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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi guys Happy friendship day to u all.I'm again back with chapter 12.Enjoy! !!
Chapter 12
Suddenly a car comes towards her like a storm.Due to wet road the car skid nd stoped in front of her with a roar sound.jo closes her eyes in fear.After sometime she open eyes nd she get 360 degree volt shock seeing the person in front of her .There she see jalal who was standing infront of her.She never thought that she'll meet jalal again.She pray to god that it must be the dream.Due to her bad luck it was not the dream.Both r looking each other as they r seeing each other after ages.Jalal feel like to hug jo tightly nd cry his pain out in her hug nd ask her forgiveness for his grave mistake which is killing him.His words stuck in his throat. Both r standing like that they don't know hw to start the conversation .It was awkward situation for both of them. The sound of the thunder wake up jo from her deep thoughts.She see jalal who is standing in front of her like a statue. It's been 2 long months she is seeing jalal a lone tear falls from her eyes.she too feel like to hug him bt suddenly she remembere his bitter words which he spoke on that night.With angry she was abt to move bt was stopped by strong grip on her hand.she trun nd see jalal hold her hand .
Jodha :with angry she says jaalal leave my hand 😡
Jalal :jo I want to talk to u
Jodha:with teary eyes Nothing is there to talk jalal everything is over on that night.
Jalal :plz jo listen to me it's already raining let's go to our home nd we'll talk there nd he hold her hand
Jodha:she jerked his hand with angry nd says who's home??? it's not our home .it's YOUR home.she stress the word your and who r u. You r nothing to me.
Jalal :hw can u say that jo that I'm nothing to u.😲 I'm ur husband jo
Jodha :with angry NO u r not my husband nd I'm not ur wife u lost that right on that night.u r nothing to me .just a stranger to me nothing else!!! Nd she turn back to move
Jalal :by listening Jo's words he lost his temper reach peeks with angry he hold her firmly nd says 😡 hw dare u to tell these words jo. if u dare to tell thesr words again that I WILL KIL...bt stoped nd closed his eyes tightly to control his anger
Jodha :by holding his collar she says tell me wat will u do ha tell me u will slap me again or kill me
Jalal :without uttering a word he lift her nd make her sit in car besides him nd started his car to drive fastly
Jodha:she was shocked by his sudden action. She don't know hw to react she was totally shocked.when she come out from shock she was in the car.
Jodha :with angry jalal just stop the car .😡
Jalal :calmly NO!!
Jodha :if u don't stop the car I'll jump from the door nd she open the door
Jalal :suddenly he stopped car in jolt seeing jo 's action
Jo:get down from the car nd started to walk fastly
Jalal:runs towards her nd hold her hand jo pls listen to me it's already raining its not gud for ur health to drench in rain let's go to our home ammi also is at our home
Jo:while crying No I won't come to your home 😡 .I hate u .u r nothing to me .you r nothingg to m...e...bt she was stoped becoz a tight slap landed on her cheeks.she was shocked nd stand like a statue.
Jalal :with angry never dare to tell that words jo nd he again take her near car make her sit besides him
Jo:she just sit like statue
Jalal :by seeing his finger marks on her cheeks he put his palm on her cheek nd says I'm really sorry my love by slapping u I'm really sorry 😕 .
Jo:she didn't reply to him
Both sits in the car silently. Jalal starts to drive his car towards Mumbai. While driving car jalal recalls the morning incident which happen at his home
FLASHBACK
It's 6am in the morning while both hamidha nd bakshi sipping their morning coffee they hear a door bell.Bakshi opens the door nd shocked to see the person in front of her.
Bakshi:with excitement she shout MIRZA bhai nd she throw herself in his hug.
( Guys Mirza is jalal's younger brother .jalal loves Mirza very much.He is in states when jalal marry jodha.He didn't see his bhabhi face bt talks 3 to 4 times in phone.Guys Hamidha calls mirza to come mansion nd told him everything happen between joja)
By listening bakshi shouting hamidha come outside nd see mirza hugging bakshi .she feel very happy seeing her son after so many days
Mirza to hugs his little sister with love .He see hamidha nd breaks his hug with bakshi nd runs to hamidha nd hugs her tightly
Mirza:hw r u ammi
Hamidha :I'm gud mirza
Mirza:where is Bhai ammi
Hamidha :with teary eyes he is in his room mirza. I feel really scare seeing like him he is searching for like a crazy .He even not eating his food nd talking to anyone I feel really scare that's y I call to u
Mirza:don't worry ammi I'll talk to Bhai
Mirza went to jalal room nd was shocked to see jalal condition .jalal was sitting on the chair holding a photo. He become very thin with full beard .
mirza:went near jalal nd out his hand in his shoulder nd calls bhai
Jalal :by listening mirza voice he turns nd see mirza standing there
Jalal :mirza when did u came
Mirza:just now bhai.Bhai wat Is all dis wat happen ?? Wat r u doing to urself
Jalal :becoz of me she goes away from me mirza.I'm very much fear abt her mirza. In dis 2months I didn't get any clue abt her.if anything happen to her r our child I won't survive.
Mirza:Bhai don't think like that nothing happen to Bhabhi .we'll search herr. ..bt stoped seeing pic on jalal's
Mirza:PARI...he took pic from jalal hand with shock . 😲 it's was joja's marriage pic
Mirza:Bhai is she my bhabhi ???
Jalal :yes mirza she is my jodha
Mirza:Oh god Bhai I know where bhabhi is .
Jalal;: wat u know where is my
JODHA???
Mirza:yes bhai nd he narrated everything to jalal hw he saved her nd everything. Without wasting a second jalal take his car keys nd runs to downstairs
flashback ends
The sound of the horn disturbed jalal from his flashback. He feels little wait on his shoulder he turn nd see jo was sleeping peacefully in his shouldear.He slowly kiss her forehead nd drive his car fastly. As soon as he reached mansion.He come out from the car nd lifts jo in his arms.when he entered inside the mansion he see mirza, bakshi nd hamidha is waiting for him. (Mirza already told everything them hw he saved her nd also he told jo is pregnent with twins.Hamidha feels very happy nd bakshi feel really excited when she hear jo is pregnent with twins). Hamidha was abt to talk bt jalal stopped her with his eyes not to talk now.He directly went to THEIR room nd he carefully placed jo on the bed nd went to outside to talk with hamidha.
After talking to them he entered the room .He see his jodha was sleeping peacefully. By seeing jodha again in their room after 2 months he feel like a home again.He feel like his Life comes back again.He slowely went her nd sits beside her. She become more gorgeous may be because of her pregnancy he thought.He slowly remove her Saree near tummy he see tittle bumb of her.Tear drops falls from his eyes he quickly weeps his tears He touches her bump he feels really happy nd bends his head nd kisses her little baby bump nd her forehead .He comes to other side of bed nd sleeps besides her.In deep sleep jo turns towards jalal nd put her head on jalal's shoulder. Jalal to hug her nd drift into sleep.After two months both joja sleeps peaceful in each other arms.
K guys done with chapter 12.sorry for mistakes.Don't forget to hit like button 😊
Edited by eshalli - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulus chapter.finally they reunite.sweet jodha get punishment bt jalal should get ek big thspad frm jodha.continue soon & do pm.thanx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Happy Friendship Day akka
Unres akka
Amazing chappy Akka
As I thought everything is like that as I expected
Jalal slapping jo is unexpected for me too
Jalal is damn happy to see her again
Now comes Rahim n ruks
Update soon Akka
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P


