Congrats payu...os for u..jodha delivery

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations Payal turning to sizzlers..
I know I am very late.. very sorry for that..
This os is for u.. I am dedicating this to u.
I know this is not worth reading but plz accept..gifts can't take back.
Hahaha.. hope u like it.
Love u loads baby..

Plz everyone give honest comments..
All kinds of chappals accepted.. make sure size is 8.. my size is 8 yaar. Hahahh..

Its not worth reading but still posting. So sorry for that..

Love u all..
Thank u all..



JODHA DELIVERY:



Imagine
Jalal & jodha are married
Jodha is pregnant.
Abdul -salima
Mirza- moti
Ruks- surya.

Pairs & friends from past 10 years.

Abdul salima have one boy one girl twins..married..

Ruks - Surya are newly married..
Once upon a time Surya loved jodha but moved on with ruks.
Same with ruks.. She loved jalal but moved on with surya.

Mirza still trying for moti. Moti tooo love him but didn't said yes.

Jodha is in 9 th month. She is been taken to hospital. Since she got labor pains.

Jodha in delivery room..

I will count 5. After I finished jalal should be in front of me or else or else I will I will.. Said jodha loudly holding mirza hand tightly..

Jo.. jalal.. He.. mirza don't know what he has to say.. looks at Surya to help him..

Jodha plz wait little plz..Said Surya tried to cool jodha..

Wait.?? I have to wait for him?? I AM GIVING BIRTH TO HIS CHILD & HE HE... Said the angry jodha..

Oh oh.. plz wait. I will check for him.. Surya run out from the room..

Ruks where is Jalal. If he didn't come sure jodha will eat him alive. Where is he??

Jalal is on the way Surya. He went to pick up salima & moti. But uska car tyre puncture huwa tha.
Said panicking ruks..

Surya: oh god..now what??

Nothing jalal will be murdered.. Said ruks with smile..

Surya: u look pretty when u smile..

Ruks: lier..

Surya: no jaan.. I am not lier. I am husband to this sweet curly beauty.. He took her in his hug..

Ruks: what are u doing.?? leave me..

Surya: if I don't...

JAAN LE LOON GI MEIN... jodha was screaming now...

Ruks laugh out loud.. & says..
Got the answer... go & bring jalal as early as possible or else with new born I think there will be a murder also..

Surya: ufff.. going baby..give me a kiss na.

Before he touch her lips..

Mirza came out in running..

Surya runs other direction after seeing mirza..

Ruks laughing.. what happened to u..?? Y u are drenched in water?? Did u played holi kya??

Jo...He said..pura pani ka jug.. He removed some water from his face..

Ruks burst into laughter..

Don't laugh this much. Now its ur turn. Go inside.. Said mirza irritatingly..

Me.. with shock.. ruks widen her eyes..

Yeah u only.. go.. Said mirza.

Actually me.. Abdul.. Abdul is there na. We will send him. His little sister na.

Who Abdul?? Look at him?? Said mirza.. pointing to Abdul..

Abdul hair is fully painted in red color. His princess is doing colouring to his hair. He is running sorry chasing to catch his Prince. Who is playing & running with his phone..

Ruks know she has to go inside. She don't have another option. Ok fine. I Wil go.
She took a deep breath & went in..

Jodha looks at ruks & burst into tears.

Ruks with panic runs to jodha. Side hugs her. Jo y are u crying. Jalal is on the way. Surya went to pick him up.

No I am not crying for that idiot. I got to remember about moti. My buddy. I miss her.

Moti conference over. She is coming jo. Plz. I am with u na. Ruks Said lovingly..

Jo cried more..

Now what happened?? Y u are crying again..Said ruks with little irritation..

Maa , dad... they are in London na. She squealed..

Jo..Main hoon na. Plz don't cry. Stroking her hair little.
Jo smiled a little but just for a second before screaming so loud that ruks feared she may have just gone deaf. After hearing that Dr. Bakshi ran in, she checked jodha and said, That's it we cant wait anymore, baby is almost here..

Nooo...Dr. Bakshi. Jalal...JALALLL
she tried to hold off but it was of no use.

Nurse..get Mrs jodha to delivery room.. Dr.Bakshi asserted.

At the front gate of hospital..
Finally jalal arrived with salima & moti..

He ran inside..

