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Part 1


Mohammad villa , 6:30

Back to home from office , after a very tiring day with consequent meetings , Bairam khan flumped on the couch rolling his sleeves up . Just a cup of strong Tea was all that he needed to relax his aching nerves .

Ordering the maid for a cup of hot tea , he switched on the tv after loosening his tie when the elderly lady watched him from afar .

He was tired ,no doubt , every inch of his body oozed exhaustion ,feeling bad for her son in law , Hamida walked up to him and took the seat besides him .

Why dont u take leave for a day or two Bairam ...u seem very tired ...your body needs rest beta ...the Mother in law suggested who loved her son in law like a mother.

Falshing a gentle smile towards the concerned lady Bairam replied ...I can't Ammijaan ... i have a meeting with foreign deligates next week...need to work on an important presentation ...and ...he continued mentioning the list of lined up things he had to do finish or do in the coming week when something crossed his mind all of a sudden .

Did i tell u about Zubair Ammijaan ?? He asked uncertain , work pressure certainly took a toll on him thence this short time memory loss .

No !! Why ?? Her reply made him slap his head mentally for forgetting such an important thing .

Im sorry Ammijaan, I dont know how it skipped off my mind , scratching his temple he made a sorry face ...Anyways , Zubair is coming India next week , his eyes sparkled while saying we finally succeeded in launching our company's new branch in Australia too ...so i wanted to organise a small success party he gazed at his listener who was all attentive...Amijaan , u have to take care of everything ...from guests invitations to food and beverages u have to arrange for all ...since i will be hell busy the coming weeks , will u ??

Her lips curved up while looking at her son in law who seemed pretty excited with the news of business expansion and his best friend's come back . .

Of course Beta ,u rest assured ... promising him to take some of his burden on her shoulders ,Hamida smiled affectionately when maid made her way with a tray in her hands .

Aah...my tea ... taking the cup of hot beverage ,Bairam then smelled the aroma of Ginger and Cinnanom , sipping a mouthful of tea which started doing its magic on the consumer , Bairam smiled at his Mil relaxed .

By the way where is Noor and Jalal ?? He asked roaming his eyes around .

Noor will be here soon from her tutions and Jalal ...i have no clue about his whereabouts like always ... she replied downcasting her eyes .

Oh ok...unwitting to hurt the mother Bairam simply nodded his head and shifted his focus on the tv screen sipping on his tea , browing through the channels ,he relished every bit of the hot liquid when a catchy headline caught his eyes .

Starving scars

Increasing the volume Bairam keenly started hearing the news when the name of FMC was mentioned on the scrollings .

Social media spotlights a shocking news of a teenage girl who was forced by an FMC student , who is perceiving his last year in Management course .

A horrified form of a small girl was flashed on the tv screen who sat besides a women hugging her tightly . Just a look at the 14 yrs innocent girl and one would say how scared and tormented she was .

To everyone's surprise ,this small girl wasnt his only victim , many girls/women have been his target before too .

The residents of blueberry apartment caught him red handed while doing the crime , sooner the local police came in sight .

He was charged against Molestation and attempt to rape by the victims and was arrested by the police on spot .

A man in his twenties was being dragged mercilessly by the police , he sreamed claiming innocent , but cops paid no heed to his words and pulled him harshly along with them .

Maha manga who just entered the house with Noor dropped the bag on the ground .

Bairam and Hamida turned their heads in unison on hearing the sound.

Maham's baffled expression proved that she didnt had the inkling of this news . How was she supposed to know , when a mere few hours ago she talked with her cousin and warned him again to be careful.

She always knew he wouldn't change , but then after tasting police batons , Maham was sure he wont get himself into mess any time soon ...but she was proved wrong ...totally wrong .

Angry tears brimmed in her eyes... what all didnt she do to get this shameless cousin of hers out of the prison . Going out of her way ,she requested the members of this house to free him from Jail , but then ...in the end , he again reached ,where she didnt wanted him to be .

Bairam's position was no different from hers ... he, for the first time felt guilty for supporting the wrong person . His eyes fell on the familiar figure who strolled inside the house a second before .

. Jalal came back a while ago and was listening the news when Bairam saw him there .

Bairam lowered his gazes ,not able to meet the eyes of the man who despite of knowing Adham very well agreed to bring him out just for the sake of his request .

Jalal knew what he did was right and he certainly wouldnt regret his decision , however ,he felt bad for his Jiju , for ..he knew his jiju was quite an emotional soul , topping it he was clueless of Adham's wrong deeds ...all he knew was Maid crying bittey in front of him seeking help ...and he did what he felt right at that time .

But now ...he was ashamed of himself for helping a sinner like Adham .

Nevertheless the damage was already done and there was no point in repenting for his previous act .

Thus keeping a poise state the man got up from the couch and uttered ... Its good to see Adham locked up again for his crime ...and this time i would myself make sure ,he never comes out ... furiously looking at Maham who failed to keep a check on her insensitive brute cousin ,Bairam left the living area and walked to his room .

A proud smile made its way on Jalal's lips ...for, he respected his jiju's request and also he didnt let any injustice happen to his sister Nafisa .

The decision was tough though ,yet he managed everything with the help of his friends .

And with that he also remembered the special person who ,despite of being warned several times jumped into the fight .

His lips curved up into an endearing smile ,reminicing the beautiful encounter he had with her this evening . Lost in her thoughts he marched up to his room in trance .

