Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 2(uptd chp 14) pg 113 / 16 oct - Page 41

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

awesome update avi
loved it soo much
very well written
thanks for the pm yaar

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

wow .. U r going to be the masked murderer ...


Avika di .. Now i know who is the murderer ... 🤣
So no suspense 😆

Originally posted by: erning_w

And I'm totally ready become famous on here Prii 😎...

if my pic on masked murderer's banner

🤣

awesome update
both parts are simply superb
jodha is so brave to doing something like that
everybody try to convince her but she don't give up
she hide her fear and nervousness from everyone but not from jalal
jalal observe her every single movement
he know she is nervous and she never give up so he don't try to convince her to back up
but when adham invited her in his house
he is afraid, scare for her
but jodha is don't want to back up
their plan is good but dangerous also
they underestimate adham
I like the most their talk in car
and jodha talk with her brother in phone is so funny
how much she loves her bro
only his name flash in her mobile screen she forget her nervousness
her teasing remark shock jalal
but he witness her bonding with her brother
god I am so scare when jodha enter in adham home
he so sick person
when he reveal that he know her all plan that time more than jodha I was so scare
I am praying for her that time
but thank God jalal come in time and save her
jalal loose his temper and scold her but he care for her so much
that's why she don't denied his order
noor is sweetheart
when she giggle in her own joke is so cute
jodha compare jalal touch and adham touch
of course jalal gesture reflect care but adham is so disgusting
person
at last when jalal turn back how perfectly jodha know what he is thinking
waiting eagerly for next update
and sorry little late I reply
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: avika444

Will update soon girls ...but forget season 2 of masked murderer kyunki ab souls ke baad main kabhi nahi likhungi😉

hawww .. Aise kaise ...
I want More nd more from u ... 😆

Abhi ap retirement nhi le skte ... 🤣

1st sry fr late reply avika..tat was wonderful chapter..i just love jalal very much..his care towards his sister and kindly affectionate care towards jodha..cute boy..jo oh so brave ya..fearless girl..took a great step fr her frnd..ja watches her each and every moment..he knws she has some fear..ja saves jo in right time..ah noor u knw noor s a cutiepie..too lovely..hw cutely she tels tat girls feel when boy touches feet..she told ja to keep quite..and the icing in cake s ja told the name of jo as hitler and he ushes jo to keep discus the next day..atlast jo asures tat she s fine..lovely..well written..just waiting fr next part and thanks fr pm..sry again fr late..

sorry for too late di..aaawww sooo sweet di superb update avikaa di just fabulous thanks for pm me plzzz continue sooon and dont forget to pm me...

Originally posted by: avika444

Thanks a lot Jahnu for this comment ...i actually was planning to discontinue this story as no one was really interested in reading it ...but ur comment boosted my spirit bangaram ...i will pakka finish this no matter if anyone reads it or not .

hate him hate him!😡😭 adam really sucks!