~The Unfathomable Love. ~ part12 updated !(07/01/2018) pg 58 - Page 8

Originally posted by: duhasaad

Awesome part buddy
Loved it

tnx duha..😊

Originally posted by: priyadogra

interesting chapter dear

Hope jo entry will be soon

Update soon and thanks for pm

tnx dear.. well u have to wait a little for Jo's entry coz... suspense.. (Hehehe)

many many many sooo many congratulations my cutie appy for your first story muaaah love you sooo much..

prologue was fantastic sis .. I think everyone misunderstood that Jo is dead right? but can our lover boy jallu can believe on them it's impossible hehe and oh my my jodha have kid wow damn interesting appy and now you are writer too yaaay party hehee.. thank you sooo much cutie for pm and wait for me sooo long . sooo Solly for late appy.. forgive me na iam innocent.. (pout)

hmm appy mind blowing start and all characters are different I like it and ye Kya kitne characters liye hai hehehe naughty.. and woah I don't know it's historical wow now I can't wait iam gonna read your chappies.. thank you sooo much for pm cutie..

chappy 1- wah meri appy Kya starting tha yaar amazing and the song is sooo painfully just like the way jalal is in pain now and you choosed right song nobody can say that you wrote first time iam sooo much happy for you my cutie..I love the song very much I want to listen it and appy you given my jallu a lots of pain in starting na then in future you have to give him more and more romantic scenes ok cause I can't see him sad or crying na you know that cutie btw awesome update muaaah .. thank you sooo much for pm me cutie..

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

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Originally posted by: Naazrt

many many many sooo many congratulations my cutie appy for your first story muaaah love you sooo much..

tnq so much dear..

Originally posted by: Naazrt

prologue was fantastic sis ..I think everyone misunderstood that Jo is dead right? but can our lover boy jallu can believe on them it's impossible hehe and oh my my jodha have kid wow damn interesting appy and now you are writer too yaaay party hehee..thank you sooo much cutie for pm and wait for me sooo long . sooo Solly for late appy..forgive me na iam innocent..(pout)

Tnq dear..may be..yeah ja can Nvr believe it..yep.u vl get party for sure..ya ya u r innocent, I knw u very well..

Originally posted by: Naazrt

hmm appy mind blowing start and all characters are different I like it and ye Kya kitne characters liye hai hehehe naughty..and woah I don't know it's historical wow now I can't wait iam gonna read your chappies..thank you sooo much for pm cutie..

tnx buddy..yea coz I can't introduce them in upcoming parts,it vl waste tym n increase length ..so advanced intro..