Akdha TS || Love u..Hamesha Forever || part 2 updated (28/7)

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
AVI😆 title pe date galat likha h.. aaj 28/7 h😛😆

Hahaha ...sorry payu ...date yaad tha ...par month bhul gayi 🤪

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Shinchan_20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Marvellous update dii
thanku for pm

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misty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Awww shooo cute chappy... Bt too sad dat its last. 😭... Ja found jo in dat interview nd she ws ja s bestie nd love nd dat line isse aise shake krte hai buddhu ws too cute.. Ja s ques of her being committed ws so funny nd he saying i dont wnt a pa who busy wd her bf.. Gosh he indirectly cnfrmd wether she ws cmmited or nt.. Smart han... Nd den d proposal.. Bfull.. Truly a wrk of perfection.. Muah.. Dii plz an epilogue... Nd start a new story soon..

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

lovely...both r waiting for each other..finally jj met & lived happily...

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.AkDhian.

@.AkDhian.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Wonderful TS,akka!😃

Loved both the parts immensely❤️

Cute,sweet and lovely idea👍🏼

Flashback was touching,two innocent souls,their selfless love and promise..everything is awesome⭐️

Jalal's interview was funny especially last qn..whether she is committed😆

Loved how Jalal said the same dialogue of lil Jo and Jo's reaction was superb😳

She thought he would have got married or is committed..but these two are meant to be together..hamesha forever😉

Pls keep writing such lovely stories🤗

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swetiii

@swetiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

amazing chappi Dii
loved it
Jo too was intimidated
hehe

Jalal remembers about his past with his Jo
awww
such a reunion of lovers

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Saumya

@Akdha_Saumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Amazing ts avika di

Loved it

Jo was ja s childhood love

Really beautiful part di

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nikki

@natashathakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Awesome chapter n thnxx for pm dr

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

awesome dear.
love both part
both are orphan
but both are connected through their heart
without knowing each other identity both are feeling connected
one think I really love both remember their promise
jalal nerve leave a single chance to tease jodha
he really wanted to confirme that jodha was committed or not
love the way jalal reveal his identity
I really like your concept of this TS
plz write in future also
thanks for pm