Akdha SS: Love Can Happen Twice Chapter 2 Page 11 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sony23akdha



Soru eh ff Joja ke liye pad rahe hai... agar joja hi nahi hai tho kyun padenge... nd haan akdha fans logic nahi dekhte use sirf akdha se matlab hai

Mein to pad lungi bhale joja ho ya nhi ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Kuch kuch hota hai one of my fav movie too and im so glad that u choosed this movie for ur story . Really excited to read Akdha's version of kuch kch hota hai 😊
Noori is jalal and rukkaiya's baby and just like in the film rukkaiya wrote letters for her baby and hahaha Jalal's habit of using mouth fresher and sleeping with shoes ...quite funny
And there comes our jodha
Excited to read jodhas entry
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
awesome start dear
so noori is jalal and rukaiya daughter
you start story same Like movie
waiting eagerly for jodha entry
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome concept dear
waiting for update
jo and jalal best friend
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Due date se pehle update de rahi hu yaar please comments and lies zyada dena...😃







Chapter 2

Delhi

A girly figure sitting on the window sill. Gapping towards the sky. Today was her father's death anniversary. She was feeling alone. Her father was the strength for her. 6years before he left them away. Her mother was suffering from breathing problem, whenever she got hyper her breathing problem started.

Jyoti entered her daughter's room, which is dark. She saw Jodha sitting on the window sill bending her knees near her chest. Whenever she saw Jodha like this always she feels that Jodha is alone. She when ever try to talk about marriage she shoved it away. She knows she is still waiting for him somewhere. But she also knows that he will never come back to her.

Jyoti came to Jodha and sat beside her. She caresses her hair. After her father's death she cut her hair from long to short. But her mother insists her to grow the hair a bit long but she was adamant. But keeping her words she made her hair as shoulder length. Her father loves long hair on Jodha. Jyoti shied.

"Jodha andhere me kyu baithi ho. Dinner nahi karna?"

"nahi maa bhookh nahi hai."

"pichle do din se yehi baat kar rahi ho. Kya baat hai?

"kuch nahi maa" she turn around and close her eyes. Jyoti look at her.

"Jalal ki janamdin hai na aaj?"

Jodha looks at her mother. People said right a mother knows everything. A lone tear come from her eyes. She hugged Jyoti.

"use phone to kar beta. Tera dost hai woh."

"nahi maa, its too late. Or ab halat pehle jaisi nahi hai. Sab badal gaya hai."

"ek baat kahu?"

"kya?"

"tujhe usdin sabkuch chodke nahi ana chahiye tha beat. Kya pata, jo tune khoya hai woh na khoti agar tu wohi rehti."

"yeh aap kya keh rahi hai maa? Woh mera kabhi tha hi nahi. Or jo mera nahi hai kisi or ka hai, use main use nahi cheen sakti. Nahi cheen sakti." She started to sob.

Jyoti hugged her daughter tight. She is a mother. The well she know her daughter no one knows. She knows Jodha is a successful graphic designer in her farm, she is successful in all aspects of life, but still she is alone. And she know this aloofness this loneliness can destroy her. She knows her past and praying to god to do some miracle that her daughter turns that person what she 15 years was before. These 15 years she never has a happy smile in her face for any other reason other than her brother.

Jodha was shedding tears to decrease her pain which she was bearing for 15 years. The pain for loosing her life, her love. Her first ever love.

FLASHBACK

"hey jalal, aaj bhi late? Yaar tu kab sudhrega?"

"tu to jaanti hai yaar subha subha mujhse utha nahi jata, o ye jo accounts ki jo nay imam hai kitna pakao hai yaar. Uska class karna or ghar pe bed pe ghore bech ke sona same for me."

"huh!! Tera kuch nahi ho sakta. Yara teri biwi ke lie bada taras ata hai. Bechari tujhe sudharte sudharte hi uski baalo ka budhapa aa jayega." Jodha giggled.

"aisa mat bol. main apni life khud lead karunga, or mujhe arrenege marriage nahi karni yar. Arrenge marriage sucks!!"

"to tu kya love marriage karega?"

"ya ofcourse. Or pyar karne me kya hai. Jail me to jana nahi padega, nahi tax dena padhega. Main to love marriage karunga." Jalal give a big bite on his Vada Pav. "umm yaar i still can't understand. Ye Vara Pav itna accha kaise hai yaar?"

