AKDHA OS : SECRETS ARE THE ENEMY OF LOVE....

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AKDHA OS : SECRETS ARE THE ENEMY OF LOVE



" Please God help me. Help me stop loving him. I still do and I don't want to anymore. Please, please, please help me stop..." A most gorgeous lady trying to specify herself by saying those words looking towards her kanha's statue...


" IS YOU STILL LOVE HER..??? "ask the irritated friend of jalal by his nonsense type of behaviour..



"YOU STILL LOVE HIM...??? THAT MORRON, THAT STUPID WHO MAKE YOU CRY AGAIN AND AGAIN HAAN..." Saying this surya come towards Jodha and try to hug her, but she run towards window, making him more angry at her...

"secrets are the enemy of love and To understand those words I pay very big amount..." Jalal Give the answer to Abdul apart from there is no connection between the answer and question...

"Nope, I don't miss him, I miss who I thought he WAS.. " having flow of tears in her eyes Jodha manage to say only those words for whom she have endless love in her heart even still after getting hurt by him...

"Now that she doesn't need me, I really need her... " jalal try to ascap from these situation again told Abdul... And by getting this type of reply Abdul gonna mad and going from there...


" Everyone says to give up on you, but they don't see you like I do. You're the one who broke my heart, you're the reason my world fell apart. You're the one who made me cry, yet I still love you and I don't know why... " Jodha completely broken down remembering the past memories of the day when they were fell apart from each other...

" I'm not mad at you I'm mad at myself for believing you were something that your not, for believing that you were always going to be here for me but, the truth is your not...when I need you the most you misunderstood me and leave me without listening to me just once... " jalal also remember there last convo when they get apart...

" Do you think you can be happier with her than you were with me?" Jodha questioning to her self because she her self know some where deep inside her heart still having feelings for him... Still her heart beats for him only... Only for her jalal..

" Do you think you can be happier with him than you were with me?" Jalal questioning to him self because he him self know some where deep inside his heart still having feelings for her... Still his heart beats for her only... Only for his Jodha his Jaan...

"I fill my days with memories of you. I remember how you used to look at me, vas if I was your most valuable treasure, is you found a new treasure? I can't help but wonder if we will be able to find our way back to each other. The road seems so very long, and my head is crowded with such a dark thought. I feel our bond grows weaker by the day and I'm powerless to stop it." now she is completely broke down...

After as soon as she started to sit on her knee her mobile rings... It's from her beloved jalal...
Firstly 5-6 times it's ring not reached to Jodha's ear but jalal didn't give up he continously try to calling her...
As Jodha heared the ring rushed towards her mobile and without see the caller Id peak up the call assuming it but be from jalal... "MEET ME OUR OLD PLACE... I WANT TO MEET YOU RIGHT NOW..." only saying these only jalal cut the call and both started to ready for their meeting...




AT THE OLD PLACE WHERE THEY USED TO MEET,




Both reached in a few minutes at a sane time... And only seeing each other with endless love having lot of things in their minds...


" I know We hurt each other so much, we have no choice but to let go..."jalal started to speak out by saying these...


"Remember when the days were long
And rolled beneath a deep blue sky
Didn't have a care in the world
When "happily ever after" fails
And we've been poisoned by these fairy tales... " Jodha try to make remember him their most precious memories...



" For the longest time I was just trying to find someone to love as much as I loved you, but now I realize that's never going to happen... " jalal try to make her understand that still he love her... Only her...



"I wasnt fighting with you, I was fighting with myself, because part of me wanted to send you running away and part of me just wanted to hold you tight... " Jodha make too make him understand she is only his... There is no other one in his life...




"So yeah maybe we didnt talk past few days , and who knows maybe we'll find ourselves talking less and less as time goes on and life gets more and more in the way, but, i dont feel it, cause youre with me everywhere I go... "by those words of Jodha jalal totally shocked...



"I'm mad at myself, not you. I'm mad for always being nice, always apologizing for things I didn't do, for getting attached, for making you my life, depending on you, wasting my time on you, thinking about you, following you, changing for you, forgiving you, wishing for you, dreaming of you, and most of all...for not hating you which I know I should. but I can't... " jalal say in one go make Jodha shocked too...



"In time, the hurt begin to fade and it was easier to just let go. Atleast I thought it was. But in every boy I met in the next few days , I found myself looking for you. I'd write you a letter. But I never sent them for fear of what I might find. By then, you'd gone on with your life and I didn't want to think about you loving someone else. I wanted to remember us like we were on those days . I didn't want to ever loose that... " Jodha saying this broken down in jalal's arms... Like there is no tomorrow...



"I try to laugh but cry instead patiently wait to hear the words you've never said..." jalal say while try to hug her more tightly...




"You asked me what was wrong and I said "nothing..."
then you turned around and walked away and as the
tears came down.. I whispered "everything."...Jodha tell him struggling in his arms ...



Promise me...that's all I want. Just a promise that you will never forget me. Tell me I changed you somehow. Let me know that I had an impact on your life. Promise me that you will always remember me. Losing you was hard enough, but I don't want to go on knowing I meant absolutely nothing to you... "jalal cupped her face and ask for only one promise for all the life...




" "DON'T KEEP SECRETS IN FRIENDSHIP OR LOVE..." "
DONE GUYS..
HOPE YOU LIKE IT...
IT'S JUST A RENDOM THOUGHT...
SO SORRY FOR ANY MISTEKS...
LOVE YOU DEARIES FOR LOVELY COMMENTS ION PREVIOUS STORIES...




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Me second...😃
Awesome Chappy Di...👏
Loved it...😳
Finally JoJa are together...
They r meant to be together as their hearts beat only for 1 another no one else❤️...
Update all ur stories too😃
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what an os...
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Di its awsme bt emotional chapter.finally dey reunite.thanx fr pmdi.z update ur ur oder stories also
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so beautiful hemu
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beautiful and emotional os dear
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so true
everybody must know about that
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