Akdha OS will u be my pillow.. Plagiarised/Closed - Page 3

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Such a refreshing set up without the religious divide or traditional mindset between two families!

and how sweet that Jodha's family were blackmailing that he must propose to her 😆

Needless to say, the proposal was very cute and unique 😳

Ya I loved it but why all the movies have same proposing techniques jalal. couldn't they be unique..Something which make everygirl go jelly on her knees.. She said with a dreamy look..jalal who was to takeout the ring from his packet pushed it again inside with a sigh...

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Buddhu today also he didn't propose me..JALLAD KAHIKE..Its been two years and he didn't propose me yet jodha whispered angrily and went inside Sharma mansion.

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Jalal didn't propose today also apoorva ji( jodha grandmother) . His badiammi maham telecasted the news to sharmas on the phone.

All are angry at him. Even the servants in home are angry at jalal went inside to do their works.

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All the khan's entered the Sharma mansion and was greeted by them..When jalal entered they gave a disappointed look..

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When she opened the gift she was confused to see a red heart shape fluffy pillow..

Jalal voice fanned her ears "Will you be my pillow?"

What?? Jodha looks his eyes through the mirror..

Will u be my pillow forever jodha..

He turned her to face him cupped her face in his hands

Yes my pillow..

My pillow has seen my happiness, sadness, confusion, loneliness , angry everything in my life.

When i am happy I'll hug it

When i am sad I'll wet it with my tears

When i am lonely it acts as a shoulder for me

When I miss dad it will become my dad's lap..

I wish u to replace my pillow..

Will u do the honour? Jodha..

Jodha's eyes welled up with his confession she just managed to nod.

Jalal Sat on his knees signalled her to open the pillow.

Jodha opened it & found a beautiful diamond ring in it.

Will u marry me jodha, Will u be mother to my naughty kids , will u grow old with me jodha..

Awww 😳

You know my pillow will always be in my bed..And since u accepted to be my pillow you should also be there in my bed jalal said with a gutter smile..

Back to GM mode😆

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Lashy the dear I felt honored with ur comment..

Seriously thanks alot..

I mean it dear..

I admire the way of ur writings.. initially I joined in if for bhavi di is it hate or love but when I read ur story not just a passionate affair .. I was thrilled to read.

I took completely 3 days to complete the story.even I skipped my daily work..

I don't know much about u , & my personal problems didn't allowed me to comment on ur story , & I was scared to give appreciation..

Reason I was Little reserved type & moreover New to forums , I even don't know ur name. ..etc etc..

I used to speak only Payal & Avika.. just those two are my best buddies in if. few friends that's it.. not more..

Really at that time I don't know how much appreciation will effective on writer..

I got that pulse when I started writing..

I always wanted to say but little taken back thinking it is over long back & don't know how will u react but today I just wanted to express I really really loved ur story..

It was unique & great..

I always wanted to keep a personal pm but again hesitation..

But finally after reading ur comment I just wanted to say words which are I am postponing yo express from 1 year..

Late is better than completely avoiding..

I just love ur story.. thanks a lot for the that beautiful story dear..

Ur os it's superb..I can't able to stop my laugh for few minutes..

Don't mind writing all this in my thread, I just wanted to say that's it..

Thanks a lot..

I mean every word I say dear..

Originally posted by: Rami92

WHATS HAPPENING HERE ? 😡

THIS WAS SUPPOSED TO BE MY OS WHICH I HAVE WRITTEN FOR IPKKND 2nd anniv contest AND WON THE PRIZE

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3613454

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TAKE DOWN THE NOW WITH A APOLOGIZING MSG for not contacting me before reproducing the work or I NEED TO TALK WITH MODERATORS

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THIS IS PIRACY