Hamida didnt miss noticing the proud smile her son had on his face when Bairam declared to look into Adham's case himself .

She somewhere was sure ,her son's hand behind all this chaos . Not that she was angry or offended by his act , infact she herself wanted Justice for the girl Nafisa , but ...on hearing Bairam Khan's words , she too thought of giving a last chance to Adham .

Then again ,she was sure her son would not accept his defeat just like that and today , Adham's back to prison proved her suspicions right , still she wanted to confirm the same from her son's mouth .

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Her closeness , her soft silky hair with the mild fragrance of lavender, her tiny hands cuffing his torso everything was fresh in his mind .

Standing in front of the full length mirror he imagined Jodha in his arms , a broad grin appeared on his lips visualizing her tiny frame in his well built torso .

Unfortunately , he couldnt relish the moment at that time with Adham lurking around but now he wanted to relive the moment , but then he wasnt that lucky , was he ??.

A knock at the door drifted him out of his mischeivious thoughts .

Turning around he gazed at the door only to find his Mother waiting for his invitation to get inside the room .

He looked on puzzeled as his Mother rarely comes to his room .

Yes ?? he asked coldly

No pleasantaries .??.....straightly to the point ...huh!!Hamida sighed and entered in shaking her head ...wasn't she expecting too much from him??

Anyways shrugging on never to be changed attitude of her son , Hamida uttered ...so your plan worked eh ?? keeping a stern demeanour she started the conversation .

Plan ?? Raising his brow he looked back at his mother with the same attitude with a tinge of confusion beneath .

It was u who chalked out all this plan , didn't u ??Crossing her hands across her chest Hamida hinted toward Adham's arrest while looking straight into his eyes .

For a moment he was utterly shocked and why not ...he planned each and everything so cautiously that he was sure no one could ever find his and his team-mates hand in this drama, but again his mother found it.

Yes its me .....knowing very well ,there is no point of lying in front of Hamida he answered calmly and confidently ...for ...sooner or later he knew she will find the truth somehow but the question that racked his mind was ...how did she get to know about this ??.

Ummm...how did u guess ?? He asked ,in between trying to read his mothers eyes .

Divya !! Isnt she the same girl u picked up from the street ?? I saw her on tv when Adham's arrest news was flashing ...clarifying his doubts thereon she stepped closer to him ... waise....she paused , her eyes glinted with a mischeivious look ...lifting her hand up in the air she then brought it near his face ...detaching the fake black mole from his chin Hamida brought in front of his eyes ... u were looking pretty good in that sardarji avatar .

Pursing her lips tightly making sure not to part her lips into a smile Hamida stared at her son keeping a straight face .

Bewildered he stood numb for a moment with an expression of a small child getting caught redhanded by someone while having candies .

Hamida recalled her small three year old Jalal who had the same look whenever she caught him eating his favourite chocolate .

A small smile made its way on her lips which transformed into a small chuckle while looking at Jalal's wide eyes .

He glared at his mother with a serious look whilst she tried hard to control her laugh ... A small smile threatened to escape from his lips too , getting caught that too by his mother sounded totally silly to him .

He couldn't help but join his mother thereafter and the duo broke into laughter together after long long time .

They gazed each other in between their laughs ...awkwardness prevailed between the duo again ,the roar of laughter that filled the room seconds before died slowly , Jalal averted his gaze from his mother and turned around .

It pricked her heart badly ,but when were things good between them , taking his silence as the note to leave Hamida left the room heavy heartedly .


Sharma household

She tossed and turned under the silk duvet unable to get sleep . The whole evening she managed to engage herself in some or the other work to shoo away the painful images of the night when she lost her dearest parents .

No matter how hard she tried , the events of that horrible night bounced back into her thoughts bringing acute pain in her heart .

Jodha knew , she should move on carrying the beautiful memories of her parents inside her heart.She somehow coped up putting upfront a strong attitude too but again the fact of her parents death that too on her birthday disturbed her most of the times ...especially on her birthday .

It was 11:30 ...and she was not getting any sleep yet ...feeling restless ,Jodha jumped out of the bed and stood in the balcony . Taking in the fresh air she gazed up at the sky.

Tears pooled in her eyes as she remembered the last time she spent happily with her parents .

Flash back

Jodha ...Jodha. ...Mainavati's shrill scream peirced into Jodha's ears like a needle .

Maasa...covering her delicate eardrums with her fluffy pillow Jodha frowned in irritation.

U spoiled girl , if it's not ur birthday today then i would have given u nicely , now get up pulling the duvet that covered her body Mainavati exclaimed .

Maasa ...pls ...five minutes more ...then i will get up for sure ...trying to shoo away her mother Jodha requested with her eyes still closed .

R u mad ...u r already getting late for college and u have to go to temple too .when will u learn good manners Jodha , what will ur inlaws say when u go to their house ...Ranting her everyday mantra Mainavati dramatically hit her forehead with her palm.

Maasa...whats the need for me to go temple when u r there to pray for me ..and regarding my in laws...dont u worry about them ...i m there na...Jodha countered still lying on the bed .

Fine !! No temple...no gifts ok?? Using her last weapon to get her daughter out of the bed Maina smiled inwardly as she knew this would definetly work on her .

Gifts ...wow...opening her eyes widely just like her mother expected Jodha dashed into the washroom and dressed into a plain white anarkali suit which was gifted by her brother last night .

