, ok it's so long in Hindi but I will say it in hindi from now on 😆 😉

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#438

I don't know what to say but these lovely comments esp from duha, kartu,,musi n Nidhi di is gonna give me sleepless nights...guys will update asap for u people. Love u all🤗

Edited by ParijatDeewani - 8 years ago

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karthika

@kattylovestammy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani
I don't know what to say but these lovely comments esp from duha, kartu,,musi n swara di is gonna give me sleepless nights...guys will update asap for u people. Love u all🤗

oii... If u r not gng to sleep tonight ,don't waste the night... Think abt the plot for ur next update so tat we will get the update soon... Hehe...

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani
I don't know what to say but these lovely comments esp from duha, kartu,,musi n swara di is gonna give me sleepless nights...guys will update asap for u people. Love u all🤗

N me 😭😭

Was my comment nt gud 😭😭