Akdha SS : Mysterious Love. Updated Chapter 4 on Page 13

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Mysterious Love


Hola Guys! 🤗



I'm totally velli, for the coming few days 😆... So thought of something new... Umm! This is my first try with a totally different genre that I've written so far...
Mysterious Love is just a short story having few parts... I dunno exactly but not more than ten... I hope I can manage its mystery till last, I know I can't😆 'coz I'm myself is a baichain aatma...🤣 But will try...😛
The whole plot is clear in mind... So the updates will be posted within a gap of a day...


So Happy reading... 😃

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|| Chapter : 1 ||





"Have you seen them??" She asked pantingly from the group of students, their classmates to be precise, standing near the pillars, who seems to be gossiping about same... But got disappointed again, pushing her hairs back in sheer frustration, she marched towards her next destination, that is canteen...




Jalal, Jodha, Ruqs, Abdul and Surya are the well known group in their college...
"Any news about them?" Stopping near an equally worried Abdul, keeping her hands on her hips, a gesture to control her fatigue she asked incoherently...
Using his fingertips, he maliciously massaged his forehead... And a nodded a defeated no...






"No. Ruqs! I'm not getting this!! How could they just disappeared? Seems like vanished in thin air..." Dropping off his shoulders he slid on the nearest chair, fixing his gaze in nowhere particularly...






They, Yesterday had just vanished out of nowhere... Under Mysterious circumstances... Abdul and Ruqs have tried to contact them, search them but faced a hard failure... They... Just DISAPPEARED...
Taking the seat beside him, resting her head on his shoulder, a deep sigh escaped her lips...






"That bet shouldn't have happened!!" She whispered, pain of losing prevailing tremendously... Caressing her long cascading brown curls, he hummed... That bet had ruined it all... Had that have not happened, they would be enjoying with them...







"Abdul! Can we find a clue there?" Out of blue, her question caught him off guard... Sweat beads rolled down his forehead, gulping down the fear, he nodded... Hoping not to find anything that can be proved as threat...






****


Two weeks ago



Standing in front of the huge majestic gate, with a grand board fixed exceptionally, carved Saint Laurent College, boldly highlighted by the small weeds and flowers that have been crept up due to the presence of two canopy trees stood from ages, alongside...






Running her smouldering gaze around the vast land engulfed in serene greenery, the road covered with a thickly yellow petals and green leaves with large trees alongside, she tried to spot some living around but sighed in frustration finding results as none...






Hissing the moment, her fingertips came in contact with the metal bars of gates sends shivers along her whole self, resulting her to take two steps back... The metal bars were more freezer than any ice cubes, freeziness she have ever experienced... Rubbing her arms over her sweater clad torso to ensure the warmth increases instead of coldness, that doesn't seem to drop down...







Her alert hunches, suddenly indicated towards something present just behind her, seems like thousands small needles piercing at her back... Colder than she have just touched moments ago, making goosebumps erected on her back, shuddering in utter fear startled she turned around, finding no one in her eye sight... Gasping loudly, she again tried to locate someone, maybe a prank on a new comer like her, but leave human she can't even find a creature... Eyes widened to their fullest and cheeks became more paler, numbness resided in her self...







A light pat on her shoulder, resulted a loud cry escape from her jammed throat... Shivering and trembling, orbs shut down tightly...
He smiled watching beautiful features shrunken in fear...






"Hey! It's me!"Whispering lightly near her ear, he kept a tab on his hands to avoid touching her...
Opening her one eye, after another she smiled in relief watching him... Darn!! It's him!! Next moment he was being beaten by her small fists...






"Jalal!! You idiot! Stupid! You scared me!!" Chuckling at her heedless complaints, he lead her inside the college...






****



Present


Standing in front of the scariest spooky graveyard, Ruqs squeezed Abdul's palm deadly tight... Almost piercing her long manicured nails into his palm drawing blood...





The rustling of dried leaves, speedy winds and spookiest of voices made their blood cold as ice... Still for the sake of friendship and with the advantage of daylight they entered... Grasping other's hold to grapple their own will power...





"Beneath a banayan tree, Laid a dried red rose...
Delicately adorning the grave, from where blood flows..."






Reminiscing the exact words, that have driven her here... Finally spotted the desired destination, they headed towards it... But the scared lady snuggled into the man stumbled due to a strong pull on her leg... While a shriek escaped Abdul lips watching the source...




*****

Ok! Here it ends...
How's it ? * biting my nails in anticipation *😆
I'm literally scared while posting this... 😆
And yeah! Chapter length will be short, as I'm posting it alternately... 😃


A/N : The pms for next update will be sent to only those members who'll like this chapter...

Hit likes and comment...



Meet you all at Wednesday, with a new update😉

Sorry if it's not worth reading...😊
Edited by Monucute - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index

Chapter : 1

Chapter : 2

Chapter : 3

Chapter : 4


Edited by Monucute - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congo shongo for new story monu dear
Title itself seems very interesting yaar " Mysterious lover" hmmm ...😉
Looking forward to read further
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story neetu😊
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unres
awesome
really mysterious
update soon dear
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P


unres
awesome
really mysterious
update soon dear


thanks for pm baby
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congrats for new story baby
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awesome update
congrats for new story
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congrats for the new story 😃
excellent title ..so curious '
will read and reply soon
😳

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