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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 24

Again, a superb chapter by you lashy!👏👏👏

Yes, he would get back at his foes by taking everything that was his - the mission, the money, the power AND the Sahiba.

Everything was ok till I read Sahiba. He need Sahiba too. To satiate his ego? So that he can kill her too and take the revenge of his insult?? I don't know why.. but I felt something odd this time. No doubt, Durga was a young beautiful and brave woman but whatever he did with her was not out of lust or physical attraction but to satiate his ego. By any chance, would this time khalil fall/physically attract to a younger baisa?? How I want/wish this to be true!

That would be an interesting read to see a man who is completely black, get attracted to a lady who's his enemy. Not expecting a love but lust!

Kakasa and kakisa scenes were emotional too. I was first sceptical whether heera had admitted everything, that's, whatever happened between khan sahib and her at the canal but as I read further, it cleared my doubt that she kept silent by which they assumed that something had happened. The thought came to my mind was, now what are they thinking?Means they think that she had crossed all limits?!

Whatever! I know kakasa and kakisa are right at their place, they're hurt but is it ok to abandon her? What if khalil do the same with her, that he did with durga?? Is it safe or should I say ok to abandon their so called child,pushing her into a dark,a scary future??

They can cut their relationship with her, but letting her stay there, in palace but they thought as a king and queen. No need for such parents who cannot support their child in bad times.👎🏼

Shehzada, you know lashy some people portray a negative character such that everyone hates them but it's rare that a writer can bring an admiration for a negative character too from readers/audience. This is the reason I like khalil, shehzada and mahender.

I completely enjoyed the anxiety and scepticism of a Prince when khalil was mainuplating him against UAMK. As a well wisher of the leads I felt bad for AMK when prince handed over the assignment back to Khalil because whatever it is, Amk has a connection with Prince and the time prince took to take this decision, shows he too felt that way which definitely pleased me. I feel prince did wrong by giving parnagarh assignment back to khalil, still I cannot say he did wrong. He was right at his place and I really liked him for this.⭐️

A trusted source has just let me know that their Sahiba... Harka Sahiba...' he let the name Harka linger on his lips.

>>This is going to be interesting. No?😉

What an exhilarating feeling it was to have slyly snatched the mission back from the Ustaad. Tit for tat!

>> Yep!

Who is this trusted source?' Shehzaade rubbed a thumb under his chin 'Is this the same man, who gave you very 'reliable' information on the whereabouts of the Farmaan earlier?'

>> 🤣

Oh I like him.👍🏼😆

I noticed khalil waited 45 mins for prince's word and gauri for 30 minutes for heera's but for completely different reasons. wow!

It didn't sound like the typical ruffle of a soldier's slippers. Or the scrunch of royal shoes. No. It was the echo of a pair of riding boots. And only one man carried those stylish boots with such flair.

'Ustaad Sahib? Here?'

>> I was imagining the camera on his feet as he was advancing towards the tent.😎

His attire was simple, as always. His appearance rugged, as always. His personality commanding, as always.

>> Khan sahib!

As he observed their faces, his brows pulled together into a suspicious frown. He knew the men well. He knew when they were silent out of respect. And he knew when they were silent because they were anxious.

>>> Only lashy can think and write things like this, which a reader cannot explain but the things which hits directly here-❤️

Ibrahim... Sayyid... Azeez... come on... we're leaving!' he instructed, before whistling a quick call to Bahadur.

>>> He hadn't eaten anything for days.. His men too. Why is he talking this much stress?? He need not to but he's restless, anxious and what not. Why??-> For his sahiba. This is love. A pure love!❤️

Much like his friends, the horse was quick to sense the urgency in his call - and it trotted towards the master at once.

>>> I love Bahudar. Bahadur and khan sahib's relationship is what, I admire the most.

'Off we go...' Grabbing the saddle, he flew back up on his steed even before it'd come to a stop.

In no time, the man was off like the wind - here one instant, gone the next!

>>> Khan sahib!❤️

From the beginning, there was no scene of Khan sahib, still I was feeling his presence-in my thoughts. In khalil scene, where he told his men about the message he got from Mahender. In heera's tears and helplessness-If only khan sahib was there with her. In prince and khalil scene, how it will gonna effect Akbar and finally the hero made his entry!

PS: Did you reply to my comments on chapter 23? If yes, then please tell me the thread number. And if no, then too it's fine.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: -Felicity-


Oh I didn't know wishes worked so fast! 😲 You're already looking quite well! ^^^ 😆

🤣 Ask my mom!😆

I don't like to feel sick by resting all day., lying on bed so it's a kind of distraction to read/post comments here,on forum.😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: binduprasad41



Get well soon payu
Take care of yourself




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

🤣 Ask my mom!😆

I don't like to feel sick by resting all day., lying on bed so it's a kind of distraction to read/post comments here,on forum.😆


Yeah same here! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Chapter 24

By any chance, would this time khalil fall/physically attract to a younger baisa?? How I want/wish this to be true!

That would be an interesting read to see a man who is completely black, get attracted to a lady who's his enemy. Not expecting a love but lust!

>>> 😳

Kakasa and kakisa scenes were emotional too. I was first sceptical whether heera had admitted everything, that's, whatever happened between khan sahib and her at the canal but as I read further, it cleared my doubt that she kept silent by which they assumed that something had happened. The thought came to my mind was, now what are they thinking?Means they think that she had crossed all limits?!

Whatever! I know kakasa and kakisa are right at their place, they're hurt but is it ok to abandon her? What if khalil do the same with her, that he did with durga?? Is it safe or should I say ok to abandon their so called child,pushing her into a dark,a scary future??

They can cut their relationship with her, but letting her stay there, in palace but they thought as a king and queen. No need for such parents who cannot support their child in bad times.👎🏼

>>> Totally my views on Kakisa and Kakasa!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww love you loads dear
I thought you are feeling better today but your condition is still the same
Get well soon
And back to your cheerful mood
Take proper rest and eat on time

And i read your comment
Awesome payu
Yup lashy di story villains are also impressive and sacry
And i too wish khan sahib was there with heera


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: binduprasad41


Aww love you loads dear
I thought you are feeling better today but your condition is still the same
Get well soon
And back to your cheerful mood
Take proper rest and eat on time

And i read your comment
Awesome payu
Yup lashy di story villains are also impressive and sacry
And i too wish khan sahib was there with heera



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good evening, Chellam, Bindup, Sandy Begum, Payal, Shagun, Bindu, Jyoti and dear 6Bs!🤗

Had some errands to run in town - so was not able to come online at the usual time. 😊

@ Mitu

Very ,very nice review and I so loved the haiku! 👏

@ Jyoti

The return message from Heera, the accompanying picture and the latest set of pics in response to the teaser are all remarkable. Thanks, dear. 👍🏼

@ Shruthi

So, so good to see you back, dearie! 🤗

@ Payal

Have you caught the flu bug as well, Sahiba ? Get well soon, dearie.🤗

@ Lashy

The teaser is strangulating us, Lashy Sahiba.😭

Khalil's declaration + Heera's recollection (of his callous utterance) = reader's suffocation

That is the masterful ploy of a brilliant storyteller , dearest Sahiba! 👏


Edited by roseraja1915 - 8 years ago

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