Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 3 uptd chap 20 (pg 88) 2nd april

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srivarshini

@srivarshini

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#481

lovellyyy...jallu wasss sooo cute...awww...plsss do continue...

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#482

Thanks for the long and lovely update, Avika dear. 👏

Jalal knew of Rukkaiya's mean streak ( one of many horrible qualities she possesses, I am sure ) when he learnt that she tore Noor's drawing.😡

Good that Hamida and Jalal were able to discuss his problem and the best part was that she is willing to help the couple.😃

A lot of tears have been shed by Jodha and Jalal's heartfelt confession ,although in his drunken state, must surely be so joyful for her. Thoroughly enjoyed the part about how he was so stubborn in wanting to meet her that he climbed over the wall and went straight to her doorstep and rang the bell.😆

Oh, God - did he fall off the swing? Dare we hope that he would spend the night in Jodha's room, seeing that he would not be in a condition to go home? 😆 😉

Loved the update, dear!

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#483

Fantastic chapter n thnxx for pm dr

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#484

It's absolutely smashing to have you back to writing, looking up to updates and this long and lovely, soulfully entwined chapter really got me elated! 🤗

It's a lovely chapter, with a beautiful paradox of tears and smiles, hurts and humors, making and breaking relations, and my adorable cutiepie Noor working wonders! The sweet Cupid! 😛All in one box - I felt so overwhelmed and the timing is bang on - it's holi after all, the most colourful of all festivals and Jodha and Jalal went on to be hued with all shades. ⭐️

You have tricked us readers into yet another cliffhanger nonetheless, with us wondering whether the most awaited confessions arrive, or the sedating alcohol takes over.😉 You've got me intrigued!

Loved Hamida-Jalal camaraderie and it's good to hear that Salima is on the road to recovery! 😃

Loved the update so much!

Edited by durgeshnandini - 8 years ago

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divya

@diya2291

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#485

Awesome Wowsome Chappy Avika

Nafisa , Noor And Hamida All Want Jodha And Jalal Together

Loved The Interaction Between Hamida And Jalal

Good To Know Salima's Health Is Improving Day By Day

This Ruk Na , Evil Witch😡 Made Lil Noor Cry 😭 And Cant She Be Away From Jalal , Grhhh Cz Of Her Poor Jo Got Hurt And Had To leave The Party

Woow Drunken Jalal , He Directly Peeped Into Jo's Home 😆 Guts Toh Dekho Iski😛

And My My He Confessed All His Feelings To Jo In Unconscious State .😳

No prob If Jalal Remember Or Not ,That What Happened Last Night , Atleast He confessed To Right Person Instead Of Ruk 😛

Thanks For Pm Avika

And Update Soonish

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#486

wonderful chapter Avi...Jallu in drunken state...how he reached her home...😲..and what if he would have found Moti there and gets to know abt her relation with Jo...😛

anyway, will Jalal be able to show enough courage in front of BK?? waiting...update soon

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Renuka Chaudhary

@aina111

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#487

Amazing update
Thanx for pm 😊
Sorry for late rply

Edited by aina111 - 8 years ago

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#488

Awesome,Fantastic update Avika..Love it to the core..Wah ja seeks Nasima's help and she gives the best sol for his Prob..The way ja manage to go and he back off s well defind..Aww my Cutie Noor..She s cryn because of ruks..Hate ruks..What a super idea that shows she accept jo as her appi and her family..So swt of her..Ja s super happy..His convo with his ammi made their bonding stronger day by day..Anyway Jodha being the reasn behind their bond unknowingly..I lyk the way how hamida find tat her son s in pain..Their emotions are well written..Ja just misd the truth regardn Salima..Oh our hero desperatly waitn fr his jo..The party area and jo's house s my fav..Their checkng on each otr and admiring s cute..Poor jo..I miss chirping,brave jo..Our jalal drunken and came to her house..Unxpectd..Naughty boy..Their close moments and ja's enjoymnt s cute..Wah i cant beleive did ja confesd his feelings to jo..?wow..Tat part s totally awesome..But y u wake me up frm Akdha land?Eager to knw abt jo..Now she l be happy na

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#489

Thank god he s drunk otrwise he wont able to speak to her..what if he cant remember anytng..? jo wil confes ..?Thanks fr this lovely update..Waiting fr nxt part..

And ur writing..Did u take a break..?Really i didnt feel any difrence in ur writing..It gave me same feeling,goosebumps while reading..So no worries continue soon..Thanks for pm avika..