Untold Secrets!!! Uptd Chap 11 Pg 134 22nd Nov!!! - Page 45

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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing chapter dear
in this chapter you clear some of our confusion
you describe each and everything in detail dear
seems like you do lot of research for this story
you put great efforts in write up dear
I really appreciate your work dear
from your description we manage to have some glimpse of Delhi and Agra lifestyle in that ear
everybody busy in war because of war only common people suffer like pleasant community
emperor lifestyle is beyond my imagination
so amar Singh and Omar Khan is mansabdar of emperor
I think both help jalal to escape from Delhi
now they must know jalal whereabouts
Omar Khan is change his religion but why
Prince nazim
he is going for war or going for party
he is not interested in any kind of war
he is busy in enjoying his life with no worries for other
he is such a worthless person
so that's why many people don't want to see him in throne
of course they are right
Prince of ajabgarh
I think he is positive person
he is supporting emperor because of promise only but amar Singh attitude added up in that promise
if he know about jalal well being he support jalal may be
gopal Singh new entry
rajput also like him
let's see he is positive or negative
poor rajput camp they all had taken shelter under the trees and eating chana and burnt jowri roti whereas as mughal camp enjoying fullest with wines and beauties
Prince nazim
there was war ongoing on
so many soldiers fighting for their emperor and land
but nazim here only enjoying
he don't values his soldiers life also
emperor what see in him that he choose him for throne
seems like emperor also don't care for their people
all slave girls run away to save their life
of course they all force to do that and torture terribly
so they think first for their life
women never forget their revenge na
and now god give her Golden chance to kill Prince
poor girl nazim murder her husband and destroy her modesty
nazim deserve that
mughal camp need nazim
but if he is not dead what he do for them
he is highly drunk and hardly open his eyes
azlam so shock to see him dead
but he trying to control situation but news spread like fire
let's see what happen next
but you don't write anything about jalal and jodha
and where is jodha family
they support jalal or not
plz try to update fast next chapter
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
outstanding chapter loved it...
Now little bit of confusion is cleared...
Everything is described very beautifully...
So the prince is dead at the end...
Doesn't matter cause he was worthless...
This amar singh is really a good and brave warrior but a bit impatient too...
Who will win the war...?
Now update asap dear ...
Or this suspense will kill us...
Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 9 years ago
He dead now then wht hpn to war
Update sooon
Thanku
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved the chappy Harshu, thanks for the pm and continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Harshu di smashing update..👏

All the details were so descriptive...warfields,camps the condition of women,places it was all...⭐️⭐️

So the battle is between two brothers of the emperor.But this Nazim is such a😡 ..in middle of war he was enjoying, like father like son,good thing he died😆.That widow was really brave👏.And no one pays attention to old emperor😆,not Amar ,not Omar even Jagnnath he was waiting to how things turn out before taking sides..But if Amar would have talked nicely or requested ,Jagnnath might have helped him or not joined the Mughals. Now that Nazim is dead it will be interesting to see who will win this war.BTW,if Rajputs win,why would Gopal singh become the king,he wasn't even there in the war.😕

Nothing about Ahmed...😭

Thankyou for update waiting for more🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu27

This was a really interesting update, with the picture getting clearer, as the landscapes turn brighter with the Sun kissing the horizon... you are getting better with each update!

It turned out to b a vicious circle, war after war and conspiracy after conspiracy, where there was no ultimate end.

The poor peasant community was no immune to the havocs caused by the famines and plagues and those who were lucky to escape got exploited at the hands of bandits and murderers.

Very true, about the war stricken times, whatever be the century, wars always have same effect everywhere 😭

A plethora of precious gems and jewels cascaded into the empire. The tantalizing aroma of the attar, the best wine of Shiraj, the fragrant roses of Damascus and the beautiful damsels from different parts of the world inundated into the Mughal Capital.

Amazing description, you've such precision! ⭐️

When the emperor got the wind about the plot, he ordered Raja Amar Singh to take charge of Gwalior making him the Subehdar of Gwalior but he had plans of his own and he being one of the close friend of Shehzaada jalal dint proceed to Gwalior but left Delhi along with his trusted rajput troops and voiced himself against the emperor.

