NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 9 - Chapter 14 - UPD 29th Aug - Page 71

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Aiyooo...Missed all the fun😭 thanks to college...

Aunty... 🤗loved lashy kutty ,kausi kutty and Sandy kutty and their cute fights😆.

Adwi dear 👏👏 ...what a review.You should definitely start writing .

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Originally posted by: .AkDhian.

Manasi..you are the EMOJI QUEEN 😆

Lashy kutty has forgetten the story and blames G'ma 😆

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Hey Lashy kutty, nee thappu thappa sollittu Periyamma vai thappu solladhey!😡😆

(Translation: Don't say it wrongly wrongly yourself and say Periyamma is wrong)

Idhai padichu paar. Okay?😃

(Read this okay)

http://www.kidsfront.com/stories-for-kids/a_monkey_and_two_cats.html

❤️While reading not this but all chapters😃... My imagination spurs and takes me to explore the era of Mughals... that is the beauty of your writing...

I have not said much about the last scene of the last chapter because I am too attached to Akbar... and reading about his pity😭 condition... his starvation and the love and care from chacha Jaan beaten me with gloomy emotions. But this what U do to readers... U pen down each scene with such a passion that we feel the pain of the character.

U know what best I found so far... U don't miss any important event. Who could think Durga's terava... could create entire chapter. Throughout the chapter one side, my heart was dwelling on the fact... Heera's pain not only for Durga but Mohan banna and his critical condition and another side you magnificently altered the ambiance by a simple appealing scene... four eyes unflinching glances at each other. Both didn't care for their surrounding... fearless gazes took me to la la land. UR writing has a unique balancing way to turn our emotions upright.

You know writing a comment on the chapter is a challenge for me because I find everything interesting... I can't pinpoint or scrutinize what I love the most why I feel enraptured while reading... in a way positivity is good ...

By each chapter, I am finding myself closer to Gauri... Her sarcasm and worries wrote so beautifully that I am ready to replace the place Durga's place to Heera... She is exactly doing what Durga would have done.

The way Akbar threatened old man the Hakim very remarkably penned. I sensed the touch of reality... was so believable... the man tried to protect his job by degrading her work. His guilt (for the sake of his business) for not reaching on time and his worries of losing business and rivalry well marked... but best after that when Akbar senses his insecurity... he gave him big time... I smiled.

Akbar's inner turmoil... loved every bit of it... his fear and concern for her outlines his freshly born love for her. He very well knows his pull towards a lady how dangerous it is for her life... But he doesn't know yet she is already in danger.

I have written comment immediately after reading ... While reading many lines my eyes sparkled... if I get a chance I will comment again with each line I loved.

LOVE U 😳❤️🤗

Originally posted by: .AkDhian.

Manasi..you are the EMOJI QUEEN 😆

Lashy kutty has forgetten the story and blames G'ma 😆

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Originally posted by: karkuzhali