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Vrinda

@--Vrinda--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
 


Vrinda.. a warm welcome B&B!!🤗

thank u di...

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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: lashy
Please join me in wishing one of our Littlest Banjaras a very happy birthday
Happy Birthday Ashu 🤗

Thank u once again dee 🤗

I was replying to everyone on the previous thread n thn i saw ur post fr new thread 😆😛

Congratulations fr new thread dee 🤗

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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi
Happy birthday ashu🥳🤗 stay blessed
Congratulations lashy di🤗 one more thread...we are competing with virat kohli, I guess😆

Thank u 🤗

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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: amSavindi
congo🥳 again, happy b'day ashu🤗

Thnk u again Sweety dee 🤗

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: neepobithi
THE ACCUSED

I never said I've not done it
though you knew not what it had been
but the way you choose to think of me
so often leaves me sad'

I know that I've hurt you
but I never meant to charm
perhaps my not so easy-going ways
just cause you too much harm.

After we had drifted slowly
things suddenly perked up
the way a person might do
when they've found a more full cup.

But I never said I've not done it
I'd always known what I had lost
and now you don't believe me
and that's too great a cost.

OMG!! What an apt poem for AMK! 💔 Totally LOVED IT!!

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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: pandrangijyothi
Wow... Congrats B&B for new HOME...🤗

Wish you a happy birth day ASHU...🤗
May god fulfill all your wishes...

Thank you 🤗

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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: neepobithi
THE ACCUSED

I never said I've not done it
though you knew not what it had been
but the way you choose to think of me
so often leaves me sad'

I know that I've hurt you
but I never meant to charm
perhaps my not so easy-going ways
just cause you too much harm.

After we had drifted slowly
things suddenly perked up
the way a person might do
when they've found a more full cup.

But I never said I've not done it
I'd always known what I had lost
and now you don't believe me
and that's too great a cost.

Wow !!⭐️👏

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: neepobithi
THE ACCUSED

I never said I've not done it
though you knew not what it had been
but the way you choose to think of me
so often leaves me sad'

I know that I've hurt you
but I never meant to charm
perhaps my not so easy-going ways
just cause you too much harm.

After we had drifted slowly
things suddenly perked up
the way a person might do
when they've found a more full cup.

But I never said I've not done it
I'd always known what I had lost
and now you don't believe me
and that's too great a cost.

Amazing, flawless and beautiful poetry!👏⭐️

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Kuki715

@Kuki715

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Congratulations everyone 🥳. Thank you di for this new home 🤗

Originally posted by: neepobithi
THE ACCUSED

I never said I've not done it
though you knew not what it had been
but the way you choose to think of me
so often leaves me sad'

I know that I've hurt you
but I never meant to charm
perhaps my not so easy-going ways
just cause you too much harm.

After we had drifted slowly
things suddenly perked up
the way a person might do
when they've found a more full cup.

But I never said I've not done it
I'd always known what I had lost
and now you don't believe me
and that's too great a cost.

Did Khan Sahib wrote this 😲... Anindita di,its THAT perfect 💔

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Priyaadarshini

@Priyaadarshini

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Chapter 27

Heera who was being maltreated by khalil ,did not give him any desired reaction ,did not cry. But when he was talking about Durga, insulting her , she was enraged.

And as he mentioned the fake farmaan, the clever baisa that she is , instantly figured out where it could be. She is really intelligent. So , this was the real game. She couldn't find out farmaan , because she didn't understand the message, her jiji had sent her, varnaa toh ye uske daaye hath ka khel tha...

The sadistic monster khalil was playing with her, trying to threaten her, when she was trying hard to win with only one mohra ,she thought she had, the farmaan.

In this horrible situation also, her mind couldn't help but doubt khan sahib, which was valid. And the same mind vehemently defended him as well.

Heera talking about "shehzade appointing best officer to get farmaan and its importance" was very clever stroke, because even khalil couldn't deny that claim.and greedy man was planning dirty game; wanting to have both, farmaan and heera...

She was weak, her physical condition pitiful, but yet never giving up , trying to find the way. She is not the strongest of the warrior; but still she could bring khalil's steps to halt.

And as the last chance that she decided to take to ask help from someone. she finally found the marwari horse ,the one which was not only durga's favourite, but also the one trained by the ustaad himself. And when it seemed that some hope is there, the monster reappeared. It was frightening to see her caught red-handed by this devil.

And , finally when she couldn't take more , she gave up and disappeared in the world of unconsciousness...had I not known , someone is ready to move earth , hell and heaven to save her and going through the hell to reach her, I too would have wished that she get access to her posion ring...

The chase was so difficult for this invincible warrior. It was against time - because khalil was almost two days ahead. It was against fate - not only because it was humanly impossible, but also because he had almost no resources.

After trying everything that he could; when he couldn't find her, the ever-calm ustaad almost collapsed.and when there seemed no hope, ray of hope came in form of marwari racer almost like a miracle. Relieving the sahib, and directing him to sahiba.

He finally spotted her, the one whom he could recognise from anywhere and that too in most horrible situation.and as the true leader would, he tried to handle the situation single-handedly. And the aim he took was truly mashallah moment...

As the small battle ensued between the two small groups, it was akbar's style which really made me speechless. It was very similar to what I've read on battles!!!!! Especially him almost being invisible... Kudos to you, author sahiba

Their brief encounter at the end was really tugging at heart. He was in worst of his conditions, when he saw her. Constantly traveling without food or rest, he was bruised too. But he can't see anything beyond her injuries, her well- being...

Chapter 28

The encounter between khalil and khan sahib was one of the best moments of the story. I really loved his calm and relaxed attitude.😎 Nothing beats the feeling of having conquered your arch enemy. And after having completed all his duties, he was enjoying his food, in front of wounded and captured Khalil...wah wah majaa aa gayaa...

he had promised heera ,he would avenge the humiliation she had to go through, and he did it in style.. Khalil was almost pleading, talking about being his ex favourite. Khan sahib Staring at fancy boots...oh..yeah...ustaad has very stylish boots. I've heard their sound.

Khan sahib taunting Khalil about his speed...oh... Please Khalil, NOTHING is impossible for ustaad.⭐️ By the way, azeez too have best solutions for Khalil, just like Shruti... Finally after insulting the monster to his heart's content, informing him one fatal fact after another, torturing him , he let go of him.😛

Finally , heera is awake only to encounter the worst truth of her life... Their encounter too was interesting though painful too. He was anxious to face her after knowing, she had learnt truth in most inappropriate way... But still ,what I loved the most about this meeting is, that she did not fear him. She is not silent. Her physical situation is worst, but after having seen him, as if she got her energy back. Yes ,she is heartbroken , betrayed but not silent...

The khan sahib is more hurt by her condition than her words. His approach towards her is so gentle. She is feeble , heartbroken, but I can't help but feel sorrier for him. The truth that " he loves her" is more important than anything else. And so , now that worst has already happened, situation will only get better.

I can't praise you enough for the chapter,dear author. Thank you so much for the chapter, the extra information and all replies. Love you.🤗