Hmm... this is certainly turning serious, so the Emperor is capable of something apart from drinking and merry making 😆


He was forcefully sent to the battlefield and carried with him the beautiful nautch girls who would entertain him in his weary hours.

My condolences to this Crown Prince 😆 . Good that he is dead, else the wind could have blown him away! 😉


The emperor had sent the rajput princes of Ajabgarh and Bilwara to assist the Shehzaada Nazim but they, instead of joining the army had encamped at a distance only to wait and watch how things would unfold.

Smart guys! I too would've done the same 😉

The costliest of the Kashmiri shawls enriched the beauty of the camps, along with the hangings of brilliant gold in wrought with jewels and precious stones. The Mughals never failed to carry their grandeur along with them.

The alluring flowers of Turkistan, the dainty Persian maids, the soft charming beauties from Bengal, the enchanting and dazzling damsels from all over the world did form his seraglio while he was on the war.

Looks like this Prince had more ladies than soldiers in his camp! Were these ladies also proficient in Mirchi war?!😉 Did they carry chilli powder?!


Delicacies, the alluring damsels, the attars and the wines were oblivious to these rajputs as their only means of staple formed the chana and the half burnt Jowri roti.

You've brought out this sharp contrast beautifully. 👏

Instantly, a soldier entered and informed him, "Kunwar of Ratangarh".

Maharaja Jagannath was surprised at his sudden visit. Getting no response from his king, the soldier stared blankly at him and said again, "Your Highness, Amar Singhji of Ratangarh wants to meet you".

OK, now this Jagannath dude is a new entry and this entire conversation was interesting, crisp and I infer, he is the king of Ajabgarh... the other from Bilwara is yet to arrive... Amar Singh is the Prince of Ratangarh! And they're rivals⭐️

The battle had finally begun. Both the sides fought with great valor and passion, while simultaneously the ongoing gruesome carnages had no end to it, it only seemed to multiply thousand folds.

The cries of the wounded soldiers, the pile of blood smeared dead bodies, the wild yelling of horses and the camels, turned the ambiance into pitch darkness, that never ending darkness which would never bring peace but only destruction and catastrophe to the nation and to its people.

As I have already said, this chapter is full of interesting developments and beautiful narrative... this is another example of it!👏

Amidst of all this horrendous events, there was one person who was oblivious about ongoing incidents outside his camp. Shehzaada Nazim was busy drenched in the oceans of pleasures and drinking to the wholesome of wine. The camp had turned into mini carnival with the charming nuatch girls entertaining him swirling their bellies on the sweet music.

This Nizam😡... Worthless! 🤢

All the ladies escaped for their lives to never come back except for one. She was a mere slave but remained rooted there without fear

Who's she? Are we having more of her in upcoming chapters? 😊


Finally Maharaja Jagannath suggested Azlam Khan that Nazim should appear in front of the army, so that the fate of this war could be decided.

Poor Generals, saddled with that Nizam


Only the Shehzaada was seen lying on the bed. His face turned blue and his entire frame looked stiff and pale. From his appearance Azlam Khan got convinced that the Shehzaada Nazim was no more in this world.

Rest in peace, Nizam 😛... Jalal has been relieved of one competitor!


The next moment he could hear the noise outside the camp a lady was yelling, "Shehzaada is dead flee for your lives".

Is she the same lady who poisoned him? Not only she killed him, she's ensuring the Mughal defeat too... Smart! 👍🏼

If the general had wasted some more time here the situation would have been out of control and so he dashed out of the camp and immediately rode on his horse and yelled out, "The Shehzaada is coming, fight on men with all your courage".

Great move! 👏

But alas! It was too late as the damage was already done by the slave girl. The death of the Shehzaada had reached all along like breaking news cutting through the land and echoing in the air.

waiting for the next update...😛. Finger crossed!


Edited by durgeshnandini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing chappy Akka
Update soon Akka
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Amazing chappy Akka

Update soon Akka


Thanks for pm Akka
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P


Thanks for pm Akka



Sorry for the late reply Akka
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res pls
But i will unress tonight pakka

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