Now gifts ...

Nope ...first temple

Accha ok...will go to temple while going to college ...now gifts plsss.

Ohk...come out ...ur Bapusa is waiting for u outside .

And the duo went out of the room .

Maina stood besides her husband while Jodha quickly finished her prayers in the small temple inside their house .

With a wide smile ,she then stood in front of her parents with her hands stuck out for the gifts .

Maina gave her a small box which was neatly packed with a glitter paper

Jodha excitedly unwrapped the box and and was floored by the content inside it ... a shining bracelet ...without wasting any second she quickly pinned it around her wrist and hugged her kissed her Mother's cheek .

Now she waited for her Bapusa's gift ... where's my gift ?? She asked wiggling her brows .

He scratched the back of his head...My wishes...will they work ?? Bharmal asked sheepishly and earned a glare from his daughter .

Bapusa ...i have ur best wishes with me always ...so there is nothing new in that ...ok ?? No dont act , i know u have my gift , show me.. plsss... knowing very well about her Bapusa and his unique gifts Jodha excitedly chirped .

I really didnt get anything for u beta ...getting a pout from his daughter he again said ... ok tell me what do u want and i will get u while coming back to home from office ...ok . He tried to cheer his daughter with the brilliant idea that popped in his mind .

Umm promise ?? A devilish smile danced on her lips ...Maina and Sujamal knew Jodha would defiently ask something weird . They even warned Bharmal , but he already made his promise and he decided not to back off now .

Day out with family ...she put forth her wish , clasping her hands like a small kid , urging to be fulfilled at any cost .

No ...i cant ...i have my college ...sujamal objected

Neither can i ...i have my kitty party Mainavati added .

And i have an important meeting . Bharmal sighed

Her face fell down hearing their excuses ... and turned around on her heels to get going with her boring routine when the trio bursted into fits of laugter.

Jodha looked on confused when Bharmal came to her and caressed her head lovingly .

Her wish was granted ...they agreed to go out but before that Mainavati served the hot kesar badaam kheer which she made specially for Jodha .

The whole family had a gala time together ...they went to temple as per mainavatis wish ,then watched a movie , spending sometime on the beach thereafter , they decided to end the birthday celebration with dinner in a posh restaurant .

And then while coming back from there ...

Flash back ends...

Tears made its way down her cheeks ... The horrible images of accident reeled in front of her eyes .

I wish i never requested to go out Bapusa , i wish i never celebrated my birthday . I wish we stayed back at home ... wiping the tears that flowed down her cheeks uncontrollably Jodha looked up at the sky again.

I hope u r resting in peace Maasa ... today im the girl u wished to see me always ... im no more lazy .. i do pray everyday ...just like u did Maasa ...i even visit kanha's temple whenever possible ...u r happy now ,arent u Maasa ??

Fresh stream of tears rolled down her eyes while uttering the words .

A knock at the door drew a full stop to her thoughts .

She checked the time in the clock...it showed 12 :00 am and she knew who could be at this hour of time .

Bhaisa ...Bhabhi ...pls come in wiping the traces of tears from her cheeks Jodha called them inside.

Moti and Sujamal stepped in and casted a quick glance at the birthday girl.

Her greif stricken face with red puffed eyes pricked their heart deep inside the core .

Happy Birthday Jodha ...the wife and husband wished the Birthday girl in unison with a small smile on their lips .

Thanks Bhaisa ,Thanks Bhabhi ....she uttered meekly without any excitement .

And then there was silence in the room ...which was kind of routine since past 4 years.

Sujamal and Moti come to wish Jodha , try to cheer up her mood and then goes back tasting failure .

But this time the couple was determined to get a smile on her face .

Choti ...u know ... u r very lucky .... sujamal exclaimed impishly .

Why ?? Jodha mumbled in a very low voice wondering whats up with her brother.

Ur bhabhi ...tried her hand in cooking today and guess what ...she made the birthday cake for u ,all by herself ... how lucky is u to taste the first bite of that delicious ??? cake . His eyes slided to see the person who was glaring at him with angry eyes .

Moti knew she sucks at cooking , but this cake she made with utmost care and attention for her SIL and she knew it will taste scrumptious .

A forced smile made its way on Jodha's lips , she adored her Bhaisa and Bhabhi a lot ...if it was any other day she would have enjoyed their cute banter but today she was not at all in a mood .

Suja ...i know u r very scared of my cooking ,that's why i never made anytging special for you and trust me ,u wont get any share in this cake either ...stucking out her tongue Moti exited the room and came back with a cake in her hands .

But Bhabhi ...i....

Choti ..... his heart ached to see his always smiling sister in such condition . pls ,now dont say ,u dont celebrate ur birthday , i know u miss maasa bapusa a lot ,but how many more years u will sit and mourn at their loss ??

Side hugging her brother she let go off the tears which remained back in her eyes.

Caressing her back Sujamal wiped the lone tear that escaped his eye .

Sujamal , Jodha ...i know u guys r purposely being melodramatic to escape from eating my cake eh...Moti interrupted pouting ... but i wont let u go off so easily ...facing her sister in law Moti pointed the knife towards her ...Jodha r u going to cut or should i do it myself ?? It seemed like a cute threaten to the brother and sister duo ...a small smile adored her lips looking at her bhabhi's antics .

Ofcourse she will cut the cake herself ...atleast for the sake of the people who were trying their best to see just a small smile on her face .

