NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 24~CHAPTER 29 upd 10th MAR

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

With this build-up and all I'll barely write anything!]

Disclaimer: This emoticon is Chellam's signature find.😆

LOL,are you going to put up this disclaimer every time?🤣

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divya

@diya2291

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Posted: 8 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

by the way it was nice reading ur review here...😳😳

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divya

@diya2291

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Posted: 8 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
@ Divya

Oh, God, Divya! That dancing girl gif sums up your sentiments about C29. Delightful review, dearie! 👏

Thankyou Rose 🤗 rose Call Me Diya 😭

@ Chellam

Awww! Thank you,Sahiba.🤗 🤗 🤗

@ Mitu
Thank you, dearie. 🤗 🤗 🤗

@ Lashy

Glad you had a good time during the Holi party, Lashy dear. Migraine- oh, dear. 😭Have experienced some terrible attacks myself. You should be resting, Sahiba.
Rose... your review was
🤗 🤗 🤗 Thank you, Baisa.
@ Vrinda

Thank you, dear! 🤗 🤗 🤗

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SHIVANGI

@Shivangi28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: lashy

That is the ONLY thing unfortunately our AMK cannot be... 😔

Since NJAPA Jalal was devilish in his mischief (and Jalal in the serial was mischievous too), I wanted the characters here to be different.. and it was a conscious decision to etch this kind of a person... AMK
>>It was just a thought which came to my mind while remembering the movie.😃
It isn't my expectation 😆
>> I've NO issues akka! The way you have portrayed Khan Sahib is BEST in its own way and honestly speaking I don't think A shararati KS will ring the chords of my heart coz He is A Passionate TashanBaaz 😎 and masti won't suit his personality.😆

He is intense and reserved by nature... and such people... even on their happiest days cannot be pranksters... he has softened... love does that to anyone... he smiles now... a day will come when he might laugh too... but cannot change his basic nature into a sharaarati guy, na? [Trust me I've thought about this so much because it makes him all the more difficult to write... ]
>> We trust you like anything !😃 I'll be waiting with all my heart for that day when I'll hear his KHUL KE WALI HASI
Nevertheless, I don't think it would make AMK less interesting than Jalal hai na? He'll have his own style his own tashan to keep him going... like play mind-games with her by stealing her ring... after offering her a business deal in the form of a wedding

>> Less interesting ?!!!! 😲 NO WAYYY... You know I'm already Drowned in his APNA TASHAN from head to heels !! His games, his stealthy acts ( Esp stealing her smiles), his Businessman wala Avtaar...his 'Husky murmer' NOTHING can beat that !
Thank you for making me review all his STARDUM again My pyaari writer by explaining these facts about him! 😳🤗
HAPPY HOLIII

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#275

@ Anusha chitti & Divi

Calloused hands/heart, craving freedom, counting lies... they're all different stages/kinds of emotions the leads are dealing with... thank you so much for picking those parts and elucidating on them 🤗

Originally posted by: Bindu.
Divya and Anusha,
You always have something different to offer, loved ur views on the chapter. Brilliant, as always! 👏👏

Bond... Anusha chitti has a daughter as old as you are... 😆 that's why I call her Anusha chitti (pinni/mausi)

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#276

@ lashy

How feeling now dea.😊 Tc.

Good night 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#277

@ I am feeling much better now, Mitu *mega hugs*

thank you so much for asking

Now that I thought I'd sit down and type some replies... silly IF is giving me trouble... anyone else facing problem or is it with my webbrowser? 😡

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
Wonderful start lashy di with that teaser pic...haye that pic is so good just wish to keep looking at that only...
really? thank you so so so much! 🤗
What a furious start with our furious heera and AMK who is ducking her attacks still worrying about heera this is what true love is, to not think about ourself but about our loved one...😳.
>>>> ☺️
throught the starting part i was imagining the scene...

