NOVEL*Hiding behind a Stranger*Chapt 26(27th JAN)-MONGOL WARFARE PG 1 - Page 73

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi


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tomato mash up review ?


Even I was wondering that means.. 😆


Did I hear a hint of jealousy there? 🤔


Originally posted by: harshu27

lol u dont knw linguswamy m surprised😆he does all d action movies i mean d movies like RUN, VETTAI etc...both have R madhavan as d lead d 2nd one being arya along wid maddy...😆d former one i mean RUN was remade in hindi wid abhishek bachhan and bhumika chawla😆😆bt dont tke it as negtve since his movies r luv stry wid actions more whch i luv so only i said as linugswamy ka movie😉😆


Oh so this Lingusamy aint all that bad then 🤔
Harshu called me a cute DQ... uske liye Lingusamy kyaa... I'll be any samy!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

By the time I came... it's been Good Morning and Good night too for Periyamma 😆 But, I'll keep this picture of Babloo safely till you come tomorrow.. 🤗


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But other than you and Chellam... everyone else 👎🏼 the idea... Harshu called it some Lingusamy movie 😭 don't even know who that dude is... but he ain't gonna be some Mani Ratnam/Balachandar!

If all of us said, we liked the idea, would you start another modern ff after this?😉
Anyways, with you as an author, we would read any story, only if you are ready😳
I guess, with modern setting ,like bungalow and all,it would have been interesting.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

C26 - Not for the faint-hearted.

Our resident expert at Ironies and analogies!

What an irony - while it uplifted our spirits to know of Akbar's plans , Heera's hurled us into throes of depression.

After reading this update, I quickly Googled all the brutal torture techniques ever devised in history.

WHAT! 😲

The update was dark but you shone, Lashy Sahiba

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Yayyy and there goes my one month diet plan!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915


After reading this update, I quickly Googled all the brutal torture techniques ever devised in history. Please free to pick any (all are suitable for Khalil ). For starters, gouge out his filthy eyes ; ,dislocate every joint of his body and tear his tongue out . Please just make sure Khalil is given a grisly end befitting his obnoxious deeds.

Rose Di,I'm glad you liked my review. I loved your comments too especially,the above mentioned lines😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi

If all of us said, we liked the idea, would you start another modern ff after this?😉
Anyways, with you as an author, we would read any story, only if you are ready😳
I guess, with modern setting ,like bungalow and all,it would have been interesting.


Nah Nah... I was just kidding... that was just the first rough sketch in my head... first sketches are just that - first sketches...
How does land registry papers sound...
and How does Farmaan sound? 😉

How does Mr. Khan sound? 😉
How does Ustaad Akbar Mahmoud Khan Sahib sound?😉
Miss Heera vs Harka Baisa/Sahiba?
Good Morning vs Adaab?

Nah! No comparison whatsoever!

But yes, I must admit, infinitely easier to write a modern story!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

C26 - Not for the faint-hearted.

It was thrilling to see the CIO plotting and planning everything meticulously - dotting the i's and crossing the t's- to ensure their strategy was foolproof. The solidarity and blind faith of Akbar's men in their leader was so inspiring. And the good humour that followed was a welcome relief to break the seriousness of the situation.

What an irony - while it uplifted our spirits to know of Akbar's plans , Heera's hurled us into throes of depression. Addressing her people as a true Rajput princess, psyching them up to be prepared for all eventualities.

And now coming to the part that snatched our sleep (as well as the author's ). All the eerie happenings at the camp prior to the arrival of the satanic murderers, heightened the tensions and the sense of foreboding that something brutal was about to happen.

And it did- leaving us thunderstruck when Gokul's hacked body was dumped in front of the camp. To know that he met his end in a manner so gruesome was really heartbreaking. And it just kept on getting worse. When Khalil yanked off Heera's veil, it was all I could do to check my fury at his brazenness. How dared he? To rub it in, you had the vile Khalil touch her - Lashy dear,WHY YYY YYY?'

So now what is in front of us is a David and Goliath scenario and we know what happened in that story so, we are cautiously optimistic that this Heera-Khalil showdown will end in our girl's favour - but the BIG question is at what price will victory be attained? What will turn the tide is Heera keeping her wits about her during these very crucial moments to prevent things from spiralling out of control.

The juncture you chose to end the chapter, OMG- you have done a Khalil on us, dear Sahiba, torturing us to the max.

After reading this update, I quickly Googled all the brutal torture techniques ever devised in history. Please free to pick any (all are suitable for Khalil ). For starters, gouge out his filthy eyes ; ,dislocate every joint of his body and tear his tongue out . Please just make sure Khalil is given a grisly end befitting his obnoxious deeds.

The update was dark but you shone, Lashy Sahiba, with your impeccable writing skills. Never tomatoes and eggs but always flowers and chocolates for our beloved author. Thank you for this update, Lashy Sahiba, upsetting as it was but necessary for C27 and C28 as you rationalized. 🤗

@bold.. ekdum Sahi...
Wonderful review Rose di ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Nah Nah... I was just kidding... that was just the first rough sketch in my head... first sketches are just that - first sketches...
How does land registry papers sound...
and How does Farmaan sound? 😉

How does Mr. Khan sound? 😉
How does Ustaad Akbar Mahmoud Khan Sahib sound?😉
Miss Heera vs Harka Baisa/Sahiba?
Good Morning vs Adaab?

Nah! No comparison whatsoever!

But yes, I must admit, infinitely easier to write a modern story!

Yes, modern story is much easier, historical is always difficult, especially with perfectionist like you. And royal stories ki baat hi alag hai...😎 it's like 'woh zamana kare diwana'😆
Edited by luvuyuvi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Even I was wondering that means.. 😆


Did I hear a hint of jealousy there? 🤔



Oh so this Lingusamy aint all that bad then 🤔
Harshu called me a cute DQ... uske liye Lingusamy kyaa... I'll be any samy!

🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
@ Lashy
Shocked, huh? I really googled the torture topic.😆 See what all you make the readers do, Lashy Sahiba. 😭

@ Akanksha

Rose Di,I'm glad you liked my review. I loved your comments to o especially,the above mentioned lines😆

🤗 Just making the author's job easier by giving her some ideas.😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Nah Nah... I was just kidding... that was just the first rough sketch in my head... first sketches are just that - first sketches...
How does land registry papers sound...
and How does Farmaan sound? 😉

How does Mr. Khan sound? 😉
How does Ustaad Akbar Mahmoud Khan Sahib sound?😉
Miss Heera vs Harka Baisa/Sahiba?
Good Morning vs Adaab?

Nah! No comparison whatsoever!

But yes, I must admit, infinitely easier to write a modern story!

Ohhh bt i find wrting historical easier dn modern at least i cnt wrte modern one😆

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