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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#701

Chapter 33

Such a nice person Mirza- best one in this story. Puppet Jalal in hands of Rukaiya😡 He forcefully kissed her😲😡🤢 evil Jalal. Jalal didnt punish Ruka😡 At least a lashing would be nice. Even after the photo thing NO punishment for Ruka by Jalal, NOT FAIR

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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#702

Chapter 34

Ruka ka band baja👏 and its Adham behind it. So wish it was done by Jalal. Why didnt Jalal punish Ruka?😕 Sukanya's engagement with Surya- happy time. Mirza is the true hero for Jodha😎.

But how did Jalal win back Jodha?

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Duha Saad

@duhasaad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#703

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

Chapter 34 


 Ruka ka band baja👏and its Adham behind it. So wish it was done by Jalal. Why didnt Jalal punish Ruka?😕Sukanya's engagement with Surya- happy time. Mirza is the true hero for Jodha😎.
But how did Jalal win back Jodha?

I didn't write about how Jalal win back Jodha
Don't kill me
Btw thank you so much dear your comments on this story was just so needed to me
And you always made me happy so thank you so much
Love you 😳

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Duha Saad

@duhasaad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#704

Thank you guys so much for the lovely comments I really appreciate that, you all made me so happy and proud of myself
Love you all just so so much 😳

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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#705

CHAPTER 35
😲 Adham tortures Ruk, why not Mirza or Jalal? Chalo koi ni kisi ne toh torture kiya😆😆 Selina was involved with Lavania+Adham. Why did Adham get away scott free?😕 Sharif too, sirf bechari Ruk ko kyu punishment mili?So a happy ending😳 thats lovely❤️
Hey Duha, it was a wonderful story and you completed it, is great, because what starts should be ended and thats what makes it complete. Congratulations dear. Best thing is you did in a defined time frame that the story didnt lose grip from readers mind. A commendable job indeed⭐️⭐️⭐️