AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 7-Chap 25 (28th July)

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Shinchan_20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Fabulous update
jo is fearing that salim is slipping away ftom her hands..
Thanku for pm
continue soon plzz

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mama17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Fabulous update.

So happy to see u back in d forum.

A little short update by your standards, but no problem. Plz keep on updating. Don't go into hibernation for so long.

Regarding d story, just waiting eagerly to see how U'll make Jodha break d ice.

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SHIVANGI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

O my god O my God O my god !!! U ARE BACK... FINALLLYYY!!!
😃 🤗
Thanku sooo much! We missed You like hell!
Thanku for bringing My Hero again with the same BANG! 😃
Reading this story is one of the Best things ...
You literally made us cry ... waiting waiting and waiting
But please.. ab wait mat karwana 😊
Totally in love with the update. It was amazingly written.. as always

Thanku thanku so much. And please do update soon.
Will wait for another one.. hope intezar chota ho 😊
Love Love Love to you... ❤️

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

omg... U have updated Priyanka... Am I dreaming Welcome back 🤗 Unres soon

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Deepa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Part 25

Awesome...

Rico is cute...

Sigh Jalal can never get the peace till Jodha accepts him...

Cont soon...

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

PP darling 🤗🤗🤗

Read the chapter last night.. Since morning only one person is lingering in my head and that is, Your Jalal.

I just loved loved loved the update dear. Thankyou so much for this awesome update 🤗🤗🤗

I will write about chapter at night.

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Alibaba400

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

the chappy was as usual AWESOME😊😊😊

BUTTT plzz don't make rico go away from jodha like in the sense being spoilt rotten by jalal and his over-pampering side. This should not cause any distance between jo & rico.

Anddd I wonder whats gonna happen in the morning, whats goint to be jo's reaction, especially jalal's reaction when he finds himself totally in jodha's arms.

EAGERLY waitin for next chappy

plzzz

update ASAP as u hav made us wait for nearly a year

plzzz pretty plsss

& how will jo melt her heart for jalal that's goin to be tough

but when will we able to see some softness in jo for her hubby

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

PP As always amazing writing... U have described all the confusing dilemma of Jalal very well... but hate this Jalal... He is so powerful but so weak... He quickly needs to learn his confines otherwise, he will lose her forever.

Bonding between Ricco and Jalal is so sweet... I wanted to read more and more about this two... At last some progress I noticed ... They ate together... For a moment Jodha saw him loving and caressing Ricco... but what the heck... this man needs to zip up his pant😆 eventually at the end he ruined it... I understand he just wanted to sleep next to her nothing else but he should know himself when it comes to Jodha... and he destroy all the credence... No doubt he is extremely selfish but feeble in his obsession... I would not define his obsession as love yet... He knew when he touches her she feels like a hell but for his happiness, he again touched her lustfully. I do not expect Jodha to forgive him soon.

I loved how you have portrait his vulnerable condition in other words he has mental issues😆 and unfortunately, his only cure is Jodha but poor Jodha... What's her fault... how long she will have to suffer... why she needs to kneel down to destiny ... she doesn't love him. I want her to be very strong... she needs to take action... I don't care to protect her virtue she hurt him physically.

UR writing has power... I was glued from beginning to end... enjoyed every bit of it... Keep updating ;) fast :)

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
PP As always amazing writing... U have described all the confusing dilemma of Jalal very well... but hate this Jalal... He is so powerful but so weak... He quickly needs to learn his confines otherwise, he will lose her forever.

Bonding between Ricco and Jalal is so sweet... I wanted to read more and more about this two... At last some progress I noticed ... They ate together... For a moment Jodha saw him loving and caressing Ricco... but what the heck... this man needs to zip up his pant😆 eventually at the end he ruined it... I understand he just wanted to sleep next to her nothing else but he should know himself when it comes to Jodha... and he destroy all the credence... No doubt he is extremely selfish but feeble in his obsession... I would not define his obsession as love yet... He knew when he touches her she feels like a hell but for his happiness, he again touched her lustfully. I do not expect Jodha to forgive him soon.

I loved how you have portrait his vulnerable condition in other words he has mental issues😆 and unfortunately, his only cure is Jodha but poor Jodha... What's her fault... how long she will have to suffer... why she needs to kneel down to destiny ... she doesn't love him. I want her to be very strong... she needs to take action... I don't care to protect her virtue she hurt him physically.

UR writing has power... I was glued from beginning to end... enjoyed every bit of it... Keep updating ;) fast :)

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fantastic review bhavini di...👏👏👏