Where is she??...jalal said in a panic.

Ruks came running, jalal she's been wheeled into the delivery room...RUN

SHIT... said jalal and he ran inside, ruks and surya followed.

Mirza stood at the gates just staring at Moti.. u changed so much Moti.. u became thin..mirza was tearing up.

Shut up mirza. I went to conference for just two weeks.. Said Moti.

Yeah.. but distance is there na Moti. He tried to hug her..

Oh god.. u will never change. While saying this Moti went near delivery room..

Salima too went inside but she went near Abdul. She burst into laughing..what happened to u??

Oh god.. ur kids.. they will kill me one day.. Said frustrated Abdul.

Oie.. Bandar.. don't say anything about my kids..She took her kids into hug.

Ok ok let's go. Jodha is planning is kill everyone. Said Abdul with panic.

Yeah..let's go.. both salima & Abdul went to delivery room along with their kids.

Mirza , Abdul, & Surya are Pacing nervously in front of delivery room. While girls are managing kids.

Salima.. u have loving kids.. bahut pyari hain..Said ruks while kissing them..

Pyari nahi.. toofan hai dono toofan...Abdul interrupted...

Enough. U don't know how to handle them. Said salima with little angry..

Salima ur daughter is sooo cute.. She is my favorite always..Said Moti lovingly..

What favorite..look at my hair.. yeh sab uski wajah se.. Abdul said while pointing his hair..

All burst into laughter..

I think I am the most crying person Said abdul.. but I think there is one person crying sorry screaming..

Jalal came out from the delivery room..

What happened jalal?? Is jodha fine?? Asked the concerned Moti..

Ha.. She is fine. Everything is fine..
Answered jalal.

Then y u came out?? Asked Surya..

I didn't.. they sent me out.. jalal frowned..

Y??? Asked Abdul..

Uhmmm.. actually.. jalal is hesitating to answer..

Oie..what happened.. tell us now.. salima asserted..

Yaar.. I accept I came little late, but this much violence.. jalal pulled up his sleeve to reveal scratch marks all over his arms. ...noch noch ke mujhe...pata kitna dard hota hai jalal finished.

Jalal.. u are getting pain..??
asked, rather sarcastically.

Haan yaar.. look.. blood is oozing.. actually in angry me.. accidentally...ummm by mistake I said.. jalal could not finish.

What jalal?? Mirza asked.

Accidentally I said by mistake.. ummm.. I said jungli billi... he finished.

WHAT?...
there was a unison response.

Oh god.. u said jungli billi.. when she was in labor room..delivering ur baby.. asked ruks.

Jalal u.. u... moti with angry..

I said sorry.. again & again I Said sorry.. but she...

She throw u out.. Surya finished jalal sentance...

Haan buttT...Just as suddenly as he had stepped out one of the nurses suddenly pulled him back into the room.

The scene outside the delivery was actually a unique one, not only because of the people there but also because perhaps for the first time in history the husband was screaming more than the expecting mother. Jalal's screams had filled every corner of hospital. Everyone was trying to figure out why that was the case but they decided it was best to wait until after the delivery.

After an hour.

Dr.Bakshi came out. & said..
Jodha blessed with a baby boy.. u people can go & see them..
She went away.

All went to jodha room. Congratulated the couple & all are waiting to hold little hero.

So.. what name u people decided for the little hero. Asked ruks. While kissing the new born..

Both jalal & jodha looked at each other then at every one..

Oh ok..let me guess.. u both think for name but can't able to decide. Right?? Said salima.

Hmmm.. yeah.. Said jalal..

EK MINUTE.. yelled Abdul.. we can put name afterwards..but y u screamed jalal??

Yes.. Y u screamed?? Asked both Surya & mirza..

Jodha turned her face to other side. She is controlling her smile..
Jalal looked at her & with eyes he Said.. look what u have done.
He pulled his sleeves up which is bandaged now..

All burst into laughing..including jodha..

It was not funny.. Said the irritated jalal..

U did a great job.. my sister.. Said Abdul...

Ok ok.. name yaar.. ruks shouted..

Yeah.. name.. salima said..

Jodha first u said.. Said Surya..

Hmmm.. salim.. Said jodha.

Ohhh.. all girls cheer up..

Jalal.. now ur turn.. Asked Mirza...