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Morning

Like every year Sujamal ,Moti and Jodha went to temple and offered their prayers with devotion . The preist performed the pinda daan ritual .

After the proceedings sujamal and Moti stayed back for Ann daan while Jodha left for college as she wanted to keep her thoughts busy today and undoubtedly college would serve best for this purpose.

She attended all her lectures and now had a free hour after all the back to back classes , with nothing else to do in her hands Jodha went to canteen alone to feed her grumbling stomach .

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His heart yearned to see her , just to make sure she was alright . He remembered Reva saying it was her birthday today and he knew she was least interested in celebrating her special day reason well known to everyone.

Last night after his Mother's departure ,he urged to call Jodha and convey his birthday wishes for her , but then her gloomy face in cafeteria whipped his mind.

It was 12: 15 , he was pretty sure Jodha would be greiving that time and thus he brushed the idea for later and decided to meet her in person the next day and wish her .

Since then he was desperately waiting to get a glimpse of her , he checked all the places where she could be seen , college grounds , library he searched for her everywhere but could'nt see her face even once ...dissapointed he then trekked towards canteen to try his luck and thats where he found her .

She was dressed in a plain white anarkali which didnt seem new to him from any angle .

Allah , sitting in a corner seat she was playing with her food looking lost ,her sad gloomy face cringed his heart ... she was like one of those brightest stars who loved to shine for others . She was the light through which spirit's born , she had that natural glow in her which can never fade away .

But today she looked different , totally opposite to her self . Her face were deprived of any emotions , her gloomy face proved she was in pain which twisted his heart .

Slowly ,he walked to Jodha and stood right in front of her , surprisingly she didnt react , she was looking somewhere with nothing in particular . He could see the tears in her eyes .

Uh huh uh uhhh......clearing his throat he announced his arrival only to be welcomed by her silence .

Hi......he uttered , trying to get her attention , she saw him ,but was in no mood to respond .

Ummm...Happy Birthday ...a bit skeptical whether to wish or not he finally muttered winning over his mind .

Thanks she meekly reciprocated lowering her gazes

Jodha...calling out her name gently he asked ...umm i dont know if its right or wrong , but ...umm..can i take u out ??

Surprised , she looked on with no reply to his answer .

I know what u r going through Jodha , but u know , once noor told me , our dear ones do watch us from the sky ,and they want us to see happy and smiling always , we shouldnt make them sad by sulking at their loss , should we ???

He saw her tears rolling down her cheeks , which she quickly wiped them before anyone could see . she remebered the words said by herself to Noor and she actually beleived in them ...but somehow today her heart didnt betrayed her .

Come with me , u will feel better Jodha ....Daring to take her hand in his ,he got up from his seat while she though shocked momentarily but followed him silently .

The entire Journey in car was silent , neither Jodha talked with him nor Jalal tried speaking with her ,but he was sure ,she will like the place where he was taking her .

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Part 2

Jyothi orphange home

His car halted in front of its huge gates . Clueless of what Jalal was doing Jodha robotically followed his instructions and walked behind him .

He took her inside the building , there were so many kids, busy in their own activies . Few were studying , some of them were playing and some were goofing around . They were all from different religions ,casts ,communities but were bound together with a common factor .

They were all orphans , some lost their parents in accidents , few dont even knew who their parents are or were , few were left here as their parents didnt want their burden on them . But still they were happy souls .

Divya and her brother , who were strolling around noticed Jalal coming inside .

Bhaijaan ...she squeaked and ran towards him followed by her brother .

U here ?? Divya asked as she didnt see Jalal here since the time she and her brother joined .

Jalal ...Divya's brother squealed .

Chotte ...how many times i told u to call him bhaijaan ...he is older than us ....Divya glared at her brother with her hands resting on her curves .

Its ok Divya ...chotte and me r friends ..and friends do call taking their names ...right chotte ? Taking the small kid in his arms ,Jalal picked him up and showed a chocolate .

Wow ... five star , is this for me ?? They boy asked innocently before taking it .

Yes champ ...Jalal replied ruffling his hair .

Umm only one chocolate ?? u didnt get another for di ?? He asked looking sad with the thought of sharing the sweet with his di .

Chotte...Divya scoffed at her idiot brother .

Its ok divya ...he is just a kid ... chidding the girl sweetly , Jalal dropped the child on the floor ..... and u little rascal , dont worry about ur di ...for ...i have a surprise ... not only ur di ...but for all ur friends too...call them all .

He ran in the corridoor like a maniac , calling everyone out ...

This wasnt new for the orphanage staff , they knew whenever Jalal comes he doesnt come alone...Jodha who was watching all this from far smiled at the kid's enthusiam .

In minutes chotte gathered all the kids around ...

So kids ... she is Jodha , u can all her dii and it is her birthday today .. she wanted to celebrate her special day with u people , so she got these things for u .

He signalled the staff members to get the boxes from inside , Jalal already informed them about his arrival and ordered them to arrange all the necessary things required for the kids , since he didnt had the time to buy himself.

Till now even Jodha didnt knew he planned something like this . She was utterly speechless when Jalal moved to her side .

Ur special day might not be special for u but u can surely make someone else's day special by giving them things they need most, right .

She nodded her head in affirmation and opened the first box of chocolates , in order to distribute among kids , when Jalal's voice echoed in the air .

Wait !! Everyone including Jodha looked at Jalal confused .