Jodha sips her Slice. She doesn't like cold drinks other than Slice. Shaking her head lke tera kuch nahi hoga' she said, "yaar mujhe to ajtak ye bhi pata nahi chala tu itna indiscipline kaise hai yaar! Yar mujhe dekh, or tujhe dekh. Koi nai kahega ke hum dono best friend hai. Tu thoda deceplene to laa sakta hai apne andar mujhe dekhke?"

"yar tu har tym itna discipline ka lecture kyu deti hai yaar.agar tujhe mere indisciplean hone se problem hai to rehti kyu hai mere sath?"

"ab kya karu yara lagan lagi tumse man ki lagan' " she laugh.

Jalal give a weird face to her, and then started to laugh out loud.

Just then Jalal stop his laugh. A mere sight snatches his concentration. A beautiful girl entered in the canteen. Wearing a plain baize colour wrap skirt till her knees with a white and pink top. Her lips were pink due to lip gloss, and kajal in her eyes. Fluffy hair till her shoulder.

Jodha knotted her brows as Jalal was looking something with such concentration. She looks at the direction. She look at that girl and she don't know why she didn't like the way Jalal looking at her with so much concentration. He never look at her even when she wears a new suit. Somewhere in her heart she was cursing that girl.

FLASHBACK END

Letter continues...

"Usdin mane tumhare papa ko meri taraf us tarha se dekhte hue dekh kar ajeeb laga tha. But you kow your father was a handsome fellow. And somewhere i started liking him with his first look. Even after i sat on the table i was eyeing towards him with the corner of my eyes. Then i saw Jodha for the first time. Tab maine utna dhyaan nahi dia, but ab lagta hai ke us waqt se hi main un dono ke beech aa gayi thi, jo mujhe nahi karna chahiye tha. Agar main usdin sammajh gayi hoti to aj tumhare papa itne akele na hote."

Noori shed tears with smile. She somewhere feels connected o Jodha because she feel Jodha and her personality is same like. She wants to meet Jodha and she hope with her mothers letter she can get more about her.

Precap:

Jalal started his friendship and feeling towards Ruqaiyaa (as most of you say to cut short the Past portion.)

Jodha started to recognise the change in jalal and feel jelouse

Letter continues with more jalal Jodha and ruqaiyaaa moments

In present jalal's entry as a father








fkjkjNext update will be on 20th july...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Res pls
Will unress soon

Unresss
What an emotional update yaar
Really i felt like crying while reading Jodha and her Mother's part . Even in the movie i became emitional watching Anjali's pain.
Anyways coming to the best part of todays update .. which ofcourse is of our Jodha and jalal ...brought smile on my face .
Their funfilled talks , chilled out life ...loved reading this part yaar .
Precap mein rukku's entry
Though i never hated Rani in movie ..why do i feel i will hate rukkaiya here 😆
continue soon dearie
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Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Unres
Awesome chappy Di
Jo is in so much pain
Usski dard dekhi nahi jaa rahi he di
Plz make this flashback complete asap
Emotional chappy Di
Loved the way you described their feelings
Update soon Di
Precap is clear and
Eagerly waiting for your next update for jalal as father
Noor is also attached to Jodha
Update soon Di
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Kavya_P


Unres
Awesome chappy Di
Jo is in so much pain
Usski dard dekhi nahi jaa rahi he di
Plz make this flashback complete asap
Emotional chappy Di
Loved the way you described their feelings
Update soon Di
Precap is clear and
Eagerly waiting for your next update for jalal as father
Noor is also attached to Jodha
Update soon Di


Thanks for pm Di 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Wonderful chapter buddy.
Poor jodha... 😭
U know in film also I didn't like when srk attracted toward rani... 😡
Yaaa buddy I want short fb and plz within next chapter plz give end this flash back.
Because I can't see jodha in pain and in so much tears. Plzzz dear.
And plz give update of HTC
😳
I m waiting dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update dear
jodha was so much in pain
poor girl waiting for jalal since 15 years
in flashback jalal is so undisciplined
and in first meeting he was attracted with rukaiya
please end this flashback fast
noor feel attach to jodha
thanks for PM

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