Akdha ff:MY INNOCENT PRINCESS(chapte19:page132)- - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
amazing
loved it
Jalal possessive of Jo
woah
he said he will marry her
Hehe
update asap
can't wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

<font size="3">fantastic prologue and chapters Eshalli😃</font>

<font size="3">loved how jalal ispossessive of his jodha and wants to marry her</font>


Thank u dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: swetiii

amazing
loved it
Jalal possessive of Jo
woah
he said he will marry her
Hehe
update asap
can't wait


Thank u dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Amazing chappy
Ye ruks to bachpan se hi chudail hai
She deserves a slap
Jalal is so cute...
Bachpan se hi Jo pe lattu ho gya 😆
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
& plzz don't give so chotu chotu chappy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: cute.ritu

Amazing chappy

Ye ruks to bachpan se hi chudail hai
She deserves a slap
Jalal is so cute...
Bachpan se hi Jo pe lattu ho gya😆
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
& plzz don't give so chotu chotu chappy


Thank u dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
congrats for new story
Nice prolouge
Both chptrs r awsome ... loved it ... ❤️
loved ja possessivness to jo
update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu012

congrats for new story
Nice prolouge
Both chptrs r awsome ... loved it ... ❤️
loved ja possessivness to jo
update soon

thnks for pm


Thank u dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Hi guys thank u everyone for liking my ff Here is chapter3.Njoy! !!
Chapter3
Raja Bharmal reached Agra to take back his wife nd daughter When he got letter from shahansha Humayun he thought that letter was about war. He opens letter nd reads it in that letter Humayun informs about that incident happen to maina nd jodha nd hw mughal soliders saved them.After reading letter he feel thankful to god for saving his most important persons in his life.He immediately start his journey to Agra .
When Bharmal reached Agra Humayun arranged a grand welcome to King Bharmal.Bharmal thanked shahansha for saving his wife nd his little daughter jodha.
Humayun orders his maids to take Bharmal to maina's room.Bharmal feel very happy by seeing his believed wife nd lovely daughter are safe.Maina tells him wat happen nd hw humayun saved them nd take to mugals palace nd treat them with respect .Bharmal feels relief that they treat his family with respect becoz relationship between Mugals nd Rajputs r not good on that days.
At evening Bharmal went to Humayun room to discuss about some political issues nd they both become gud friends He thought that humayun is that bad person as he think before.Humayu likes bharmal friendly nature.Bharmal to likes Humayun very much.He tolds humayun that he'll leave nxt day morning. Humayun too agree with him.They both promise themselves that they both will maintain good relation.
Maina to told hamidha that they'll return to Amer next morning. By listening maina words jalal who is playing with his little angel become very sad that his princess Is going away from him.
Jalal :maa u nd my princess r going]
Maina :ha beta we r leaving to Amer tomorrow morning
Jalal :u never will come again
Maina :No jalal we'll come to meet u again
Jalal :realy ma promise he asks with hopeful eyes.
Maina:with smile promise beta we'll come again nd she cares his cheeks.
Next day
After telling goodbye to everyone maina nd bharmal started their journey to Amer.Jalal feels sad that his princess is leaving him.Hamidha consoles him.Ruqquia feel very happy that jodha went becoz she really feels jealous seeing jalal attention towards jodha .
As the days passing the relation between Bharmal nd Humuyun become very strong.Some Rajvanshi kings become against bharmal becoz of his relation with mughals nd they announced war bt with the help of Humayun he won the war.
When jalal was 9 years old humayun was died in the war.Total mughal salthanath become ups nd down nd all responsibility of salthanath falls on hamidha's head.As a future king jalal's life become danger their enemies try to kill jalal so many times. To save jalal's life Hamidha sent jalal to Amer becoz she trust bharmal very much.First jalal didn't agree to go anywhere leaving his ammi nd his little sister bhakshi. After knowing that he is going to His princess place he agrees.
