Ts- Tose Naina Jabse Mile Bangaye hain Silsilyeshot 2-part 2-23/01/17

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RamSiyaRam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Hi, interesting plot and pace. Keep it up.

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nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Wonderful update n thnxx for pm

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melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Lovely os with intresting story line. Update soon.

Thanks for pm Anna.😊

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Anjali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

wow, interesting os...

jo ja are a detective...

Jalal jealous of Rishabh...

please update the next part asap...

and thanks for the pm...

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eshalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Awesome update dear
Loved it
Thxc 4r pm

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roseraja1915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Thanks for the TS. Quite an exciting plot with Ja and Jo as long- lost school cum college mates but now undercover agents. Nice to see a bold Jodha teasing our Jalal. Jalal's jealousy towards Rishab is so amusing to read. The lively exchanges between Jajo is fun as well. Good going.👏

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Priyanka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

I'm Loving this yaar...

It's fun reading their cute nok jhok... 😊

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misty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Omg.. Ana.. Muah muah muah... My cupcake.. Ur sooi awsm nd ur stories lk u.. Too cute bd awsm.. Are u serious.. Only a blind will criticise it nd dat too cz he cnt read it... U md me fall in lv wd ds new joja... All d elements were displayed soo bfully.. Ohh.. My joja are cops.. Special ones... Oh gosh dey both are already in lv...

Nd dat poor rishab.. Will get beaten by ja fr sure... Nd dat kissing debate.. Was best.. I lv ds naughty jo nd flirty ja...

Jst a lil request ana.. Dnt kill joja... Or either of dm.. Plzzz in d end...

Awsm.. Will be waiting for the next update..

Thnku fr pm nd update asap.. 👏