I forgot to warn u kids !! Getting a confused frown from everyone he chuckled .

Ur dii...is not what she looks like pressing his lips tightly he noticed everyones faces , and he knew nothing went into their heads .

She is not that sweet , the way she is trying to present herself . He gazed at Jodha who looked equally puzzled .

Biting his smile he then continued ... had any of u heard about Hitler ?? The word ringed in her ears , he could feel her narrowing her brows ,from the corner of his eyes .. darting a deadly glare at him she scrunched her nose .

While the kids still looked confused .

Hitler was hard core man , and she ..is his relative ...not directly though ...so its not that easy to get gifts from her ...u have to work hard ....he uttered with a mischeivious smirk dancing on his lips .

He always love to tease her and that red colour on the tip of her nose while fuming makes her look more adorable .

Then what do we have to do to get our gifts bhaijaan ...a girl from the crowd enquired , bringing Jalal's attention back on them .

Yeah...u ...u have to flaunt ur talents...flaunt in sense , if u r good at singing ...u can sing one or two lines of a song for her , if u dance well , then u can do few steps ...u can also tell her jokes if u want ...do whatever but just impress her to get ur things ...he suggested and the kids readily agreed . They seemed pretty happy with Jalal's idea.

After that one by one each kid came in front , did something or the other ...few sung in their tuneless voice ,few said jokes to which Jodha laughed badly ,few danced and at the end earned their gifts wishing her "Happy Birthday" .

She was enjoying their innocent talks , their company made Jodha forget her greif .

Though his approach was twisted just like him ...but it served good as he saw his girl smiling and he could go to any extent to get that smile on her face .

It was only chotte who was left now , he stepped in front while Jodha waited for him to say or do something for her .

But he remained still for few seconds and then he quickly planted a kiss on Jodha's cheek .

Lucky he , jalal mused and padded towards them ...so chotte's talent is kissing ...is that chotte ??Everyone laughed at Jalal's remark making the kid embarass ...Jodha too chuckled and then brought him closer here is ur prize for impressing me the most kissing him back on his cheek Jodha then pulled a toy from the box and here is ur gift .

No more kids were left in the queque ...taking it as a chance , Jalal slided and stood in front of Jodha .

Where's my gift ?? He asked sheepishly when Divya chipped in ...flaunt ur talent first bhaijaan she giggled .

Yes Jalal why dont u sing for us ? Its been a long time since we heard ur voice ...plsss... one of the staff suggested .

But i cant sing without my guitar ....He shrugged making an excuse when chotte ran to the small music room of their orphanage and brought a guitar with the help of his friend .

Having no other choice left ,Jalal took the guitar from them , sitting on a chair ,he started tuning the guitar when his eyes fell on Jodha who was surprisingly waiting for him to start .

Just a colourless plain anarkali, that was what she was wearing, yet she looked heavenly gorgeous to him , like a cylestial nymph from heaven she looked so pure ,so innocent to his eyes .

A gush of wind fluttered Jodha's hair and his heart sored high . The sun rays were falling on her beautiful face making it glow more .

A blissful smile starting from his lips reached his eyes , closing his lids to capture his girls beauty in his mind and heart forever ,he started singing the words .

Mere Bina main, rehne laga hoon
teri hawaon mein, behne laga hoon
jaane main kaise
tera hua hoon
mujhe to lagta hai main shayad tere dil ki dua hoon haan

He opened his eyes only to find Jodha staring at him with her infectious smile .

tujhko jo paaya ahan
to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaan
tujhko jo paaya ahan
to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaan


(Without myself, I am living,
In your winds, I am sailing,
I don't know how,
I have become yours,
I feel I'm a wish of your heart only..
as I got you,
I learned to live,
Now I wish this moment pauses, stops, lives (forever) between us two..
as I got you,
I learned to live,
Now I wish this moment pauses, stops, lives (forever) between us two..)


pehle se zyada, main jee raha hu
jabse main tere, dil se juda hoon
rahon pe teri main to chala hoon
tu meri manzil hai tere kadmon pe bas rukne laga hoon haan

(More than earlier I am living,
Since I am attached to your heart,
I've walked on your paths,
you're my destination, I've started stopping at your feet only..)

He remembered his days before Jodha coming into his life ...he was so moody , getting angry on small little things ,he made his life a whole mess . And then she came spreading her light every where around her . Like a moth to flame he started getting attracted to her .

tujhko jo paaya ahan
to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaan
tujhko jo paaya ahan
to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaan


teri nazar mein nayi si adaa hai
naya sa nasha bhi ghula hai
kayi dinon se bandha tha baadal jo
tere hi baalon mein khula hai
teri hadon me meri basar hai
ab tujhe bhi
jaana kidhar hai
jahan rahe tu main wo jahan hoon
jise jiye tu main wo sama hoon
teri wajah se naya naya hoon
pehle kaha na maine ab ye tumse kehne laga hoon.
.

Her twinkling eyes , her fiery looks, her selfless love , her caring nature ,he mused on everything about her .

(In your sight, there's a new style,
a new intoxication is dissolved too,
the cloud that was tied for many days,
has opened in your hair only,
my living is in your limits only,
now you too
have to go where..
where you live, I'm that world,
the one you live, I'm that surrounding/weather,
Because of you, I'm new,
previously I didn't say, now I have started telling yo
u..)

tujhko jo paaya ahan
to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaan
tujhko jo paaya ahan
to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaan

The song ended earning a huge round of applause , his voice was magical , no doubt , but the words stirred unknown emotions in her ,she felt as if he was singing only for her , her eyes met his when he was admiring her beauty . Heat rose up to her cheeks ,she quickly turned away her gazes unable to hold on his passionate gaze .