Jalal hesitated little...but said..plz don't get angry..

Oh god.. plz tell.. u are making us curious jalal.. Said frustrated ruks.

Ummm.. mirza..

Yeah..I am here only jalal.. Said confusing mirza.. not understanding what jalal said..

I want to name my son as mirza Khan..

What??? Everyone shocked..

Jalalll.. a lone tear escape from mirza eyes..

Mirzaaa.. Said jalal with Same voice..

Mirza pushed Moti aside & ran to jalal.. meri bhai.. u named mirza.. yah Allah.. He hug jalal tightly..

Get some room guys.. Said ruks..

Jalal.. not fair.. u named ur son as mirza..Said Abdul..

Yeah.. yaar.. not fair.. Surya accepted with Abdul..

Oh Surya.. really u want to keep jodha son name as Surya??

Surya looked at jodha then at ruks..
Uhmmm.. uhmmm.. He don't know what he has to answer. He again looked at ruks. For which she shake her head as no.

No.. finally Surya said..

I thought so..Said jalal.. Abdul did u keep ur son name as jalal?? No na??

Ha.. Abdul answered..but..

So I name my son as mirza. I know mirza will definitely name his son as jalal..

Nooo.. I don't want to keep my son name as jalal. Moti shouted.

Everyone shocked & mostly mirza..
Moti..tum.. Said abdul
Motiii.. true.. said jodha.
Are u serious Moti.. saked salima...

Moti.. is it true. Asked shocked jalal..

Moti.. u & mirza.. ur son. Jalal..
Salima can't able to frame question.

Motiii.. a teary mirza came in front Moti..

Ha..yaar... y u people are shocked we already decided na..what's a big deal in that..we both are getting married.. Said Moti casually.

That's it. Mirza fainted with happiness.

Surya run to catch him..
But mirza hold Moti hand.. both fell on each other. Surya fell on them..

Ruks helped Surya to getup..

U will marry me.?? Asked mirza still in shock..

Yes mirza. I love u..Said the blushed Moti..

Both gets up..

Awww.. all screamed in happiness..
All congratulated the couple..

Moti.. mirza is so sweet. Not like jalal. He will be the first one with u in the delivery room. No late lateef.. Said the angry jodha looking at jalal..

Oh jo.. I said sorry na.. He kissed her forehead..
Jodha blushed.

I think we have to leave said ruks..

Yeah.. all left the newly parents..

I love u jalllad...

I love u tooo my jungli billi...

Both kissed mirza Khan..


The end..


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lakshmi1403 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res for payu...

just can't believe how this concept came in your mind😲😲

It was really an awesome OS laksh.. 👏👏👏So funny and entertaining that I laughed and laughed hard while reading this..

Wait.?? I have to wait for him?? I AM GIVING BIRTH TO HIS CHILD & HE HE

>>> Really, I could imagine jo with that big tummy.. lying on hospital bed, breathing heavily and getting So angry and irritated on her husband😆

Surya: no jaan.. I am not lier. I am husband to this sweet curly beauty.. He took her in his hug..

>>> what a perfect 'timing and 'place' 'for Romance.. Isn't it??😉😆

Surya: if I don't...

JAAN LE LOON GI MEIN... jodha was screaming now...

>>> Ha ha.. now this is indeed a Pefect timing'🤣

Jo...He said..pura pani ka jug.. He removed some water from his face..

>>> poor Mirza...😆

Abdul hair is fully painted in red color. His princess is doing colouring to his hair. He is running sorry chasing to catch his Prince. Who is playing & running with his phone..

>>>> I am very bad at writing comedy scenes laksh and reading this I was amazed how you wrote all this.. This is just amazing.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️I had a good laugh..😆

No I am not crying for that idiot. I got to remember about moti. My buddy. I miss her.

Moti conference over. She is coming jo. Plz. I am with u na. Ruks Said lovingly..

Jo cried more..

Now what happened?? Y u are crying again..Said ruks with little irritation..

Maa , dad... they are in London na. She squealed..

>>>> Jo.. 🤣 what do I say now??😛 but I love her😆

Mirza stood at the gates just staring at Moti.. u changed so much Moti.. u became thin..mirza was tearing up.

Shut up mirza. I went to conference for just two weeks.. Said Moti.

