The riddle of death... (end) - Page 57

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Very well written updates... both of them!!!👏I know I am only repeating what the others have already said - but it is the truth - the story IS unfolding beautifully!

Surya had booked ticket in a train of Mumbai departed at 10

He should have left for train much before 10 pm. Then why was he waiting till 12:30?

🤔 Mystery no.1

The girly voice suddenly touch the peak of excitement, stating it clearly that her heart starts beating fast even hearing a small sound from her cool and handsome boss. Jalal enjoys this obviously, any young man would like to cherish the fact that he is the crush of one pretty young girl, and also Jodha's jealousy with Ruqaiya is an entertaining part of his life, but this is surely not a time of joking with Ruqaiya...

Jalal smiled after putting down the mobile. His smile became broader as just by that time another call entered. This time his sweetheart, Jodha.

"It was Ins. Ruqaiya Ahmed, for sure?

"Offf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What an instant deduction!

"Shameless kahika! I will kill you now! Jodha fumed in fake anger.

😲 Jalal is enjoying being such a flirt... oh my God... Jodha has been very kind to him... had it been me, he would've faced the bottom of my heavy handbag!

Jalal tried hard to be serious suppressing his laughter. "Anyways, Ruqaiya was not flirting with me today, neither was I encouraging her. I called her to give her a serious assignment regarding this case.

What does he mean, today? Does that mean there are other days he's encouraged them😡

"First let this murder-case to solve first, then we can go for another murder-case.

😆

"I see! Jodha smiled hopelessly. "Never mind, I am going to search it... that what was the main source of income of this farm under the coverage of legal agricultural farm!

"Great! Jodha's lip bent into sarcasm! "Corruption in the midst of an already corrupted organization...

"So, you think there is another source of income?

🤔 Mystery no.2

How was Surya as a man?

"He was a gentleman sir! He used to handle all the responsibilities of this farm himself on behalf of Rajasahab! He was very decent and soft to all the workers and employees, even he had a good relations with the farmers of the farm. Also Rajasahab used to trust on him...

Though, Jalal was hardly listening to the list of qualities of Surya

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The chamber is a small and stuffy one, sunrays do not come inside though the old window behind the back of the desk, the only source of light is the very old tube light beaming palely on the wall. In this unhealthy place, in an almost damaged system Surya has been working for over 8 years, and was getting more salary than he deserves. The arrangement of the desk itself says Surya was quite an organized man, but very recently something happened with him which had made him very careless about the world around him. Jalal noticed the big copy of employee-records is kept in the place of marketing documents. He remembered, he observed him to be same careless when he had come to see the farm for first time. That day he had his first and last proper conversation with Surya, right in this room.

This is the most beautiful description of a tired cabin/farm dwelling that one can possibly give, stuti.. I could envision the scenario exactly like it was.. 👏

Though Jalal said this jokingly, and that was very clearly visible in his face, yet Surya looked somehow sad, and unmindful too. Meanwhile Jalal's eyes had stuck on the jumbo copy in front of Surya. He was writing something.

Surya comes across as someone who's bored, tired, weighed down by guilt, disappointed with the way his life has been going/is going, and angry with RajaSaheb. He seems to be someone with a lot of regrets - starting right from the fact that he let Jodha go... and obviously, he's not too happy with whatever the grisly happenings in the farm are... and wants away from it!

But tell me one thing, don't you feel bore here? Working in such a place years after years where you have no future... don't you try somewhere else?

"Actually... Surya again became unmindful. "Rajasahab will not let me go so easily...

🤔 Mystery no.3

"Jalal!

"Yeah yeah! Jalal got back his sense with the nudge of Jodha. He looked at the assistant manager again. "When did you see Surya for the last time?

"Yesterday morning sir. He left the office very soon... within 10 am.

"Hmmm... Jalal nodded. "So that time he went to winthdraw money from bank and booking ticket for Mumbai.

🤔 Mystery no.4