Happy Friendship Day akka
Unres akka
Amazing chappy Akka
As I thought everything is like that as I expected
Jalal slapping jo is unexpected for me too
Jalal is damn happy to see her again
Now comes Rahim n ruks
Update soon Akka


Thanks for pm Akka
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow beautiful one yar eshalli
How was ur Bday ???
Loved the update
Finally so u made them to meet
Ok the way she behaved obviuosly one will always behave in that way when one loved ones hurt us and comeback again to apologize
I know Mirza informed them
Hahaha
The last one hug is so good
Thanks for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
woo awesome update
finally Jo back to her home
waiting for Jo reaction
when she wake up
update soon next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update dear
finally both meet
feeling bad for both of them
jodha was so much angry with jalal
she don't want to listen jalal
Mirza is jalal brother
he told them about pari
how he save her and about her pregnancy
hamida and bakshi was so happy after hearing jodha pregnant with twins
jalal bring jodha home
both sleep peaceful in each other arms
waiting eagerly for jodha reaction
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awwwsm eshu diii... Sooo bfulll chappy... I ws soo drowned in it... Gosh dat car... Joja facing each oder... Jo ja in sm condition.. Feeling to love each other bt situation... Jo soo much abgry wd ja nd goes away bt ja slaps her nd she dumbly sits in d car... My b ws shocked nd cm to her senses... Nd sleeps peacefully on his sholder... Mirza is ja s bro nd ws shocked to see jo.. Nd narrates him d whole incident... He s an angel... Finally jo s bak to her home... Aww ja kisses her baby bump... Ns sleeps wd her... Thnku fr dis bfull chappy nd pm... Nd ya dii update nzt part asap.. Cnt wait... 👏😳😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chappy dear..
Finally ja found his jo..
Waiting to see how u will patch up them..
U did not want to update long chappy na..fine.. I will not ask u again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
yipiieee finally jalal found jo 😃 all thanks to mirza 😊
Jalal will have to do a lot of hard work to get forgiveness from jo..
Thanku for pm
continue soon

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