>>> I like mirza the most in this OS.🤣

Yaar.. I accept I came little late, but this much violence.. jalal pulled up his sleeve to reveal scratch marks all over his arms. ...noch noch ke mujhe...pata kitna dard hota hai jalal finished.

>>> when she was having labour pain, still jo managed to scratch his hand.. Good punishment jo.. I like it.👍🏼😆

Haan buttT...Just as suddenly as he had stepped out one of the nurses suddenly pulled him back into the room.

>>> I could imagine this..🤣

The scene outside the delivery was actually a unique one, not only because of the people there but also because perhaps for the first time in history the husband was screaming more than the expecting mother.

>>> Indeed a weird yet so entertaining delievery it was!!

🤣🤣🤣

I want to name my son as mirza Khan..

What??? Everyone shocked..

>>> even I was shocked..😲😆

Jalalll.. a lone tear escape from mirza eyes..

Mirzaaa.. Said jalal with Same voice..

Mirza pushed Moti aside & ran to jalal.. meri bhai.. u named mirza.. yah Allah.. He hug jalal tightly..

>>>Now this is too much..🤣🤣🤣

So I name my son as mirza. I know mirza will definitely name his son as jalal..

>>> In return jalal was expecting Mirza to name his son as jalal.. OMG🤣

That's it. Mirza fainted with happiness.

Surya run to catch him..

But mirza hold Moti hand.. both fell on each other. Surya fell on them..

>>> is this hospital or what??😆

I love u jalllad...

I love u tooo my jungli billi...

Both kissed mirza Khan..

>>> Last line..❤️

I don't know but I love that line.. It was so sweet..😊


Loved loved loved the OS dearie..⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thankyou so so much for this lovely Surprise🤗🤗

I love you laksh.. and I'm missing you right now..









Edited by lakshmi1403 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woo awesome O's
mirja Khan baby name
thanks for pm
sharmacatty thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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My god😲😲😲
you wrote OS for me😲😲😲

That's really unexpected.😲😲😲.
Are you mad?? You should take rest na.. 😡
I thought you didn't know that I become sizzlerz yesterday.. and you're not late laksh..


Btw title sounds interesting.. I'll read and come back😉

thanks for reserving my place, my dearest darling🤗
Love you 🤗🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os Akka
Most funniest delivery
Baby name is mirza khan
Beautiful Akka
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Awesome os Akka

Most funniest delivery
Baby name is mirza khan
Beautiful Akka


Thanks for pm Akka
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely os diii
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome OS dear
Loved it...
Thxcc 4r pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

My god😲😲😲

you wrote OS for me😲😲😲

That's really unexpected.😲😲😲.
Are you mad?? You should take rest na.. 😡
I thought you didn't know that I become sizzlerz yesterday.. and you're not late laksh..


Btw title sounds interesting.. I'll read and come back😉

thanks for reserving my place, my dearest darling🤗
Love you 🤗🤗

U are scolding me???😭😭😭
Actually I saw harshu post today..
So I thought of giving surprise..
U scolding me.. 😭
But it's ok..I know y u are scolding me.
Today seems my scolding day.. because everyone scolding me to take rest.
U tooo joined in that club..
Hahaha...
So sweet of u... Muahhh...
Love u more & more..
Ok.. read & comment..
First time I tried different.
Will talk to u tomorrow.
If I hold my phone for some more time I am sure it will be in pieces..so bye now..
Waiting for ur comment..

Between congratulations baby for turning sizzelres.
👏👏
Write more. & entertain us more..
🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unress
I couldnt stop myself from laughing lakshmi
So much happened in a single os
Firstly jo in labour pain shouting for jalal as he didnt came on time
Secondly surya and ruks ...hospital romance ...yaar aur koi place nahi mila in dono ko 😆
Then abdul with his kids coluring his hair..that was really funny .
Jodha's mood swings when ruks atood besides her and finally the handsome hunk whoose hands were tattooed by his darling wife for coming late and calling her jungli billi .
Everythis was hilarious ...
Finally the new member arrived and what the...Jalal wanted to name his son mirza 😲 hard to beleive ..but i liked it 😉
And last but not the least ..moti and mirza's confession
Loved it bangaram
Thanks a lot for pm .



Payu dear ...once again congratulations for turning sizzler
Keep posting and spamming
Love u dear

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