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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats 👏 Dr
We'll Modern Akdha Supurb
Continue dr
Update
Thanku too 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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murder start - I like it - Continue - And there is no Jodha in this one ? 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: jayaks02

murder start - I like it - Continue - And there is no Jodha in this one ? 😆


😃 I will wait for your comments here too.😆

Yes obviously Jodha is there. Jalal can't exist without Jodha.😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety992

Congrats 👏 Dr
We'll Modern Akdha Supurb
Continue dr
Update
Thanku too 😊


Thank you dear. Will be waiting for ur comments.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: neepobithi

Feluda is all bengali girls first love.Amaro chilo.But so much so as to have him in your DP and even
start a detective series(eta detective golpo to)😲
Shuru korey dao.


Yes, Feluda is my first crush ( like every bong girl)😉 and nowadays I am revising Feluda and Byomkesh stories. Maybe they are the inspiration of writing this story 😉

But dp te to Byomkesh. Feluda ke dekhacche naki??😕

Yes this is a detective story (kintu thik prodosh mitro noy)😆

Thank you.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Titli_KK3148

You are bored of writing history related stuff?? 😆

Yes dude! 😆
So is this gonna be a different story on the much loved historical characters of jodha and akbar???
Yep completely different and ultra-modern stuff. 🤣
The teaser is quite interesting.. After a long time i was planning to read a JA story, and i got your pm.. So looking forward to read this..
So you are going to read regularly na? 😃 Thank u so so much.🤗
Still have to catch up your Chandni updates.. Quite busy with personal commitments so not finding enough time to read them.. But will definitely comment after reading the chapters..
It's okay dear... but do it soon. 😉

Best wishes and love for you..

Love u too.😳😳


P. S. BTW, your dp is quite good although i am more in love with the character of Feluda and Ray's
storirs than the actor and his movies..

Accha, isn't my dp showing Byomkesh? (Of Abir Chaterjee? 😆 ) I love Byomkesh as well. 😉

Feluda is every Bong girl's first crush/ love.. Isn't it?? ❤️😆

That goes without saying. 😉 Bong girls get to see a ultra smart, handsome and a super cool gentleman in their own Feluda first. 😳

(Waise in our house I am in love with Feluda, whereas my sis has a deep crush on Topshe. Perfect, isn't it? 😆)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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@stuti
Its a fun writing your name.😆. Gives me a feel that i am addressing myself.. 😳
Anyway, i was wrong.. Its byomkesh in your dp.. Abir was supposed to play the next feluda after sabyasachi which got me into thinking that you might be loving the new feluda in him..
And how stupid of me to ignore the specs!!
Specs niye oi serious handsome looks ta sudhui byomkesh er.. Feluda toh specs chara killer looks day..☺️ Two great evergreen characters. Thank god at least one of them preferred to remain a bachelor warna even today i am so reluctant to share him with any female character 😆😆😆

Is your akdha story based on a thriller plot or its gonna be a love story, as usual??
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Titli_KK3148

@stuti

Its a fun writing your name.😆. Gives me a feel that i am addressing myself.. 😳

🤣 🤣

Anyway, i was wrong.. Its byomkesh in your dp.. Abir was supposed to play the next feluda after sabyasachi which got me into thinking that you might be loving the new feluda in him..
And how stupid of me to ignore the specs!!

I thought so. 😆 You know, I like Abir more as Byomkesh but don't like him much as Feluda. 😆 But Mr. Sandip Roy seriously needs to come up with some new Feluda now. 🤔

Specs niye oi serious handsome looks ta sudhui byomkesh er.. Feluda toh specs chara killer looks day..☺️ Two great evergreen characters. Thank god at least one of them preferred to remain a bachelor warna even today i am so reluctant to share him with any female character 😆😆😆

Waise I would not feel bad if Feluda would get a gf. 😆 🤣

Is your akdha story based on a thriller plot or its gonna be a love story, as usual??

It will be a thriller completely. 😃 There is love between leads, but it is not a love-story.
You will understand after I post the introduction part. 😛

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

||Teaser||:


"Tauji!!!!!!!!!!!!" The wailing of Shivani stormed through the corridor and stairs; and they ran towards the source of the voice... Jalal came first, and got the hugest shock of the life! He entered into the room before everyone follows him... Shivani was just in front of the entrance of Bharmal's room, kneeling down with covering eyes with palm and shivering in terror! "Hey Shivani... what happened? What??" Mohini sat beside her and started shaking her. She broke down into wailing in her arms, murmuring same words repeatedly... "Surya Bhaiya... Surya Bhaiya killed him!!"

The next scene inside the room was so unexpected that a current of tremor flowed through everyone's spine... Mr. Bharmal Singh is half-lied on the armchair, with the head tilted at right side as if he is sleeping; and a knife, a handle of knife is peeping out from his chest, while the sharp blade of the knife has pierced in the left of his chest and took out his life!

And Meenakshi is lying unconscious on his feet...



Yes finally... you started another one making it easier for me to follow... a thriller, you say! 😉
I have read another thriller of yours, remember?
Will this be different?
Bharmal is Jo's dad in this? Shuru mein hi usko udaa diyaa 😭 😆

But I have one request - please update regularly 😆 especially thriller... warna the readers (like me with infamous memories) would lose touch with the intricacies of the plot... and how are you going to keep up with 4-5 stories Stuti 😲


Waise, now that I've said this... I still think your best work was the OS you submitted for the OS competition... Tujhse naraaz nahin zindagi...
very matured content, very hatke, contemporary, very Bengali...
you're very good at dealing with unusual emotions... wish you would've continued that one... will this also be in similar vein to that one, but with a thriller as the backdrop? Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls say yes!!! 🤗

All the best dear 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy



Yes finally... you started another one making it easier for me to follow... a thriller, you say! 😉
Yes. 😉 😆
I have read another thriller of yours, remember?
Of-course. 😳
Will this be different?
Yep completely, and I am tensed about it. I don't know if it will go okay or not. 😔 😛
Bharmal is Jo's dad in this? Shuru mein hi usko udaa diyaa 😭 😆

🤣
But I have one request - please update regularly 😆 especially thriller... warna the readers (like me with infamous memories) would lose touch with the intricacies of the plot... and how are you going to keep up with 4-5 stories Stuti 😲

Actually I start writing when I feel to write any of them. 😆 Nowadays feeling vexed with the running ones so thought to start something different. I will reduce updating the others till this one is running. 😆
I will try update this one in regular interval. 😛

Waise, now that I've said this... I still think your best work was the OS you submitted for the OS competition... Tujhse naraaz nahin zindagi...

😳😳😳

very matured content, very hatke, contemporary, very Bengali...

Very Bengali? 😆
you're very good at dealing with unusual emotions... wish you would've continued that one... will this also be in similar vein to that one, but with a thriller as the backdrop? Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls say yes!!! 🤗

No I don't think I am good enough to write that kind of a deep and different story with a thriller backdrop. 😆 It's very tough to construct a thriller itself. 😕

I really wanted to continue that story too. Even still now I want to start with that particular one after I finish one of my FF completely. 😳

All the best dear 🤗

Thank U! 😃

Edited by Shinning_Stuti - 8 years ago

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