Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 2(uptd chp 14) pg 113 / 16 oct - Page 63

sry avika i knw i m late..u gave lovely update..convo btwn suja and moti s cute..moti's care for jo s really superb..just love their bondingmore as a friend and sister..and our hero he s on his cloud nine whenevr jo s around..like the part when he realisd heartand fistd his chest..lovely..wow abdul and reva r in a relation..?a surprise for us too..and realy ja has lot of lucky stars..the lift part was nice..missing noor..cutie..what happend..?did anythng hapend to hamida..?cant decipher..update buddy..thanks for pm..and ts story s progressing very well with their love..waiting fr nxt part..

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Chapter 9

As always wonderful avika akka...

wow what a twist i thought salima is been taken care by jodha but did not expect it will be hamida but i did not understand why she don't want others to know about her leave outsides but y not family especially jalal for him his sister was the world and source of happiness.. and akka u have written pain hamida is going through very will she can't say anything her one kid is completely out of reach by always and other is totally anger and denied to call her mother... so sad of her...

wow jodha is lost in jalal thoughts... haha akka i love jodha and moti bond a lot i wish every girl relation with their SIL be like this tow... good thing is big misunderstanding is cleared things related to jodhas feature hubby... and good thing his moti will support jodha and has full faith on her...

Good move by jalal he did not go directly and talk to his mother it is really hard to do it but one important thing is he understood his mother and not angry on her now jodha words has helped him to see other side of d coin to which he did not see due to his anger nd hatred to his mother good he take slow steps... and his mood changed one he saw jodha bracelet and lost in her thoughts and wow i like this song and perfect for jalal state of mind akka...

ooh god what an animal is this adham to took total advantage of nafisa poor girl lost her everything and now can't fight to jalal was feeling so bad and angry on himself for not saving her... both jodha jalal right at their point of view... should see what will happen...???

Chapter 10

Plan in action...

wow whatever they had planed everything took a 180 degree turn...

adham know about all this i like the way jalal was portative towards jodha and i know he will react same way for other girl i'm jodha place to but he is bit more for jodha ...

jodha one line cooled him and he was the only one saw other side of jodha how worried she was...haha akka i like the way jodha was talking to her brother in presence of jalal haha poor souls both where shocked haha... and also this part shows trust they have on each other...

adham house part was so bad akka i was also worried what will happen and u ended 1st part at right time good we got 2nd part or else god knows what will happen to us...

this adham so shameless animal try to take advantage and jodha also put up good fight wow and here comes the hero to save his heroin superb the way jalal hit adham for his deeds'... ooh then jalal anger was in peak and maid jodha guilty for her plan... what jodha is been ordered by jalal to go to his home good for her now she can't go home like this...

cutie pie noor was so cute with her talk maid joja relax a bit... haha girls feel ticklish when boys touch their feet ha right haha... nice nice jalal was shocked with her answer noor had done with her work and other was left for her mamu to treat her appi... this was so cute akka... waiting for morning...😉😉😉

Chapter 11

Firstly i like the picture and the lines on it "when a guy like a girl ,he'll look her in her eyes. when a girl like a guy, she'll look away."

I felt very bad for noor she miss her mumma a lot... and she was so scared of maham... this lady maid a small kid scared so much... good that jodha was there with her today it was proved that jodha and noor are each other savories jodha saved noor for maham and noor saved jodha from hiding the truth from hamida... so cute... haha jalal cured himself for waking up late as he thought he missed a seeing his ladylove in the morning only...

Breakfast part was wonderful akka jodha unknowingly solving all the problems related to jalal house bringing back mother and son... saving noor... so jodha is become super savories for jalal house... emotions where all over breakfast table mothers care for her son and son feeling about his mother after so long time and jodha making things better for them...

wow akka jodha got green signal from hamida side to become DIL of the house... super right... motherly kiss and chain ha... hamida is totally impressed by jodha...

car scene was so cute akka it shows what the picture told jalal did not leave any second to see jodha haha other side jodha saw everywhere except jalal this two are totally lost for each other... so said jala traffic did not help him but jodha she want to run away from him... wow pair of eyes saw them who is that ... ???

Chapter 12

Akka I like this picture and quote too akka... and it is so right...

haha so it was suj and moti who caught joja together good... poor moit was put in to problem to convince her hubby why joja are together poor moti was all worried but suj said he trust hid sister but not his wife so he maid jalal moti bother too... haha that was ok but not jodha brother...cute couple and a curing brother...

Jodha encounter with moti was wonderful... moti was so worried for jodha and whatever she said had a valid points but what to do jodha was all lost in jalal world... but really i loved this relation care trust and concern moti and jodha shares was jodha got to know about her brother seeing them together to good she was saved from moti...

jalal is so caring brother he made shore that nafisa will come for her exam and then he lost in his thoughts related to morning incidents love and care of his mother moments related to jodha and he is understanding his likening towards jodha...

so shopping turned out lovely... wow abdul and rava are seeing each other ha good... and jodha came to know how caring brother jalal is for his soul sister... haha elevator part was superb akka jodha falling on jalal 2 times great thanks to rava and the power cut... haha both was scared their inner feeling can be found and where happy when they came out of the elevator... bairam call i think that hamida bought her daughter back home...

waiting to know it akka so update soon ...

And akka you have written every chapter with lot of love thank you...

and sorry for commenting so late on all four chapters...

thanks for pms akka...

i commented ...

update di please update de do na

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

update di please update de do na

Originally posted by: avika444

Mavi ...sorry dear ...maine update nahi likha abhi

Actually mere kisi relative ka accident ho gaya tha...and he is no more now ...thoda shocked hun main...im not feeling like coming to forum ...thoda time de do...i will update soon ..pakka 😊

Originally posted by: avika444

Mavi ...sorry dear ...maine update nahi likha abhi

Actually mere kisi relative ka accident ho gaya tha...and he is no more now ...thoda shocked hun main...im not feeling like coming to forum ...thoda time de do...i will update soon ..pakka😊

of di even I lost my uncle yesterday...i can understand what u r feeling...don't worry take ur time di BTW that doesnt mean that we will stop asking for updates loll