His Revenge ch 2 pg 5. 7/3/17 - Page 3

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A gud start..He made her to divorce him for Revenge..Love to read more..Update nxt part and pm me too..
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chapter 2



Chris prov

I am going to Newyork today, my tracker said they have found a girl all the criteria i had told of my Angel and here i am in my private plane going to see her, i know i don't have any rights, but i want see her for once, even if it's from far, i have make sure she is happy..

well idiot , you're the one who took her happiness, and filled with sorrow, hurt and tears , my inner self mocked at me

yeah, whatever will you stop your comments no one needs you here, i said shutting down the monster angel in my heart, who loved her dearly always, thinking of my Angel


suddenly i remembered something, photo's that Mr.Peter my tracker sent to me last night, i started to stroll the pictures of her, she looked so happy, and lively a smile formed it's way seeing her smile, in one photo she was playing with kids, ya my Angel always loved kids, can't wait until we our own kids mine and my Angel, my smile widened at the thought, my heart swell, but the next picture wiped the smiled from my face

she was with a guy around my age, he was holding her waist possessively, kissing her cheek and she was smiling widely at that, she was looking so happy, so cute., i clenched my hand, does that mean she have moved on, moved on without me, who was that guy, does she love him, no she can't love him.

the thought of her loving someone else was sending thousands of Knife stabbing my heart, will i be able to live without her, watch her in other men arm moving on, she is my light, i will be doomed without her, i love her.. i loved her even in my past , in my revengeas well..

Answer was big fat NO, i can't i will die without her, i can't leave her...

but no i will let her go, live her life, it's not about my happiness, it's about her happiness, only her smile matters to me, i will never go in her path, if she is happy with him then i will let her be, even if i will be doomed to darkness , life long darkness well i deserve that.

God, why is this so painful, no once i know she is happy, i will go away from her life, it's about my pain and heartbreak but her smile, her peace matters, if that meant i will be in hell rest of my life.. i will.. i will.. a lone tear slipped from my eye which i wiped furiously, i don't have right to let the burden reduce by crying, i deserve to be pain..

My self destruction thoughts were broken when i heard the commotion to fasten my seat belt as the plane was landing..

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------What do you think might have happened to her

Have she really moved on?

Should he get a second chance?

if you think i should add some more, or something which will benefit the story you can comment or private message me.. i would love to hear

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