NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 4 CHAPTERS 7 & 8 - Page 8

Originally posted by: lashy

Who are they 😕 😆

Originally posted by: KanJmaskis

Chapter 4 & 5

Aha ! finally entry of our Hero and story started intriguing me 😃Indeed a Fantastic write up di ... What an exquisite character of stranger ! u presented ... Superb 👏

Thank you so much 😳

The entry scene

Not to talk about of witty remark that recognizing his horse with hooves only... Even his vestige on surroundings had an impact that escaped the groups of bandits woah 😛 ...a very unique and a DHASU entry which also described the tittle " Hiding behined a STRANGER " as unknownigly he protected her ... 😉

Awww 😳 am glad you liked it...and loved the term 'Dhansu'😉

4 dams ... 😆 Revenge And Not letting them even know that its a pay back 😆... Shrewd enough 😉

Btw Di Its clear y not he told them his identity that time ... Bt tell me Did he know that he could reveal it later ... Or just he left it ? 😉😆

Nope he just left it... 😉 jo honaa thaa dekhaa jaayega types!

'I hope you realise that even Amrit would have cost us less, Sahib ... Sarcasm in her quote was apt ...😉

'Of course, it would Sahiba! Because water is more precious than nectar...'Nehle pe Dehla ... 😉

SOMEHOW THIS first convo made me remember the early days of ja 😃

Awww

The water scene

The mental state of heera which u described near the canal was very deep and expressive till now the grief she hold in herself u made came out in the lap of soothing nature ...

>>> 😭

Even the gentle breeze that'd displaced her veil and thrown her hair back didn't calm her - it only served to remind how vehement her own breath was. The light spray from the stream drizzling upon her features didn't cool her temper - it only showed her how warm her own tears were.

Very imaginative 👏

Thank you so much!🤗

'And please make haste... don't bother about the embroideries of my attire...' The girl knows her people very well ...😃 I liked this commanding gesture of her

>>>

Not only did he thrust her somewhere close to the edge with glaring indifference - the very next instant, she found her confounded self, facing his back. He'd turned around to tend to the base of the footbridge - like the terrible accident had not even happened.

Really ... Not even bother asking or saying a word ... Just save her and put her and started doing his work ... Now u do whatever u want to do girl ... Exactly the character u described in prologue

Her bafflement was like " kaun hai ye Adami " 😆

>>> I know, right? 😆

Yet, the first thought that came to her enquiring mind wasn't awkwardness - it was that she'd finally decoded the puzzle

'He IS the stranger...'

It was amusing 😛 ... Very minute yet a genuine reaction if anyone would have heard the same voice before ... And Credit to u dear 👏

>>> Thank you so much dear... ☺️

Under the faint rays of the moonlight and behind the gleam of water droplets, there could be no other face that ooked more refined. Set against skin that was fairer than fair, the bronzed locks that fell above his shoulders put even the richest shades of brown to shame. With features so sharp and eyes so piercing, she doubted if the man belonged to this country at all. ...

( could not control myself of posting it 😉 )

Hot and Ravishing ❤️

>>> Why control? This place is for fulltoo dreaming only, na? 😆 LOVE that pic btw... even the goatee... makes him look so formidable!

~ DIDAAR-E-DILDAAR ~ ... ( okk i know for now the word is much more bt it sounds good na so i use it 😉 ) and fr a moment time stills there ...beautiful ... Even the whole cenario u crafted so well with ur expressive writing while keeping the mindset for characters reaction ... Everything was just perfect fr the first close up 😉👏

>>> THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU 🤗

The colour of her eyes. Blacks, he'd seen. Blues and greens he'd seen. Even browns he'd seen. But such an exquisite tint of hazel, he had not

Finally brown orbs got attracted with something and that is non other than The colour hazel 😳

>>> yes... wouldn't say attract,... but it did stop him in his tracks..

' Stay still ' he suddenly ordered

Impulsion of attraction 😊😉 ...

>>> 😉

'Things around me appear hazy and blurred... but, those that are directly in front of my eyes, I can see...'

'What?' he felt compelled to take a step back

Me too di 😲 ... What made u to do so ... There is any specific reason for her partial blindness ... ?

>>> Something that happened to her as a child... 😊

Hoping to thank the stranger for his support, her glances trailed towards his outline. But she could make out that the man was busy - In one swift jump, he'd caught onto the ladder using his left fist, while his right fist dislodged the knives consecutively. Slipping both blades into holders that hung beside his cummerbund, he landed back in the canal to complete the temporary repairs.

Such An intimated personality with an unintimitated behavior 😳

Your imagination is highly exclusive dear 👏... I enjoyed reading it ... Though Due to short of time i could not make it on time It was soo late ... I hope u r comfortable with it ...

Latest update is yet to read after reading it give my comments 😊

Thanks so much for it... I was smiling all through 🤗

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

You know what? Your description make him more