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Lovely updates dear

Beautiful end to a beautiful story.

Beautiful ending...

Hey... Its so beautiful chappy and the epilogue especially the last part... So emotional... The way he confessed his love again and again through the song.. Wow... And they hav already four kids and she is carrying another.. Wow.. How they r gng to manage them?? Okk its their problem now.. Hehe... Hmm.. And u r so merciful tat even u hav a villain an happy ending... Tats so sweet of u... And all the best for all the couples... They just make a perfect family... I m feeling bit sad tat the story has come to an end but at the same Time happy for u tat u hav completed a story very gracefully... And it was awesome... And eagerly waiting for your new story... Plz update soon... And once again thank you for the amazing story...

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Congratulations on successfully completing the story, Duha! 👍🏼

I thought there were a few more chapters to go but you ended it here. 😊

I hope you have the next story waiting for us. 😃

I love happy endings and your story ended happily for everyone.

If we put all the children together, they can form a football team. 😆

This was really a beautiful story of how love can transform a person.

Not only in Jalal's case , but in Sharif's and Adham's as well.

Thank you for giving us this story, Duha dear! 👏 ❤️ 🤗

Awesome update and epilogue
At last everyone is together
The story showed the power of true love
Their kids were cute
Thanks for pm

nice story

thats one of the nicest story i came across...
very well writen dear..
loved it.
and the last part was awesome..
tnx fr pm :)

Woww superb ending dear
Loved it dear
Happy nd lovely ending
Thxc 4r pm dear