He smirked at her reaction when chotte crawled upto him...Bhaijaan...he whispered in his ears.

Is she ur girlfriend ?? A question out of blue made him choke on his breath .

Who told u that ?? He asked shocked ...

What is there to tell Bhaijaan...she is a girl and since u brought her here with u , that means she is ur friend too ...so she is ur girlfriend ,isnt it...

Was it even possible ?? He thought and wished if everything could be so simple ... but no it wasnt . Forget girlfriend , he was not sure if she even considers him as a good friend .

Sighing he kept silent , when chotte jerked him off ...Bhaijaan tell na ...is she ur girlfriend ....

I dont know...though dancing happily within ,jalal plainly replied now go and place this guitar back in its place ...shooing the kid he then smirked inwardly ...Girl -friend haan , an impish smirk appeared on his lips , the idea seemed enthralling to him if only she agrees.😉

The duo then took their leave from them and walked to the exit .

I didnt know u sing so well .....matching her steps with Jalal to the parking lot Jodha asked , to which Jalal simply smiled and asked.

So how was it ??

Unable to fathom what he was talking about Jodha queried ...

The song ?? It...she was cut in between by Jalal

No , not the song , i know i sing pretty well he bragged and continued . Did u enjoy with kids ?? He questioned looking at her and earned her nod in yes .

A broad smile on her lips conveyed the message that how much she enjoyed the day with the kids .she paused for a second thinking something and then continued ... can i come to ur house to meet aunty and noor ?? Not too sure of how he would react Jodha asked lowering her gazes.

Why not ?? After all u r Noor's appi ,moreover it would be our pleasure to have u at our house ...Jalal wishfully smiled , by the way , i didnt get my gift yet ...hinting towards his performance minutes ago ,Jalal added .

R u serious ?? She asked cocking her brow up.

Ofcourse im ...when i m getting it ....he swiftly moved and came in front blocking her way .

Ask me , whatever u want , i will give u ...she uttered haughtily .

Whatever !! Eh???his eyes sparkled with misheif okay ...u owe me this gift , whenever , whatever i ask ,u will give me ...promise ??

Promise ... meantime they reached his car and the duo sat inside , jalal raised the ignition and they were ready to hit the roads .

Enroute Khan mansion Jalal ceased the journey for half an hour to visit old age home , Jodha distrubuted some clothes among the old people and took their blessing .

His unconditional love for them made her admire the man more standing in front of her .

Jalal kept her so busy that not even once her parents thoughts came across her mind. Going with the flow she forgot all her pains and sorrows and finally they reached their destination.

Mohammad villa .


Maha manga was out to meet her cousin in prison which in turn proved the best evening for Noor . Coming back from school she ran in the whole house to finish a small glass of milk .

With the maids still running behind , the chirpy Noor came to the lawn and started running all around .

Hamida who was seeing all this chaos from far , now came in and took the glass of milk from maid's hand . She stepped towards Noor calling her name aloud , Noor paused in her tracks , turning around ,facing her nani ...sticking out her toungue she uttered ..catch me if u can Nani . The naughty girl stopped in her tracks on finding Jodha and Jalal coming towards them .

Hamida couldnt see as her back was facing them , she moved further seeing Noor glued at the place and almost reached near her when Noor all of a sudden jumped screaming ...Appi she runs towards the unexpected guest


Caressing her head Jodha pulls her apart and bends down to her level .

Whats going on ?? Having marathon for a small glass of milk ...

Noor giggled nodding her head in yes ...and asks...what r u doing here appi ??

I was missing my little Noor , so came here to meet her ...saying so she started tickling her making her stumble back where Hamida was standing with milk in her hands .

Her back bumps into hamida ,as a result the milk spills on her dress .

Not only on Noor but Hamida 's dress was ruined too .

Oops sorry...making a puppy face Jodha holds her ears making everyone laugh .

Its ok beta ...saying so Hamida then calls one of the maid and tell her to change Noor' dress.

Aunty , if u dont mind can i help noor in changing her dress ?? Jodha volunteers so that she can spend sometime alone with Noor .

Sure beta ..... Hamida agrees and leaves to change her dress too .

5 minutes

10 minutes

15 minutes

And 20 minutes ...what r these girls doing ??

Growing impatient by every passing moment Jalal trekks upstairs to bring Jodha and Noor down before indirectly informing Hamida about Jodha's birthday ...so that she can do the necessary things and she got the hint .

Opening the door he searches for them around but hears their giggles from washroom . It wasnt close ...Jalal finds Jodha and Noor playing with water .

What the ??... arent u people here to change dress ?? He walks further uttering the words when Noor splash water on his face all of a sudden .

Noor ... he shreiks wiping the drops of water with his hands, when Jodha's soft giggle chimed in his ears...making him skip few beats of his heart.

Noor splashes some water again on him , which brought him back to present .

U naughty girl ...Dashing in ,he then starts throwing water on noor and the duo played with each other for a while keeping Jodha aside which made Jodha laugh hysterically .

Mamu and Bhanji look into each others face ...with " she is having fun at our cost" look .