Bhairam khan the trusty minister of hamidha drops jalal in Amer .Jalal feels very happy seeing maina,bharmal nd bhagavan das (elder brother of he is 13 years old).He hug everyone bt he didn't find his princess there.He was abt to ask maina he see a cute girl running towards him with a bunch of flowers in her little hands.By seeing his princess after long time he to run near her nd hugs jodha (jodha was 6years old).
Jodha :After breaking friendly hug jodha says with cute voice hi jalal welcome to Amer nd she gives her favourite white rose flowers to jalal nd says jalal i bought my favourite white rose flowers specially for u.
Jalal :thank u princess these flowers r beautiful like u 😉
Jodha :cutely smiles at him.
Bharmal treats jalal more than his own son.He personally learn sword fights nd many more tricks to him nd also he appointed a good teacher to teach jalal nd bhagavan das. jalal is taking care of his princess becoz maina gives birth to twin girls(sukanya nd shivani) few weeks back .Jodha as naive nd stubborn child she didn't like any others or maids taking care of her more than her mother.This makes maina very difficult to take care of three children's at a time.
One day jalal was sitting in his room suddenly he hear a big sound from jodha's room nd runs to her room to see wat happen. When he entered her room he was shocked to see condition of the room all the things are scattered everywhere.Maids are running behind jo to make her eat food bt jo as a stubborn girl she is not listening them nd she throws everything on them nd starts crying.Jalal runs towards her nd sits besides her
Jalal:he puts his hand on shoulder nd asks wat happens princess.
jodha:while sobbing she says No one loves me
Jalal:who told u that no one loves u.we all love u sooo much
Jodha:with sad face don't tell lies I know u all don't love me maa is always with sukanya nd shivanya nd she sent these maids to me. papa is busy in his work even u nd Bhai always busy in sword practice no one have spend time to spend with me.u all don't love me nd starts crying again
Jalal :don't think like that princess me maa papa nd bhai loves u alot .I promise u that from today onwards I'll always be with u.it's my promise nd also I'll teach u sword fighting also.
Jodha :promise jalal you'll teach sword fighting to me
Jalal :promise princess
Jodha:she hugs jalal tightly nd kisses his cheeks nd says thanks to him.
From that day ,jalal thought to take care of his princess.He starts pampering her.He also teach sword fight to her jodha like an obedient girl she learn sword fight with excitement.Jalal become everything to her.Her day starts with jalal nd ends with jalal. He is everything to her.jalal become possessive towards her nd starts pampering her .
One day jodha was sitting sadly in her room Jalal enter her room nd see his princess is sitting sadly he goes near her nd asks
Jalal :princess wat happen y u looks very sad.
Jodha :O.. jalal today is ghungoor festival na I want to go outside the palace.So I asks maa to take me outside bt she didn't agree she said with pouty face.
Jalal :Thinks for a while nd he says don't feel sad princess I'll take u outside
Jodha :really jalal promise
jalal :promise princess bt u have to promise me that u never tell to maa or papa that i take u outside.
Jodha:with brod smile she says promise 😃
Jalal takes jodha to his room nd order maids not to disturb them until evening nd goes to outside the palace through secret way from jalal's room.Only jalal nd jodha knows abt this secret way.
They both went to market near by village like a commers nd njoyed a lot.jodha feels very happy that first time she come outside from palace .she enjoyed being with so many people around her nd plays with kids.jalal feels very happy seeing his princess happiness.
After enjoying themselves both comes to palace through the secret way.On that day onwards jalal takes jo outside so many times.
K guys done with chapter 3.sorry for mistakes. Don't forget to hit like button nd comments😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
wonderful update...
omg JALAL lost his father. 😔 and he dont want to leave Agra but thought of meeting with his princess make him leave. .. love this cute innocent JALAL...
JALAL is way to possessive for his princess... and JODHA she is shooo cute... always complains ... jealous of her sisters and want her mother's attention too but jalal is there for you Jo ..😉
love. the update eshu... thanks for pm...
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 9 years ago
woo awesome update
jalal pamper her princess very much
waiting for next update
update soon

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