but heera is holding dagger in place of sword...😳
>>> one of my favourite scenes!
And the way AMK handle angry heera is commendable without even letting a single harm on her...👏
Thanks darling
Like the nobel sppech of AMK : how he stated that he lives simple life and only lady in his love is HEERA' only, love this short and sweet confession...would like to read more HEERA' from AMK'S mouth...and such a sweet romantic movement between the leads which make us too skip our few heat beats reading their chemistry...☺️
Yayyy so you loved that tender/passionate part? Glad to know that... :) (IF is not allowing me to insert smileys so I'm using html format now lol :/)
AMK is a true gentle man who become mansabdar only for heera and her people and now he even said to her that parnagarh will b her's only always...👏...he also try to make heera trust his love by showing his hands which also give noo effect on her
Yes... he tried his best.. :(
and its not her mistake, when her close one has cheated her, how can she even trust him and that too after knowing that he is only the master of khalil...and her all accusation on Ustaad are right and painful too!!!
Yes... he is stuck well and truly... there is a deeper picture but he is not ready to share that now yet... :(
Poor heera who loved AMK get biggest betray of her life from him only, hope AMK understand that and get back heera on his side..and keep her safe by marrying her and that too by her wish..
Yes... he wants best for her *hugs*
But, wait for her wish though? for the wedding? *thinking* We will have to wait and watch
The part------'You men toss a woman around as you please... get rid of us when you have no use for us... claim your right over us, when you need to! The Khalils... the Shehzaades... the Kunwars... the... USTAADS! All the same!' the lady bit down on the sharp sides of her teeth 'After selling me out to your master this way... you take my name with yours in public... announce a wedding in court... how dare you! I am NO slave...----is so painfull if I felt so much pain than what about AMK poor he,paying for his deeds...😭
😭😭
I might fall down but I never give up... even if it HAS been very tempting to do so of late
And the above line show how strong a Heera is, everywomen should be strong like heera to face even bad phase of life strongly...
Yes..we must... but it's easy to write about characters like her than to be like her! *shocked face*
But what is another secret about AMK,will wait for that to reveal and hope heera forgive him istening his sad-sad story...
Which secret dear *Confused*
Oh about him revealing his past... yes... time will tell
Wait!!!what!! chapter finishes so soon!!
Please try to make next chapter long...and thanks for update and pm...
Long? It's 6000 words takes me 15 days to finish these days... lol isse zyaada long people will run away
Love you Vrinda... thanks so much for your sweet supportive words...
Lovely person you are *hugs*

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: lashy
@ I am feeling much better now, Mitu *mega hugs*
thank you so much for asking

🤗

Now that I thought I'd sit down and type some replies... silly IF is giving me trouble... anyone else facing problem or is it with my webbrowser? 😡

>>> It's troubled me in a same way try with another browser sometimes it working 😛

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: Shivangi28
>>It was just a thought which came to my mind while remembering the movie.😃
It isn't my expectation 😆

>>> Oh yes... you know I understood... even when you wrote it... but I was wording my thoughts that's all... because I've imagined how it'd be if there was a shararati hero too... but I somehow like this dude better! 😆

>> I've NO issues akka! The way you have portrayed Khan Sahib is BEST in its own way and honestly speaking I don't think A shararati KS will ring the chords of my heart coz He is A Passionate TashanBaaz 😎 and masti won't suit his personality.😆

>>>> Ring the chords of your heart? Awww loool thanks ☺️

He is intense and reserved by nature... and such people... even on their happiest days cannot be pranksters... he has softened... love does that to anyone... he smiles now... a day will come when he might laugh too... but cannot change his basic nature into a sharaarati guy, na? [Trust me I've thought about this so much because it makes him all the more difficult to write... ]
>> We trust you like anything !😃 I'll be waiting with all my heart for that day when I'll hear his KHUL KE WALI HASI

>>>> hee hee... 😳
Nevertheless, I don't think it would make AMK less interesting than Jalal hai na? He'll have his own style his own tashan to keep him going... like play mind-games with her by stealing her ring... after offering her a business deal in the form of a wedding

>> Less interesting ?!!!! 😲 NO WAYYY... You know I'm already Drowned in his APNA TASHAN from head to heels !! His games, his stealthy acts ( Esp stealing her smiles), his Businessman wala Avtaar...his 'Husky murmer' NOTHING can beat that !
Thank you for making me review all his STARDUM again My pyaari writer by explaining these facts about him! 😳🤗
HAPPY HOLIII

>>>> Shivangi you're an adorable gone-case as they call it... I would love to sit in one of your classes and be one of the primary schoolers you teach 😆
🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: melovesja
It's troubled me in a same way try with another browser sometimes it working 😛

Phew it's working Mitu... am gonna cookly cookly reply to as many replies as I can now 😆