Taking handful of water in their plams they flash a devilish smile in her way .

Getting the gist , Jodha stops laughing immediately ...Noor ...Jalal...no her words fell on deaf ears as Mamu and bhanji already started their work .

Wetting her half they splash some water on themselves too when a maid comes and informs them about dinner ready .

Jalal tells the maid to take noor to hamida's room and change her dress there , and the maid obligues leaving Jajo behind in awkward situation .

She took a step in front hurriedly ,only to be stopped by him .

His lips curved into a lopsided grin ...

Hope u didnt forget ur promise ...indicating towards the deal they had in orphange Jalal smirked mischeiviously .

Unwitting to miss the chance of spending sometime alone with her ,he purposely brought up the absurd topic in a totally absurd situation .

Clueless of his devilish scheme she gazed up proudly with her chip up ...i dont remember if im suffering from Amnesia ...so yeah i didnt forget my promise .He got what he wanted to hear ...

A naughty smile kissed his lips , Good then ...i want it now ... he exclaimed standing rigid at his place .

Now ?? Here ?? her eyes widened ,Nevertheless she decided to finish it off asap totally oblivious to his wicked intentions .

Fine ...ask me anything, u want .... she said confidently .

Anything ?? he asked taking a step in front like a predator cornering his prey .

She was all wet ,an unknown desire rushed through his veins looking at her , Yesterdays behind the pillar encounter played back in his mind , he wished to take her in his arms again .

He steps forward in trance , like he was hypnotised by someone , bridging the gap between him and her with his eyes drinking in her beauty , he trekked in front.

He urged to get hold of the sweet curve of her waist and pull her into him . Her pink luscious lips were inviting which tickled his senses ,but then he was a man of self control .

Slowly and purposefully , he walked towards her , accelerating her heartbeat with each step of his .

Her eyes widened in alarm , taking a step back she looked at him nervously while he was closing in without caring anything .

With no space left for her , she hits the cold wall , few locks of her hair fell on her face at the right time ...tucking them behind her ear she gazed up only to see the handsome chunk standing an inch away from her .

With the droplets of water dripping down from his hair and the transparent shirt which clunged to his body in a way giving a sneak peak of shiny surface laid beneath it , made him look absolutely irresistable.

Her breath stuck in her throat as he leaned further making her heart race like a wild horse on race tracks .

Her confused hazel eyes met his dark orbs , their faces so near that she could see her reflection in them .

Closing in teasingly , with his lips mere inches away from her's Jalal inched more ..her eyes fluttered close in anticipation while her hands gripped the frills of her anarkali tightly , her mind warned to run from there but she felt her legs numb rooted in its place like a tree ,why ,even her voice betrayed her .

She felt his warm breath on her face , she could also hear his steady heart beats , yet he did not touch or did anything to her .

Opening to meet his dark orbs again Jodha noticed him tilting his head a little , wondering what this Jallad was upto she looked on, when he brought his lips near her ears , making sure not to touch the sensitive spot behind it .

Her breathing hiked up with all the crazy thoughts running back in her mind when Jalal murmered silkily in her ears .

Dry urself first , otherwise u will catch cold and my gift ...i will take it someday or the other for sure ...whispering in her ears huskily Jalal pulled the turkish towel hanged behind Jodha .

She flushed in embarassment , grabbing the towel from his hand thereafter she unknowlingly touched his hand in the process .

Goosebumps erupted on her skin while her cheeks graced a beautiful shade of pink .

Absoutely satisfied with his effect on her , he moves back with a wink making her eyes go wide again .

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What was that ? She gasped reminicing the whole scene which transpired between them minutes ago.

Jalal's proximity affected her ability to think straight , all her senses became numb around him and she wondered why .

She had mixed feelings altogether , it was weird for her but also satisfying . It made her uneasy but deeply happy at the same time . She didnt understand what was happening to her but whatever it was she felt so pure , so natural , so divine .

jallad , chidding the man playfully she dried her dress and hair with the help of dryer ,she cant ask for clothes all the time ,could she ?? Thus she resolved to dry them first and then go down .

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She stepped downstairs and found everyone around ...there was a small cake placed on the didning table ...she guessed Jalal told everything ...lots of dishes were arranged on the table .

Tears streamed in her eyes ... here she didnt want to celebrate her birthday at all and there these people ..who were almost strangers to her arranged a grand feast in order to celebrate her Birthday .

She cant break their heart , could she ...taking slow steps she stood besides Noor and Hamida .

Happy Birthday appi ...Noor chirped hugging her appi .

Happy Birthday Jodha beta ...i didnt knew it was ur birthday today... Jalal told me just now , except the paneer paratha and Rajma chawal i couldn't make anything else ...thus ordered all this ...hope u dont mind . she exclaimed caressing her hair gently .

Mind ...like seriuosly...after doing so much she asks me if i will mind.

Feeling emotional Jodha hugs Hamida and takes her blessing ...

They cut the cake and feed each other. Jalal too makes her eat a small peice which she takes hesistantly .

Sooner , they all settle to have their dinner . Hamida herself feeds Jodha the first morsel of food , making noor Pout .

Laughing at Noor's antics Hamida and Jodha feed the little girl together .

Noor notices her mamu having his food alone ... Nani feed mamu also na ... Hamida looks at Noor shocked ...

Yes aunty , why should we have all the fun alone ...let him also eat from ur hands na ...Jodha seconds .

With Jodha and Noor's eyes on her , hamida shakingly brings her hand to his mouth ...while he takes the bite without making any scene .

Thereafter Hamida fed the trio happily , Jalal quietly had his food while Noor and Jodha being the noisiest feed Hamida giggling madly in between .

The house was filled with Jodha and Noor's laughter , Hamida stared at Jodha in admiration . A lone tear rolled down her cheek as she missed her daughter salima , Nevertheless she was happy for having a daughter like Jodha whose presence filled happiness in her house .

Soon it was time for her to leave ...bidding her good byes Jodha and jalal comes out of the mansion as Jalal offered her to drop .

A journey of 45 minutes thereafter and they reach Jodha's house , stepping out of the car Jalal reaches to her side .

Thanks a lot for making my day Jalal ....thanking him from the core of her heart Jodha walked in front when Jalal calls her back.

But im not done yet ...dont u want ur gift ?? he asks smiling at her .

But u already gifted me , didnt u taking his hand in hers Jodha utters ..the quality time with noor and Aunty , the smiling faces of orphanage kids ...i got more then expected Jalal ...no gift in the world can beat this happiness.

Recollecting the entire day events in her mind , Jodha smiled gladly .

Taken aback by her sweet gesture , he gazed on their locked hands . How beautifully she caged his hand in hers . His heart rejoiced feeling top of the world when Jodha took her hand back alerted by his gaze .

The colours which adored his face before , vanished now feeling incomplete somewhere down his heart , However , composing back he muttered ..

I know u dont want anything , but ...what about this ?? Fishing out a little box from his pocket he extended his hand in front of her .

Whats this Jalal ?? she enquired ready to say no if that was any costly gift which she cant take from him .

Open it ...u will know ...placing the box in her hand Jalal smiled , he knew she will definetly like that .

And indeed she did ... she saw the same bracelet which was gifted by her mother before .

Jalal. ...where did u get it ??? I thought i lost it forever ...wiping away those happy tears Jodha looked at him astonished . Could her day be more better ?

U dropped it in noors party , i picked it from there , i wanted to give it to u back long ago ,but forget everytime...and thankfully today i didnt ...so here it is..

A small gift from jallad to hitler ...

She couldnt control her emotions anymore, For a girl who learned to be happy and contended in small little things , what Jalal did was something beyond imagination , totally out of the world.

Tears blurred her eyes , only she know how much this bracelet means to her and with this exquisite gift Jalal marked a special place in Jodha's heart

with her hazy eyes she delightedly tried putting on the metal peice but failed due to her shadowed vision .

Umm shall i ?? Contemplating her misery he offered help whilst Jodha gladly nodded her head .

Stucking out her hand ,she waited for him to pin the bracelet without guaging its consequences .

His cold hand came in contact with her warm skin sending thrill shivers down her spine and that's when she realised what a grave mistake she did by accepting his help ,but now she cant back off as he already started his work .

Standing stiff she let him do his job without disturbing him , while he quickly finished his work .

Done ...he uttered and looked at her while she stared the bracelet that adored her wrist .

Her happiness knew no bounds today , she got the thing which she lost long time ago .

Unable to control her emotions she lifted her hands up in the air and quickly gave a small hug to the man who made her day so special that she had no words to describe it .

Not bothering what mistake she did , Jodha parted , uttering a good bye ,Jodha rushed to her house in excitement , leaving him back alone rooted at his place .

It took him few minutes to come out of the beautiful blunder she did in excitement .

Good night hitler ...he wish her retreating form and went back to his car with a huge smile adoring his lips .

His hard work paid off fruitfully , a smile on her lips thats what he wanted for today and he acheived it successfully .

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Finally i completed the chapter , hope u had an emotional roller coaster ride together with the leads . In between dont forget about the new entry i mentioned in first part . 😉

He can turn our jodha and jalal's life upside down 😕

















Edited by avika444 - 8 years ago
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wohoo di u fid it
love u loads
this time u didnt pm bit i already reserved my plAce for comment
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wonderful chapter Avika...loved Jalal's care for Jo
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will comment after reading it wanna dedicated one edit for this

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I love the story just the way it is i dont want any new entries until tht person will increase the romance betweem jo nd jallu nd hope wat ever cums hamida will be woth jo
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Originally posted by: ...Thendral...

I love the story just the way it is i dont want any new entries until tht person will increase the romance betweem jo nd jallu nd hope wat ever cums hamida will be woth jo


Hey dear ...after a long time im seeing ur comment ...umm regarding the new entry...he will play a negative role and will effect Jajo love story a bit though indirectly ...but yes ...whatever the situtation will be ..hamida will always be with jajo ...so u can rest assured 😊
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Originally posted by: Susan.Dsouza

resss

will comment after reading it wanna dedicated one edit for this


Such a beautiful edits susan ...dil khush kar diya yaar ...thank u so so sooo much
...love u loads ...
Will be waiting for ur comment 😃
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wonderful chapter Avika...loved Jalal's care for Jo

Thanks a lot dikhsu 😊
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Originally posted by: Mavaddat

wohoo di u did it
love u loads
this time u didnt pm bit i already reserved my plAce for comment

Yup finally i updated 😆
Love u too yaar ...umm yes ...i sent pms little late after updating ...actually i had to go out ...
Aww how sweet yaar ...will be waiting for u to unress 😉

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